The Abyss

Discussion in 'THREAD ARCHIVES' started by ❖RogueRaven12❖, Jan 4, 2015.


Does this sound interesting

  1. Yes Im interested

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  1. So this is a story about a demon and a human who fell in love with one another. Despite the demons reputation, he loved her more than life itself. It was then that the war between demons and angel began forcing the human to watch from the side lines. She watched the slow destruction of the love of her life. He became very cold toward her and when she tried to pry inside, he would hit her afraid of her getting too close. This caused her to run to his best friend. They both knew something was off with him and they tried to talk to him but it was pointless. After a while, the two started dating. The human was pregnant with the demon's child but she was too afraid to tell him. After months of constant fighting, it was in the final stretch against the angel lord and the demon lord(her boyfriend). She couldn't let this progress any further. She went to the battlefield and right before the final strike, she got in between the two of them, the love of her life's blade plunging into her stomach. Right there, she lost everything.

    She fell into his arms, blood spilling out of her mouth. The demon was crying, begging her not to leave him. He couldn't lose her. The angel man took pity on them and asked if he truly loved the girl. The demon said yes. The angel cut his hand and poured his blood into the human's mouth right before she went limp. After about ten minutes, she slowly opened her eyes. The demon had never been so happy in his life but the girl stood up and approached the angel lord, beautiful white angel wings ripping through her skin. The now angel girl said she was leaving for the angel realm. The demon couldn't believe it and said how much he loved her but she wouldn't hear any of it. She said he should have thought of that before he hurt her. She left for the angel realm and quickly became a well respected angel who fought hard to protect the angel race. She also protected the demons from harm and worked on getting stronger for years before creating a realm for the demons. However, the realm drained her of all of her powers and within minutes, she collapsed. The angels tried to bring her back but she was gone.

    A hundred years later, the demon hates his ex girlfriend and everytime she reincarnates, he tried to hunt her down but is never able to kill her before she dies. Its finally present day and he's living with a close friend of his who's actually an angel who is betraying his own kind for his master who saved his life. When they find out about a seventeen year old human girl living in New York City who is the next reincarnation of his ex lover, he moves there and they start going to school with her. It turns out the human girl is more beautiful than any human girl they've ever seen and is almost the exact replica of his ex lover making him hate her even more. It turns out, she is being bullied and suffers from depression and anxiety. Her mother abandoned her after her father left her pregnant mother. She currently jumps from foster family to foster family. Not to mention, people have bullied her her entire life. She has never really had many friend. Despite this, she never stops smiling. She didn't let anything let her down, despite her constant loneliness. She was the perfect girl

    The demon hated her but pretended to be friends with her. He just needed to get close to her so he could end her life. Not like anyone would miss her. Her current foster dad was an abusive alcoholic and her foster mom was a pushover. Every time, he tried to kill her he couldn't. He would hesitate which would finally bring the girl to finding out her true identity, that was she was actually a direct descendant of his ex lover. After a while, the two end up falling in love. The human girl even accepted him killing her a couple of times but every time, he couldn't. She was the bravest girl he's ever met.

    Note: There's more to this story but I want to focus on the love between the demon and the human girl. This is a story that I started writing a while ago but abruptly stopped and couldn't get back into writing it but I like the plot. Oh and this story will begin when the two met. I just figured I should add stuff that happens afterwards. Message me if you want to begin it with me. First comes first serve. If I've already found someone, but you still want to do it we can do it through messages.

    Demon guy: Phoenix/Adrian(Me)
    Angel friend: Orion(Me)
    Human girl: Violet(Role player)
    Human girls friends(Role player)
    Angel girl/Ex lover of Phoenix: Amaranthine

    So yeah, I think that's it. -shrugs-
  2. I have someone for the role play but if others are interested message me, and I will accomodate... aka, I will do the role play through messages
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