Re: Writing Exercise: Flash Fiction
Turning 18
The nurses are rushing around with blood pressure measuring carts. The doctors are typing away in the computer room. The dining room is bustling with zombie teenagers and the sound of chairs moving. Here at Fairview Adolescent Mental Facility, Sam calls it his prison for two weeks now. He is almost accustomed to the feeling of wearing a cold blanket around the facility. The staff would ask him how he is doing, and the doctors would say hi to him, and he knows that they are all trying their best to appear caring, but it still feels so damn cold.
"Hey Sam, leaving today?" Asks Amy. Amy always sits next to Sam in group activities, and sometimes they'd talk.
"Uh… Yeah. I guess so."
"It's been long enough!" Amy chuckles. "Not gonna lie, I don't think I'll miss ya though. Don't feel bad, nobody misses anybody around here, I figure." Amy gets up to get her food.
"Good morning, Sam. How are you today?" Sam jerks at the sound of Dr. Washburn. He looks at her expectantly.
"Ah… Hem… I'm good."
"Good. I'm sure you've heard the news that you will be discharged today?"
"Yes'm."
"Well, Sam," Dr. Washburn sits across from him, trying her best to look sympathetic. "In our document, your mother is your only legal guardian." Dr. Washburn pauses for a moment. She seems like she's trying to find the right word. Finally she takes a deep breath, "Well, Sam, your mother was taken by her coronary heart disease at 3 this morning. The heart attack was too sudden, and she passed away immediately after that."
Sam pauses for a moment. It's that moment where he wants to pinch himself to wake up from this weird dream. It's that moment where he can't believe what he just heard. "What's gonna happen now?"
"Since you turned 18 last week, Sam, we can legally discharge you without a legal guardian."
Sam mumbles silently to himself, "Whoever said people never grow up, I guess they never turned 18."
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