Challenge #21: Diamonds are a Poet's Best Friend

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Diamonds are a Poet's Best Friend

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lolol Forgive my lame title, I couldn't resist.

Come up with 2 synonyms of your choosing, or a synonym and an antonym. These will be necessary for the poetry style I'm about to tell you guys about. Should you need some ideas, here are a few I can offer. Feel free to use them in your poem:

Synonyms:
- Angry & Mad
- Empty & Hollow
- Happy & Glad
- Idea & Thought
- Quiet & Calm
- Lucky & Fortunate

Antonyms:
- Birth & Death
- Pass & Fail
- Laugh & Cry
- Lost & Found
- Old & Young
- Wild & Tame

Now to copypaste the instructions for how to write a Diamante from Shadow Poetry because it's easier than rewording them:

A Diamante is a seven-lined contrast poem set up in a diamond shape. The first line begins with a noun/subject, and second line contains two adjectives that describe the beginning noun. The third line contains three words ending in -ing relating to the noun/subject. The forth line contains two words that describe the noun/subject and two that describe the closing synonym/antonym. If using an antonym for the ending, this is where the shift should occur. In the fifth line are three more -ing words describing the ending antonym/synonym, and the sixth are two more adjectives describing the ending antonym/synonym. The last line ends with the first noun's antonym or synonym.

To make it a bit simpler, here is a diagram.

Line 1: Noun or subject
Line 2: Two Adjectives describing the first noun/subject
Line 3: Three -ing words describing the first noun/subject
Line 4: Four words: two about the first noun/subject, two about the antonym/synonym
Line 5: Three -ing words about the antonym/synonym
Line 6: Two adjectives describing the antonym/synonym
Line 7: Antonym/synonym for the subject

^ There you have it, everyone. 7 lines, no demands for syllable counts as far as I can see. I look forward to seeing what my challenge watchers will come up with. And here are a couple examples from the same site:

by Marie Summers

Rain
humid, damp
refreshing, dripping, splattering
wet, slippery, cold, slushy
sliding, melting, freezing
frigid, icy
Snow​
by Marie Summers

Kitten
cute, soft
purring, clawing, pouncing
playful, fur, fun, feline
pawing, licking, loving
bright-eyed, beautiful
Cat​
 
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Love
Warm, fierce
Inviting, charming, enchanting
Care, admire, grudge, venom
Cursing, resenting, loathing
Cold, beastly
Hate
I had a weirdly hard time writing this. Also, happened to find a website that helps you construct diamantes. o__o If anyone's interested.​
 
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Birth
Beautiful, hopeful
Enchanting, astounding, beginning
Miraculous, delightful, lonely, cruel
Terrifying, tiring, ending
Dark, cold
Death

 
Canines

Dog
Loyal, Friendly
Barking, Fetching, Playing
Relaxed, Charming, Wild, Hierarchy
Hunting, Howling, Growling
Fierce, Proud
Wolf

(Diamond formatting isn't showing up for some reason)
 

@The Rainbow Cat Bandit ~ You need to center that!

Sugar and Salt

Sugar
Saccharine, fluffy
Fattening, Sweetening, Addicting
Candies supply,
quality declines
damaging, stuffing, grinding
rancid, bitter
Salt
 
Found
Satisfying, Hopeful,
Calming, Breathing, Hugging,
Peaceful, Saving, Afraid, Alone,
Screaming, Searching, Wandering,
Desperate, Hopeless,
Lost.
 
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Day
Dawn Bright
Promising Shining Renewing
Work Errands Deadlines Stress
Dining Waning Relaxing
Dusk Darkness
Night​
 
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