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- I'm wary of magic with lots of rules.
The floor bore multiple tracks of mud, thick at the door and fading to the entrance to the councilroom. The patrol stood around the body, panting from the weight of the corpse. Adelheid's hand hovered over it. It still dribbled murky water; small spurts of brown liquid had bubbled out with every step to stain the cloth, weighing it down and forming an obvious silhouette of a foregone conclusion. Ulmar's paws kept finding new positions on the table as he licked his chops over and over, unable to keep his eyes on the antlion in the room. The captain shut her grip over its face, and the squelch of receding waterlogged cloth filled the room, as it dragged over the swollen pale skin to reveal Tora and slapped on the floor.
"Cadia …"
"Sky beyond!"
An extended silence settled in the room, voices frozen in throat, lungs, or heart; only Barca gazed keenly at the body. The patrolmen remained disciplined but were growing restless, the excitement of the confrontation at the lake shore fading away.
"We have to find the…" Adelheid searched for the right word to describe her first experience with murder, "this … butcher. With all haste, and prepare to expel them. …We can use a rememory spell. Like the ones used at the graves. It will be able to pull back her last memory, show us what she saw before-"
"We are at more than enough tension with the guilds and the Keepers, and the ones who watch the resting places. If they found out that we use past-diving…" Kolmi risked a glance at Tora, "I don't know."
"We can do it right now. Tora can not be more than a one or two score gongs dea- pa- … passed. You must have a shard on you right now."
"No." Kolmi stiffened upright. "I need this piece to heal those who are falling to summer ails." Ulmar immediately shook his head, his long ears flip-flopping off his snout. "A-and I need to keep the records properly humidified in this heat! The leather and sheets are falling to rot!"
"How could you hold back-"
"Use your piece." Ulmar snorted. "The one you keep in your crown!"
Adelheid took a half step back in shock, her hand making it halfway up to protect her forehead before she reversed and slammed it down on the table. The bickering muted to an incoherent din. Barca pushed himself away from the table and walked around to look down at the body, hands clasped behind his back.
"What can possibly be more important than finding the-
"Murder."
That one word, the beginning of an idea that would grip Cadia until her final days, twisted all of the attention to Barca.
"Someone took Tora's life, against her will. That is murder."
There were two types of patrols, but Cadia mostly knew only of one, the one that was meant to scare wayward Cadians straight: the rare ones who did not listen to their mothers or fathers, the ones who continued to slash at her flesh even in adulthood, or the ones who were too liberal with their magic. They were taken outside to experience the judders, to smell their vomit inside their mask, to feel the vertigo from the sky and from Cadia's waning presence. If they overcome that, they would take part in menial chores around Cadia, assisting the Cutters with daily shaving, collecting scrap, and all other manners of hard physical labour that created a miasma of foul, hungry breath inside their mask. If they persisted, they would run simple patrols well within umbilical distance, logging lionsign and other things for Vanaya. The struggles were often enough to turn most greenhorns back inside with their newfound appreciation.
The first of the final trials was taking those who continued to persist to the top of a bluff. Cadia was still in sight, but the connection was weak enough that the lumps of omnibone in their satchels would slosh in their hands, unable to take on any definitive shape like tent poles, arrows, spears, or lantern-staffs. The arbiters peered closely at the greenhorns, and where their eyes went, that was where they were taken. The ones transfixed by the blooms, the medusa flowers, and the canopies were given theLong Range Manual. One section of it read:
"I have seen this before."
"Now is not the time for theatrics, Barca!"
"I am being straightforward." He turned to face Kolmi, running a finger over the slit of a stab wound on Tora's body. "This is the first case of the disease that is soon going to spread in Cadia."
"If you are suggesting that an illness is spreading among those in Atrium… that the antlion hole is still festering…"
"Have you ever thought about killing someone, Ulmar? Like we would an antlion, or a sheep."
"Wha- no- what kind of question is that?"
"Have you ever been hungry?"
"Sometimes, before breakfast- Barca, Cadia's sake, what are you getting at-"
"Do you think you would ever kill someone for a scrap of meat?"
"Are you saying that you-"
"One of you three is going to have to give up your shard of ambergris. As you can see, I have none. I agree with the Captain: we need to find the murderer, expel them, and come up with a lie as to how Tori died."
The outrage of Ulmar and Kolmi could barely keep up with Barca's revolution. He cut them off:
"What would you do to stop me from taking your shard?"
"You can't. You wouldn't-"
"I can. I would. Murder is an idea, Ulmar. It is the idea that I can remove your objection that is standing in the way of what I want. It gets around law, precedence, tradition, culture, and ritual. The idea lets me look at you the same way I look at an antlion or a particularly warm nodule in Cadia. The idea lets me realize that there is something more important than a fellow Cadian. It is a thought that takes extraordinary circumstances to germinate, and once it does it makes them superior to any other man nearby."
"This person will strike again as soon as they realize they can harvest us as easily as Minnow's sheep. They will see the power that it gives them over their fellow Cadians. But that is not the worst part of it, everyone, no. The worst part…" Barca squeezed a fist. "Is how easily this idea spreads."
"So, who of you will be the one that will save Cadia? The horn is filling, the gong approaches. Every drip we wait the disease continues to take hold. It may be too late."
"Cadia …"
"Sky beyond!"
An extended silence settled in the room, voices frozen in throat, lungs, or heart; only Barca gazed keenly at the body. The patrolmen remained disciplined but were growing restless, the excitement of the confrontation at the lake shore fading away.
"We have to find the…" Adelheid searched for the right word to describe her first experience with murder, "this … butcher. With all haste, and prepare to expel them. …We can use a rememory spell. Like the ones used at the graves. It will be able to pull back her last memory, show us what she saw before-"
"We are at more than enough tension with the guilds and the Keepers, and the ones who watch the resting places. If they found out that we use past-diving…" Kolmi risked a glance at Tora, "I don't know."
"We can do it right now. Tora can not be more than a one or two score gongs dea- pa- … passed. You must have a shard on you right now."
"No." Kolmi stiffened upright. "I need this piece to heal those who are falling to summer ails." Ulmar immediately shook his head, his long ears flip-flopping off his snout. "A-and I need to keep the records properly humidified in this heat! The leather and sheets are falling to rot!"
"How could you hold back-"
"Use your piece." Ulmar snorted. "The one you keep in your crown!"
Adelheid took a half step back in shock, her hand making it halfway up to protect her forehead before she reversed and slammed it down on the table. The bickering muted to an incoherent din. Barca pushed himself away from the table and walked around to look down at the body, hands clasped behind his back.
"What can possibly be more important than finding the-
"Murder."
That one word, the beginning of an idea that would grip Cadia until her final days, twisted all of the attention to Barca.
"Someone took Tora's life, against her will. That is murder."
There were two types of patrols, but Cadia mostly knew only of one, the one that was meant to scare wayward Cadians straight: the rare ones who did not listen to their mothers or fathers, the ones who continued to slash at her flesh even in adulthood, or the ones who were too liberal with their magic. They were taken outside to experience the judders, to smell their vomit inside their mask, to feel the vertigo from the sky and from Cadia's waning presence. If they overcome that, they would take part in menial chores around Cadia, assisting the Cutters with daily shaving, collecting scrap, and all other manners of hard physical labour that created a miasma of foul, hungry breath inside their mask. If they persisted, they would run simple patrols well within umbilical distance, logging lionsign and other things for Vanaya. The struggles were often enough to turn most greenhorns back inside with their newfound appreciation.
The first of the final trials was taking those who continued to persist to the top of a bluff. Cadia was still in sight, but the connection was weak enough that the lumps of omnibone in their satchels would slosh in their hands, unable to take on any definitive shape like tent poles, arrows, spears, or lantern-staffs. The arbiters peered closely at the greenhorns, and where their eyes went, that was where they were taken. The ones transfixed by the blooms, the medusa flowers, and the canopies were given theLong Range Manual. One section of it read:
You do not know the meaning of hunger. Cadia has always provided in equal, if not greater, measure of our mothers. We have never wanted for anything.
You will learn the meaning of hunger.
You will only be able to think about food. It will consume all of your thoughts. It will override everything you will learn from this manual and everything you learned in basic training. You will be tempted to eat dirt.
You will turn on your comrades. Patrolmen have tried to eat each other, and that has only resulted in two dead comrades. There is nothing but death outside your mask.
You can overcome hunger.
Your dependence on Cadia is near absolute. You have always been surrounded by Cadia. You have even carried her pulse into the wild. You have never been without Cadia.
There is a stamped image under the above paragraph. It depicts an ancient Cadian—maybe a Faceless, who is leaning against an arterial wall, hands reaching high. The vasculature of Cadian and Cadia have merged, and the body is barely recognizable. Here, to decay is to become one with our true mother. The Cadian is 'dead', but echoes from its body continue to call on Cadia. The caption reads: "Our unity with Cadia is a fundamental instinct that even lingers past death. Some tailward tribes still practice this method of burial. Recently, some from Atrium prefer a burial in an impermeable casket."
You will not be able to survive if you cannot let go of Cadia. Making it this far in the trials means nothing. Most Patrolmen who lose their transfusions go insane. The void is indescribable, the despair is absolute. It robs you of all agency, seeing the world no longer able to accommodate your will. It is unimaginably worse than any shudder.
Your only hope of survival is to find the way back to the trail. You will be tempted by all manner of delusions, and none of them will work. The only Patrolmen who have survived a long range patrol are the ones who found their way back to the trail. That is the only visualization that avoids death.
You will learn the meaning of hunger.
You will only be able to think about food. It will consume all of your thoughts. It will override everything you will learn from this manual and everything you learned in basic training. You will be tempted to eat dirt.
You will turn on your comrades. Patrolmen have tried to eat each other, and that has only resulted in two dead comrades. There is nothing but death outside your mask.
You can overcome hunger.
Your dependence on Cadia is near absolute. You have always been surrounded by Cadia. You have even carried her pulse into the wild. You have never been without Cadia.
There is a stamped image under the above paragraph. It depicts an ancient Cadian—maybe a Faceless, who is leaning against an arterial wall, hands reaching high. The vasculature of Cadian and Cadia have merged, and the body is barely recognizable. Here, to decay is to become one with our true mother. The Cadian is 'dead', but echoes from its body continue to call on Cadia. The caption reads: "Our unity with Cadia is a fundamental instinct that even lingers past death. Some tailward tribes still practice this method of burial. Recently, some from Atrium prefer a burial in an impermeable casket."
You will not be able to survive if you cannot let go of Cadia. Making it this far in the trials means nothing. Most Patrolmen who lose their transfusions go insane. The void is indescribable, the despair is absolute. It robs you of all agency, seeing the world no longer able to accommodate your will. It is unimaginably worse than any shudder.
Your only hope of survival is to find the way back to the trail. You will be tempted by all manner of delusions, and none of them will work. The only Patrolmen who have survived a long range patrol are the ones who found their way back to the trail. That is the only visualization that avoids death.
"I have seen this before."
"Now is not the time for theatrics, Barca!"
"I am being straightforward." He turned to face Kolmi, running a finger over the slit of a stab wound on Tora's body. "This is the first case of the disease that is soon going to spread in Cadia."
"If you are suggesting that an illness is spreading among those in Atrium… that the antlion hole is still festering…"
"Have you ever thought about killing someone, Ulmar? Like we would an antlion, or a sheep."
"Wha- no- what kind of question is that?"
"Have you ever been hungry?"
"Sometimes, before breakfast- Barca, Cadia's sake, what are you getting at-"
"Do you think you would ever kill someone for a scrap of meat?"
"Are you saying that you-"
"One of you three is going to have to give up your shard of ambergris. As you can see, I have none. I agree with the Captain: we need to find the murderer, expel them, and come up with a lie as to how Tori died."
The outrage of Ulmar and Kolmi could barely keep up with Barca's revolution. He cut them off:
"What would you do to stop me from taking your shard?"
"You can't. You wouldn't-"
"I can. I would. Murder is an idea, Ulmar. It is the idea that I can remove your objection that is standing in the way of what I want. It gets around law, precedence, tradition, culture, and ritual. The idea lets me look at you the same way I look at an antlion or a particularly warm nodule in Cadia. The idea lets me realize that there is something more important than a fellow Cadian. It is a thought that takes extraordinary circumstances to germinate, and once it does it makes them superior to any other man nearby."
"This person will strike again as soon as they realize they can harvest us as easily as Minnow's sheep. They will see the power that it gives them over their fellow Cadians. But that is not the worst part of it, everyone, no. The worst part…" Barca squeezed a fist. "Is how easily this idea spreads."
"So, who of you will be the one that will save Cadia? The horn is filling, the gong approaches. Every drip we wait the disease continues to take hold. It may be too late."
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