I wrote this for a friend... Cuz he's weird and wanted a poem about death..

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Dukun Bellydance Witch

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I stopped fighting my inner demons
We're on the same side now
No wonder I can't breathe
No one can save me now
Death shall take me tonight
And I know I won't fight

Cutting deeper
Call the reaper
Take my soul today
Into the light
Is it alright
To die this way

And as my world comes crashing down
And as I slip away
I watch my blood come dripping down
Seeking freedom from this place
And my wrists pour out red
Because I'm better off dead

Falling deeper into darkness
It's very cold and black
I know I can't fight this
It's too late to turn back
Dead in the end
Watch me ascend
 
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Dukun Bellydance Witch

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i didn't really like the first four lines... but he said to put them in there so.... w/e it's his poem lol
 
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Fluffy

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I especially like the second stanza. Chanting it out loud is pretty catchy!