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Luminas

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#1
I wrote a song, I can see the melody in my head and everything. so what do I do...I never dreamed..what.

the name of the song is “It depends on you”

Once I understood, that the stars forgone
but i now I can not see for those have all moved on
but standing here beside you, everything has changed
for once i see, that we could be…..a happiness unchanged

Can you hear? (Can you hear)
the song within my heart
Can you see (Can you see)
that we can never part
though all the pain, and the lonliness, I can see it too
for the one who gave me happiness, was because it all depended on you.

For as long as the galaxies shine, and the planets are astray
we will always be together in each and every way
I’ll keeo on fighting for you, till the battle is won
for one thing is for sure…you are not the only one

Through the pain (Through the pain)
i saw joy in your eyes, even though this might be goodbye
Can’t you see (Can’t you see)
the world has been changed, for once we were apart, and now we are together

I can hear (you can hear)
my song within your heart
for now we are not alone.
I can see (you can see )
that i will never be apart from you
through all the pain, and the lonlieness, I can see it too
for one who gave me happiness, was because it depended on you.

For now we are together, and we are not alone.
there is one thing left for us to do.
Even though this might be our last goodbye.
I’ll always be watching over for you from the everylasting sky

No more pain (no more pain)
the pain is all but gone, for now we can finally move on
No more lonlienss (no more lonliness)
because you are here with me, and that is all I could see
for the one thing that I needed, no the one thing I see
is that you were always a part of me.

Now it depends on you, for always, you can depend on me.

 

Minerva

I Guess Everything Reminds you of Something
Roleplay Invitations
Group Roleplays, One on One Roleplays, Private Convo Roleplays
Posting Speed
Speed of Light, Several Posts a Day
My Usual Online Time
Roughly 9:30 AM-2:30 AM (CST)
Writing Levels
Give-No-Fucks, Intermediate, Advanced, Adaptable
Genders You Prefer Playing
Male, Female
Playing Style- Passive or Aggressive
Passive-Aggressive. I like steering the plot, but will be Passive when it calls for it.
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Alt History, Anything really. It honestly depends on how I'm feeling. I am always up for a good, solid Cyberpunk RP. I'm also up for Crossover RPs.
Genre You DON'T Like
I get easily bored with ordinary Slice-Of-Life RPs that don't have anything to break up the action.
#3
Find some staff paper, and find out the notes of the melody, and write that down.
 
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Halo

Guest
#4
Find some staff paper, and find out the notes of the melody, and write that down.
This. Find a musical friend to help if you have one. And there's plenty of software out there you can use to get the basics of the music down. Maybe someday you can record it. ^^
 
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Luminas

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#5
Find some staff paper, and find out the notes of the melody, and write that down.
I sang it today with a melody..I don't really know how to write music.
Uh....*blushes like crazy*
This. Find a musical friend to help if you have one. And there's plenty of software out there you can use to get the basics of the music down. Maybe someday you can record it. ^^
I recorded it...kinda
 

Minerva

I Guess Everything Reminds you of Something
Roleplay Invitations
Group Roleplays, One on One Roleplays, Private Convo Roleplays
Posting Speed
Speed of Light, Several Posts a Day
My Usual Online Time
Roughly 9:30 AM-2:30 AM (CST)
Writing Levels
Give-No-Fucks, Intermediate, Advanced, Adaptable
Genders You Prefer Playing
Male, Female
Playing Style- Passive or Aggressive
Passive-Aggressive. I like steering the plot, but will be Passive when it calls for it.
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Alt History, Anything really. It honestly depends on how I'm feeling. I am always up for a good, solid Cyberpunk RP. I'm also up for Crossover RPs.
Genre You DON'T Like
I get easily bored with ordinary Slice-Of-Life RPs that don't have anything to break up the action.
#6
I sang it today with a melody..I don't really know how to write music.

Uh....*blushes like crazy*

I recorded it...kinda
Find someone to assist you with it. Someone who's good at recognizing notes.

Try playing it by ear on a piano.

There are lots of techniques for this.
 
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Luminas

Guest
#7
Thanks, well here it is. *cowers under her desk, till someone comments*

 

Windsong

Ebullient Ember
Roleplay Invitations
Group Roleplays, One on One Roleplays, Chat Roleplays
Posting Speed
A Few Posts a Week
Writing Levels
Adept, Adaptable
Genders You Prefer Playing
No Preferences
Playing Style- Passive or Aggressive
Equally capable of leading the story or following along.
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Modern, Science-Fiction. Inspiration knows no genre barrier.
Genre You DON'T Like
Generic cliche pairings (demonxangel with anime appearances), anything with no substance. One-shots are OK if done right.
#8
Buy a better mic or sing it like you mean it. All I heard was murmuring until the volume was nearly maxed.

Cute though. Needs work. But cute.
 

Darog

Kawaii on the streets, Senpai in the sheets
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Group Roleplays, One on One Roleplays
Posting Speed
One Post a Week
Writing Levels
Adaptable
Playing Style- Passive or Aggressive
I'm fine with both, actually.
Favorite Genres
High/Dark Fantasy, Science fiction (Preferably the more earth or single planet kinds) Steampunk/Cyberpunk, Horror, Modern with a twist.
Genre You DON'T Like
Yaoi, Furry, purely Romance.
#9
Buy a better mic or sing it like you mean it. All I heard was murmuring until the volume was nearly maxed.

Cute though. Needs work. But cute.
I agree with Windsong's recommendation. Also, if I may suggest something? listen to how words sound when you sing them, it may seem a weird thing to suggest, but trust me, with a handy thesaurus? you can find much better words to fit with the lyric easier.

Also, again, as wind song; you need to sing clearer, and a little louder. You got to put some power behind it.
 

Gwazi Magnum

Previously Gwazi Magnum
Roleplay Invitations
Group Roleplays
Posting Speed
A Few Posts A Day, One Post a Day, A Few Posts a Week
My Usual Online Time
This changes too frequently to give anything reliable.
Writing Levels
Intermediate, Adept
Genders You Prefer Playing
Male
Playing Style- Passive or Aggressive
I would say I'm generally Passive.

But I will sometimes want to get my hands dirty and directly influence the plot.
Favorite Genres
Sci-Fi, Fantasy, Adventure.
#10
Better Mics are basically vital for any kind of voice recording online, especially for videos.

And power, you definitely need to give your voice more power.