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Only just got done working, getting on to fixing the CS now.

Hmm, need a good replacement for the Error power, with one theme in mind...
 
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Casanova Del la Rosa said:
Asuras did you recheck Sparkle yet?
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The two powers are still a little off of one another. Perhaps her power is instead to be able to control already existing animals using fabricated baked goods (maybe also that she can coerce people with them too ;))
 
Limit's one character/user at the moment.
 
Alright, I edited the Error Powers to have one theme in mind on Seti Kleon
 
Sweetness, much obliged.
 
Youn
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Age​
Gender​
15​
Female​
Skills​
Equipment​
Youn has literally no mention worthy life skills, she isn't even capable of reading if not for Faust.​
Youn is in possession of various everyday life objects stashed away at her base. Though originally they all belonged to now dead people.​
Past Year Doom Covenant
  • There was nothing Youn knew about her past life, nor did she care; after all, she lived in the now, not in the past. With a whole new world to explore, she was, and still is, just out for fun. With no guardian to take care of her, a lacking understanding of moralities and the wish for survival, it didn't take long to test out her newfound Error, ultimately attaining her first Neverborn: The Pack.

    With The Pack on her side, and a few more Neverborn added to the mix, there was a growing hunger that the needed to be satisfied. This in return, combined with the unknown nature of Error, gave her an infamous title among the ranks of Painstakers.

    Currently, Youn is idling around the middle floors of layer 1, abusing a abandoned office-building as a warehouse for all the stuff she gets her hands on.
  • Youn is capable of infecting other life forms with Abyssal seeds. While this seeds show nearly no effect on strong individuals, they are capable of inflicting seizures, pain, hallucinations and alike that could kill an ordinary child, if not just drive insane. The true purpose of those seeds however reveals upon the hosts death, empowering the seed in a such a way that a Neverborn is called into existence: Demonlike beings bound to that particular seed.

    Youn is capable of utilizing those seeds by either implanting them in her own body or corrupt objects to gain, either way, various passive and active abilities while tearing on her sanity. While a seed can be taken from an object without any loss, implanting them into her own body is permanent. She is also able to call forth the true gestalt of a Neverborn under her command, trading mentioned abilities with a temporary minion. As long as the seed is intact a Neverborn is theoretically immortal, even if the summoned body is destroyed, though sustained damage on the summoned body takes a long time to regenerate and goes hand-in-hand with the impact of the passive and active abilities gained through corruption or implanting.

    The Pack, #FFA500
    A Neverborn consisting of an ever growing pack of fiendish black dog-like creatures capable of combining and splitting into different sizes. The creatures are agile, deadly and capable of traversing through connected shadows but ridiculously weak against light. While their intelligence is limited to an eternally growing hunger, with Youn as the pack leader they are capable of following commands and sharing information in a hive-mind kind of fashion. Giving them the purpose of information collection and food collection. The current number of The Pack counts towards 7.

    If not out on the field, Youn shares part of their agility, jaw-strength and teeth as well the attribute of traveling through shadows.
    Faust, #FFFF00
    A Neverborn that resembles everyone and yet no one. Faust is a intelligent being that possesses knowledge in many fields of occult and normal expertise. That knowledge however is not easily shared. He likes to plot behind his master's back, while pretending to be a nice person. Because he's Faust. And everyone called 'Faust' isn't actually going to be a good guy.

    While in her body Youn's learning capability is greatly increased.
    Rats, #2B60DE
    A huge humanoid-like 4 meter towering giant. Between the gaps of the violently flicked together skin, adorned by all kind of skin diseases, intestines spilling out can be seen. Sluggish, slow and stupid like bread, though sill following very basic commands, Rats smells like 1000 deceased orphaned kitten in a closed environment. Carries enough disease that a quarantine zone would be established due to its presence alone. Also capable of regenerating lost body-mass at a steady pace.

    This gross thing gives Youn an immunity against most diseases, regenerative capabilities and the ability to make parts of her body acidic by will.
    Terror, #F62217
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    		Another humanoid shaped, slim white, Neverborn which sole reason of existence is to protect the queen: Youn. With a mindset of that complete protection can be achieved trough destruction of all enemies, and everyone but Youn and Terror being the enemy, maintaining control isn't an easy task. Nonetheless Terror boasts a destructive combination of power, speed, intelligence, endurance and the ability of various energy particle shaped attacks.

    One with Youn, Terror grants her access to weaker particle shaping, though lack of knowledge renders her incapable of doing so for the moment.


 
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Asuras said:
The two powers are still a little off of one another. Perhaps her power is instead to be able to control already existing animals using fabricated baked goods (maybe also that she can coerce people with them too ;))
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Ok I changed it her baked goods can now hypnotize people and animals lol. I just want a power that could control animals or have them help her since she's not really a hands on attacker xD. She can go there if she wants though.
 
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Name: Yerin Ardos
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Where are you today? Shortly after waking up, Yerin was beat to near death in an alley. This gave him a new sense of justice and an intense hate for crime of all kinds. He joined Policus shortly after, and is now an experienced law enforcer.
Error Power: Yerin has the power to manipulate the air to do almost anything. He often controls it in simple ways like controlling wind, but he can also change the air pressure and even heat to his will. Because of this, his power can be deadly.
Skills/Abilities: Yerin has a very strong sense of justice, and as such, can be quite harsh at time. He has above-average powers of deduction and sometimes solves crimes alone.
Normally, he is a very gentlemanly, nice person, but he has a very hot temper. Because of this, he is one of the reasons for the rumors of police brutality.
Equipment/Possessions: All he has is of value is his standard-issue rifle and uniform.
 
Damn, alright, I'll shelf Doctor Zombie Man for now.
 
Kheda'Ahn Garuda
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"To see, is to believe."

Name:
Kheda'Ahn Garuda -- 'Kheda'

Age:
Has no real idea of her age, but if asked her answer will typically bounce around somewhere within the twenties.

Gender:
Female

Where are you today?:

Finding herself in a strange, and unknown place, Kheda'Ahn Garuda awoke with only the knowledge of her name to comfort her in such a confusing time. Her past a mystery that only came as glimpses in her dreams, she wandered Neo Babylon for months in search of any answers that could explain her identity. Lost, homeless, and alone, she made do with odd jobs, and cheap work to keep her going. During this time she lived a stagnant, and unproductive life. Questions still unanswered and even more beginning to pile up, she made the choice to retrace her steps, returning to the place she started from in hopes that it would settle even a bit of her curiosity for the truth.

The dark alley ways of inner city held no such comfort, but within its depths something else awoke before her, and within her. A creature unlike any she had ever seen had made its presence known. Creeping from the darkness, and seething with negative energy its intentions were to kill her, but before it could strike a brilliant light came to her aid. Like a flare in the darkness, a single glowing orb had incinerated the beast before it could lay hands on her. Its body burning and the ashes shimmering into glowing crystals that soon morphed into another orb. Saved by this light and terrified of the darkness that hid within the cities most treacherous corners, Kheda had come to a decision and a personal revelation. Since that day she has taken the title of a Cleaner, believing herself to be a natural force against the 'darkness' that dwells within Neo Babylon.

Error Powers - Will o' Wisps
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Naturally manifesting outside of her body, Kheda's internal mana takes the form of levitating orbs of light that can be controlled by her sheer will. Also known as Will o' Wisps, she can manipulate the shape, momentum, direction, luminosity, and density of her orbs allowing them to play both a offensive, and defensive role in and out of battle. Their place is typically surrounding Kheda, circling her in a ghostly dance when in a comfortable environment, but when in public their disguised as thin glowing strands within her hair.

Skills/Abilities:

- By vanquishing the creatures that dwell within the city Kheda can 'purify' these evil beings, turning them into natural mana which is then absorbed into her, or her orbs. This heightens her power for a limited time but with constant use due to her orbs manifesting, and other trivial uses, the energy usually burns out quick.

- Useful for a quick getaway or even just for fast travel, Kheda can shape her orbs into flat, oval discs that she can ride and balance on. While its much easier for her to stay low to the ground when traveling, with heavy concentration she can lift herself to great heights on a single disc--a skill that's saved her ass on more occasions then she'd like to admit.

- Naturally honing in on mana, Kheda can mark a person, or object through the means of a kiss. Leaving traces of her own mana she can track, and find her target no matter the location. Depending on her connection with a living being that's been marked, she can sometimes feel changes in their mood, or life force even at great distances.

- Acting as a natural source of light the wisps can illuminate even the darkest of places. There is no corner or shadow that can escape their light, and when wielding in battle the orbs can burn skin, and ignite most material it comes into contact with.

Equipment/Possessions:

- Preferring to travel light, Kheda often carries a messenger bag along her shoulder. Usually filled with trivial items such as cheap food, or items/trash she finds on the ground, her bag is considered a useful 'pit' seeing as theres almost always something handy within it.

- The only other significant item she carries around is an outdated camera capable of printing out small, and colored pictures. Not working all the time, a hard smack to the top is all that it takes to get the busted thing to turn on, and spit out pictures.

- While it isn't something she's proud, and something she's most certainly working on, Kheda lives on 53rd floor of the inner city. Her 'home' is made up of sheets of metal, broken metal and number of tarps, rugs and worn down tapestries. Scavenging most of her furniture, the inside of the makeshift home is made up of a torn couch, an old coffee table, and a single mattress that she sleeps on. Against the back wall plugged into the building the house sits beside, is a small portable stove, and a radio.
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I'll be sticking with my Felicia for now then ahaha. I'll be making some edits to her CS to further specify on her Error Power and her Abilities, but they'll remain the same. Just give them more definition and to point out the limitations. Just a heads up.
 
I know :D I'm really excited for this to start and the characters are so diverse! (supporting the idea of the band btw). Katergi's power is particularly cool, and I'm interested in how Volkov came to be how he is.
 
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Name: Koi Ross
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Where are you today?
Koi has no recollection of her own life before reawakening in Neo Babylon beyond brief glimpses seen through her visions. With absolutely nothing to her name, she was forced to live off of scraps for awhile, taking advantage of homeless shelters around the city. At one of these shelters she met Fanty Shark, who got his name and wealth from his mother's side of the family.

When she met him, she had a vision of Fanty kneeling down to propose. Curious, she began to talk and socialize with him. Socializing turned into dating over time, until eventually Fanty got down on one knee and pulled out a ring. Now, the two of them have been engaged and living together for close on three months.​
Error Power:
Timeless Memoires - Sometimes upon contact with an individual Koi enters a state of synchronicity with them and gains a vision of one of their memories, past or future. The stronger the emotional attachment to the memory, the more likely it is for Koi to receive this vision. Of course, memories of the future are never set in stone as long as the meddling of Errors is concerned.​
Skills/Abilities:
  • Flight - With the help of a hoversuit, Koi has been spending a lot of time practicing flight around the city.
  • Dancing - It didn't take long for Koi to learn that her feet have a penchant for moving to the rhythm.
Equipment/Possessions:
  • Hoversuit - Composed of light metal composites covering her upper back and shoulders, as well as a helmet, it lets her enjoy several hours of unimpeded flight before needing to recharge.
  • Level 178 Apartment - While more accurately belonging to her fiance Fanty, it serves as a luscious place to live, complete with holographic projections for any mood.
 
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Laina's too busy with her daily heroics and money scrounging to join some random band.

Justice > Music
 
Music is... for the lower class? I don't know. Derision can be hard sometimes.
 
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