I have a couple pages written and it would mean a lot to me if someone could look it over. People are free to give any sort of feedback they like as I don't have anyone in real life that I will let look at my writing and also take the time to point stuff out to me. The only thing is I will most likely be using it for a book so I would appreciate it if I could PM you the links to the writing. Thank you for any help and feel free to either post here and have me PM you or PM me first. Either way works.