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Star Wars: Whispers of Darkness (OoC)
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I'm kind of stuck on how I should go around with my character. Should he command an entire fleet and in that case how many ships? Or just a single large flagship? And who is playing the Dark Lord? I can imagine that I should be working closely together with that character.
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I should have the CS done later on today. I got a good idea of what to do. Though I will have to delete the last one and remake it again.
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Alex stands to be 5'10" and has a medium build, with broad shoulder and brown eyes with short, messy brown hair.
Name: Alex Helt
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Main Faction: none
Sub-Faction: Runaway Jedi
Weapons:
Crafted, then modified to withstand heavy combat use, and was made using schematics his father gave him, the materials he had to look on his own, and the crystal itself was found on a illegal smuggler on coruscant, in the underworld. Once he gathered all materials, he had crafted his first lightsabers. And once he had met Alla he had made modifications to the hilt accordingly to his training. Made from a carbon fiber material, making it durable and almost weightless. The other thing is, the saber was upgraded so it could be used in the water without powering off, something Alla had suggested to have.
Equipment
1. Specialized gas mask, capable of filtering out any foreign gases that could be harmful to breath, and even provide oxygen when there is non to be found. The mask also had the ability to alter the user's voice, a modification Alex had added to the mask when he first found it, letting him mask his voice to sound dark and robotic.
2. Specialized goggles, allows the user to see in two different visions, thermal, and night vision.
3. Armorweave, Alex's armor is resistant to limited lightsaber attacks. The armor is also been modified to be thermally invisible, giving no heat signature.
4. Multi-functional wrist device, located on Alex's right wrist, A original comms device, now modified to interact with computer software for quick slicing and control of the software, while still holding the ability to be used as communication device. He also uses it to scramble radios when in stealth, either that or disrupt radars when close by, to make him unseen.
Skills:
1. Expert Slicing, Alex can slice into almost any computer software, letting him bypass security and get some information if needed.
2. Alex has a gift, charm, for some reason he can talk anyone into something, if not persuade others to get what he needs.
3. Due to his excessive training with Alla, Alex's reflexes has been increased, and his body has been made more agile. He's faster on his feet, and faster with his sabers
4. resourceful, he can use his surroundings to his advantage when caught in a sticky situation
5. When called for, Alex can become a ghost (not literally) Stealth being a skill he had to teach himself due to him being wanted by many, He can hide in plain sight, blend into crowds with no problem, He often waits then strikes from the shadows, Then completely disappear without a trace, it is what has kept him hidden for so long.
6. Alex can handle multiple enemies without breaking a sweat. He enjoys the heat of a battle.
5. [btn=mode|http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Jar'Kai]Jar'kai[/btn] Duel saber form
Flaws:
1. Alex is controlled by his emotions, and can lash out when overwhelmed.
2. He is always stuck in the past, always lingering on his choices in the past, wondering if he made the right decisions.
3. Can be irrational, tends to do things without thinking.
4. Will do anything to find out who killed his brother, to get his revenge. Even if that means killing a close friend, or betraying the republic...
Force Sensitive: Yes
5. [btn=mode|http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Jar'Kai]Jar'kai[/btn] Duel saber form
Flaws:
1. Alex is controlled by his emotions, and can lash out when overwhelmed.
2. He is always stuck in the past, always lingering on his choices in the past, wondering if he made the right decisions.
3. Can be irrational, tends to do things without thinking.
4. Will do anything to find out who killed his brother, to get his revenge. Even if that means killing a close friend, or betraying the republic...
Force Sensitive: Yes
Neutral abilities
Telekinesis/Telekinetic light saber combat (A combat form he learned with telekinesis)
something Alex loves to use, either it be to push back enemies to choking them, or to move objects for his convenience.
Force illusion
A skill Alex uses very often, to avoid attention when in crowds, altering minds of others to imagine him to be someone else. He also uses it for combat, to confuse his opponent or frighten them.
Force speed
Rarely used, only when things are dire. Suddenly, either activated, or it happens in intense moments. Alex gets a increase, everything in his perspective has slowed down, giving him a chance to react, counter, or flee. Though this comes with a problem, the sudden speed can do a number to his body, so if over used, it can leave him winded, or even kill him if pushed over the edge.
Dark
Force lightning
Alex can shoot electricity out of his finger tips and shocking his opponents, stunning them, or killing them, depends on his mood.
Force rage
Used in intense moments, Normally when he is losing a fight, or when he loses control of his emotions, and lashes out with increased strength, power, and speed...but passes out in the end due to the strain it puts on his body. He knows how to trigger it, how to activate it, but doesn't need to unless needed be as the strain on his body is to great.
Force destruction
A force to be reckoned with, using a great deal of energy to conjure up, and then released from his arm in a destructive way. vaporizing anything in direct contact with the blast of kinetic energy, and anyone near it will be blown away causing whiplash, or worse. This can only be used so much as it requires a lot of Alex's energy to use.
Force Maelstorm
Something Alex doesn't even know how to fully control, But it comes to him in emotional states. It was used when he was fighting Alla, a power washed over him, he suddenly curled up floating above the ground, while all loose debri, and anyone near was dragged to him, and spun around him like a vortex. In the end, he let out a explosion of electricity sending everything that was dragged in out like shrapnel from a grenade, causing massive destruction. But that was the only time he'd recall using it.
Force heal
A healing ability that comes with a price, the wounds will be healed, but unlike the light side healing ability, this is temporary. The wound will disappear, but the pain will not, and if not continuously used, the wounds will reappear. Alex uses this pain to fuel his power in dire times though, the pain only causes him to fight harder in brutal fights...but there's only so much a body can take before it rips itself apart.
Telekinesis/Telekinetic light saber combat (A combat form he learned with telekinesis)
something Alex loves to use, either it be to push back enemies to choking them, or to move objects for his convenience.
Force illusion
A skill Alex uses very often, to avoid attention when in crowds, altering minds of others to imagine him to be someone else. He also uses it for combat, to confuse his opponent or frighten them.
Force speed
Rarely used, only when things are dire. Suddenly, either activated, or it happens in intense moments. Alex gets a increase, everything in his perspective has slowed down, giving him a chance to react, counter, or flee. Though this comes with a problem, the sudden speed can do a number to his body, so if over used, it can leave him winded, or even kill him if pushed over the edge.
Dark
Force lightning
Alex can shoot electricity out of his finger tips and shocking his opponents, stunning them, or killing them, depends on his mood.
Force rage
Used in intense moments, Normally when he is losing a fight, or when he loses control of his emotions, and lashes out with increased strength, power, and speed...but passes out in the end due to the strain it puts on his body. He knows how to trigger it, how to activate it, but doesn't need to unless needed be as the strain on his body is to great.
Force destruction
A force to be reckoned with, using a great deal of energy to conjure up, and then released from his arm in a destructive way. vaporizing anything in direct contact with the blast of kinetic energy, and anyone near it will be blown away causing whiplash, or worse. This can only be used so much as it requires a lot of Alex's energy to use.
Force Maelstorm
Something Alex doesn't even know how to fully control, But it comes to him in emotional states. It was used when he was fighting Alla, a power washed over him, he suddenly curled up floating above the ground, while all loose debri, and anyone near was dragged to him, and spun around him like a vortex. In the end, he let out a explosion of electricity sending everything that was dragged in out like shrapnel from a grenade, causing massive destruction. But that was the only time he'd recall using it.
Force heal
A healing ability that comes with a price, the wounds will be healed, but unlike the light side healing ability, this is temporary. The wound will disappear, but the pain will not, and if not continuously used, the wounds will reappear. Alex uses this pain to fuel his power in dire times though, the pain only causes him to fight harder in brutal fights...but there's only so much a body can take before it rips itself apart.
Alex was born on the planet Tatooine, his mother stayed at home and took care of him, while his father, would go and do the dirty work to get money to pay for his families needs. Alex's father was a former Jedi knight, and had been in hiding since the fall of the republic. Luckily, they did not draw any attention from the empire, and lived on in the hot planet. When Alex grew up, he eventually began to help his father in his line of work, apparently being a junk salesman for scrap metal and old parts. During his time there, his father taught him the basics to computer software, and how they work. On his free time, Alex would spend time through call with his brother, Alex's brother (Sar Helt) was a bounty hunter, and rarely spoke of his work. But always kept in touch to see how his family was doing.
It wasn't until the age of 10 that him and his family had been discovered, now at the time, Alex didn't even know of the Jedi, or the Sith, only of the evil empire. That changed when a Sith apprentice showed up at their door step and tried to kill his father to gain respect from his master, who he did not name. That's when his father showed his skills with the force, and that he owned a saber...right in front of their house. In a spectacular duel, which Alex only partially saw while being shielded by his mother, The Sith made it known that he was more skilled than his father, He was losing the battle. His awe quickly turned to fear, then anger when he saw his father get knocked to the ground and had a saber inches from his father's face. Driven by blind rage, He reached out and pulled his fathers saber to him using the force, before plunging the saber into the Sith's back with pure luck. Ending the mans life, It was after that when his father discovered that his son was gifted with the force.
Years later (alex is now 15) and the empire had been vanquished by the rebel army, the New Republic and the Jedi order was restored. Alex had been trained by his father in how to use the force, Alex had a hard time grasping the concept, but only able to do simple things like telekinesis. With the saved up money, him and his father traveled to coruscant to seek out the new Jedi order, his father wanted him to join. And with some luck, He did, this is where his true training began, From learning how to use a lightsaber, to the history of the Jedi. He never could quite understand how to keep his emotions under control, No matter how many times he tried to meditate, it just seemed impossible to him especially when his mother died shortly after arriving at the temple, her heart could not keep up with her body anymore, and she died in her sleep. Alex was destroyed, but thanks to his father, he repaired quite quickly and decided to train to make his mother proud.
He never stopped calling his brother though, and explained how his life as a training Jedi seemed to be rather difficult, He even explained how he eventually made his own lightsaber, finding schematics from his father, as well as the materials needed. They also discussed the death of their mother, and all the memories they shared of her, swapping stories of their time with her, and all her troubles. When Alex had asked what his life was like living out as a bounty hunter, he quickly changed the topic and stopped the transmission. It wasn't until later (a year later to be exact) that he found out that his brother was killed, there was no clues onto how he was killed, as his body showed no signs of blaster, or saber marks by what the reports say, but internal damage to his heart. Alex in his emotional state, confronted the council, and asked for permission to investigate the killing himself, but they refused, saying vengeance was not the way. When Alex left the meeting, he snuck out and stole a Republic personal ship, Reprogramed a pilot droid to obey him, and had it fly out into space, towards tatooine, where his brother had been killed. Since he was so young, he needed to mask his face, he used a tarp and wore a pilots suit that barely fit him, with his charm, he got clearance to a spaceport and landed, the spaceport was were his brother was found dead. Unfortunately, He didn't find any clues, or evidence of Alex's killer. And the only thing he found... was a rogue Sith named Alla. This Female Sith rogue sensed Alex's presence and confronted him in a alley. And questioned Alex and why was so far away from the order. When Alex explained his reasoning, Alla couldn't help but agree with him and his reasoning for being so far out, and asked to aid him in his quest.
Once he had gotten onto his ship, he received a transmission from his father, he explained how the republic was looking for him, and how he was now wanted. The father expressed how worried he was, but somehow Alex persuaded his father to not give out his whereabouts, and to not hunt him down. He did say that he was not going to stop the Republic from Hunting him down, and wished him luck. That was the last time he and his father spoke.
It wasn't until the age of 10 that him and his family had been discovered, now at the time, Alex didn't even know of the Jedi, or the Sith, only of the evil empire. That changed when a Sith apprentice showed up at their door step and tried to kill his father to gain respect from his master, who he did not name. That's when his father showed his skills with the force, and that he owned a saber...right in front of their house. In a spectacular duel, which Alex only partially saw while being shielded by his mother, The Sith made it known that he was more skilled than his father, He was losing the battle. His awe quickly turned to fear, then anger when he saw his father get knocked to the ground and had a saber inches from his father's face. Driven by blind rage, He reached out and pulled his fathers saber to him using the force, before plunging the saber into the Sith's back with pure luck. Ending the mans life, It was after that when his father discovered that his son was gifted with the force.
Years later (alex is now 15) and the empire had been vanquished by the rebel army, the New Republic and the Jedi order was restored. Alex had been trained by his father in how to use the force, Alex had a hard time grasping the concept, but only able to do simple things like telekinesis. With the saved up money, him and his father traveled to coruscant to seek out the new Jedi order, his father wanted him to join. And with some luck, He did, this is where his true training began, From learning how to use a lightsaber, to the history of the Jedi. He never could quite understand how to keep his emotions under control, No matter how many times he tried to meditate, it just seemed impossible to him especially when his mother died shortly after arriving at the temple, her heart could not keep up with her body anymore, and she died in her sleep. Alex was destroyed, but thanks to his father, he repaired quite quickly and decided to train to make his mother proud.
He never stopped calling his brother though, and explained how his life as a training Jedi seemed to be rather difficult, He even explained how he eventually made his own lightsaber, finding schematics from his father, as well as the materials needed. They also discussed the death of their mother, and all the memories they shared of her, swapping stories of their time with her, and all her troubles. When Alex had asked what his life was like living out as a bounty hunter, he quickly changed the topic and stopped the transmission. It wasn't until later (a year later to be exact) that he found out that his brother was killed, there was no clues onto how he was killed, as his body showed no signs of blaster, or saber marks by what the reports say, but internal damage to his heart. Alex in his emotional state, confronted the council, and asked for permission to investigate the killing himself, but they refused, saying vengeance was not the way. When Alex left the meeting, he snuck out and stole a Republic personal ship, Reprogramed a pilot droid to obey him, and had it fly out into space, towards tatooine, where his brother had been killed. Since he was so young, he needed to mask his face, he used a tarp and wore a pilots suit that barely fit him, with his charm, he got clearance to a spaceport and landed, the spaceport was were his brother was found dead. Unfortunately, He didn't find any clues, or evidence of Alex's killer. And the only thing he found... was a rogue Sith named Alla. This Female Sith rogue sensed Alex's presence and confronted him in a alley. And questioned Alex and why was so far away from the order. When Alex explained his reasoning, Alla couldn't help but agree with him and his reasoning for being so far out, and asked to aid him in his quest.
Once he had gotten onto his ship, he received a transmission from his father, he explained how the republic was looking for him, and how he was now wanted. The father expressed how worried he was, but somehow Alex persuaded his father to not give out his whereabouts, and to not hunt him down. He did say that he was not going to stop the Republic from Hunting him down, and wished him luck. That was the last time he and his father spoke.
Seven years past, And the relationship between Alla and Alex grew, Alla was about 37 And was far better than Alex When it came to the force and her training with a lightsaber. At first Alex was suspicious to why she had decided to join, It didn't bother him that she was once was a Sith, And had knowledge of the dark side, What bothered him was what did she gain from all of this? whenever he had asked, she had just told him that She wanted to help for once, And try and fix her past, by doing something right. She had taught him how Fight more aggressively and how to use the dark side and all its abilities. He wasn't bothered by the fact that he was learning all these skills, despite for what he had originally trained for, as he knew of such a group that practiced both sides of the force to understand the galaxy at a different scale. He learned how to channel his emotions, and use it to fight, while also ignoring the training that he had been taught at the temple, and eventually he became stronger with the force. Alla even taught him how to work with criminals to gain money, doing little dirty jobs, delivering packages to certain locations for money So he could pay for gas for his ship, including food. She also crafted armor for him, something that would fit his needs. Especially when the republic was searching for him, this outfit would mask his appearance to others, but not some of the Jedi, they could sense him when nearby, so going to coruscant was a no-go for him.
Things seemed to go pretty well, that was until Alla got Alex a job with a Hutt, to kill a target. Alex wasn't going to do that though, and refused the offer, that's when Alla showed her true intentions, before she lashed out at him for denying the job. Alex didn't want to kill for money, it wasn't in his nature, but she tried to force him, and demanded him to. One thing led to another...and they had a battle on Nal Hutta, in a Hutts home. Enraged, Alex lost control, and ended up killing Alla, including the Hutt By accident when he used his lighting, an arch jumped and fried the slug. In the end, Alex regretted Killing her, for what he thought was a friendship quickly turned to dust, Her true intentions seemed clear to him, she wanted to gain control of the all the outlaws, so she could have a flowing system of credits. She explained it in her final moments, and told him how he was just a tool, to only mess with his emotions.
After he left the planet, he set out to get back on track and find his brother's killer, but with no new leads, he was just left to stay in hiding, doing small work whenever he could find it, as well as keeping away from any bounty hunters, as he was now wanted by the Hutts and the Republic. He wasn't sure which was worse, the fact that the Hutts wanted him dead, or the Republic wanting imprison him.
Things seemed to go pretty well, that was until Alla got Alex a job with a Hutt, to kill a target. Alex wasn't going to do that though, and refused the offer, that's when Alla showed her true intentions, before she lashed out at him for denying the job. Alex didn't want to kill for money, it wasn't in his nature, but she tried to force him, and demanded him to. One thing led to another...and they had a battle on Nal Hutta, in a Hutts home. Enraged, Alex lost control, and ended up killing Alla, including the Hutt By accident when he used his lighting, an arch jumped and fried the slug. In the end, Alex regretted Killing her, for what he thought was a friendship quickly turned to dust, Her true intentions seemed clear to him, she wanted to gain control of the all the outlaws, so she could have a flowing system of credits. She explained it in her final moments, and told him how he was just a tool, to only mess with his emotions.
After he left the planet, he set out to get back on track and find his brother's killer, but with no new leads, he was just left to stay in hiding, doing small work whenever he could find it, as well as keeping away from any bounty hunters, as he was now wanted by the Hutts and the Republic. He wasn't sure which was worse, the fact that the Hutts wanted him dead, or the Republic wanting imprison him.
Other:
During Alex's time spent doing small work, he stumbled upon a Sith Syndicate fleet commander, Darius. This commander had a rather large fleet, but since he was there to deliver information, the commander thought it would be wise to keep in touch with Alex, incase he had any other work for him. Alex wasn't going to refuse, as he was promised credits, and he didn't want to aggravate a member of the Sith Syndicate...
Alex also has a tendency to help others, From saving someone from a mugging, to even sparring some coin. But he always makes himself seem different, using alternate appearances, using his illusion ability, so they wouldn't know what he really looked like, and to say that not everyone is bad.
Alex also has a tendency to help others, From saving someone from a mugging, to even sparring some coin. But he always makes himself seem different, using alternate appearances, using his illusion ability, so they wouldn't know what he really looked like, and to say that not everyone is bad.
Leia "I love you..."
Han Solo "...I know"
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Just a slight nitpick out of the way. In SW it is not hacking, it's slicing. Also some spelling errors such as "Ally" when it's "Alley"
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Sorry, I haven't been able to fully proof read it yet. But I will edit that shortly.
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I also have another thing to say.
You mention that he had a hard time with meditation yet he as force heal. An ability whose essential element is meditation at the start. Unless he is fueling it with the the dark side way which has side effects such as temporary healing.
You mention that he had a hard time with meditation yet he as force heal. An ability whose essential element is meditation at the start. Unless he is fueling it with the the dark side way which has side effects such as temporary healing.
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Ah yes, It is indeed powered by the dark side. And I do know of the temporary side affects. Like how Darth Sion, the lord of pain used this type of healing to make his body last, until Meetra brought his demise. Or how Darth Vader used it to keep his lungs functional, it was just that I wasn't quite sure where to put it, if it makes you more comfortable ill move it to the dark side abilities lol
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toned body, bronze skin. Orange eyes. 5'8"
Name: Retra Karrde
Age: 18
Gender: Female Human.
Main Faction: New Republic.
Sub-Faction: Knights of the New Republic.
Weapons: Light-Bow; can be turned around and used as a buzzsaw for close quarters range.
+M.U.D. (Mobile Universal Drive) - used for a number of applications, but mainly for network programming and interface alteration (hacking). Contains a UPS Universal Positioning System program that maps worlds and terrain. Can also connect and scan various tech for diagnostic and informational purposes. Programmed by Retra herself.
+Synthetic Diamond Plated Fabric - A lightweight adaptable and flexible material worn as an under layer of armor to absorb impact from massive amounts of kinetic energy.
+Sono darts - Extremely small pins that can be thrust from a small device at high speeds of 1000+ fps. Once they burst, frequencies of sound emit from them varied before they're shot. Used mainly for diversion and elusion.
+Avian Goggles used for up to 10x Zoom for scouting/aiming - with night, thermal, ultraviolet, and x-ray visions. Acquired from a tech salvager in the confines of dark corners of Coruscant that used old droid parts to manipulate bounty hunter goggles for an optical piece of wonder. Of course it cost her a ton of credits she didn't really have to spend, but to her it was totally worth it.
+Universal Eco-Suit designed for exploration and adaptation - Pressurized chamber installed absorbs outside air and compresses it to breathable, sustained oxygen. Re-adapted from some Stormtrooper armor found on an excavation run on Dagobah with some of her peers from the Academy. She had it brought in and re-vamped into a modernized suit used for individualized exploration and travel. It cannot fly
, but uses barometric technology to adapt to different gravities.
+Synthetic Diamond Plated Fabric - A lightweight adaptable and flexible material worn as an under layer of armor to absorb impact from massive amounts of kinetic energy.
+Sono darts - Extremely small pins that can be thrust from a small device at high speeds of 1000+ fps. Once they burst, frequencies of sound emit from them varied before they're shot. Used mainly for diversion and elusion.
+Avian Goggles used for up to 10x Zoom for scouting/aiming - with night, thermal, ultraviolet, and x-ray visions. Acquired from a tech salvager in the confines of dark corners of Coruscant that used old droid parts to manipulate bounty hunter goggles for an optical piece of wonder. Of course it cost her a ton of credits she didn't really have to spend, but to her it was totally worth it.
+Universal Eco-Suit designed for exploration and adaptation - Pressurized chamber installed absorbs outside air and compresses it to breathable, sustained oxygen. Re-adapted from some Stormtrooper armor found on an excavation run on Dagobah with some of her peers from the Academy. She had it brought in and re-vamped into a modernized suit used for individualized exploration and travel. It cannot fly
, but uses barometric technology to adapt to different gravities.
Skills:
* Retra is a master stealth artist and silent technician, using her agility and nimble limbs for craftiness.
-Expert Programmer and Network Scientist; Digital Guru
-Decent Piloting skills
-Acute vision and great coordination used for advanced marksmanship.
-Retra sometimes uses her status/looks to gain extra standing with certain races and creeds, attaining mild persuasion techniques.
-Multi-lingual
Flaws:
*Retra's biggest flaw is her stubbornness. Despite her wit & intelligence, she tends to react in pretention & bias-mindedness. [Hardheaded]
- She can't really fight all too well, which is why she relies on cunning. Even as a Padawan into a Knight, her combat is amateur. [Spectator]
--Fighting Style: Sokan (Adept)
--Secondary: Vaapad (Very Novice)
- Tends to act paranoid and distrusting towards a number of people due to her dad's past and line of work. [Paranoid]
- She over analyzes constantly, digging too deep into matters and becoming intrusive upon matters beyond her business. [Melodramatic]
- Weird: She rarely EVER speaks, she does unorthodox things people would consider abnormal in nature, aloof and tends to leave a confused impact on people she encounters, not really appealing to anyone special. [Just damn awkward]
Force Sensitive: Yes; Her strong-will and stubbornness makes her tough against mental affecting force abilities.
Force Abilities:
Light:
~Revitalize
~Force Stasis
~Force Blinding
~Malacia
~Crucitorn
~Combustion
Neutral:
~Battlemind
~Shatterpoint (Undiscovered)
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Retra was born from one of the most notorious and vital components of the galactic underworld. She is the daughter of Talon Karrde, a former information broker and smuggler that was known for his reputation of intel from all sides of all walks of life through the galaxy. His shady and secretive ways had led him to a lavish life of benefit until the war. Ironically he was known for being noble and honest, laying low with his info-broker organization until The Sith placed a bounty on his head for his particular talents, thus seeking refuge and a reluctant alliance with the Jedi. He leaked trade secrets covertly to the Jedi forces, even to Luke himself. His smugglers alliance was then absorbed in the New Republic during the war and withstanding, making a covert branch of the New Republic focused on gathering intel and knowledge of any potential threats or information. Some years after the war ended he met a younger woman and conceived Retra thereafter. She was born under a relatively spoiled but also stern lifestyle, constantly being monitored and pushed by her father to make something of herself. She was raised with discipline and poise, and joining among the ranks of the Jedi since she was a youngling. She also grew deeply interested in the ways of the technology in the galaxy. She started to develop an affinity for systems and functions while young, and working her way through the known worlds as a young innovative mind of proficiency in network science.
It was on her 14th birthday where her father and some of the Jedi alliance gave Retra the gift of a light-based bow and arrow, whom she dubbed "Bowie". She forever fell in love with the weapon, using it more recreationally than anything, until she took up training at the Academy to become a Jedi Master one day. Retra is they type to venture to uncharted territories alone just to get a thrill of adventure and survivalism, and to push her potential to the greatest levels. She had even been doing so since 13 years old. Recently, the adventures have branched to uncharted worlds and systems, landing her some trouble with her parents and with the Jedi Council. Her quiet nature entices people to believe she's easy going and mundane, but inside she's packed with adventure. On the side she programs network systems and practices flying, and for fun she mainly seeks out unfamiliar places, rather on Coruscant or beyond. She has the promise to become an innovative genius, with her father wanting her to join the intel organization managing network systems and perhaps creating a new one altogether, but she has plans of becoming a powerful Jedi Master, not for strength, but for purpose and destiny. And nothing will stop her form her path. So she thinks.
Other: She LOVES adventure and exploration. Very quiet and reserved when around others, but open when alone. Appears lame of mentally lapsed, but really has an incredible intelligence. Extremely flexible and aerodynamic. Has a rather large appetite. For her status among the New Republic, she sometimes hangs with shifty characters and aliens. She's afraid of being absolutely alone but ironically loves to be independent. Her favorite color is blue/purple hybrid she calls it "galaxy". Really mature for her age.
"You will try..." -Anakin Skywalker talking to Obi-Wan as he becomes consumed to Darth Vader.
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To put my opinion on the matter. Shatterpoint should either be banned or nerfed.
It is a very advanced force power and breaks just about everything.
It is a very advanced force power and breaks just about everything.
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I see your view, and I was thinking that too, but Mace had it along with a number of Sith who all met their demise. To count it out of the Star Wars Universe would be like cutting out Inhuman DNA in Marvel. Beings can have it, but not necessarily have it unlocked to full prowess. Unless it's offensive or absolutely staggering to the GM I'll remove it. Other than that, I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE ACTION TO COMMENCE! giggity.
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