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Forty minutes of writing

Discussion in 'THREAD ARCHIVES' started by Arsenal XA4, Nov 12, 2009.

  1. The following is something I had to write for my Composition class. We were tasked with describing a fictional character to someone who has learned about them for the first time, so I picked a hero from my childhood.

    Optimus Prime.

    Read on and you'll see how much I think of him.

    My instructor had this to say regarding the essay:

    Another said I damn near compared him to Jesus with the resurrection bit.

    Then again, Optimus Prime is Jewish. See Family Guy.
     
  2. WHAT?! I DIDN'T KNOW HE WAS JEWISH! THE HELL?!