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An old man straightened at the edge of a field, and shielded his eyes from the morning sun. In the pale halo, a rider approached. The silhouette was slender and unfamiliar. His weathered thumb twitched reflexively. Nobody ever approached from the east, as Turan stretched beyond with scorching sands that swallowed travelers and entire cities alike.
He wasn't the first to notice, either. Villagers stopped their toil and followed his gaze, where the silhouette continued to sway, and some retreated into the shade of the mudbrick homes that sparsely dotted the landscape. For a frozen moment, he thought to join them, but the rider did not charge, and his curiosity swelled, driving his feet almost automatically though the town center towards the stranger.
For all his wildest expectations, however, he found himself momentarily unable to comprehend the sight that greeted him, even as the steed was close enough to touch, and the strange armor and silks of its rider nearly surrounded him as they passed unbothered. A woman? With features he could barely describe. His many years meant he knew of the Khitan people from the far East, but his mind struggled even as realization began to set in. Tales and hearsay had formed a different idea in his head about a civilization he would never see, but could think of no other, as she was neither Turan nor Hyrkanian.
"Traveler," he called out, but she did not respond. With her back to him, he could see that her hair, blacker than the night, was long and pinned up loosely with two slivers of wood. To his continued surprise, he saw a sword across her back, sheathed in an ornate scabbard, and two others appeared to be crossed together in the saddlebag draped over her mount's hindquarters. The weapons were slender, with a grace and meticulous craftsmanship in their hilts that seemed too fine to be made from human hands.
"Warrior?" he then asked, and the woman turned her head. In profile, her features were broad and slight, with little sharpness except for her chin. He had heard that the Khitans had a complexion that appeared as parchment, but she instead seemed carved out of ivory, and he found himself unable to guess at her age. "From where do you hail?"
"Far from here," she answered, voice tinged with the dialect of somebody who spoke languages unheard of in this part of the world.
"Khitai? You're from Khitai, aren't you? From beyond Hyrkania and the Great Wall?"
She did not respond, and he hurried alongside her, again shielding his eyes as he turned his gaze upward to see her more closely. A golden pauldron on her right shoulder gleamed in the sun, held in place by leather straps that crossed her body. It seemed to be the only piece of metal armor that she wore, even as she clearly appeared ready for battle. Form-fitting red and white layers, almost like a robe or dress, cascaded down to her feet, with a leather bodice cinching it together at her diminutive waist. And still he struggled to liken it to anything remotely familiar, except for perhaps the desert silks of Sygian sorcerers from the south.
His curiosity continued to drive him, even as they began to leave the village behind.
"What do you seek in these lands?" he persisted. He turned his eyes down the road, which wound back and forth across paltry, wind-beaten plains, where crops barely found footing in the rocky soil. "You ride toward dangerous places."
"A blade."
"Aye, you seek Cimmeria, then? Their swordsmanship and metallurgy is known."
"I seek a Cimmerian."
"Cimmeria is many, many weeks from here. Few could make that journey, even with a caravan. A solo rider will surely meet their unsavory end, even before reaching those frozen lands!"
"I seek a Cimmerian, not Cimmeria. I go to Aquilonia."
"A Cimmerian in Aquilonia?" he asked, stopping short. The rider continued on her way, while a strange feeling of gloom welled up inside him. Without fully knowing why, he felt a stinging sensation behind his eyes. "The only Cimmerian in Aquilonia is King Conan, and a blade - the Atlantean Sword - well, only he can claim to wield it."
"The time has come for it to pass to more worthy hands," the woman responded, slowly and deliberately, as she focused on translating her thoughts to foreign tongue. She withdrew an ornate fan from within her robes and snapped it open. Already the heat of these forsaken lands was settling in, and she waved it curtly in front of her face. "Conan the Cimmerian was a thief before he was a king, and as he stole that blade from the tomb of a great ruler, so too shall I take it from his."
For Suyin, there could be no other outcome. The temple sages had gazed into the scented vapours and saw the coming age of fire and blood, where Aquilonia would fall to Pictish hordes while the Great Wall of Khitai held strong, and the blade she sought would survive the end of yet another civilization, to carve even greater legend.
Top: "Grassland", by Bigball Gao on ArtStation, borrowed here to portray Zamora countryside.
Top Middle: "浮尘", by xiaosu Chen on ArtStation, borrowed here to portray Suyin.
Top Middle: "浮尘", by xiaosu Chen on ArtStation, borrowed here to portray Suyin.
This story is set in Robert E. Howard's Hyborian Age near the end of Conan's rule as king, drawing inspiration from the original stories, the 1982 film "Conan the Barbarian", various printed comics, and the series of Conan video games by Funcom. Also deriving some inspiration from other weird fiction of the era, westerns, and various Wuxia films - particularly Jen Yu's journey with the Green Destiny in "Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon". I am writing solo for my own creative exercise, but would love to hear feedback from anyone, or potentially even link up with partners to make an RP out of this.

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