Prosetry from the Persona

Discussion in 'THREAD ARCHIVES' started by PersonaH, Jan 11, 2010.

  1. I'm gonna do my best to put a few of my literary works up here. Anyways -- Feedback is definitely appreciated as long as it is always constructive. I hope you all enjoy my works. :)
     
  2. Lightning synapse completes my
    thoughts
    Like a violent storm of my
    emotions
    Their loud and they
    echo
    And make me feel so very
    alone

    If I can count the stars that aren't
    there
    And make wishes based off of false
    hope
    Then you can certainly question my
    well being

    "Are you...
    OK"
    "Is everything...
    alright"
    "Are you...
    hurt"

    But I
    understand
    I can manage on my
    own
    No need for you to
    ask
    Know that I will be
    OK
     
  3. I love the way that everything is aligned!

    I love the cadence of it!
     
  4. This deserves a double-post:

    MOAAAAAAAAAR!
     
  5. ....Seriously. Please?