There, spoilers included, a more detailed explanation of the magic and its limitations/how to "kill" Ragnarok are included, names have been changed. Now all that's left to do is wait for GG to approve or deny... I do hope it's an approval.
Yea it was...so either i need someone to post for Ivory or let me know what's going to happen to her...cause if anything else, Vincent will go chat with the woman that bought him a drink. lol
The main problem I see with this app is that you claim to have grown up in Freland. In the isles that were discovered 20 years ago. Somebody else made the same mistake.
So you need to change that.
I really wouldn't have minded if you were from an Oriental background, but it's up to you what you do with your character really.
I've written it in that he's from a town named Louge (pronounced like rouge, as in Baton Rouge) that's to the east of the Isles. Anything else you'd like me to change?