This is better than the plot of 50% of all Iwaku's roleplays.

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Paorou-sama

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Original poster
It has character development, the hero calling archetype, action, adventure, an accurate depiction of the pain of loss, and I hear there might be romance on the horizon.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6987090/1/

And it's just a fanfic.

You guys are small time.
 

Diana

Divine Space Witch Ò◇Ó
ADMINISTRATOR
Invitation Status
Not accepting invites at this time
Online Availability
10AM - 10PM Daily
Preferred Character Gender
Female
I could not get past the first line of the story to even finish reading it. x___x COULD NOT REED GUDZ
 

Zypher

Can I transfer you to my manager?
Invitation Status
,
Writing Levels
Intermediate, Adept, Advanced
Preferred Character Gender
Male, Female
Genres
Adventure stories! They can be fantasy, modern, sci-fi, all kinds! Give me some good world travel stories and I'm all over it! I also enjoy romance stories and even though I tend to play females I love playing gay men.
My Immortal was a better story. :|
 
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Moonlit Blade

Guest
Original poster
Either I don't know the first half of the words in the English language, or someone needs to run a spell check. I managed to make it past the first few lines though.
 
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Fluffy

Guest
Original poster
tikva realized that he had no weapons and ambushers had firey arms.

OH GAWD, NOT THE FIREY ARMS.
 
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Paorou-sama

Guest
Original poster
No other hero is capable of thinking like quick.
 

Blind Hemingway

A former executive or something.
Invitation Status
,
Posting Speed
Slow As Molasses
Online Availability
NEVER
Writing Levels
Adept, Douche
Preferred Character Gender
Primarily Prefer Female
Genres
Surrealism, Surreal Horror (Think Tim Burton), Steampunk, Sci-Fi Fantasy, Spaghetti Westerns, Mercenaries, Dieselpunk, Cyberpunk, Historical fantasies
I liked it. :D
 
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Fel of the Eternal Forest

Guest
Original poster
Wow. WE SHOULD REPLACE USE THIS INSTEAD OF THE NEW WONDER WOMAN TV SHOW PLOT. SO EPIC.
 
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Cosmic Orion

Guest
Original poster
Asmo took my favorite line so I had to pick another:


because federration soldiers didnt want to have enemies, zeons became secret group to rebel against them and called the,mselves "ZEON RREBELSA".






Big Boss would be proud of such stealth.
 

Tegan

Hopeful Monster
When will Author-san write another? :(

tikva set off to join ZEON REBELS on the dame say.


Who is this mysterious dame?
 

Asmodeus

Gazorpazorpdeus
Posting Speed
Speed of Light
Tikva's Firsk Bottle
Always remember your Firsk Bottle

otherstudent john
This character intrigues me. He could go far.

he caould tastes it in his heart
I think that's a serious medical anomaly.

I can't wait to join you guys in bottle in space
Everyone has to have a dream.

tikva became so en ragged that he crushed fist with clench
Running 500 laps a day gives you powerful buttocks.

stabbed them in guts (both robot and humouse)
That's a terrible way to behave in a Tapas bar.

sidestepped from shots and lasers like an alien basketballerina
His poetry moves me. T__T

He shot them back with his moussiles and ladles
This.

"OH NO!COMMEANDER NAKED!"
Yeah, I've been there.

with my newtypo power
Such irony...
 
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Christine

Guest
Original poster
i lyked all of dat. i menea it was beutifule. << JUST KIDDING.
 

Blind Hemingway

A former executive or something.
Invitation Status
,
Posting Speed
Slow As Molasses
Online Availability
NEVER
Writing Levels
Adept, Douche
Preferred Character Gender
Primarily Prefer Female
Genres
Surrealism, Surreal Horror (Think Tim Burton), Steampunk, Sci-Fi Fantasy, Spaghetti Westerns, Mercenaries, Dieselpunk, Cyberpunk, Historical fantasies
"stop tikvs your father was terrorist and he was shot by unicorns AND buirned inearth atmosphere"

HE WAS BURIED, IN THE SKY.
 

Tegan

Hopeful Monster
"suddenly teacher slapped student in face with imopenity."

Imopenity



Imopenity


It's a perfectly cromulent word. :D