This is better than the plot of 50% of all Iwaku's roleplays.

[Paorou-sama]

It has character development, the hero calling archetype, action, adventure, an accurate depiction of the pain of loss, and I hear there might be romance on the horizon.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6987090/1/

And it's just a fanfic.

You guys are small time.

 

[Ochalla]

I feel shame. Shame! I must wash it off!

 

[Diana]

I could not get past the first line of the story to even finish reading it. x___x COULD NOT REED GUDZ

 

[Zypher]

My Immortal was a better story. :|

 

[Moonlit Blade]

Either I don't know the first half of the words in the English language, or someone needs to run a spell check. I managed to make it past the first few lines though.

 

[Fluffy]

tikva realized that he had no weapons and ambushers had firey arms.

OH GAWD, NOT THE FIREY ARMS.

 

[Asmodeus]

He ate our food and stole unicorn and shot our house!

Even Asmodeus isn't this evil.

 

[Paorou-sama]

No other hero is capable of thinking like quick.

 

[Blind Hemingway]

I liked it. :D

 

[Moonlit Blade]

Even Asmodeus isn't this evil.

Well I wouldn't say that.

 

[Fel of the Eternal Forest]

Wow. WE SHOULD REPLACE USE THIS INSTEAD OF THE NEW WONDER WOMAN TV SHOW PLOT. SO EPIC.

 

[Cosmic Orion]

Asmo took my favorite line so I had to pick another:


because federration soldiers didnt want to have enemies, zeons became secret group to rebel against them and called the,mselves "ZEON RREBELSA".






Big Boss would be proud of such stealth.

 

[Tegan]

When will Author-san write another? :(

tikva set off to join ZEON REBELS on the dame say.

Who is this mysterious dame?

 

[Paorou-sama]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6987090/1/bTikva_bs_straggle

New chapter just got updated.

>:/

 

[Asmodeus]

Tikva's Firsk Bottle

Always remember your Firsk Bottle

otherstudent john

This character intrigues me. He could go far.

he caould tastes it in his heart

I think that's a serious medical anomaly.

I can't wait to join you guys in bottle in space

Everyone has to have a dream.

tikva became so en ragged that he crushed fist with clench

Running 500 laps a day gives you powerful buttocks.

stabbed them in guts (both robot and humouse)

That's a terrible way to behave in a Tapas bar.

sidestepped from shots and lasers like an alien basketballerina

His poetry moves me. T__T

He shot them back with his moussiles and ladles

This.

"OH NO!COMMEANDER NAKED!"

Yeah, I've been there.

with my newtypo power

Such irony...

 

[Paorou-sama]

and his Guitar solo flew into space.

I feel something incredible happened here but I can't put my finger on it.

 

[Cosmic Orion]

This thread brings me much joy.

 

[Christine]

i lyked all of dat. i menea it was beutifule. << JUST KIDDING.

 

[Blind Hemingway]

"stop tikvs your father was terrorist and he was shot by unicorns AND buirned inearth atmosphere"

HE WAS BURIED, IN THE SKY.

 

[Tegan]

"suddenly teacher slapped student in face with imopenity."

Imopenity



Imopenity


It's a perfectly cromulent word. :D