Future Ambulance (Discussion thread)

[TenguTango]

This thread poses as the running comments thread for my developing Future Ambulance work.

Read Future Ambulance here.

This thread is for:

• comments
• criticism
• critique
• character and world questions
• development insights
• reasonable similar things

This thread will be largely contemporaneous.

Thank you for reading and for your time.

 

[TenguTango]

I'll break the ice.

 

[TenguTango]

Posted the Premise.

The concept is in early stages. I have an idea of common EMT scenarios which will be the core premise of the story. Debating whether an adversary is worthwhile. Debating whether any bureaucratic nonsense needs to be explored. This is a story about overcoming loss.

 

[TenguTango]

Posted Chapter: Old Fashion, first entry.

Some difficulty staying in past tense. Always hard to start.