The Zodiacs: Vanguards of Mankind

[Beta]

Great enthusiasm, folks.

@Daws Combine - Gemini is approved.

 

[Beta]

Here's some fun for everyone, and an example of how to write Zodiac Anomalous Entities, or "AE" articles.

AE-224

Low-resolution photograph taken by one of the victims from within
Lemmenjoki National Park before death and consumption by AE-224​

Designation: AE-224

Classification: Sigma

Safety Protocols: Instances of AE-224 are detained in a colossal aviary approximately 40km southeast of ████████████, Norway. Once per week, ten livestock animals (generally pigs, cows, or goats) are to be released inside the aviary to feed AE-224 instances. For their own safety, no personnel are allowed to enter the aviary within 24 hours of the release of these animals. If any instance of AE-224 is found consuming rocks and minerals from the hills within their enclosure, they are to be tranquilized by snipers, and have all sediments cleaned from within their mouths before being re-released.

Information: AE-224-1 through AE-224-16 are quadrupedal reptilian creatures ranging from three to fifteen meters in length and three-quarters of a meter to five meters in height. Despite their scaly skin and saurian appearance, all instances of AE-224 are warm-blooded and capable of bearing live young. They are winged and capable of powered flight with the assistance of bladders in their chest cavities used to capture hydrogen and methane produced in their gullets during the digestion process. They are also quite agile flyers and have a maximum air-speed velocity approaching 140 km/h.

Instances of AE-224 are clever predators known to mimic the calls and sounds of prey they hunt, luring them closer or causing them to be less wary. They cannot imitate complex speech, but have shown the ability to learn simple words and short phrases.

First discovered on ██/██/████ in Finland's Lemmenjoki National Park, AE-224 was the cause of no less than nine deaths in the park during a three month span. The bodies of victims were not recognized at first and [DATA EXPUNGED]. We now believe that AE-224 are responsible for several disasters over the last decade, including a forest fire and [REDACTED]. The bodies of the deceased park-goers were [REDACTED], and families of the victims were administered Class-C amnestics after proper identification through DNA testing. Agents were dispatched to investigate rumors of "monster attacks" that resulted from these gruesome deaths, and were successful in bringing down one of the creatures using a high-powered rifle. After two more deaths occurred while the dead specimen was being researched, Fireteam C-174 (Codename: Sigurd's Slayers) was sent in to detain any and all remaining instances they could find.

Fourteen of the creatures were found and detained using tranquilizer rifles and transported to a temporary containment facility until a more permanent solution could be devised. While contained, the creatures were studied extensively and found to not originate from any known earthly source. No fossil records matched the creatures and the closest modern analog was the Asian Water Monitor. The creatures had large deposits of ████████ in their mouths. This reacted with the gases expelled from the creature's hydrogen bladders and was determined to be a direct cause of the tissue damage seen on the victims of the creature's attacks.

Sixteen months after initial contact and capture, all instances of AE-224 were moved to their current location. A 5km-diameter, 125m-high aviary constructed of high-carbon steel and vanadium carbide with steel mesh and located a moderate distance from any notable settlements, AE-224 may now be freely studied in a more 'natural' environment so as to better understand its habits and behaviors.

The exterior of the aviary is to be patrolled by three teams of security personnel. Any individual encountered near the site is to be detained and questioned. If deemed ignorant or there accidentally, they are to be given C-Rank amnestic drugs and released in the town of ████████████. If found to be knowing trespassers, they are to either be given A-Rank amnestics and recruited as Delta-Class personnel or terminated immediately at the discretion of site security.

Addendum 224-2: On ██/██/████, AE-224-5 and AE-224-9 crashed through the reinforced mesh of the aviary and escaped detainment. After two days of hunting and [REDACTED], they were reacquired and placed back into detainment. AE-224's aviary has since been modified and the steel mesh is now charged with a powerful electric current to dissuade AE-224 instances from attempting to break free.

Addendum 224-3: As of ██/██/████, AE-224-9 gave birth to two young, AE-224-15 and AE-224-16. Agent ██████ attempted to capture AE-224-15 for study while AE-224-9 was sleeping, but was unsuccessful. AE-224-15's cries woke AE-224-9 and Agent ██████ was [DATA EXPUNGED] and consumed by the three AE-224 instances.

Addendum 224-4: After an incident which resulted in the deaths of two researchers, no personnel are allowed to wear jewelry or reflective clothing at AE-224's aviary.

Note. Any AE objects or creatures must be PM'd to me for review before submission. I will read them and judge if they are up to par. Only upon approval may they be posted in the OOC.

 

[EddiEddi]

Sounds intresting. cant wait till we kick off.

 

[Beta]

Sounds intresting. cant wait till we kick off.

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We? You still haven't finished your character. Please see the rules regarding character creation and review.

 

[Cfavano]

Name: Tamara Odysen
Title: Scorpio
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Height/Weight: 5'6" 130 lbs
Skills:

Tamara has a doctorate in Toxicology, a Harvard Graduate, is fluent in five languages (English, Russian, Navajo, Japanese, and Afrikaans), and can also perform the duties of a field medic.

Tamara is an adequate shot, but by no means a master marksman, she is simply good enough to operate in the field.

She also has a very...strange ability. She has built up an extreme tolerance to toxins, and her body can metabolize them faster and more efficient than other humans. This does not mean that they do not affect her. They do, but simply to a lesser effect, and these effects end quicker than normal people. Death no longer becomes a threat.


Gear/Equipment: Her main weapon is an M300 sniper rifle. It has been modified to not only fire its standard ammunition, but also to fire subsonic darts. Of those, she carries two kinds. She carries five darts filled with concentrated Oleander nectar, for dealing with beings that need to be killed quickly and quietly. She also carries darts filled with Ketamine, for subduing creatures to be captured alive.

She also carries an Operator, with suppressors as a sidearm, when the enemy gets too close. She also carries several knives, a two-way radio, and a medkit.

When going on a mission, she wears the standard Battle Dress of the Zodiacs, with a cross armband indicating her role as a medic.

Personality: Tamara is...odd. She's not 'crazy', nor is she a loner, She is just 'odd'. She displays an extreme curiosity and a willingness to experiment and seek out new knowledge. While she prefers working in a lab or reading to social gatherings, that does not mean she cannot be convinced to party, especially if she made a new discovery. When she does party, she is pretty wild, and typically goes home with multiple partners. She may be promiscuous, but she's not a slut, and she favors no sexuality, prefering to do what makes her feel good rather than to conform to any specific lifestyle.

Backstory: Tamara was born in Nevada to poor parents. They lived in a desert town, a relic of the time before Route 66, and was one of the small towns people would pass through on their way to or from California. However, the town steadily declined. By the time she was born, it was basically a ghost town. Most of the businesses were closed down, and the only real place they could work was the local Uranium mine, which had been producing since the forties.

Tamara, as a child, loved to explore, and she would spend her after-school time taking long walks and playing outside. She was a very happy, playful child, perhaps a little under-cautious, and more intent on having a good time, regardless of the consequences. Even from a young age, she was fascinated by venomous creatures, be they snakes, spiders, scorpions, fish, frogs, or even plants. This made her parents worried because, unlike sane people, she would go and seek out these creatures. Luckily, she was supervised by her uncle, who was a Herpetologist, specializing in venomous creatures, working out of Berkley. He would take her out into the desert (and other places around the world) to collect specimens.

Because of her Uncle's support, she took her studies seriously. She quickly became an A student all through high school, and was accepted into Harvard, where she pursued Toxicology. During her time, she experimented on the effects of toxins on living beings, and devoted her lab time to documenting how living beings metabolized various toxins. Eventually, she received approval to test on human beings, but, of course, no one volunteered. So, she used herself. Over the course of several years, she poisoned herself using various toxins, both natural and man-made. Suffice to say, she was very sick for a while, and had to be rushed to the E.R. several times. But, it paid off. She was able to document how humans handled toxins in their body. Her doctoral thesis was published in the American Journal of Toxicology, and her work with snake venom caused some to laud her as the new Paracelsus. The Para-Paracelsus, if you would. It was this fame, and her unique ability, that drew the Zodiacs to her.

I stand Unbroken

 

[EddiEddi]

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We? You still haven't finished your character. Please see the rules regarding character creation and review.

I know, I'm finishing it slowly. we being the term for the roleplay as a whole.

 

[Beta]

@Cfavano

Yeah... no. Any little kid bitten repeatedly by rattlesnakes... irradiated or otherwise, would be dead. I get what you were going for, but this isn't MARVEL... radiation doesn't equal powers. In addition, any radiation source powerful enough to rend and alter the DNA of a snake would also do the same to human beings. It also wouldn't give you powers. Ever seen 'The Hills Have Eyes'? Kinda like that. And that's if you're lucky. Generally, radiation poisoning just kinda... well, kills you.

A solid first try, but I cannot approve it

 

[Cfavano]

I can change that.

Could I just make it a mutation from being exposed to low-levels of radiation (or another form of something) throughout her youth?

or I could just drop it, but that's most of my second paragraph

 

[Lillian]

Name: Ryoshima
Title: Pisces
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Height/Weight: 4'8, 74 lbs
Skills:
- Sensitivity to other's emotions
- Empathy/Sympathy skills
- Aced in poisoning skills
- Lying comes easy with her cute face
- Better senses in smell and taste
- Karate

Gear/Equipment:
- Syringes
- Bottles of various poisons attached to a belt

Personality:
Ryo is a rather quiet-natured girl, but not in the sense of wanting to keep away from everyone. Rather, she wants to understand everyone better. Even if she wouldn't be the one to start a conversation, she would gladly melt in. Even with a kind nature, she was a rather sneaky side. Due to her upbringing, she is one hell of a liar and a cheat. She could even charm a necklace off someone if she wanted it for something. She would be the one to slip cyanide in your meal if you are a target, so don't be crying when she hurts you, but she will always have a good reason for it.

Backstory:
Before Ryoshima was even conceived, her Papa, the leader of a private group of investigators who had helped with research of new things like cures to diseases and such, even sometimes managing to be the ones to find the cure, yearned for another scientific breakthrough. He spent such a long time researching, experimenting, but with no success. One day when he was looking through bogus articles, he happened upon, what he thought at the time, his success story; combining human genes with that of animals, adding abilities and appearances to that of animals to prolong the human race. It was fantastic, though because of how ridiculous it sounded, many places denied to aid in his group's research, believing it was utter garbage.

He spent months experimenting and experimenting, but no matter what the human cells would not bond with that of an animal's. He was on the verge of quitting his project; he worked himself to the point that he would be dropped from the position if he didn't find the perfect method, and having gone a long time without sleep. One day it hit him that he was going about it all wrong; the cells of an already matured human would not work, the only one option that would work was to trace it down to the source; the egg, and much further, sperm. He was literally off his rocker at this point, so he would do anything. He went onto a dating site, looking for any women who did not go through sexual intercourse as it would have their bodies "pure". In the meanwhile, he went as far as to use his own sperm and take from male mammals as well to mutate them, using some advanced lab equipment. After a long process and some wonderful timing, he managed to conduct the perfect bottle of it and found a virgin female, which was just a day away from meeting. His fellow researchers were aware of his motives, being quite desperate as well.

On their first "date", he kidnapped her with the use of drugs in her alcohol, brought her to his lab where his fellow researchers helped him tie her down, and forced the jumbled sperm cells up where they should go and fertilize the egg. He brought her back to her car, and all he could do was wait.
He stalked her for eight months, and with remarkable luck the woman had become pregnant. On a night she was alone in her room, he snuck in, ready to claim his scientific breakthrough. With a knife and gloves prepared, he pulled a gun shot her in the head, ending her life in an instant, then carefully cut her open, pulling the baby out, snipping off the cord and leaving the house. What he hadn't noticed however, was that the child bore no resemblance to the animals in the batch of sperm. It looked like a normal, human, slightly premature baby.

Forward a few years, the now named child, Ryoshima, was in the care of the researchers, her "Papa" having passed away due to lack of sleep. He had exhausted himself to make her a reality. Ryo was put through several tests to see if she had any skills of the animals that were fused with her DNA, but she acted mostly like a normal toddler. A couple smell and taste tests clarified that she had a better senses in those, but that was it. The researchers were baffled as to why this was, even a little depressed that their head professor's idea didn't work all the way through. They constantly took DNA samples of her, and all the strands were there. They supposed either a little of the DNA was active, or the Human DNA was the dominant one. They began to pay less and less attention to the child as the years went by, even mumbling that she was a failure. One day when she was quiet in her cell, one of the researchers approached her. He claimed to still have some faith in her; if she couldn't work as a scientific breakthrough, she could work as something else; a soldier. Because of her rather adorable looks, she would work perfectly as an assassin of sorts. Since the day that she had less attention on her, she never left her cell. Much less, for her entire life, did she go outside. She asked a lot of questions, particularly ones that if she went through the training, she could go outside. Hearing pretty much everything she wanted, the seven-year old accepted.

She spent the next nine years in training with plenty of teachers, proving to be a phenomenal student. She learned to read the emotions from people's faces and voices, how to use cuteness to her advantage, lying, and some skills in karate. She did get her wish, though; she was allowed to walk and train outside. The other researchers were not so pleased, constantly telling her that she could be replaced in a heartbeat with other samples they were trying to create. She was just about tired of them one day, and put her skills to the test. With lashes of both empathy and lying, she twisted them around her finger and got them to leave her alone. The researcher who put her up for the training was rather impressed when he heard of it, deciding she was ready to learn to use poisons.

In the timespan of three years, she learned about the nervous system and the cardiovascular systems, and all about drugs and poisons. She had to remember where each drug would be the most effective, injected, consumed, or inhaled, and with trust she had been entrusted a belt to hold many vials containing both helpful and harmful drugs. Because of how successful she was in her long years of training and tests, they decided to send her off with the Zodiacs. She was excited because she would end up meeting new people, but at the same time, even with her deception skills, she wanted to get to know people better. She spent most of her life with the same people, so she yearned to meet more.
Through all those difficult times, she stood Unbroken

 

[EddiEddi]

I can change that.

Could I just make it a mutation from being exposed to low-levels of radiation (or another form of something) throughout her youth?

or I could just drop it, but that's most of my second paragraph

I don't know how much you know of genetics or Bio-chemistry, but DNA is way more complex than any comic makes out, You could (in theory) have a mutation, but lets assume you tweek a bit of DNA, you'd have to tweak the same DNA in EVERY CELL in the entire body in EXACTLY the same way, and its far more likely that it'll do something like change your eye colour, or give you a genetic desease than anything else. to code for something like a super power you'd need either 1) a entirely new genetic strand 2) a different DNA structure (the doctor is a good example, he has a tripple heix rather than a double) 3) some kind of new genome (thats the least likely).
so, radiaiton, or any other mutagen is unlikely to give superpowers.

 

[Beta]

Typos aside, Eddi has the right of it. DNA is one of the most complex things on the planet. A spritz of electromagnetic radiation would do very little to it even over a long time. We're bombarded by cosmic rays every second of our lives, so some low-grade gamma radiation might make you ill or weaken your immune system... but not much else. Frankly, using radiation to gain powers makes very little sense outside of a Superhero RP.

Now on to the review of @LibratheScales character.

First issue... unless Shima's father possessed some sort of anomalous object that allowed animal and human genes to splice successfully, that's going to have to go. If he DID have something like that, please see AE-224 for an idea of how to write an information sheet for anomalous objects.

Next we have her skills. Nowhere in her backstory is it explained why she is a good liar, empathetic, or a skilled user of toxins. If she was lying to and stealing from a highly unstable scientist... what was stopping him from vivisecting her to find out why her DNA spliced successfully yet showed no changes? Frankly... why didn't he do that to her regardless? If I were in his shoes, I'd be pissed and incredibly curious as to why there was no outward change. But back to the lying, empathy, and poisonings. Stealing drugs and lying to daddy does not make you more empathetic or an ace poisoner... nor does slipping someone a bunch of sleeping pills. It makes you kind of an ass and a junkie, and a bit of a murderer. So that's issue 2.

Issue 3. Why would the Zodiacs just... kidnap her? They don't do that unless you're a death row inmate, and if that was the case... you'd be a Delta-Class employee and likely thrown at something dangerous that would probably kill you. For any standard employee/agent, the Zodiacs generally recruit from government agencies and scientific organizations.

VERDICT: As I told Cfavano... a solid attempt, but I cannot accept the character as it is now.

 

[EddiEddi]

done the images @Beta still debating personality but hopefully that fits better.

 

[Lillian]

Typos aside, Eddi has the right of it. DNA is one of the most complex things on the planet. A spritz of electromagnetic radiation would do very little to it even over a long time. We're bombarded by cosmic rays every second of our lives, so some low-grade gamma radiation might make you ill or weaken your immune system... but not much else. Frankly, using radiation to gain powers makes very little sense outside of a Superhero RP.

Now on to the review of @LibratheScales character.

First issue... unless Shima's father possessed some sort of anomalous object that allowed animal and human genes to splice successfully, that's going to have to go. If he DID have something like that, please see AE-224 for an idea of how to write an information sheet for anomalous objects.

Next we have her skills. Nowhere in her backstory is it explained why she is a good liar, empathetic, or a skilled user of toxins. If she was lying to and stealing from a highly unstable scientist... what was stopping him from vivisecting her to find out why her DNA spliced successfully yet showed no changes? Frankly... why didn't he do that to her regardless? If I were in his shoes, I'd be pissed and incredibly curious as to why there was no outward change. But back to the lying, empathy, and poisonings. Stealing drugs and lying to daddy does not make you more empathetic or an ace poisoner... nor does slipping someone a bunch of sleeping pills. It makes you kind of an ass and a junkie, and a bit of a murderer. So that's issue 2.

Issue 3. Why would the Zodiacs just... kidnap her? They don't do that unless you're a death row inmate, and if that was the case... you'd be a Delta-Class employee and likely thrown at something dangerous that would probably kill you. For any standard employee/agent, the Zodiacs generally recruit from government agencies and scientific organizations.

VERDICT: As I told Cfavano... a solid attempt, but I cannot accept the character as it is now.

Oooh... I knew I wouldn't get it...
I don't think this is the rp for me if I couldn't even get that right...

 

[Beta]

Oooh... I knew I wouldn't get it...
I don't think this is the rp for me if I couldn't even get that right...

A request for edits is no reason to give up on an RP. The concept was solid and it read well, but it needs work to fit well into the setting of the RP.

 

[Lillian]

A request for edits is no reason to give up on an RP. The concept was solid and it read well, but it needs work to fit well into the setting of the RP.

Well it was late and i pretty much did the history off the top of my head, maybe I should make it a little more advanced...

How would the Zodiacs become involved, though?

 

[Beta]

How would the Zodiacs become involved, though?

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For any standard employee/agent, the Zodiacs generally recruit from government agencies and scientific organizations.

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Well, I'd start there.

 

[Lillian]

Name: Ryoshima
Title: Pisces
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Height/Weight: 4'8, 74 lbs
Skills:
- Sensitivity to other's emotions
- Empathy/Sympathy skills
- Aced in poisoning skills
- Lying comes easy with her cute face
- Better senses in smell and taste
- Karate

Gear/Equipment:
- Syringes
- Bottles of various poisons attached to a belt

Personality:
Ryo is a rather quiet-natured girl, but not in the sense of wanting to keep away from everyone. Rather, she wants to understand everyone better. Even if she wouldn't be the one to start a conversation, she would gladly melt in. Even with a kind nature, she was a rather sneaky side. Due to her upbringing, she is one hell of a liar and a cheat. She could even charm a necklace off someone if she wanted it for something. She would be the one to slip cyanide in your meal if you are a target, so don't be crying when she hurts you, but she will always have a good reason for it.

Backstory:
Before Ryoshima was even conceived, her Papa, the leader of a private group of investigators who had helped with research of new things like cures to diseases and such, even sometimes managing to be the ones to find the cure, yearned for another scientific breakthrough. He spent such a long time researching, experimenting, but with no success. One day when he was looking through bogus articles, he happened upon, what he thought at the time, his success story; combining human genes with that of animals, adding abilities and appearances to that of animals to prolong the human race. It was fantastic, though because of how ridiculous it sounded, many places denied to aid in his group's research, believing it was utter garbage.

He spent months experimenting and experimenting, but no matter what the human cells would not bond with that of an animal's. He was on the verge of quitting his project; he worked himself to the point that he would be dropped from the position if he didn't find the perfect method, and having gone a long time without sleep. One day it hit him that he was going about it all wrong; the cells of an already matured human would not work, the only one option that would work was to trace it down to the source; the egg, and much further, sperm. He was literally off his rocker at this point, so he would do anything. He went onto a dating site, looking for any women who did not go through sexual intercourse as it would have their bodies "pure". In the meanwhile, he went as far as to use his own sperm and take from male mammals as well to mutate them, using some advanced lab equipment. After a long process and some wonderful timing, he managed to conduct the perfect bottle of it and found a virgin female, which was just a day away from meeting. His fellow researchers were aware of his motives, being quite desperate as well.

On their first "date", he kidnapped her with the use of drugs in her alcohol, brought her to his lab where his fellow researchers helped him tie her down, and forced the jumbled sperm cells up where they should go and fertilize the egg. He brought her back to her car, and all he could do was wait.
He stalked her for eight months, and with remarkable luck the woman had become pregnant. On a night she was alone in her room, he snuck in, ready to claim his scientific breakthrough. With a knife and gloves prepared, he pulled a gun shot her in the head, ending her life in an instant, then carefully cut her open, pulling the baby out, snipping off the cord and leaving the house. What he hadn't noticed however, was that the child bore no resemblance to the animals in the batch of sperm. It looked like a normal, human, slightly premature baby.

Forward a few years, the now named child, Ryoshima, was in the care of the researchers, her "Papa" having passed away due to lack of sleep. He had exhausted himself to make her a reality. Ryo was put through several tests to see if she had any skills of the animals that were fused with her DNA, but she acted mostly like a normal toddler. A couple smell and taste tests clarified that she had a better senses in those, but that was it. The researchers were baffled as to why this was, even a little depressed that their head professor's idea didn't work all the way through. They constantly took DNA samples of her, and all the strands were there. They supposed either a little of the DNA was active, or the Human DNA was the dominant one. They began to pay less and less attention to the child as the years went by, even mumbling that she was a failure. One day when she was quiet in her cell, one of the researchers approached her. He claimed to still have some faith in her; if she couldn't work as a scientific breakthrough, she could work as something else; a soldier. Because of her rather adorable looks, she would work perfectly as an assassin of sorts. Since the day that she had less attention on her, she never left her cell. Much less, for her entire life, did she go outside. She asked a lot of questions, particularly ones that if she went through the training, she could go outside. Hearing pretty much everything she wanted, the seven-year old accepted.

She spent the next nine years in training with plenty of teachers, proving to be a phenomenal student. She learned to read the emotions from people's faces and voices, how to use cuteness to her advantage, lying, and some skills in karate. She did get her wish, though; she was allowed to walk and train outside. The other researchers were not so pleased, constantly telling her that she could be replaced in a heartbeat with other samples they were trying to create. She was just about tired of them one day, and put her skills to the test. With lashes of both empathy and lying, she twisted them around her finger and got them to leave her alone. The researcher who put her up for the training was rather impressed when he heard of it, deciding she was ready to learn to use poisons.

In the timespan of three years, she learned about the nervous system and the cardiovascular systems, and all about drugs and poisons. She had to remember where each drug would be the most effective, injected, consumed, or inhaled, and with trust she had been entrusted a belt to hold many vials containing both helpful and harmful drugs. Because of how successful she was in her long years of training and tests, they decided to send her off with the Zodiacs. She was excited because she would end up meeting new people, but at the same time, even with her deception skills, she wanted to get to know people better. She spent most of her life with the same people, so she yearned to meet more.
Through all those difficult times, she stood Unbroken

Alright here we go, better?

 

[Beta]

It's a fair amount better, but there is still the issue of how such a criminal group of morally bankrupt scientific minds could exist under the radar of groups like the FBI, NSA, NATO, and above all... The Zodiacs.

Couple that with her story mentioning she was "sent off to the Zodiacs" when it is stated that you don't find the Zodiacs... but they find YOU.

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@EddiEddi

Ok. Review time.

Frankly, your character is too far beyond the "Low-Power" spectrum. I told you once before, the following things are NOT something I allow.

capable of producing machinery on the fly as well as repairing them on the go.

Bionic right arm (What exactly it contains...well thats secret!)

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And, as a HUGE fan of Mass Effect...

Omnitool (a 'oh I have that' style tool)

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No. Not gonna happen. I know what an omnitool is and no.

LEEDS or, Localised Energy Emitter Defence System, a small energy shield, that can be projected from his arm, it only lasts a short time (five minutes) before it requires a recharge of about 15 minutes.

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This is a MODERN roleplay. Energy shields are a big no. I'm allowing a cybernetic limb as it is already, so adding even more things that don't exist in the real world would not be something I am willing to do.

Anything he happens to have made.

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Similar to the "making things on the fly", he can't just have random things 'made'. I'd need a list of what he has, not 'he can just make things'.

Lastly, the backstory is somewhat lackluster and littered with typos. At the age he was injured, there is no way he could learn enough about neuroscience and mechanical applications to reliably construct a biologically-compatable arm. Next, he gave up on University to go live with mom and dad again and work in a... workshop?

For any standard employee/agent, the Zodiacs generally recruit from government agencies and scientific organizations.

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They wouldn't really 'head-hunt' someone from random mom-and-pop workshop, you know?

 

[EddiEddi]

Allright I'll edit it through at some point. thanks for running through on it.

 

[Cfavano]

edited