Hello guys! I have a request for anyone willing! I am currently enduring finals week in school and need a revision of a piece of creative writing in order to do my final assignment. Unfortunately, I missed out on the opportunity to have it revised by my classmates, so instead I am coming to iwaku for help! I have about six pages of a short story that needs revision within the next week, and anyone willing to give me feedback would be greatly appreciated. This could be anything from grammatical or spelling errors to suggestions for a better layout for the story. This revision is necessary in order to write a revised 15 page paper for my final grade, so the more revision and feedback, the better! I have attached a pdf file of my paper, and if anyone wants a different format to revise, please just let me know! And in advance, Thank you!!!