Help me improve! :D

Mainstream Hipster

I am what all hipsters fear, what all hipsters are
Original poster
So, being the kind of person I am, I'm constantly looking to improve upon my roleplaying skills. While I know practice makes perfect, if you continue to practice incorrectly, you'll get nowhere :p

Here are the Rp's that I feel have some of my best posts in:
Pantheon
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Iwaku World

Don't hold anything back, as I do truly desire to get better ^^

P.S: Hope this is the right section for this, none of the others looked appropriate <<
 

Asmodeus

Gazorpazorpdeus
Posting Speed
Speed of Light
*Kaze is grabbed by suited men and thrown into the back of a van bound for the Writing Section.*

The staff are about to post a series of Tutorials in the Writing Section. You can be our first victim participant.
 

Jack Shade

Anti-Hero
Favorite Genres
Magical, Fantasy, Supernatural, Sci Fi, Steam Punk, Noir, HORROR, and I'm willing to try Romance.
I'll be the second.

Edit: If you want to send me a few prose of what you've done...I'll shoot your straight as I can.
 

Mainstream Hipster

I am what all hipsters fear, what all hipsters are
Original poster
About to post my ass, HURRY UP ASMO! THE DRUGS ARE WEARING OFF AND SOON I WON'T BE IN THE MOOD ANYMORE! D<