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Iliana
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This exercise is to help describe and paint! With the help of your senses, use vivid details to make your role plays spring to life! Show instead of Tell!
Everyone is fully aware of the five senses: Sight, Touch, Taste, Smell, Hear. A great deal can be said just by looking at someone's physical appearance. Just as well as a lot could be discovered only by feeling, hearing, touching, smelling, tasting something. For example, if you are traveling through a forest and smell smoke, hear the cackling of leaves, or detect smog in the air, you do not need to say the words, "The forest is on fire!" Chucking detail into a role play can save a lot of quotations! Dialogue is a major necessity, yes, but there is nothing like painting the picture for your reader!
Remember, have fun with this! :D
Everyone is fully aware of the five senses: Sight, Touch, Taste, Smell, Hear. A great deal can be said just by looking at someone's physical appearance. Just as well as a lot could be discovered only by feeling, hearing, touching, smelling, tasting something. For example, if you are traveling through a forest and smell smoke, hear the cackling of leaves, or detect smog in the air, you do not need to say the words, "The forest is on fire!" Chucking detail into a role play can save a lot of quotations! Dialogue is a major necessity, yes, but there is nothing like painting the picture for your reader!
YOUR EXERCISE IS TO....
1.) Change this dialogue between a girl and her best friend on their prom night into pure description using all five senses and NO DIALOGUE!
"So, you danced with her while you were supposed to be bringing me punch."
"She pulled me on the dance floor. I didn't want to go."
"Do you even care about me?"
"Of course I do!"
"Well if you cared, you would've stayed. I'm leaving..."
OR....
2.) Write your own piece of dialogue then re write it using all sensory details and NO DIALOGUE!
1.) Change this dialogue between a girl and her best friend on their prom night into pure description using all five senses and NO DIALOGUE!
"So, you danced with her while you were supposed to be bringing me punch."
"She pulled me on the dance floor. I didn't want to go."
"Do you even care about me?"
"Of course I do!"
"Well if you cared, you would've stayed. I'm leaving..."
OR....
2.) Write your own piece of dialogue then re write it using all sensory details and NO DIALOGUE!
Remember, have fun with this! :D