That Old Rough Copy you want No One to See

Discussion in 'THREAD ARCHIVES' started by Space Furret, Mar 10, 2014.

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  1. Here's mine for the first chapter of my novel 'Purpose'.
    Okay so, feel free to give feedback. But not on sentence stucture or anything, as I have improved since then.

    But I want feedback on the story.
    And if you just say 'it's super' I'll thumbs down your post.
    Because - that'd be a lie. Share your opinions please!

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BZnJMSLt21to4feMQB7uUarc-L1le1ojJ_TlZaVAd_E/edit

    I am especially wanting to add more realism to the crash / demon attack.
    Any ideas will be given a sticker!

    WARNING THIS STORY HAS AN ASSHOLE IN IT. HE'S RACIST AND SEXIST.
    I CANNOT BE HELD IF YOU WISH TO KICK HIS ASS.
    JOIN THE CLUB.
     
  2. What would you like to do with this rough draft? do you need someone to edit it? or just feed back on the writing itself?
     
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