Would love to get some input

[Buicks Zennin]

Hey, i've been working on this project for four years now and i'd like to start showing it to someone, get some ideas and feedback.
I've always loved concept design and i've been getting really into this, my little world.
It's in a sci-fi setting, the species' date would be the year 8609.

I've been developing their physiology, culture, language etc for some time.
Thanks for the help and attention.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/mb9imrl7gdstjbh/Baab-Illi.jpg?m

https://www.dropbox.com/sm/create/Kasr/Galaxy map.png

https://www.sofurryfiles.com/std/pr...ame=Buicks+-+Traditional+Marriage+-+small.jpg

https://www.sofurryfiles.com/std/preview?page=583568&filename=Buicks+-+Desert+Nomads+-+small.jpg

http://th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2013/192/5/3/daeron_again_by_buicks-d6d0560.jpg

https://www.sofurryfiles.com/std/preview?page=586663&filename=Buicks+-+Evening+Respite+-+small.jpg
https://www.dropbox.com/s/x37x1chsgafs5hc/History of the Kasr Empire.doc

 

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I get a 502 Gateway Error on the Evening Respite picture, and the Galaxy Map requires a login

Managed to open the document fine, but holy wall of text batman that's a lot of reading O.O

 

[Buicks Zennin]

I get a 502 Gateway Error on the Evening Respite picture, and the Galaxy Map requires a login

Managed to open the document fine, but holy wall of text batman that's a lot of reading O.O

heeh...sorry ^^!