Prosetry from the Persona

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PersonaH

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I'm gonna do my best to put a few of my literary works up here. Anyways -- Feedback is definitely appreciated as long as it is always constructive. I hope you all enjoy my works. :)
 
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PersonaH

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Lightning synapse completes my
thoughts
Like a violent storm of my
emotions
Their loud and they
echo
And make me feel so very
alone

If I can count the stars that aren't
there
And make wishes based off of false
hope
Then you can certainly question my
well being

"Are you...
OK"
"Is everything...
alright"
"Are you...
hurt"

But I
understand
I can manage on my
own
No need for you to
ask
Know that I will be
OK
 

Hydronine

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I love the way that everything is aligned!

I love the cadence of it!
 

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This deserves a double-post:

MOAAAAAAAAAR!
 

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....Seriously. Please?