This is better than the plot of 50% of all Iwaku's roleplays.

Discussion in 'THREAD ARCHIVES' started by Paorou-sama, May 13, 2011.

  1. It has character development, the hero calling archetype, action, adventure, an accurate depiction of the pain of loss, and I hear there might be romance on the horizon.

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6987090/1/

    And it's just a fanfic.

    You guys are small time.
     
  2. I feel shame. Shame! I must wash it off!
     
  3. I could not get past the first line of the story to even finish reading it. x___x COULD NOT REED GUDZ
     
  4. My Immortal was a better story. :|
     
  5. Either I don't know the first half of the words in the English language, or someone needs to run a spell check. I managed to make it past the first few lines though.
     
  6. tikva realized that he had no weapons and ambushers had firey arms.

    OH GAWD, NOT THE FIREY ARMS.
     
  7. Even Asmodeus isn't this evil.
     
  8. No other hero is capable of thinking like quick.
     
  9. I liked it. :D
     
  10. Well I wouldn't say that.
     
  11. Wow. WE SHOULD REPLACE USE THIS INSTEAD OF THE NEW WONDER WOMAN TV SHOW PLOT. SO EPIC.
     
  12. Asmo took my favorite line so I had to pick another:


    because federration soldiers didnt want to have enemies, zeons became secret group to rebel against them and called the,mselves "ZEON RREBELSA".






    Big Boss would be proud of such stealth.
     
  13. When will Author-san write another? :(

    tikva set off to join ZEON REBELS on the dame say.


    Who is this mysterious dame?
     
  14. Always remember your Firsk Bottle

    This character intrigues me. He could go far.

    I think that's a serious medical anomaly.

    Everyone has to have a dream.

    Running 500 laps a day gives you powerful buttocks.

    That's a terrible way to behave in a Tapas bar.

    His poetry moves me. T__T

    This.

    Yeah, I've been there.

    Such irony...
     
  15. I feel something incredible happened here but I can't put my finger on it.
     
  16. This thread brings me much joy.
     
  17. i lyked all of dat. i menea it was beutifule. << JUST KIDDING.
     
  18. "stop tikvs your father was terrorist and he was shot by unicorns AND buirned inearth atmosphere"

    HE WAS BURIED, IN THE SKY.
     
  19. "suddenly teacher slapped student in face with imopenity."

    Imopenity



    Imopenity


    It's a perfectly cromulent word. :D