CRITIQUE REQUEST Your thoughts on these six characters ?

Discussion in 'SHOWCASING' started by Tedrick, Jul 6, 2016.

  1. I've spent some time writing up some new characters for a story, but before I put them to work I wanted to know if they were too cliched or such. I've tried to be careful to not model them after exiting archtypes - your thoughts ?

    The five ( technically six ) are in this portfolio.

    You don't have to go over each of them, I tried writing cool backstory.