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I have an idea, and bear with me here; it's a Naruto alternate universe type deal. Instead of Hashirama Senju and Madara Uchiha uniting to found Konoha, it was a female Uchiha the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan and a male Bykakugan user who has the Tenseigan. This would, of course, take place in the Warring States Period where children rarely saw adulthood but it is in their many clashes that they actually grow to understand; he wants peace but she doesn't believe it's possible.

And I'm seeing in their last battle he doesn't block a sword stab that he would normally and its to prove a point to her. Someone has to put stop to the fighting, they have to be the stronger ones and leave themselves open to more than just hatred and bloodshed. And he shows her this in a purely honest way because when he falls forwards he hugs her tight and tell her he's afraid that if he lets go the brief peace when both sides see her strike him, will end and, that, the her he knows, that he can see her as--will disappear and she will lose herself to the darkness and he doesn't want that to happen.

Its a romance between two opposing sides, with unique views on how the world works. Each is powerful in their own right. But he's 'stronger' because he sees her weakness that she was born with cursed eyes, and power fueled by rage and hate. whereas he is born with eyes that can see 'clearly' and aren't governed by one's desires of malice and ill intent. He's kind of the opposite.

So he lets her stab he and let her frustration come pouring out with his blood as if he was saying to her "I could have deflected that, could have dodged or moved--but I chose to let it happen. "You have the same choice. You can keep dodging the inevitable or just take the hit and learn from it so it can never hurt you again.


-I would really like someone, preferably female,

-Who knows the Naruto universe well.

-That includes Jutsus, Kekki Genkai, etc

-and is at least adapt to write prolonged paragraphs in third-person.
 
Name: Tsuki Uchiha

Age: 16-19

Blood Type: AB blood type

Height: 5'4 and grows to be 5'8

Weight: 125

Appearance: (picture and at least a detailed paragraph.):
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As a young girl, Tsuki had dark brown hair and piercing raven eyes although she prefer to show off her Sharingan. She has a slim body type not much muscle mass due to the fact that she relies more on her Genjustu then brute force. She has a small chest which she is self conscious of but also prefers to wear more modest cloth not being too revealing. With the war waging on her hair turns a darker blue. Her body mature more as well, still having the same slim figure she had as a teen. Although she no longer shows her Sharingan when not in battle.

Personality: Tsuki has a sharp personality, she is not afraid to speak her mind even when she sometimes speaks out of her ass. She is a very dominating person who doesn't like it when someone makes her feel trap or small. She's snarky, stubborn, and sarcastic when around other people. Still she is human so when alone she does tend to be very self conscious of herself. She doubts herself a lot and tends to let her emotions run her life instead of thinking things logically. She does have a soft side but she kills it when ever it comes out. She doesn't like to be seen weak so has a bit of an ego and can lose her shit if someone tries to stomp her ego. Which brings her temper, she has no self control when it comes to her anger, she can easily lose it over small things.

Family:
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History: Despite being heir to the head of the clan Tsuki never felt pressured to be the best. She was closed to her mother Aiko the most and her father was a bit distance but she still loved and respected. It was only when she turned sixteen her mother was killed by a Hyuga clan's men. Tsuki had watched her mother get murdered in front of her. This caused her mangekyou sharingan to activate. When her mother died her father changed, he became harsher on both of his children expecting more from Tsuki especially with her new powers awakening. Karou was especially hard on her brother Takashi. Takashi was weaker than most Uchiha making him a disappointment. One day whole Takashi was out on a mission with his teammates he was ambushed by a team of Hyuga's. Tsuki didn't witness his death but she was the one who found his body completely mutilated. This awoke her eternal Mangekyou Sharingan. With the death of her brother and mother on her shoulder she swore to kill any Hyuga in her way without any mercy. She has a deadly streak and hunted down every Hyuga who was involved with killing her brother and mother. She managed to kill all of them except one.

Dojutsu (Eye powers):
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Kekkei Genkai:
~Sharingan

Other Jutsu:
~Fire Release: Great Fire Annihilation
~Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique.
~Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
~Chidori

Weapons:
~kunai
~katana

Theme Song
 
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Hyuga Clan Residence


Name: Kien Ōtsutsuki

Age: 17-23

Blood Type: O+

Height: 6'1

Weight: 198lbs

Appearance:
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Personality:

History:

Dojutsu (Eye powers):
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Byakugan
The Byakugan gives the user a near 360º diameter field of vision, with one blind spot at the back of the neck above the first thoracic vertebra. The range of this vision varies between users and can be improved with training. He can see targets 20 kilometers away. Its vision can penetrate through any solid objects or obstructions and likewise remains unaffected by blinding interferences, though certain barriers may distort the Byakugan's perception. The Byakugan is able to follow high-speed movements, which allows the wielder to analyze their opponent's actions, and allows the user to predict and better react to them. Tthe Byakugan is shown magnifying in on small targets and seeing infrared to detect a target through their body heat. A powerful enough user can see through one's thoughts and feelings, which Kaguya perform to such a level that even Hamura proved incapable of repelling with his Byakugan. It can also emit powerful chakra pulses to subdue an opponent.

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Tenseigan (Age 23)


The Tenseigan allows the user to control attractive and repulsive forces, similar to the Rinnegan's Deva Path. With the complete Tenseigan, the user is able to enter Tenseigan Chakra Mode, which grants the user enhanced physical capabilities as well as a number of Truth-Seeking Balls, comprised of all five nature transformations and Yin-Yang Release. By infusing the balls with Tenseigan chakra, it is possible to utilize additional powerful techniques. The Tenseigan is also capable of moving the moon towards the Earth, as well as powering a gigantic golem. ts ocular power is capable of reviving a planet in the event it was destroyed.
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Kekkei Tota:
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Storm Release


1.) Storm Release Secret Technique: Demon Dragon Storm: produce a massive thundercloud capable of infinitely absorbing chakra to grow in size, strength, and ferocity. The amount of chakra it receives will also increase. He can apparently channel this absorbed energy into himself, amplifying the technique to its highest limit.


2.) Storm Release: Laser Circus: This technique creates several beams and shoots them at the enemy. First, a halo of bright energy spreads around the user's hands as this technique is activated, then it encircles the user's hand and from that, the beams are shot out towards the enemy.The user is able to alter the beam's direction after being shot, making it possible to strike multiple enemies with pinpoint accuracy, even bypassing hostages held in close proximity.The user can also increase the number of beams to a great amount to pin down an enemy.


3.) Storm Release: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave: Generates a thick ring of thunderclouds and electricity around him, creating an offensive and defensive ward. He can then use these clouds to fire powerful blasts of lightning at his enemies, and as an electrified perimeter; effectively preventing his enemies from getting close.


4.) Storm Release Light Fang: A technique that infuses Storm Release with natural energy, the user generates a sharp thin stream of light from their mouth, that is said to be impossible to dodge as it shoots out at the speed of light. The technique was even capable of cutting through a Truth-Seeking Ball.


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Boil Release


1.) Boil Release: Skilled Mist Technique: The user creates a cloud of mist which they release from their mouth. This mist is highly acidic in nature, capable of melting bodies, and even chakra-based defenses such as Susanoo. The technique has an inherent disadvantage in that its effects are indiscriminate, limiting its usage to areas that do not contain allies. In the event that the mist escapes the containment area, the user can adjust the pH level of the mist to safer levels.


2.) Boil Release: Unrivalled Strength: The user increases the temperature of chakra to the boiling point, generating large amounts of steam and evaporating any water or ice in direct contact with their body. The pressure resulting from this emitted steam can then be used to increase the force behind physical attacks, giving the user immense strength. The exact amount of force produced is proportional to the quantity of steam released, as the greater the volume of steam utilized, the larger the pressure that can be built up. On releasing the pressure, not only is the user's strength enhanced, but their speed increased as well.


3.) Erupting Propulsion Fist: After increasing their chakra temperature to the boiling point, the user releases boiling steams from his body and delivers a steam-enhanced punch that sends his opponent flying far away.


4.) Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning: The user spews a stream of chakra-infused gunpowder from their mouth, which surrounds the region. As the gunpowder is composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud, which can be used as a smokescreen. After surrounding the enemy with the ash, the user can ignite it with a flint placed on their teeth beforehand to create a spark, resulting in a violent explosion, burning the enemy. However, this technique requires keen senses to read the air currents, the insight to read the movements of the enemy, the tactical experience to not also enfold one's allies in the flames, and careful attention for the timing of the ignition.


5.) Kirin: draws natural lightning directly from thunder clouds to supplement the power of his strike and controls it with chakra. Unlike most techniques, which are based on the user's chakra, this one uses the natural lightning, which reaches the ground in 1/1000th of a second. However, the preparation time required also decreases the technique's efficiency. If there are no active thunder clouds, the user must create them by using powerful fire techniques to produce the necessary storm conditions. With techniques such as Amaterasu, even stronger storm conditions can be made by them.


Once a lightning source has been acquired, shaping and guiding the lightning to the target requires very little chakra. This technique was powerful enough to completely obliterate a small mountain.

Chakra Natures: Lightning/ Water/ Fire

Other Jutsu:

1.) Flying Thunder God Technique Step One: The Flying Thunder God Technique is a Space-Time Ninjutsu which allows the user to instantaneously teleport themselves to a previously marked location.

Flying Thunder God Technique Step Two: The Flying Thunder God — Second Step is a technique developed; first thrown is a Flying Thunder God Kunai, be it a direct attack on his opponent; once the kunai has reached close proximity to the target, or even past them, he would then teleport to the said kunai, immediately attacking his target from their blind-spot. The speed at which this technique is executed along with the unpredicted secondary attack is such that even an individual who possesses the Sharingan is unable to react in time.

Flying Thunder God: Guiding Thunder: is a space-time barrier: This barrier technique incorporates the use of the Flying Thunder God formula to erect a barrier space capable of warping away anything which comes in contact with it. Once erected, the barrier has proven powerful enough to warp away techniques as destructive as a Tailed Beast Ball. Once warped, the subject of the technique can be directed to another location marked by the formula.

2.) Shadow Clone Technique is a technique developed similar to the basic Clone Technique, this technique creates copies of the user, however, these clones are corporeal instead of illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing techniques, including the Shadow Clone Technique itself, on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after hit by a strong enough force. The clones can also disperse on their own or be dispelled by the user of the technique. shadow clones can't be distinguished from the original with the Sharingan, Byakugan, Rinnegan or Rinne Sharingan.

3.) Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion to the user's skill.

4.) Lightning Release: Black Panther: After generating black lightning from their body which takes the form of a panther, the user can manipulate it to affect multiple victims at once by electrocuting them. Like various other Lightning Release techniques, the potency of this ability can be increased through the application of water.

5.) Lightning Release Chakra Mode:
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The user wraps their body in a layer of lightning chakra which, instead of being used offensively, is used to electrically stimulate their nervous system. The technique speeds up neural synapses reaction time and pushes physical prowess to the absolute limit allowing for tremendous raw speed. The technique has different levels of activation each visibly depicted by the user's hair which stands up when the technique is activated to the fullest. The higher the level, the higher the speed the user can achieve. This mode, combined with taijutsu, allows the users to utilize nintaijutsu. When using the armor at full power, it causes the tips of Kien's hair to spike up and his reflexes are such that even a Sharingan user has a hard time keeping up with him.


6.) Body Flicker Technique: By using the Body Flicker Technique, a ninja can move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalize the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination. Kien's ability made it so he would fade away from sight, leaving no trace of his presence.

Other Abilities:
Kenjutsu
Taijutsu
Tessenjutsu

Weapons:
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Wakizashi


Tools:
Flying Thunder God Kunai 20x
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