Yeah, I should have put that in the cs(going to put that in there now) she likes the word Princess more then Queen. Queen sounds like an old lady title and it's also out of respect to Lilith, the true Queen of the Lust Realm.I've fixed it now :) I hope it stays like that ugh.
@Salsacookies Thanks for giving me the heads up. Looking forward to the completion of your character.
@Shattered♦Secrets™ Your CS's looking good. Although her rank does confuse me. Is she called Princess Kitana because she wants to be called Princess Kitana, even if she's a Queen already? And how do the Vixennas interact with the original Succubi and Incubi, how do they feel about them? Do they really need to kill everyone they have sex with? Just some followup questions but overall, you're accepted.
In Hebrew Abaddon means Destroyer.Actually Abaddon pertains to a bottomless pit. It's Greek version, Apollyon, means Destroyer. Kinda the same but not exactly. Haha
Have a massive headache, so it'll be up tomorrowish.@Ozferatu doesn't the Hebrew translation of Abaddon say it's a place of destruction rather than it being destroyer itself? I don't know, I read the Greek translation was the Destroyer.
How goes your CS btw?
After much time and consideration, I'm sorry to say that your CS needs a little, if not some major, tweaking. Though I find your choice of words appealing and impressive, I find it hard to accept a character that isn't hashed out historically. To be quite frank, it seems you were lazy, although for me to assume that as truth is wrong unless you were, in fact, lazy to write a history. Scarborough is a nice character with an amazing set of skills and abilities; he's a pirate and holds a respectable position, but would you kindly hash it out? There are many questions to be answered. You can skip the whole "Scarborough was born to this and that, so and so..." Rather, people would like to read more about the character, how he/she was weaned, how he came to hold such a position, and what makes Scarborough uniquely Scarborough. You're entering a storyline of quality, so for me to accept Scarborough, whose background is basically his position and what he does, would be unfair for the one who made Kitana, who really organised his character's past, present, and goal for the future. No worries. :)CS is finished