You can you can! Dean is yours! Until then though, please fill out a moderate character sheet for your starting character. Keep in mind that a lot of these moderate guys will get killed off (:'() when making it. Also, don't forget to read over the rules before posting your CS.
So far, so good! I like that she has a nickname, it adds humanity.Name : Megan Annalise Drexel aka "Leese"
Age : 18
Gender : Female
Looks :
5'10" and around 130 lbs, very athletic build with a toned, bronzed body along with layered muscle mass under her curvy figure. Due to her being an athlete in high school she has a heightened reflex, flexibility, and body control about her. She is rather faster than the normal rate of speed among humans and strong as her frame portrays. Her crystal blue eyes are very piercing like that of a wolf's with her mahogany hair coming down to the middle of her back.
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This is going to start the night of their graduation, so she has finished up high school. No worries though. I like this part a lot, actually, she is shown as strong but willing to restrain herself. It also shows the connection between herself and Gwen, which is imperative and stronger than any other bond in the RP.
This is good, I like it! However, I need you to re-read the rules and edit your CS accordingly (*cough* rule 10 *cough*) before I can approve it. Once you do that, I can guarantee you'll be approved.
Great, you're approved! I'll try and have the IC up by the end of the day, but if it's not up by 5P EST I wouldn't expect it up till tomorrow.
I am going to be the entire world, I will play as any characters that you guys don't snatch up. (As it stands now, I may be playing some major ones.)
Fantastic, someone who wants their character to die, I can work with it! Put up your character sheet and lets get rocking.
Okie doke so I'm not sure why nobody is reading the rules, I even listed the specific rule I mean in my reply to other CS's. It's kind of a pet peeve of mine, so to be honest I am probably going to be a bit nit picky with your CS...Character Sheet :
Name : Cerberus, Johnathan Kenly
Age : Unknown
Looks :
White eyed demon.
Hunter : No
Current Occupation : Fetcher of Souls, however he has decided to go rogue. No longer a servant of the King of Hell.
Species : The Original Hell Hound.
Biography : One of the original soldiers of Lucifer, he served as gatekeeper to hell for many years. His service came without price until more of his breed began sprouting up as creations not his offspring. He hated the thought of not being the only Hell Hound and began taking to killing souls in hell, relieving them of their torturers. Many souls left hell whilst he went on his rampages and he had hoped to be charged with returning them. But his 'kin' were sent to track them down. He refused to stay in his position as gatekeeper to hell and moved to the human world, he possessed a body and has been in it since his entering this world. The body he possesses has been well fed and carefully maintained. He spends his days enjoying the human condition and whenever the King of Hell sends troops up top to hunt him down he enjoys slaughtering them.
Okay, I can totally edit all this. I figured you'd like an original idea, and I'm not saying that to be cheeky. Could you just be more specific as what you want from the character? Because all I see is lore stuff which I'm not sure what you want me to keep and what you would like me to edit.
Yes, by the lack of specification I am going to assume he is black eyed.
Please re-read what I said. He is not one of the original soldiers for Lucifer, they are called the Knights of Hell, they are extinct. Also, you did not take out the part where your character refers to themselves as a "hell hound" despite the fact that I said those are actual hounds, and not playable characters. I am not reviewing your CS half a million times. Please have these things straightened out by the next edit.
Not upset, no worries, :), though it is frustrating that you didn't edit it....
I actually made a list for you of what I would like you to edit, here, and broke it down to section. Here is the simple, what you still need to edit:
As I said in the rule, fit it into the biography somehow. Don't just say red, other than your comment I have no way of knowing that and when I make the reference for CS's people will not know what "Red" means.
