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I would prefer if people just posted the complete versions of their sheet instead of posting the WIPs.
- Invitation Status
- Look for groups
- Posting Speed
- One post per day
- 1-3 posts per week
- One post per week
- Slow As Molasses
- Online Availability
- Usually when I'm not working, later on in the day.
- Writing Levels
- Intermediate
- Adept
- Douche
- Preferred Character Gender
- Nonbinary
- Transgender
- Primarily Prefer Male
- Primarily Prefer Female
- Genres
- Scifi, Modern, Urban Fantasy, Horror, Superpowers/Superheroes, slice of life with a twist.
Basic Information
Name: Diego Julius Bellemonte & Agni
Nickname/Alias/Etc: Diablo, Mago vulgar, Engendro del infierno
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Height: 5'6
Weight: 134
Reason for Attendance: Arrested for involuntary manslaughter.
Appearance
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Amber
Ethnicity: Hispanic/Caucasian - Colombian, Mexican, Spanish, Greek, & French.
Physical Appearance: A rather thin boy that is of average height for his age, Diego is a teenager that appears to be Hispanic, but isn't exactly. Because of an interracial relationship between his great-grandparents, he has caucasian in his roots. But because their children primarily got married to hispanic people, those Caucasian roots got rather overshadowed. One thing that has become a trait amongst his family is their large, pronounced, square noses with thick, nose bridges. The whole nose is triangle shaped from the side. I wouldn't say that it's their most attractive feature, but yeah. Diego has one of his own naturally. It looks disproportionate with the rest of his sharp facial features, and therefore, sticks out much more. In contrast to his thin, rather pokey, lips, medium sized ears that stick out somewhat, and small, squared (with a cleft), chin, and a sharp jawline, with a rather dull and unnoticeable jaw. All topped off with medium-sized amber eyes, that usually convey Diego's sense of regret, and more. One thing about Diego is that he doesn't do a good job at hiding his emotions. Usually his facial expression gives it away, but his overall body language also conveys his emotions. He constantly appears as if he's someone who always has a little something on his mind. His eyes are a little dark, which gives away that he doesn't sleep too often as well. He has a head of straight deep-black hair, cut short, and styled into a choppy, messy, hairstyle. But enough about the boy's face, time to describe his body. He's very thin, and doesn't have too much fat or muscles packed on him. However, he's kept thin from his physical activities such as playing basketball and running, so he doesn't so much as sits on his ass all day. Diego's skin is a off-white, somewhat tan, color, and is clear that he isn't exactly white if someone examines him. Like everyone, he has scars on his body, but nothing big or with a story. Small scars that come from small injuries. That kind of thing. However, Diego has symbols and markings on his body that resemble tattoos. They aren't true tattoos, when he got his power, these markings appeared on his body. Starting at his wrists, he has a network of fire symbols that appear very similar to tribal tattoos that go up his body, and encompass his chest, and go down to his ankles. Whenever he activates his power, these symbols start glowing, and combust into flames. Just to keep people from getting suspicious about his body, he tells them that they're tattoos.
Attire: Diego dresses quite formally, not really for flash, more of for comfort and appearing presentable. He wears jackets, and coats quite often, even in the summertime. Since he can pretty much wear whatever he wants to, whenever, because heat doesn't bother him, and he's so hot that he can shrug off the cold. He prefers that his attire is a black color, or merely a darker shade of an existing color. One of his favorite things to wear is a black sweater, with a jean jacket over that. Usually he wears a basketball/baseball or a beanie cap on his head. Always hanging off his neck is a necklace with a large silver cross at the end.
Personality
Personality: An atoner. Someone who has committed a crime like no other, and has to live with it, trying to make up for that one mistake. He spends a bit of time thinking about it, and naturally has a lot of guilt associated with it. It's something that changed him, that haunts him. The kind of thing that keeps him up at night because he can't go to sleep, and when he can, he wakes up because of the dreams. It used to be different a while back, when he was angry, proud and confident. The kind of kid that would bully kids and push them around just because it made him feel tough. But he left that attitude behind. That said, Diego is a bit of a recluse. He doesn't exactly talk to people anymore like the way he used to, he's quiet, and only speaks when he has something to say. However, he does keep a conversation going to the best of his ability. He's well-spoken, and very kind. He treats people with respect until they prove otherwise. He's humble, and leaves his ego at the door, and that's something that people can tell. Diego has a strong desire to help those around him, and heavily believes in taking responsibility for one's actions. It's that strong, driven, sense of morality that signifies that he's a changed man. One thing he can't stand is a bully, no matter what size or shape they are, - merely because that was a reflection of what he used to be. He doesn't believe that he should let anyone go through the same things he put on other people, so he's quick to stand up to a bully. Even if it puts himself at risk. Whenever people bully/prank him, he rarely retaliates or tells on anyone. Because that's what he feels as if he deserves it for what he did to other people, and what he's brought onto his own family. Diego is a Christian, his family is heavily Christian, but he had ignored their teachings in the past. He has changed his ways and now follows the Bible and it's teaching to help redeem himself. His faith in God and his kindness is unwavering, and will forgive others of their wrongdoings.
Skills/Talents: Diego is quite versed in the musical area. He was taught by his grandmother, who was a musical prodigy, to play the guitar and it's something that stuck with him from his youth. It's something that he falls back on, to convey his emotions, when he's feeling down. Being a native Mexican, Diego is great at speaking Spanish, but he has also spent a majority of his life in America. Therefore he nearly has the entire language down. The last skill is that, while Diego has no martial arts training, he is a pretty good fighter. He put plenty of people on their asses, and has fought on his own terms with martial artists. One of Diego's favorite things to do is play Basketball. He's quite talented for his age, and he believes he could have gone pro.
Prized Possession: His Alvarez Artist Series ABT60 Baritone Guitar. Which was a gift from his grandmother right before his grandfather died.
Quote(s): "It ain't like that anymore."
"God gave me a demon to punish me..."
History/Bio: Diego J. Bellemont was technically born in Mexico alongside his twin brother Alejandro, but moved to America shortly after - with their older sister, Lupe coming along too. His father was a talented Engineer that worked in Mexico before he got a job in America. They lived in the city of San Francisco. Unlike the rest of his family, who grew up out of the states, Diego and his brother had grown up in America. So there wasn't so much adjusting as there was developing in the states. Though, he and his family visited Mexico plenty of times. So he managed to experience plenty his supposed homeland for himself. During all of his visits, he was given impromptu guitar lessons from his Grandmother, who used to play in a band and was incredibly talented. Diego and all his siblings were naturals when it came to the guitar. To the point where their Grandmother gave each of them guitars that she used in her past. Which became a hobby that Diego resorted to whenever he couldn't go outside, or engage in other activities. That said, Diego and Alejandro's life was rather... eventful. He and his brother were given a bit too much freedom because their father spent too much time at work to be a role-model, and when he was home, he didn't bother. His mother wasn't strict enough to be a good mother either, she gave them too much freedom. Which caused some problems for them later on, once they attended school. They found themselves getting mingled with the bad crowd, the ghetto kids. The kind of kids that caused trouble for everyone and misbehaved. Because of the media glorifying their activities, and peer pressure, Diego and Alejandro were interested in becoming part of them. That's where it all went wrong for the two.
Sure, as they moved along with their classes, they became the "popular" kids, but they also viciously bullied other kids for no reason other than the fact that it made them feel powerful, feared, and that they can do whatever they want to. They targeted kids that were weird and strange, or outcasts, and were truly merciless. They pranked them, they insulted them, and when they could go away with it, they physically beat them. This continued for what had to be years, except they changed targets since their victims tended to skip school. They rarely got punishments other than spending a bit of time in detention. They didn't really focus on their academics, they got enough to pass, and that's what kept them out of the eyes of their parents. One peculiar thing that happened to his family was his twin brother and sister developing powers. His sister gained the power to enter mirrors and teleport between them by the time she was ten, and Alejandro gained a icy-minion he could summon at will. Diego didn't have any powers, but he felt as if he meant he was normal, and his siblings were freaks. Which caused a bit of a drift between the three siblings. As Diego didn't feel anymore different from them than the moment they got their powers. He continued with his previous activities of bullying nerds without his brother - who did the same without Diego. It didn't matter, long as the boy could remain a top-dog. As he progressed through school, he felt unstoppable. Like he was the king of the school. Merely because he kept the uglies of the school down where they belonged.
Once he turned fourteen, the differences between his brother and sister came to an end. One eventful day at school, Diego had started to feel very hot. He didn't know why. But he immediately found himself in the bathroom. He stared in the mirror, and there he saw Agni. Looming over him. Before he disappeared. Naturally, Diego freaked out and fell assfirst. That was enough for Agni to rise. The boy combust into a wreath of flames, and every movement Diego took spread more of the flames around. He created so many flames, which would have burned down the school if the sprinkles hadn't come on. The fires were extinguished, but symbols of flames had burned themselves into Diego (Which were obvious since he burned his clothes off). Diego himself had fallen unconscious, and was past out until he woke up in the hospital. The school thought he had started the fire, but there was no evidence of him, or anyone else for that matter, starting the fires. So they let him off the hook. However, Diego gained a new bad influence in his head: Agni. At first, Diego was adverse to him, but the two warmed up after Agni had tempted Diego with the power he had. To the point where Diego realized he had a power himself. But he rarely used Agni because of his fear of ostracism. That he'd become the very person that he bullies! But, he managed to get close to his siblings again.
Diego had continued through middle school with his activities. Using his bullying and his basketball talents to get himself with the popular kids. He was living large. But all that changed one schoolday, so did his entire life. During the tail-end of his middle-school run, when he was almost fifteen, he had taken it too far. He was currently bullying a boy who had a severe case of claustrophobia. One particular prank he had thought was funny involved throwing this kid into the supply closet and not letting him out. The boy had screamed in terror and banged on the door begging Diego to let him out, when the boy had a heart attack and sadly died. When the boy's cries for help stopped, so did Diego's laughter, he opened the door and saw the boy's dead body flop onto the floor. Diego was hysterical, and desperately shook the boy to try to get him to wake up, but it was far too late. It was all a joke! Nobody should have gotten killed. Diego was taken by school staff, where he was left in the principal's office until the police came and taken him to the station. It was an incident that spread fast through his neighborhood, even gotten a mention on the news. It was a massive scandal among the Bellemont family. Diego could face jailtime for what he did. His family argued for ages, shifting blame to one person to another, while he rotted in a cell. He contemplated what he did over and over again. To say the least, what happened fucked him up big time. He lied in that cell, near catatonic, letting whatever happened to him happen. He realized the effects of his actions on other, and vowed to change himself. This was where Camp ThinkerRock representatives came in. They sought out the Bellemont family, and gave them a offer they couldn't refuse: Diego spends a few summers at their camp, and then his crime would be wiped if he completed their course and became a fully pledged hero. They accepted the deal, and Diego was sent off to the camp soon as possible.
Family:
Father - Joseph Bellemont Jr.
Mother - Juliet Bellemont
Grandmother - Cecilia Bellemont
Grandfather - Joseph Bellemont Sr. (Deceased)
Older Sister - Lupe Bellemont (Meta-human. Has reflection and mirror entering powers.)
Twin Brother - Alejandro Bellemont (Meta-human. Had a Cyrokinetic-Entity. Deceased.)
Relationships
Abilities
Power Class: Elemental, & Cerebral
Power: Pyrokinetic-Entity. Little Diego here is the next inheritor of a powerful flame entity known as Agni, named after the Hindu God. This being is the split of. He is invisible to all forms of detection except for mental powers, and maybe thermal senses (Diego has an abnormally high body heat), until he chooses to manifest outside - but more on that later. To someone who isn't too versed on Superpowers, it is vague what Agni is. They interpret him as a demon, oe a spirit. In actuality, Agni is the manifestation of Diego's power that is capable of being transferred to the next suitable body (In this case, the first male born of the Bellamonte family). Agni is a cruel being that feeds off of Diego's negative emotions to gain power. He is extremely stubborn, and refuses to be made subservient. It will be hard to get him to loan his power, as Agni can only be bargained with. However, can convince him to cooperate, make themselves equal with him. Getting onto his capabilities, has an array of pyrokinetic abilities:
Agni can manifest in the real world at will. Agni is a massive being that appears to truly demonic. Massive, at ten feet tall, has a skeletal-like appearance, that appears to be made out of jet-black magma rock and obsidian that take the shape of thick, bulging, muscles, with wide cracks all over it's body that let out an orange light. He is surrounded in a wreath of flames that makes Agni appear to be much thicker. Agni does not possess legs, everything below his waist is merely a swirling mass of flames much like a Dijinn. Agni's arms are massive, they are three-feet thick, and are topped off with four enormous claws that are much like eagle-talons. To top off his intimidating frame, Agni's head is the shape of a cow-skull, with a mouth full of razor-sharp teeth, glowing red eyes, and two massive horns. Yeah, Agni looks pretty fucking scary. What are his capabilities? Agni more or less has the usual firebending techniques. Manipulation of fire, creating fire with a thought, and minor-heat manipulating abilities. The fire Agni creates works similar to the Firebenders in the Avatar universe. His fire burns Diego's negative emotions, and thus, the power is connected to Diego's current emotional state. The angier, sad, or lusty, Diego is, the more strength Agni has. Now, this might be a given, but Diego and Agni are immune to all forms of heat-based damage. They can use a fucking volcano like a hot tub. Agni can summon powerful fire-storms that stretch far and wide, create flames of a hotter and more intense variety, and shape his fire. The usual. It's possible for Agni to propel Diego by shooting off enough flames like a jet. Agni also has minor-heat manipulation techniques, such the ability to absorb heat from his environment. Which can be useful for extinguishing his flames, cooling down an area, or putting a little extra heat behind his flames. He can also simply produce heat without the flames. He can turn an area boiling hot if he's given enough time. Agni also posses immense physical strength, which means getting close to him is not a good idea. However, Agni can gift Deigo with these pyromancer abilities if the boy bargains with him. Allowing the boy to use his power without manifesting and revealing himself. When Diego's using the pyromancery, he's a typical fire-bender, however, how much strength he has depends on how much Agni chooses to give him. He can have rather powerful pyromancery if he convinces Agni, but if Agni doesn't feel like it, he won't be able to make anything bigger than a spark. As a side effect of this, Diego has limited healing abilities, as Diego's body is so hot that bacteria simply gets vaporized. Even when contained, Agni can somewhat control flames. He won't be creating fire-storms, but he can do a neat-trick. He can project himself into a flame, creating a talking image of himself that can communicate with others. Only used if he wants to speak to other people.
Weaknesses/Drawbacks: The most obvious weakness is that Diego's power more or less has a mind of his own. He has no control over it, but it has control over him. He has to bargain with Agni to help him (Either directly, or by giving him fire powers). If he doesn't appease Agni, he could go powerless. Agni's a bit of a dick, and always wants something in return of giving Diego his power, so it'll be hard to reason with him at times. There's also the ostracism that may come with people knowing that Diego has what amounts to be a demon inside of him, giving him power. Now, onto the other weaknesses. While the pair are immune to heat, they aren't immune to the byproducts of the fire they create, such as smoke and burning up the oxygen. In fact, Agni manifesting in closed off areas is not recommended because his firey body burns up air so much that he can suffocate. If there's no air, Agni will immediately be destroyed, forced back into Diego to recover. Water is also a big weakness... obviously, but allow me to go in depth a bit here. If Diego is drenched in water, he is cut off from his powers until he is dry. If Agni gets drenched in water, he will be fine. But water weakens both of them. If someone so much as splashes a cup of water on him, all of his abilities will be weaker. Other fire-suppressing agents do the same thing. Since Agni burns Diego's negative emotions, his strength relies on his current emotional state. If Diego isn't angry, then Agni won't be able to use his full strength. However, this is a double-edged sword. If Diego gets too angry, then Agni will have too much power to properly control, and it will exhaust him. Agni will also burn off Diego's "natural resources" such as the food and water he consumes, forcing him to eat more. Agni can also dehydrate Diego if he goes too far. Now, neither of them possess any defensive techniques, only offensive techniques really. They can't really stop attacks. Now, Agni, while powerful in close and medium range, cannot take too much damage before he goes down - he'll be even squisher if he's wet. He takes damage normally, and cannot heal while manifested, so he has to retreat into Diego in order to heal. If he's destroyed, then Diego will be powerless until he recovers, which is usually a few hours. Any damage that Agni receives will also be reflected onto Diego in the form of a phantom pain. This is a bit of a limit, but Agni can only move a radius of one meter around Diego, and his reach is around twelve feet. If anyone manages to stay out of that, they can avoid his melee attacks.
Other:
Name: Diego Julius Bellemonte & Agni
Nickname/Alias/Etc: Diablo, Mago vulgar, Engendro del infierno
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Height: 5'6
Weight: 134
Reason for Attendance: Arrested for involuntary manslaughter.
Appearance
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Amber
Ethnicity: Hispanic/Caucasian - Colombian, Mexican, Spanish, Greek, & French.
Physical Appearance: A rather thin boy that is of average height for his age, Diego is a teenager that appears to be Hispanic, but isn't exactly. Because of an interracial relationship between his great-grandparents, he has caucasian in his roots. But because their children primarily got married to hispanic people, those Caucasian roots got rather overshadowed. One thing that has become a trait amongst his family is their large, pronounced, square noses with thick, nose bridges. The whole nose is triangle shaped from the side. I wouldn't say that it's their most attractive feature, but yeah. Diego has one of his own naturally. It looks disproportionate with the rest of his sharp facial features, and therefore, sticks out much more. In contrast to his thin, rather pokey, lips, medium sized ears that stick out somewhat, and small, squared (with a cleft), chin, and a sharp jawline, with a rather dull and unnoticeable jaw. All topped off with medium-sized amber eyes, that usually convey Diego's sense of regret, and more. One thing about Diego is that he doesn't do a good job at hiding his emotions. Usually his facial expression gives it away, but his overall body language also conveys his emotions. He constantly appears as if he's someone who always has a little something on his mind. His eyes are a little dark, which gives away that he doesn't sleep too often as well. He has a head of straight deep-black hair, cut short, and styled into a choppy, messy, hairstyle. But enough about the boy's face, time to describe his body. He's very thin, and doesn't have too much fat or muscles packed on him. However, he's kept thin from his physical activities such as playing basketball and running, so he doesn't so much as sits on his ass all day. Diego's skin is a off-white, somewhat tan, color, and is clear that he isn't exactly white if someone examines him. Like everyone, he has scars on his body, but nothing big or with a story. Small scars that come from small injuries. That kind of thing. However, Diego has symbols and markings on his body that resemble tattoos. They aren't true tattoos, when he got his power, these markings appeared on his body. Starting at his wrists, he has a network of fire symbols that appear very similar to tribal tattoos that go up his body, and encompass his chest, and go down to his ankles. Whenever he activates his power, these symbols start glowing, and combust into flames. Just to keep people from getting suspicious about his body, he tells them that they're tattoos.
Attire: Diego dresses quite formally, not really for flash, more of for comfort and appearing presentable. He wears jackets, and coats quite often, even in the summertime. Since he can pretty much wear whatever he wants to, whenever, because heat doesn't bother him, and he's so hot that he can shrug off the cold. He prefers that his attire is a black color, or merely a darker shade of an existing color. One of his favorite things to wear is a black sweater, with a jean jacket over that. Usually he wears a basketball/baseball or a beanie cap on his head. Always hanging off his neck is a necklace with a large silver cross at the end.
Personality
Personality: An atoner. Someone who has committed a crime like no other, and has to live with it, trying to make up for that one mistake. He spends a bit of time thinking about it, and naturally has a lot of guilt associated with it. It's something that changed him, that haunts him. The kind of thing that keeps him up at night because he can't go to sleep, and when he can, he wakes up because of the dreams. It used to be different a while back, when he was angry, proud and confident. The kind of kid that would bully kids and push them around just because it made him feel tough. But he left that attitude behind. That said, Diego is a bit of a recluse. He doesn't exactly talk to people anymore like the way he used to, he's quiet, and only speaks when he has something to say. However, he does keep a conversation going to the best of his ability. He's well-spoken, and very kind. He treats people with respect until they prove otherwise. He's humble, and leaves his ego at the door, and that's something that people can tell. Diego has a strong desire to help those around him, and heavily believes in taking responsibility for one's actions. It's that strong, driven, sense of morality that signifies that he's a changed man. One thing he can't stand is a bully, no matter what size or shape they are, - merely because that was a reflection of what he used to be. He doesn't believe that he should let anyone go through the same things he put on other people, so he's quick to stand up to a bully. Even if it puts himself at risk. Whenever people bully/prank him, he rarely retaliates or tells on anyone. Because that's what he feels as if he deserves it for what he did to other people, and what he's brought onto his own family. Diego is a Christian, his family is heavily Christian, but he had ignored their teachings in the past. He has changed his ways and now follows the Bible and it's teaching to help redeem himself. His faith in God and his kindness is unwavering, and will forgive others of their wrongdoings.
Skills/Talents: Diego is quite versed in the musical area. He was taught by his grandmother, who was a musical prodigy, to play the guitar and it's something that stuck with him from his youth. It's something that he falls back on, to convey his emotions, when he's feeling down. Being a native Mexican, Diego is great at speaking Spanish, but he has also spent a majority of his life in America. Therefore he nearly has the entire language down. The last skill is that, while Diego has no martial arts training, he is a pretty good fighter. He put plenty of people on their asses, and has fought on his own terms with martial artists. One of Diego's favorite things to do is play Basketball. He's quite talented for his age, and he believes he could have gone pro.
Prized Possession: His Alvarez Artist Series ABT60 Baritone Guitar. Which was a gift from his grandmother right before his grandfather died.
Quote(s): "It ain't like that anymore."
"God gave me a demon to punish me..."
History/Bio: Diego J. Bellemont was technically born in Mexico alongside his twin brother Alejandro, but moved to America shortly after - with their older sister, Lupe coming along too. His father was a talented Engineer that worked in Mexico before he got a job in America. They lived in the city of San Francisco. Unlike the rest of his family, who grew up out of the states, Diego and his brother had grown up in America. So there wasn't so much adjusting as there was developing in the states. Though, he and his family visited Mexico plenty of times. So he managed to experience plenty his supposed homeland for himself. During all of his visits, he was given impromptu guitar lessons from his Grandmother, who used to play in a band and was incredibly talented. Diego and all his siblings were naturals when it came to the guitar. To the point where their Grandmother gave each of them guitars that she used in her past. Which became a hobby that Diego resorted to whenever he couldn't go outside, or engage in other activities. That said, Diego and Alejandro's life was rather... eventful. He and his brother were given a bit too much freedom because their father spent too much time at work to be a role-model, and when he was home, he didn't bother. His mother wasn't strict enough to be a good mother either, she gave them too much freedom. Which caused some problems for them later on, once they attended school. They found themselves getting mingled with the bad crowd, the ghetto kids. The kind of kids that caused trouble for everyone and misbehaved. Because of the media glorifying their activities, and peer pressure, Diego and Alejandro were interested in becoming part of them. That's where it all went wrong for the two.
Sure, as they moved along with their classes, they became the "popular" kids, but they also viciously bullied other kids for no reason other than the fact that it made them feel powerful, feared, and that they can do whatever they want to. They targeted kids that were weird and strange, or outcasts, and were truly merciless. They pranked them, they insulted them, and when they could go away with it, they physically beat them. This continued for what had to be years, except they changed targets since their victims tended to skip school. They rarely got punishments other than spending a bit of time in detention. They didn't really focus on their academics, they got enough to pass, and that's what kept them out of the eyes of their parents. One peculiar thing that happened to his family was his twin brother and sister developing powers. His sister gained the power to enter mirrors and teleport between them by the time she was ten, and Alejandro gained a icy-minion he could summon at will. Diego didn't have any powers, but he felt as if he meant he was normal, and his siblings were freaks. Which caused a bit of a drift between the three siblings. As Diego didn't feel anymore different from them than the moment they got their powers. He continued with his previous activities of bullying nerds without his brother - who did the same without Diego. It didn't matter, long as the boy could remain a top-dog. As he progressed through school, he felt unstoppable. Like he was the king of the school. Merely because he kept the uglies of the school down where they belonged.
Once he turned fourteen, the differences between his brother and sister came to an end. One eventful day at school, Diego had started to feel very hot. He didn't know why. But he immediately found himself in the bathroom. He stared in the mirror, and there he saw Agni. Looming over him. Before he disappeared. Naturally, Diego freaked out and fell assfirst. That was enough for Agni to rise. The boy combust into a wreath of flames, and every movement Diego took spread more of the flames around. He created so many flames, which would have burned down the school if the sprinkles hadn't come on. The fires were extinguished, but symbols of flames had burned themselves into Diego (Which were obvious since he burned his clothes off). Diego himself had fallen unconscious, and was past out until he woke up in the hospital. The school thought he had started the fire, but there was no evidence of him, or anyone else for that matter, starting the fires. So they let him off the hook. However, Diego gained a new bad influence in his head: Agni. At first, Diego was adverse to him, but the two warmed up after Agni had tempted Diego with the power he had. To the point where Diego realized he had a power himself. But he rarely used Agni because of his fear of ostracism. That he'd become the very person that he bullies! But, he managed to get close to his siblings again.
Diego had continued through middle school with his activities. Using his bullying and his basketball talents to get himself with the popular kids. He was living large. But all that changed one schoolday, so did his entire life. During the tail-end of his middle-school run, when he was almost fifteen, he had taken it too far. He was currently bullying a boy who had a severe case of claustrophobia. One particular prank he had thought was funny involved throwing this kid into the supply closet and not letting him out. The boy had screamed in terror and banged on the door begging Diego to let him out, when the boy had a heart attack and sadly died. When the boy's cries for help stopped, so did Diego's laughter, he opened the door and saw the boy's dead body flop onto the floor. Diego was hysterical, and desperately shook the boy to try to get him to wake up, but it was far too late. It was all a joke! Nobody should have gotten killed. Diego was taken by school staff, where he was left in the principal's office until the police came and taken him to the station. It was an incident that spread fast through his neighborhood, even gotten a mention on the news. It was a massive scandal among the Bellemont family. Diego could face jailtime for what he did. His family argued for ages, shifting blame to one person to another, while he rotted in a cell. He contemplated what he did over and over again. To say the least, what happened fucked him up big time. He lied in that cell, near catatonic, letting whatever happened to him happen. He realized the effects of his actions on other, and vowed to change himself. This was where Camp ThinkerRock representatives came in. They sought out the Bellemont family, and gave them a offer they couldn't refuse: Diego spends a few summers at their camp, and then his crime would be wiped if he completed their course and became a fully pledged hero. They accepted the deal, and Diego was sent off to the camp soon as possible.
Family:
Father - Joseph Bellemont Jr.
Mother - Juliet Bellemont
Grandmother - Cecilia Bellemont
Grandfather - Joseph Bellemont Sr. (Deceased)
Older Sister - Lupe Bellemont (Meta-human. Has reflection and mirror entering powers.)
Twin Brother - Alejandro Bellemont (Meta-human. Had a Cyrokinetic-Entity. Deceased.)
Relationships
Abilities
Power Class: Elemental, & Cerebral
Power: Pyrokinetic-Entity. Little Diego here is the next inheritor of a powerful flame entity known as Agni, named after the Hindu God. This being is the split of. He is invisible to all forms of detection except for mental powers, and maybe thermal senses (Diego has an abnormally high body heat), until he chooses to manifest outside - but more on that later. To someone who isn't too versed on Superpowers, it is vague what Agni is. They interpret him as a demon, oe a spirit. In actuality, Agni is the manifestation of Diego's power that is capable of being transferred to the next suitable body (In this case, the first male born of the Bellamonte family). Agni is a cruel being that feeds off of Diego's negative emotions to gain power. He is extremely stubborn, and refuses to be made subservient. It will be hard to get him to loan his power, as Agni can only be bargained with. However, can convince him to cooperate, make themselves equal with him. Getting onto his capabilities, has an array of pyrokinetic abilities:
Agni can manifest in the real world at will. Agni is a massive being that appears to truly demonic. Massive, at ten feet tall, has a skeletal-like appearance, that appears to be made out of jet-black magma rock and obsidian that take the shape of thick, bulging, muscles, with wide cracks all over it's body that let out an orange light. He is surrounded in a wreath of flames that makes Agni appear to be much thicker. Agni does not possess legs, everything below his waist is merely a swirling mass of flames much like a Dijinn. Agni's arms are massive, they are three-feet thick, and are topped off with four enormous claws that are much like eagle-talons. To top off his intimidating frame, Agni's head is the shape of a cow-skull, with a mouth full of razor-sharp teeth, glowing red eyes, and two massive horns. Yeah, Agni looks pretty fucking scary. What are his capabilities? Agni more or less has the usual firebending techniques. Manipulation of fire, creating fire with a thought, and minor-heat manipulating abilities. The fire Agni creates works similar to the Firebenders in the Avatar universe. His fire burns Diego's negative emotions, and thus, the power is connected to Diego's current emotional state. The angier, sad, or lusty, Diego is, the more strength Agni has. Now, this might be a given, but Diego and Agni are immune to all forms of heat-based damage. They can use a fucking volcano like a hot tub. Agni can summon powerful fire-storms that stretch far and wide, create flames of a hotter and more intense variety, and shape his fire. The usual. It's possible for Agni to propel Diego by shooting off enough flames like a jet. Agni also has minor-heat manipulation techniques, such the ability to absorb heat from his environment. Which can be useful for extinguishing his flames, cooling down an area, or putting a little extra heat behind his flames. He can also simply produce heat without the flames. He can turn an area boiling hot if he's given enough time. Agni also posses immense physical strength, which means getting close to him is not a good idea. However, Agni can gift Deigo with these pyromancer abilities if the boy bargains with him. Allowing the boy to use his power without manifesting and revealing himself. When Diego's using the pyromancery, he's a typical fire-bender, however, how much strength he has depends on how much Agni chooses to give him. He can have rather powerful pyromancery if he convinces Agni, but if Agni doesn't feel like it, he won't be able to make anything bigger than a spark. As a side effect of this, Diego has limited healing abilities, as Diego's body is so hot that bacteria simply gets vaporized. Even when contained, Agni can somewhat control flames. He won't be creating fire-storms, but he can do a neat-trick. He can project himself into a flame, creating a talking image of himself that can communicate with others. Only used if he wants to speak to other people.
Weaknesses/Drawbacks: The most obvious weakness is that Diego's power more or less has a mind of his own. He has no control over it, but it has control over him. He has to bargain with Agni to help him (Either directly, or by giving him fire powers). If he doesn't appease Agni, he could go powerless. Agni's a bit of a dick, and always wants something in return of giving Diego his power, so it'll be hard to reason with him at times. There's also the ostracism that may come with people knowing that Diego has what amounts to be a demon inside of him, giving him power. Now, onto the other weaknesses. While the pair are immune to heat, they aren't immune to the byproducts of the fire they create, such as smoke and burning up the oxygen. In fact, Agni manifesting in closed off areas is not recommended because his firey body burns up air so much that he can suffocate. If there's no air, Agni will immediately be destroyed, forced back into Diego to recover. Water is also a big weakness... obviously, but allow me to go in depth a bit here. If Diego is drenched in water, he is cut off from his powers until he is dry. If Agni gets drenched in water, he will be fine. But water weakens both of them. If someone so much as splashes a cup of water on him, all of his abilities will be weaker. Other fire-suppressing agents do the same thing. Since Agni burns Diego's negative emotions, his strength relies on his current emotional state. If Diego isn't angry, then Agni won't be able to use his full strength. However, this is a double-edged sword. If Diego gets too angry, then Agni will have too much power to properly control, and it will exhaust him. Agni will also burn off Diego's "natural resources" such as the food and water he consumes, forcing him to eat more. Agni can also dehydrate Diego if he goes too far. Now, neither of them possess any defensive techniques, only offensive techniques really. They can't really stop attacks. Now, Agni, while powerful in close and medium range, cannot take too much damage before he goes down - he'll be even squisher if he's wet. He takes damage normally, and cannot heal while manifested, so he has to retreat into Diego in order to heal. If he's destroyed, then Diego will be powerless until he recovers, which is usually a few hours. Any damage that Agni receives will also be reflected onto Diego in the form of a phantom pain. This is a bit of a limit, but Agni can only move a radius of one meter around Diego, and his reach is around twelve feet. If anyone manages to stay out of that, they can avoid his melee attacks.
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Basic Information
Name: Claudette Jean-Pierre
Nickname/Alias/Etc: Love
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Height: 5'4
Weight: 128
Reason for Attendance: Willingly came to the camp after losing control of her powers and injuring her father.
Appearance
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Amber (But glows different colors when she uses her power)
Ethnicity: Haitian
Physical Appearance: Claudette is a girl that is obviously foreign. It's not just her really dark black skin, but it's her accent and mannerisms. When she speaks, she has a very thick accent, and sometimes stumbles on the English language. For those who are familiar with them, it's clear as day that she is Haitian. Her movements are slow and deliberate, and she takes large steps. That said, Claudette is a thick-boned girl that has a solid build all without being fat. She has solid, masculine, earth hands. She has a healthy amount of body fat and muscles, while she plays sports, she isn't muscular. But her legs are fairly solid and devoid of body fat. But her body has some curves to it. Her breasts are C-cup, and her butt is round. She's not super short, but it's an inch below the average female height, and according BMI, she weighs a healthy amount too. As it's been stated before, she looks pretty Haitian. Her facial features, skull shape, and hair-texture are quite consistent with Africans, but it's not that which gives away her Haitian heritage, but it's her very dark skin. Her skin is very dark, coal-dark, which is probably from the extra-sun she's been getting since she was young. Her skin is very scarred, but the most notable scars can easily be concealed under her clothes. Now, easily the most notable scar on her right has to be the one a few centimeters above her knee, that circles her entire leg. Almost like she was bifurcated (And it's true!) around those two areas. Claudette's hands have leathery, fleshy, burn scars all over them, that are fairly recent. She also has a few burn scars in assorted parts of her body, mostly on her arms and chest. It's because she went overboard with her power a few times. Her head is round-shaped, and her facial features are squared. Her eyes are small, and have that longing stare to them, in addition to having a amber color. Her nose is large and arrow-shaped, pointing inwards somewhat, with small nostrils. Claudette's lips are pretty thick and full. Her cheeks are small, but very round. Claudette's chin is rounded, and smooths into her sharp-jawline quite well, but it's pretty big. Claudette's ears are small, round, and yadda, yadda. Finally, Claudette has thick, afro-textured, hair. She has two large, bushy, afro-puff at each side of her head and the rest of her hair is brushed down.
Attire: Claudette's style is very modest. She has a school-girl style, you could say. She likes to wear skirts of various patterns, but never a skirt that goes down to her knees, and she's usually always showing her legs. As for shirts, she tends to wear formal shirts, such as dress shirts and sweaters, at times, she wears. But she never wears a shirt that shows too much skin, and usually all of her clothes cover skin. She'd never be seen in anything that'd be slutty. But, she keeps her hands covered up to hide those horrible scars on her hands.
Personality
Personality: A one, true fish out of water. Claudette is new to the whole America thing, and has to get used to everything. She is a very sweet and kind hearted girl that is polite as she is well-spoken. While her English may not be too good, she's real fun to be around. She tries to be one of the nice, energetic people, who everyone wants to be around. However, she is very inexperienced in general, due to a rather sheltered upbringing. She hasn't gotten herself any real experience. She tries to mesh with American standards of what is fun and what is cool a little too hard sometimes. Sure, she'll talk to people, and play pranks, but she's rather naive, and easy to convince with a little bit of smooth talking. Due to her lack of awareness about American culture, it could be quite easy. Since she hasn't exactly adapted to American culture yet. It's not stupidity, it's merely a lack of her own understanding. All because she was lonely back home and wants to make friends with other people. Claudette has the edge that she's meek, and her attempts be cool to can come off as endearing. Especially her overly apologetic habits. If she screws something up, even in the slightest, she'll apologize, a peculiar habit she had developed. Adding onto her endearing traits, Claudette is rather inexperienced with romance in general, because she never exactly had one! She intends to fix that. Most of her "experience" with romance has to be glorified relationships on TV and other outlets. Claudette tries to flirt, but can't exactly get that down too well. She herself isn't too sure about her sexual preference, she's fine with boys and girls. Claudette constantly seeks approval of others, and wants to make friends out of many people. Even if she comes off as desperate. With the people she does become friends with, she really values their relationship, and will go out of her way to help them whenever she can. One of Claudette's major problems is that she's often anxious, and goes through bouts of depression because of the loneliness. Which is why she tries to get friends, and have fun, to bury those traumas with past. Claudette doesn't exactly know doesn't how to express her feelings properly, and has a hard time controlling her emotions. She's fairly moody at times, or can be described as oversensitive. It might be a side-effect of her power, or past traumas coming to light. Claudette is a fairly lonely girl, and just wishes to change that. She attempts to hide this mentality underneath a nice, and cheerful mask. A mask that she never intends on ever taking off. Because it makes her feel normal. Claudette isn't exactly super comfortable with her power because of one lapse of control caused her to hurt someone she cared about. She plans on avoiding this by maintaining control of herself at all times. One of Claudette's biggest peeves is when people mistake her lack of understanding of the English language for stupidity. It's something that angers her to no end.
Skills/Talents: This might not seem like a skill, but since Claudette is Haiti-born girl, she is learning English. It isn't perfect, but she's trying. Her main draw is how well she can speak French, specifically the Haitian Creole. That's what Claudette can speak. Other than that, Claudette has played a few sports. Nothing that she's especially good or "talented" at, but she was given lessons in Tennis and Soccer. It didn't exactly stick with her, so it's barely worth noting. Another thing she got lessons for was the piano. Unlike sports, she managed to actually come to love playing the piano. But her main draw seems to be how good at cleaning she is. She never misses a spot. Other than that, Claudette views herself as unremarkable and talentless.
Quote: "Bonjour, non M - Um, I'm Claudette. No-nice to meet you."
"I'm sorry, I can't understand you, m regrèt."
History/Bio: Claudette was born into a rather prestigious Haitian family, a very wealthy one. The Jean-Pierre family were apart of the Haitian Elite, one of the few rich families in a poor country, that had a heavy hand in the Government. The Jean-Pierres lived in the city of Port-au-Prince, and, naturally, had enough money to spend enjoying themselves. They lived in the city in a nice house. Other than the occasional thief trying to break into their house, they lived a rather uneventful life. Being rich wasn't so glamorous for Claudette, actually. She got what she wanted, and was properly educated, but it was all so lonely growing up for her. There were really no other kids that were her age for her to interact with, and her father kept her from really interacting with them because he was rather paranoid. She was just the lonely rich girl, only having the company of maids and butlers that all came and went. Claudette's father picked up on this, and gave his daughter some hobbies for the child to keep her mind off of it. Claudette was given lessons in Tennis, Soccer, the Piano, and others, in an attempt to find something that'll keep her happy. But none of them really helped, they kept her distracted for a bit, but were not a permanent solution. Her father was extremely paranoid, and had a fear of what the lower class might do to Claudette to elevate themselves, so it was something she had to deal with. However, Claudette's mother, Patricia had helped a great deal with her daughter. They talked a lot, and Patrica attempted to teach her daughter morals and how to be humble so that the wealth wouldn't go to her head. These conversations came to shape Claudette, but Patrica helped Claudette by using her secret power of emotion manipulating on her. It felt wrong, but it kept Claudette in a good mood.
Continuing, there wasn't too much about Claudette's early life until she was ten, when the Haiti Earthquake hit. The Port-au-Prince district was hit the hardest by the quake, and unfortunately, the Jean-Pierres were no exception. During the middle of the night, everything began shaking and Claudette wandered out of the bed, confused. She was injured gravely during the quake when she fell down some stairs and a piece of rubble had fallen on her and crushed her leg. She was unconscious for awhile, but while she was knocked out, the rubble was pulled off of her by her parents, and she was rushed outside by her frantic parents. They had come across a rescue party during their run through the ruined streets of Port-au-Prince, and Claudette was taken to the Argentine Air Force Mobile Field Hospital. Once there, she was treated by a healer, a Meta-human, that was in Haiti for the time. This healer was healing children and the incredibly wounded, so Claudette fit the bill. There was a scar left behind, but she was otherwise in great condition. After she was healed, she was given to her family. Her family was confused, and in fear. But one thing was for certain; they couldn't stay in Haiti, going from shelter to shelter. Things were going to get bad. They choose to head to America for awhile, since they had quite a few ties to the states. Fortunately, following the Earthquake, the US Government were a bit more lenient when it came to Haitian refugees, so they were allowed to get a greencard and live America. Which was the plan until the dust settled and they could resume their businesses.
They arrived in the states, living in Myrtle Beach, South Caroline, and the place was so strange to the young Claudette. They lived in a vacation house that they had owned on the beach, for the time being. Unfortunately, Claudette had to do a little bit of adjusting to the states, but, once again, she was kept rather sheltered out of fear of what other people might try something. Her father was always out handling business, or mingling with his American friends elsewhere, so she was left alone. The only real company Claudette had was her mother, but even she wasn't around all the time. Patricia attempted to teach Claudette some english. Years had passed and the house started to feel like a prison. Claudette was barely let out. However, she decided to take matters into her own hands. She simply snuck out of the house when her family wasn't home. She didn't go far, she merely explored the beaches on her own terms. Until she ran into other people... she was rather shy, but managed to start a conversation with them. She talked to the other people who had owned vacation houses in this area. Some of them were young and had kids. It was scary for her at first, but she eventually warmed up. She went back home before anyone even got back, and went out again the next time. Creating a cycle of sneaking out of the house. She met people, and it shaped her into a better person. Even though she couldn't talk to them that well.
Claudette thought that she gotten better at it, predicted them better. All she did was get arrogant. One day, Claudette stayed out on the beach for too long, and her family came back. By the time she had returned, they were worried sick about her. Claudette argued that she was tired of living in a prison, which made her father extremely angry. In a fit of anger, he threatened to lock her in her room and never let her out (He wasn't going through with it, however). This made... Claudette very angry. It awakened something in her, bright-red flames had surrounded her. She dropped to her knees and let this fire vibrate in all directions. Which set the room on fire, and badly burned her father. Her mother had realized what happened, and quickly used her power to pacify Claudette, extinguishing the flames automatically, but the damage had been done. Claudette had gravely burned her father. He was rushed to the hospital, and she was rushed inside a cell. No one had planned on arresting her, but the incident had caught the all knowing eye of Camp ThinkerRock, who had offered Claudette a place in the camp. A chance to be among the people like her. She saw it as a solution to her social problem, she took the offer without a second thought.
And away to ThinkerRock she goes.
Family:
Grandfather - Frantz Jean-Pierre (Deceased)
Grandmother - Aubrey Jean-Pierre (Deceased)
Father - Edward Jean-Pierre (Hospitalized. Badly burned)
Mother - Patricia Jean-Pierre (Meta-human has Emotion-Manipulation)
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Abilities
Power Class: Cerebral/Elemental, Super-System, & Power
Power: Flames of Passion. Inside Claudette burns a certain kind of fire. The fires of intense emotion, that she can barely contain herself. That said, Claudette can create a special kind of technicolor flame out of nothing. But this fire doesn't burn anything, it doesn't consume oxygen, secretes no heat, and cannot be extinguished with water. These flames are heavily connected to Claudette's emotions, in fact, what they do, and their color, heavily depends on the emotion she's currently feeling. The stronger her emotions are, the stronger these abilities are. These abilities are on a similar frequency to Cerebral-type powers, but have shades of Elemental, and buff herself and other like Super-System powers. However, some aspects of her ability are Cerebral in nature. Claudette can see the "emotional fire" that resides within people. It's a fire that represents the emotions that people experience. How strong their emotion factors into how intense the fire rages. More or less, this is empathy, except in a slightly different way. Claudette can read base-emotions just by looking at people, but she has a form of telepathy. Not allowing her to read minds. If she grabs onto somebody, and focuses really hard, she can "receive" the emotion, and see a vision about the source of the emotion. This ability might not be related to the flames, but it assists her greatly. By receiving emotions from other people, Claudette herself mirrors them, which can allow her to choose the flame she wishes to use. In addition, Claudette can also "recall" emotions she felt in the past to change the properties of her flames. It's not as easy as mirroring someone else's emotion, as it takes an extreme amount of concentration, but it can help her in a pinch. Below are the possible emotional combinations:
Anger. Claudette's anger more or less makes her a more traditional pyromancer. Her flames pack an intense heat, eat the oxygen, and burn whatever is in Claudette's path. These flames are much more intense than usual flames, they're hotter and burn things much faster. Once again, proportionate to the anger she's feeling, however, they have an effect on her emotions. They make her angrier, and more savage, therefore, the more she uses the flames of anger, the stronger. They burn with a bright red color and an intimidating light radiates off Claudette's body. In addition, she gains a resistance to heat (But not an immunity) to allow her to withstand these heats. Notably, they also infuse Claudette with far more strength (Allowing her to lift three times her weight), durability (Boosting her durability enough for her to shrug off punch), and numb her pain (She will feel less and less pain).
Fear. Fear is a tricky emotion, it either inspires you to fight or run... in this case, the flames of fear hide Claudette. The flames of fear take a bight-yellow color, and take the appearance of a more smoky/gassy substance. These flames erase light, muff sound, remove odors, and generally mask what is within the flames. Thermal signatures will be invisible, radiation/signals will be dampened, and so on. It also mutes the senses within the flames, the sense of touch is confused, sight is robbed, and hearing is deafened. It also interferes with the detection abilities of Meta-humans. While inside the flames, she'll be invisible to telepaths, other information type abilities won't work properly, and generally, only powers that detect Meta-human energy will be able to sense her.
Love. Love heals, and there is no passion greater than love, and it shows in their bright, hot-pink, flames. The flames of love heal those that Claudette exposes them to. Physical and mental wounds will be healed. In fact, if she so happens to be in the presence of someone she loves, the flames will heal her too. In addition, the flames secrete a fume that alters people's perceptions a bit. Regardless of what person they are, they'll think that Claudette is much more attractive, removes inhibitions a bit, and it'll be like her voice is hypnotic. Thus, they'll be easier for her to manipulate.
Sadness. The moment Claudette's tears start rolling, her flames will take a dim-blue color. Like the flames of love, these flames secrete a fume, one that doesn't alter people's perceptions, but is a gaseous chemical. The flames of sadness are much like tear gas, they sting every orifice in someone's body. Badly. Causing them to cry themselves. Maybe cry themselves to death!
Joy. The flames of joy are the flames that get the party started! A bright-green flame, they overpower whoever they touch with a happiness like no other. Even the angriest soul, or most savage beast, will be flooded with a peaceful feeling. In addition, they will be full of energy, having their stamina restored, almost making them want to jump around. So will Claudette. She'll be infused with the same invigoration.
Desire. What people crave... The flames of desire take a dark-green color, and are quite simple in what they do. Claudette can create illusions by shaping these flames and envisioning something. She can create anything that she imagine, much like the average illusionist.
Nostalgia. The past was great, wasn't it? The Flames of Nostalgia take a purple color and allow Claudette to absorb memories of whoever they touch. After they come in contact with someone, they'll copy memories from the past and "store" them within the flames. From there, Claudette can absorb the memories and experience them for herself. As a small side effect, Claudette's own memory will be enhanced, and she'll remember things much easier.
Anticipation. The flames of anticipation are a tan color. These flames grant speed buffs to whoever they're affected by. They'll be able to run, think, react, and heal faster. It also makes them far more nervous, and won't think things through. Which counts as a weakness and a strength, if you think about it.
Weaknesses/Drawbacks: First and foremost, Claudette can only access one form of the flame at a time. That's more of a limit, but I feel like I should note it. Plus, this power is pretty situational, she sometimes won't have the right flame for the right situation. Which puts her at a disadvantage when she doesn't have time to prepare. Now, using any form of the flames emotionally drains her. As in she won't have any emotions and sensations if she goes overboard. She'll feel empty as a husk, and nothing she does will change that. And there's the fact that without emotions, she's powerless. So that means she has to work hard not to overuse her power. These flames tend to influence her thought patterns a bit, such as making her more single-minded. Each form of the flame has their own weakness:
Anger. Claudette will get consumed by her own rage the more she accesses the flames of anger. That said, she'll get more and more predictable and single-minded in a fight - which a clever opponent can take advantage of. That said, while Claudette has a resistance to flame, if she overuses these flames, she can burn herself extensively. The flames can also dehydrate her, burn all the oxygen, and so on. Since these flames are like normal flames, they can be extinguished with water. The flames are connected to Claudette's anger, once she calms down, or falls unconscious, the flames will disappear.
Fear. Naturally, these flames also affect Claudette, so they mute her senses as much as anyone else. Which can leave her unaware of what's going on. She'll have to drop the flames, and possibly expose herself, in order to see. The flames of fear makes her extremely paranoid, and jumpy. Even in the presence of friends, she'll be ready to run.
Love. The flames make her much more suggestible and easier to manipulate with romance/sex, and it removes inhibitions of her own. Basically it kinda turns her into a slut. After she's done using these flames, they make her feel heartbroken. She'll feel grief and disappointment for a period of time.
Sadness. Uhh... the flames of sadness also sting her eyes? I don't know. Well, the flames of Sadness make her apathetic to the world, and she'll slowly demotivate until her only goal is to find somewhere to wallow.
Joy. The flames overwrite all other needs, emotions, and thoughts. By that I mean that the only thing she'll want to do is jump around and have fun. No matter what. Someone could punch her and she'd laugh it off. Which means she's extremely vulnerable to attack while the flames of joy are running, and she won't be able to focus on the goal at hand.
Desire. Much like love, Claudette will be consumed by a desire like no other. Whether it's for people, or an object. Which can cause her to act really rash, and so on. Any illusions she creates only affects sight, and are intangible, so yeah. She better keep that in mind. If people overcome their desire (Or have none) then they will not see the illusions that Claudette creates.
Nostalgia. Absorbing memories can be quite painful for Claudette. If she absorbs too many memories at once she will suffer a painful overload and will be rendered unconscious. Even then, absorbing small amounts memories will make her thought process a bit hazy for a moment as she processes it. Though, for the psychological side, Claudette will gain an insatiable desire to indulge herself in her good memories as she uses her flames. Which can overwrite all other thoughts.
Anticipation. These flames speed up Claudette's heart too. If she uses the flame too much, she could suffer a heart attack. In addition, the flames make her impatient, fidgety, nervous, and prone to jump the gun.
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Name: Claudette Jean-Pierre
Nickname/Alias/Etc: Love
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Height: 5'4
Weight: 128
Reason for Attendance: Willingly came to the camp after losing control of her powers and injuring her father.
Appearance
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Amber (But glows different colors when she uses her power)
Ethnicity: Haitian
Physical Appearance: Claudette is a girl that is obviously foreign. It's not just her really dark black skin, but it's her accent and mannerisms. When she speaks, she has a very thick accent, and sometimes stumbles on the English language. For those who are familiar with them, it's clear as day that she is Haitian. Her movements are slow and deliberate, and she takes large steps. That said, Claudette is a thick-boned girl that has a solid build all without being fat. She has solid, masculine, earth hands. She has a healthy amount of body fat and muscles, while she plays sports, she isn't muscular. But her legs are fairly solid and devoid of body fat. But her body has some curves to it. Her breasts are C-cup, and her butt is round. She's not super short, but it's an inch below the average female height, and according BMI, she weighs a healthy amount too. As it's been stated before, she looks pretty Haitian. Her facial features, skull shape, and hair-texture are quite consistent with Africans, but it's not that which gives away her Haitian heritage, but it's her very dark skin. Her skin is very dark, coal-dark, which is probably from the extra-sun she's been getting since she was young. Her skin is very scarred, but the most notable scars can easily be concealed under her clothes. Now, easily the most notable scar on her right has to be the one a few centimeters above her knee, that circles her entire leg. Almost like she was bifurcated (And it's true!) around those two areas. Claudette's hands have leathery, fleshy, burn scars all over them, that are fairly recent. She also has a few burn scars in assorted parts of her body, mostly on her arms and chest. It's because she went overboard with her power a few times. Her head is round-shaped, and her facial features are squared. Her eyes are small, and have that longing stare to them, in addition to having a amber color. Her nose is large and arrow-shaped, pointing inwards somewhat, with small nostrils. Claudette's lips are pretty thick and full. Her cheeks are small, but very round. Claudette's chin is rounded, and smooths into her sharp-jawline quite well, but it's pretty big. Claudette's ears are small, round, and yadda, yadda. Finally, Claudette has thick, afro-textured, hair. She has two large, bushy, afro-puff at each side of her head and the rest of her hair is brushed down.
Attire: Claudette's style is very modest. She has a school-girl style, you could say. She likes to wear skirts of various patterns, but never a skirt that goes down to her knees, and she's usually always showing her legs. As for shirts, she tends to wear formal shirts, such as dress shirts and sweaters, at times, she wears. But she never wears a shirt that shows too much skin, and usually all of her clothes cover skin. She'd never be seen in anything that'd be slutty. But, she keeps her hands covered up to hide those horrible scars on her hands.
Personality
Personality: A one, true fish out of water. Claudette is new to the whole America thing, and has to get used to everything. She is a very sweet and kind hearted girl that is polite as she is well-spoken. While her English may not be too good, she's real fun to be around. She tries to be one of the nice, energetic people, who everyone wants to be around. However, she is very inexperienced in general, due to a rather sheltered upbringing. She hasn't gotten herself any real experience. She tries to mesh with American standards of what is fun and what is cool a little too hard sometimes. Sure, she'll talk to people, and play pranks, but she's rather naive, and easy to convince with a little bit of smooth talking. Due to her lack of awareness about American culture, it could be quite easy. Since she hasn't exactly adapted to American culture yet. It's not stupidity, it's merely a lack of her own understanding. All because she was lonely back home and wants to make friends with other people. Claudette has the edge that she's meek, and her attempts be cool to can come off as endearing. Especially her overly apologetic habits. If she screws something up, even in the slightest, she'll apologize, a peculiar habit she had developed. Adding onto her endearing traits, Claudette is rather inexperienced with romance in general, because she never exactly had one! She intends to fix that. Most of her "experience" with romance has to be glorified relationships on TV and other outlets. Claudette tries to flirt, but can't exactly get that down too well. She herself isn't too sure about her sexual preference, she's fine with boys and girls. Claudette constantly seeks approval of others, and wants to make friends out of many people. Even if she comes off as desperate. With the people she does become friends with, she really values their relationship, and will go out of her way to help them whenever she can. One of Claudette's major problems is that she's often anxious, and goes through bouts of depression because of the loneliness. Which is why she tries to get friends, and have fun, to bury those traumas with past. Claudette doesn't exactly know doesn't how to express her feelings properly, and has a hard time controlling her emotions. She's fairly moody at times, or can be described as oversensitive. It might be a side-effect of her power, or past traumas coming to light. Claudette is a fairly lonely girl, and just wishes to change that. She attempts to hide this mentality underneath a nice, and cheerful mask. A mask that she never intends on ever taking off. Because it makes her feel normal. Claudette isn't exactly super comfortable with her power because of one lapse of control caused her to hurt someone she cared about. She plans on avoiding this by maintaining control of herself at all times. One of Claudette's biggest peeves is when people mistake her lack of understanding of the English language for stupidity. It's something that angers her to no end.
Skills/Talents: This might not seem like a skill, but since Claudette is Haiti-born girl, she is learning English. It isn't perfect, but she's trying. Her main draw is how well she can speak French, specifically the Haitian Creole. That's what Claudette can speak. Other than that, Claudette has played a few sports. Nothing that she's especially good or "talented" at, but she was given lessons in Tennis and Soccer. It didn't exactly stick with her, so it's barely worth noting. Another thing she got lessons for was the piano. Unlike sports, she managed to actually come to love playing the piano. But her main draw seems to be how good at cleaning she is. She never misses a spot. Other than that, Claudette views herself as unremarkable and talentless.
Quote: "Bonjour, non M - Um, I'm Claudette. No-nice to meet you."
"I'm sorry, I can't understand you, m regrèt."
History/Bio: Claudette was born into a rather prestigious Haitian family, a very wealthy one. The Jean-Pierre family were apart of the Haitian Elite, one of the few rich families in a poor country, that had a heavy hand in the Government. The Jean-Pierres lived in the city of Port-au-Prince, and, naturally, had enough money to spend enjoying themselves. They lived in the city in a nice house. Other than the occasional thief trying to break into their house, they lived a rather uneventful life. Being rich wasn't so glamorous for Claudette, actually. She got what she wanted, and was properly educated, but it was all so lonely growing up for her. There were really no other kids that were her age for her to interact with, and her father kept her from really interacting with them because he was rather paranoid. She was just the lonely rich girl, only having the company of maids and butlers that all came and went. Claudette's father picked up on this, and gave his daughter some hobbies for the child to keep her mind off of it. Claudette was given lessons in Tennis, Soccer, the Piano, and others, in an attempt to find something that'll keep her happy. But none of them really helped, they kept her distracted for a bit, but were not a permanent solution. Her father was extremely paranoid, and had a fear of what the lower class might do to Claudette to elevate themselves, so it was something she had to deal with. However, Claudette's mother, Patricia had helped a great deal with her daughter. They talked a lot, and Patrica attempted to teach her daughter morals and how to be humble so that the wealth wouldn't go to her head. These conversations came to shape Claudette, but Patrica helped Claudette by using her secret power of emotion manipulating on her. It felt wrong, but it kept Claudette in a good mood.
Continuing, there wasn't too much about Claudette's early life until she was ten, when the Haiti Earthquake hit. The Port-au-Prince district was hit the hardest by the quake, and unfortunately, the Jean-Pierres were no exception. During the middle of the night, everything began shaking and Claudette wandered out of the bed, confused. She was injured gravely during the quake when she fell down some stairs and a piece of rubble had fallen on her and crushed her leg. She was unconscious for awhile, but while she was knocked out, the rubble was pulled off of her by her parents, and she was rushed outside by her frantic parents. They had come across a rescue party during their run through the ruined streets of Port-au-Prince, and Claudette was taken to the Argentine Air Force Mobile Field Hospital. Once there, she was treated by a healer, a Meta-human, that was in Haiti for the time. This healer was healing children and the incredibly wounded, so Claudette fit the bill. There was a scar left behind, but she was otherwise in great condition. After she was healed, she was given to her family. Her family was confused, and in fear. But one thing was for certain; they couldn't stay in Haiti, going from shelter to shelter. Things were going to get bad. They choose to head to America for awhile, since they had quite a few ties to the states. Fortunately, following the Earthquake, the US Government were a bit more lenient when it came to Haitian refugees, so they were allowed to get a greencard and live America. Which was the plan until the dust settled and they could resume their businesses.
They arrived in the states, living in Myrtle Beach, South Caroline, and the place was so strange to the young Claudette. They lived in a vacation house that they had owned on the beach, for the time being. Unfortunately, Claudette had to do a little bit of adjusting to the states, but, once again, she was kept rather sheltered out of fear of what other people might try something. Her father was always out handling business, or mingling with his American friends elsewhere, so she was left alone. The only real company Claudette had was her mother, but even she wasn't around all the time. Patricia attempted to teach Claudette some english. Years had passed and the house started to feel like a prison. Claudette was barely let out. However, she decided to take matters into her own hands. She simply snuck out of the house when her family wasn't home. She didn't go far, she merely explored the beaches on her own terms. Until she ran into other people... she was rather shy, but managed to start a conversation with them. She talked to the other people who had owned vacation houses in this area. Some of them were young and had kids. It was scary for her at first, but she eventually warmed up. She went back home before anyone even got back, and went out again the next time. Creating a cycle of sneaking out of the house. She met people, and it shaped her into a better person. Even though she couldn't talk to them that well.
Claudette thought that she gotten better at it, predicted them better. All she did was get arrogant. One day, Claudette stayed out on the beach for too long, and her family came back. By the time she had returned, they were worried sick about her. Claudette argued that she was tired of living in a prison, which made her father extremely angry. In a fit of anger, he threatened to lock her in her room and never let her out (He wasn't going through with it, however). This made... Claudette very angry. It awakened something in her, bright-red flames had surrounded her. She dropped to her knees and let this fire vibrate in all directions. Which set the room on fire, and badly burned her father. Her mother had realized what happened, and quickly used her power to pacify Claudette, extinguishing the flames automatically, but the damage had been done. Claudette had gravely burned her father. He was rushed to the hospital, and she was rushed inside a cell. No one had planned on arresting her, but the incident had caught the all knowing eye of Camp ThinkerRock, who had offered Claudette a place in the camp. A chance to be among the people like her. She saw it as a solution to her social problem, she took the offer without a second thought.
And away to ThinkerRock she goes.
Family:
Grandfather - Frantz Jean-Pierre (Deceased)
Grandmother - Aubrey Jean-Pierre (Deceased)
Father - Edward Jean-Pierre (Hospitalized. Badly burned)
Mother - Patricia Jean-Pierre (Meta-human has Emotion-Manipulation)
Relationships
Abilities
Power Class: Cerebral/Elemental, Super-System, & Power
Power: Flames of Passion. Inside Claudette burns a certain kind of fire. The fires of intense emotion, that she can barely contain herself. That said, Claudette can create a special kind of technicolor flame out of nothing. But this fire doesn't burn anything, it doesn't consume oxygen, secretes no heat, and cannot be extinguished with water. These flames are heavily connected to Claudette's emotions, in fact, what they do, and their color, heavily depends on the emotion she's currently feeling. The stronger her emotions are, the stronger these abilities are. These abilities are on a similar frequency to Cerebral-type powers, but have shades of Elemental, and buff herself and other like Super-System powers. However, some aspects of her ability are Cerebral in nature. Claudette can see the "emotional fire" that resides within people. It's a fire that represents the emotions that people experience. How strong their emotion factors into how intense the fire rages. More or less, this is empathy, except in a slightly different way. Claudette can read base-emotions just by looking at people, but she has a form of telepathy. Not allowing her to read minds. If she grabs onto somebody, and focuses really hard, she can "receive" the emotion, and see a vision about the source of the emotion. This ability might not be related to the flames, but it assists her greatly. By receiving emotions from other people, Claudette herself mirrors them, which can allow her to choose the flame she wishes to use. In addition, Claudette can also "recall" emotions she felt in the past to change the properties of her flames. It's not as easy as mirroring someone else's emotion, as it takes an extreme amount of concentration, but it can help her in a pinch. Below are the possible emotional combinations:
Anger. Claudette's anger more or less makes her a more traditional pyromancer. Her flames pack an intense heat, eat the oxygen, and burn whatever is in Claudette's path. These flames are much more intense than usual flames, they're hotter and burn things much faster. Once again, proportionate to the anger she's feeling, however, they have an effect on her emotions. They make her angrier, and more savage, therefore, the more she uses the flames of anger, the stronger. They burn with a bright red color and an intimidating light radiates off Claudette's body. In addition, she gains a resistance to heat (But not an immunity) to allow her to withstand these heats. Notably, they also infuse Claudette with far more strength (Allowing her to lift three times her weight), durability (Boosting her durability enough for her to shrug off punch), and numb her pain (She will feel less and less pain).
Fear. Fear is a tricky emotion, it either inspires you to fight or run... in this case, the flames of fear hide Claudette. The flames of fear take a bight-yellow color, and take the appearance of a more smoky/gassy substance. These flames erase light, muff sound, remove odors, and generally mask what is within the flames. Thermal signatures will be invisible, radiation/signals will be dampened, and so on. It also mutes the senses within the flames, the sense of touch is confused, sight is robbed, and hearing is deafened. It also interferes with the detection abilities of Meta-humans. While inside the flames, she'll be invisible to telepaths, other information type abilities won't work properly, and generally, only powers that detect Meta-human energy will be able to sense her.
Love. Love heals, and there is no passion greater than love, and it shows in their bright, hot-pink, flames. The flames of love heal those that Claudette exposes them to. Physical and mental wounds will be healed. In fact, if she so happens to be in the presence of someone she loves, the flames will heal her too. In addition, the flames secrete a fume that alters people's perceptions a bit. Regardless of what person they are, they'll think that Claudette is much more attractive, removes inhibitions a bit, and it'll be like her voice is hypnotic. Thus, they'll be easier for her to manipulate.
Sadness. The moment Claudette's tears start rolling, her flames will take a dim-blue color. Like the flames of love, these flames secrete a fume, one that doesn't alter people's perceptions, but is a gaseous chemical. The flames of sadness are much like tear gas, they sting every orifice in someone's body. Badly. Causing them to cry themselves. Maybe cry themselves to death!
Joy. The flames of joy are the flames that get the party started! A bright-green flame, they overpower whoever they touch with a happiness like no other. Even the angriest soul, or most savage beast, will be flooded with a peaceful feeling. In addition, they will be full of energy, having their stamina restored, almost making them want to jump around. So will Claudette. She'll be infused with the same invigoration.
Desire. What people crave... The flames of desire take a dark-green color, and are quite simple in what they do. Claudette can create illusions by shaping these flames and envisioning something. She can create anything that she imagine, much like the average illusionist.
Nostalgia. The past was great, wasn't it? The Flames of Nostalgia take a purple color and allow Claudette to absorb memories of whoever they touch. After they come in contact with someone, they'll copy memories from the past and "store" them within the flames. From there, Claudette can absorb the memories and experience them for herself. As a small side effect, Claudette's own memory will be enhanced, and she'll remember things much easier.
Anticipation. The flames of anticipation are a tan color. These flames grant speed buffs to whoever they're affected by. They'll be able to run, think, react, and heal faster. It also makes them far more nervous, and won't think things through. Which counts as a weakness and a strength, if you think about it.
Weaknesses/Drawbacks: First and foremost, Claudette can only access one form of the flame at a time. That's more of a limit, but I feel like I should note it. Plus, this power is pretty situational, she sometimes won't have the right flame for the right situation. Which puts her at a disadvantage when she doesn't have time to prepare. Now, using any form of the flames emotionally drains her. As in she won't have any emotions and sensations if she goes overboard. She'll feel empty as a husk, and nothing she does will change that. And there's the fact that without emotions, she's powerless. So that means she has to work hard not to overuse her power. These flames tend to influence her thought patterns a bit, such as making her more single-minded. Each form of the flame has their own weakness:
Anger. Claudette will get consumed by her own rage the more she accesses the flames of anger. That said, she'll get more and more predictable and single-minded in a fight - which a clever opponent can take advantage of. That said, while Claudette has a resistance to flame, if she overuses these flames, she can burn herself extensively. The flames can also dehydrate her, burn all the oxygen, and so on. Since these flames are like normal flames, they can be extinguished with water. The flames are connected to Claudette's anger, once she calms down, or falls unconscious, the flames will disappear.
Fear. Naturally, these flames also affect Claudette, so they mute her senses as much as anyone else. Which can leave her unaware of what's going on. She'll have to drop the flames, and possibly expose herself, in order to see. The flames of fear makes her extremely paranoid, and jumpy. Even in the presence of friends, she'll be ready to run.
Love. The flames make her much more suggestible and easier to manipulate with romance/sex, and it removes inhibitions of her own. Basically it kinda turns her into a slut. After she's done using these flames, they make her feel heartbroken. She'll feel grief and disappointment for a period of time.
Sadness. Uhh... the flames of sadness also sting her eyes? I don't know. Well, the flames of Sadness make her apathetic to the world, and she'll slowly demotivate until her only goal is to find somewhere to wallow.
Joy. The flames overwrite all other needs, emotions, and thoughts. By that I mean that the only thing she'll want to do is jump around and have fun. No matter what. Someone could punch her and she'd laugh it off. Which means she's extremely vulnerable to attack while the flames of joy are running, and she won't be able to focus on the goal at hand.
Desire. Much like love, Claudette will be consumed by a desire like no other. Whether it's for people, or an object. Which can cause her to act really rash, and so on. Any illusions she creates only affects sight, and are intangible, so yeah. She better keep that in mind. If people overcome their desire (Or have none) then they will not see the illusions that Claudette creates.
Nostalgia. Absorbing memories can be quite painful for Claudette. If she absorbs too many memories at once she will suffer a painful overload and will be rendered unconscious. Even then, absorbing small amounts memories will make her thought process a bit hazy for a moment as she processes it. Though, for the psychological side, Claudette will gain an insatiable desire to indulge herself in her good memories as she uses her flames. Which can overwrite all other thoughts.
Anticipation. These flames speed up Claudette's heart too. If she uses the flame too much, she could suffer a heart attack. In addition, the flames make her impatient, fidgety, nervous, and prone to jump the gun.
Other:
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Guest
Name: Enrique Armando Ortiz
Nickname/Alias/Etc: BoomBoom, Bomber.
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Height: 5ft11
Weight: 168lbs
Reason for Attendance: Arrested.
Appearance
Hair Color: Stark Black
Eye Color: Brown
Ethnicity: Puerto Rican.
Physical Appearance:
Attire: More of a grungy style. T-Shirts and flannel overshirts, a gray hoodie. Often Jeans and a pair of boots.
Personality
Personality: He's a fire starter, its his most noticeable trait. Ever since being called a devil child he has become a fan of living up to that name. He enjoys playing the bad guy when he can but has no problem doing the right then when its necessary. He likes to bend the rules and keep himself entertained by being in trouble. He supports anyone he befriends without faltering, even till his last breath he will defend the people he loves. His greatest fear is loosing his ability, as it is his only unique trait in his mind. On his own he will act more ruthless but if he is with others he will act more morally correct, less questionable decisions. He is most certainly capable of killing and if ever given a reason will easily take someone's head off. He is a rather honest person but recognizes that lies make the world go around. He will take logic in to reason and keep his cool around others but normally likes to establish that he is powerful without taking a leadership role.
Hobbies/Interests: Thievery, Drawing, Car Jacking.
Skills/Talents: Lock picking and drawing. He spent some time at a recreation center near his old home and picked up Boxing.
Prized Possession: N/A
Quote(s): 'Well if you think you can threaten me, then clearly you underestimate how badly I retaliate.'
History/Bio: A child of God, or so he was raised to be. Born to an unwanting mother he was dropped off at an orphanage raised by the nuns there. He grew up believing in God, in a poor orphanage in less than pleasurable conditions. He was very bored and often thought of ending his life until his abilities starting showing up. He was called a devil child, many of the priests tried to remove his powers with prayer. But it never worked, and it never bothered Enrique that he could do what he could. When he began throwing his explosives in the bathrooms to scare the other kids word got around. Soon the nuns were afraid of him, the priests were afraid, the other orphans were intent on staying as far from him as possible. It made him feel powerful, he continued to push the boundaries and eventually he took to leaving the orphanage as he pleased and got into some trouble. He went to the recreation center down the road and constantly was there, spent his nights there hanging out with some of the older kids. He met some of the more dangerous people through them, the guys who carried guns and knives. The older guys put him in the ring with another kid his age and when Enrique beat him down they showed allot more respect for him.
Soon after that Enrique started running with a bad crowd. After he began car jacking he became very good at it, one day he brought back a newer Mustang. The crew he hung out with were so proud of him that they got him drunk, during the night they convinced him to get a tattoo of two black lines around his left arm. That night he decided to show off his powers in a drunken stupor, the whole crew went to a nearby playground. He began lobbing low explosive balls at the slides and swingsets melting the metal and plastic. A few of the guys were scared but one guy named Alex saw the potential in having a meta-human counterpart. The two became quick friends and pulled of many schemes together, eventually leading up to the biggest and last job the pair ever pulled together.
While in the police station he was introduced to an Camp ThinkerRock representative. Who said they could take him away, to a place where he would not be judged, but encouraged. He was taken to the school.
Family: N/A
Abilities
Power Class: Elemental
Power: He can generate balls of explosive power/external thermogenesis. Regularly red or orange with tendrils of energy coursing around them, the bigger the size the more tendrils and brighter the color is. These balls can range in size from basketballs (being extremely explosive) and small marble size (explosive enough to hurt but not kill, also capable of exploding locks off doors). He can also generate these explosives in his hands and hold them their then use them like boxing gloves having them explode upon impact. These explosives generate between his hands and can be thrown and made to explode or set down with a certain amount of time before they deteriorate and explode. These explosives detonate after being primed, either by eating away at themselves and their core meeting their outer side. Or by their cores being pushed in upon impact after being thrown.
Weaknesses/Drawbacks: Very difficult/Near impossible to generate his powers in water, also in freezing temperatures. Difficult to keep the boomers stable when he is stressed out, if under too much pressure they could explode in his hands.
Sample Post:
Enrique primed a boomer about the size of a bouncy ball in his finger tips and hurled it towards the refrigerated doors that held the sodas. When the energy ball hit the glass it exploded, sending glass and liquid flying. The man behind the counter ducked down in fear while Enrique's companion Alex aimed his gun at the man. Enrique began shouting at the man and primed another one sending it flying into the coffee maker in the corner of the room. It received a hole through which hot coffee fell to the floor and steamed.
"Listen here asshole! Empty the mother fucking register or I put one of those down your throat!" Enrique shouted getting behind the counter and priming another one. The man hustled to open the register and mistyped the code the first time, he was sweating and swearing in another language Enrique didnt know but he didnt care. His blood was pumping and he was thrilled, this was the biggest thing he'd ever pulled off. There was probably close to a thousand dollars in this guys register and it was gonna be Enrique's after he split it with Alex. Alex had been watching the door since Enrique had moved behind the counter and shouted out that there were blue and red down the road.
"Get on the ground now and dont look up." Enrique said grabbing the now filled bag off the counter. He hopped over the counter and knocked over the leave a penny take a penny thing and just sprinted out the doors with Alex on his heels. When the two were out of the parking lot they heard the squeal of tires behind them. They ducked into an alleyway and ran down the side streets. Eventually they found themselves near their neighborhood. But a cop car was speeding down the alleyway towards them and its breaks reared. Two cops exited the vehicle and Enrique primed a smaller explosing throwing it at the hood of the car so that it would explode and distract the cops a bit. The pair ran down the alleyway a bit and saw a chainlink fence that was a bit higher than them. Enrique planted his feet and cupped his hands motioning for Alex to hop up, Alex took a step back then stepped in Enrique's hands. Enrique lifted his hands and threw him over the fence, Alex landed and Enrique saw cops coming close and pulled the money bag from his pocket and threw it over the fence. Alex caught it and nodded at Enrique, Enrique nodded back as Alex ran the hell away. Enrique prepared a small explosive so that it didnt kill either of the cops, he pulled his arm back and waited for one to round the corner. He let loose when he saw the guy turn the corner stun gun drawn, it landed on his fore arm and he dropped to the ground clutching his arm. The second cop turned the corner before Enrique could prime another one and shot him in the chest. Enrique felt electricity shoot through his veins as his muscles tensed and he fell to the ground convulsing.
Nickname/Alias/Etc: BoomBoom, Bomber.
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Height: 5ft11
Weight: 168lbs
Reason for Attendance: Arrested.
Appearance
Hair Color: Stark Black
Eye Color: Brown
Ethnicity: Puerto Rican.
Physical Appearance:
Personality
Personality: He's a fire starter, its his most noticeable trait. Ever since being called a devil child he has become a fan of living up to that name. He enjoys playing the bad guy when he can but has no problem doing the right then when its necessary. He likes to bend the rules and keep himself entertained by being in trouble. He supports anyone he befriends without faltering, even till his last breath he will defend the people he loves. His greatest fear is loosing his ability, as it is his only unique trait in his mind. On his own he will act more ruthless but if he is with others he will act more morally correct, less questionable decisions. He is most certainly capable of killing and if ever given a reason will easily take someone's head off. He is a rather honest person but recognizes that lies make the world go around. He will take logic in to reason and keep his cool around others but normally likes to establish that he is powerful without taking a leadership role.
Hobbies/Interests: Thievery, Drawing, Car Jacking.
Skills/Talents: Lock picking and drawing. He spent some time at a recreation center near his old home and picked up Boxing.
Prized Possession: N/A
Quote(s): 'Well if you think you can threaten me, then clearly you underestimate how badly I retaliate.'
History/Bio: A child of God, or so he was raised to be. Born to an unwanting mother he was dropped off at an orphanage raised by the nuns there. He grew up believing in God, in a poor orphanage in less than pleasurable conditions. He was very bored and often thought of ending his life until his abilities starting showing up. He was called a devil child, many of the priests tried to remove his powers with prayer. But it never worked, and it never bothered Enrique that he could do what he could. When he began throwing his explosives in the bathrooms to scare the other kids word got around. Soon the nuns were afraid of him, the priests were afraid, the other orphans were intent on staying as far from him as possible. It made him feel powerful, he continued to push the boundaries and eventually he took to leaving the orphanage as he pleased and got into some trouble. He went to the recreation center down the road and constantly was there, spent his nights there hanging out with some of the older kids. He met some of the more dangerous people through them, the guys who carried guns and knives. The older guys put him in the ring with another kid his age and when Enrique beat him down they showed allot more respect for him.
Soon after that Enrique started running with a bad crowd. After he began car jacking he became very good at it, one day he brought back a newer Mustang. The crew he hung out with were so proud of him that they got him drunk, during the night they convinced him to get a tattoo of two black lines around his left arm. That night he decided to show off his powers in a drunken stupor, the whole crew went to a nearby playground. He began lobbing low explosive balls at the slides and swingsets melting the metal and plastic. A few of the guys were scared but one guy named Alex saw the potential in having a meta-human counterpart. The two became quick friends and pulled of many schemes together, eventually leading up to the biggest and last job the pair ever pulled together.
While in the police station he was introduced to an Camp ThinkerRock representative. Who said they could take him away, to a place where he would not be judged, but encouraged. He was taken to the school.
Family: N/A
Abilities
Power Class: Elemental
Power: He can generate balls of explosive power/external thermogenesis. Regularly red or orange with tendrils of energy coursing around them, the bigger the size the more tendrils and brighter the color is. These balls can range in size from basketballs (being extremely explosive) and small marble size (explosive enough to hurt but not kill, also capable of exploding locks off doors). He can also generate these explosives in his hands and hold them their then use them like boxing gloves having them explode upon impact. These explosives generate between his hands and can be thrown and made to explode or set down with a certain amount of time before they deteriorate and explode. These explosives detonate after being primed, either by eating away at themselves and their core meeting their outer side. Or by their cores being pushed in upon impact after being thrown.
Weaknesses/Drawbacks: Very difficult/Near impossible to generate his powers in water, also in freezing temperatures. Difficult to keep the boomers stable when he is stressed out, if under too much pressure they could explode in his hands.
Sample Post:
Enrique primed a boomer about the size of a bouncy ball in his finger tips and hurled it towards the refrigerated doors that held the sodas. When the energy ball hit the glass it exploded, sending glass and liquid flying. The man behind the counter ducked down in fear while Enrique's companion Alex aimed his gun at the man. Enrique began shouting at the man and primed another one sending it flying into the coffee maker in the corner of the room. It received a hole through which hot coffee fell to the floor and steamed.
"Listen here asshole! Empty the mother fucking register or I put one of those down your throat!" Enrique shouted getting behind the counter and priming another one. The man hustled to open the register and mistyped the code the first time, he was sweating and swearing in another language Enrique didnt know but he didnt care. His blood was pumping and he was thrilled, this was the biggest thing he'd ever pulled off. There was probably close to a thousand dollars in this guys register and it was gonna be Enrique's after he split it with Alex. Alex had been watching the door since Enrique had moved behind the counter and shouted out that there were blue and red down the road.
"Get on the ground now and dont look up." Enrique said grabbing the now filled bag off the counter. He hopped over the counter and knocked over the leave a penny take a penny thing and just sprinted out the doors with Alex on his heels. When the two were out of the parking lot they heard the squeal of tires behind them. They ducked into an alleyway and ran down the side streets. Eventually they found themselves near their neighborhood. But a cop car was speeding down the alleyway towards them and its breaks reared. Two cops exited the vehicle and Enrique primed a smaller explosing throwing it at the hood of the car so that it would explode and distract the cops a bit. The pair ran down the alleyway a bit and saw a chainlink fence that was a bit higher than them. Enrique planted his feet and cupped his hands motioning for Alex to hop up, Alex took a step back then stepped in Enrique's hands. Enrique lifted his hands and threw him over the fence, Alex landed and Enrique saw cops coming close and pulled the money bag from his pocket and threw it over the fence. Alex caught it and nodded at Enrique, Enrique nodded back as Alex ran the hell away. Enrique prepared a small explosive so that it didnt kill either of the cops, he pulled his arm back and waited for one to round the corner. He let loose when he saw the guy turn the corner stun gun drawn, it landed on his fore arm and he dropped to the ground clutching his arm. The second cop turned the corner before Enrique could prime another one and shot him in the chest. Enrique felt electricity shoot through his veins as his muscles tensed and he fell to the ground convulsing.
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I think this sheet could use some more work. You expanded the power section yes, but what about the personality section, which is one line? He seems pretty one dimensional, no offense. He could use a bit more person. Like, refer to this to get a good idea. You don't need to provide an answer to all of them, but yeah, they'd help with your character (And future characters if you take it to heart). I also have to ask where he learned how to be a good rifleman? From what I can tell, it's pretty tacked on.
I think he could use a few more weaknesses, yes. Because not being able to make those orbs in water is not really a good weakness. Take Diego's power for example. It's pretty powerful, but it has plenty of weaknesses outside the obvious. I suggest that Enrique isn't immune to getting damaged by his orbs, and has to concentrate to keep them stable (I.E. From exploding prematurely and blowing his hand off). Two valid weaknesses right there.
Not trying to dog you or anything, but I'm trying to help you improve the sheet so it's at a more acceptable level. You're not "rejected", all you need to do is make a few changes.
I think he could use a few more weaknesses, yes. Because not being able to make those orbs in water is not really a good weakness. Take Diego's power for example. It's pretty powerful, but it has plenty of weaknesses outside the obvious. I suggest that Enrique isn't immune to getting damaged by his orbs, and has to concentrate to keep them stable (I.E. From exploding prematurely and blowing his hand off). Two valid weaknesses right there.
Not trying to dog you or anything, but I'm trying to help you improve the sheet so it's at a more acceptable level. You're not "rejected", all you need to do is make a few changes.
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Roger that, just a quick thing though if he wasnt immune to them then he wouldnt be able to form them in the first place, they would litterally explode in his hands and take his forearms off. But I can make it so he has to focus to keep them from blowing up in his hands. And I
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Done some heavy editting and used that stuff from that link you sent me, hopefully its up to par.
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I still think he could use some more in the personality section, plus, you didn't need to put his sample post in his history section.
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Also, still give him some weaknesses, and he doesn't fall under the "Power" type. More of the elemental type.
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I'm not sure what else you would like in his personality section, this is in no way meant to be rude I just dont know what you're saying.
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Did you look at that link I showed you? Start at forty and look at them. Like, what is Enrique's morality? How does he act around others? How does he act when alone? How does he handle conflict, love/romance, and praise? What are his fears? Is he introverted or extroverted?
I know I might be asking for a lot, but answering questions like these will greatly improve your characters from here on in.
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Ok added more to personality, not sure if its good enough but I read 40-52 and used those for his personality.
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Still don't know how he acts when around other people, and so on.
As a heads up, I might make another character. I have an idea.
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I guess Enrique is accepted.
Side note: I updated Diego's power a bit. I changed Agni's appearance to something I think looks better.
I decided to hold off on making that character until we get a few more people. I'm happy with my cast now.
Side note: I updated Diego's power a bit. I changed Agni's appearance to something I think looks better.
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