As some have done, I am going to make pre-made character bios in my own blog. They will be labeled into which genre they will belong in. This thread will serve the purpose of posting links to the character bios that I have finished for the community to give me constructive criticism to further flesh out, balance, and expand upon my characters. I want the community to thoroughly analyze my characters personality, powers in some cases, and backstorys to make me be sure that the ideas I have are properly portrayed to future role play masters and fellow role players alike. I want you to ask me questions on my characters personalities. I also am not too in touch with the genera power a single character is permitted on this web site, so I would like to see people stating if a power is too strong, or if their powers are too weak to stand a chance here. So fire away. We'll start with Gordon Lawrance, a fantasy genre roleplay. Pleas do ask as many questions as you can, I want to be sure that my bios are all well made. Link: http://www.iwakuroleplay.com/xfa-blog-entry/gordon-lawrence-a-squee-creation.2370/ Be ruthless! Even if you fear being mean, I want to flesh my characters out perfectly! If you think I need to add entire sections, that's fine too. Hit me with your best shot!