EXERCISE Poetry Challenge -- The Blue Fluff

Discussion in 'REFINING WRITING' started by Fluffy, Nov 4, 2010.

  1. I want to hold some poetry challenges for the creative section. ^_^ Depending on how many people make participate, I'll try to make a new one a couple times a month!

    Now, this one can go in different ways. Blue fluff: write a poem about it. It can be silly, it can be sad, it can be philosophical. Write about where it came from, why it exists or...whatever, really. I'm basically giving something for you all to work with.

    I'll even provide a small example;

    My friend the pink fluff
    and I played truth or dare
    Pink thinks that he's so tough
    Tougher than a bear

    I dared him to hold his breath
    For an entire minute or two
    He began to look like death
    Because pink fluff was turning
    blue!

    Hope that sufficed for an example! Show me what you all got. :3
     
  2. Music played in the background
    While I clutched her hand in mine
    We spoke without a sound
    She giggled, I fished for my last dime

    Delighted, she flashed me her smile
    Cotton candy in hand, that moment was enough
    As I looked into eyes devoid of guile
    I wanted to kiss the lips that I fed this blue fluff

    Bah, don't blame me for it being lame, I'm trying to be supportive >>;
     
  3. XD Thanks Kitti wife. I love you.

    Diana wanted more stuff to get people involved with writing section. I phail'd.
     
  4. Why did I choose blue,
    I know you did too,
    I find my mind a shattered shell,
    The blue fluff has brought this hell.

    Does it affect you the same,
    Did you smile when the choice came,
    As my breath begins to fall,
    I see there was no choice at all.
     
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    <_< >_> <_< Any rhyme is accidental, I do free verse. And...I uh...I guess I took it a diff direction in how I did it. I hope that’s ok Fluffernutt ^__^;

    Me being sleepy and writing = I get stuff like this O_e;
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    This isn’t a game, it’s when<o:p></o:p>


    Hearts are won or broken.<o:p></o:p>


    Everyone must love and be loved, it’s naturally unspoken.
    <o:p></o:p>


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    Baby, try to let me explain things!<o:p></o:p>


    Love isn’t an easy Undertaking!<o:p></o:p>


    Eventually,
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    Fights and Little Upsets, occur. <o:p></o:p>


    But keep your head up, my best Friend, For…<o:p></o:p>


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    I’ll always love you!



    Love,


    The blue fuff.
     
  6. My mind is a strange place you see
    full of rubber swords and a bubble tree,
    It has a perpetual state of being
    A state I call "idea spring."

    New ideas sprout and bud every day
    much like flowers in may.
    Alas, a famine has fallen on this land of mine
    I have lost the urge for grand design.

    The fabric of my imagination frays, leaving behind
    bits of blue fluff.
    a careless load of laundry
    that was enough.
    To see that my notepad
    would be consumed by the stuff.

    ~Ryex
     
  7. Give me the fluff of darkest days
    The blue of twilight at dusk
    Give me the words mixed with razors
    The torment, the torture and lust

    Give me the filler that haunts my dreams
    That light fluffy blue, nightmare juice
    Give me the screams and the sorrow
    Give me the sick, twisted youth

    With broken legs, I am crawling
    Gripping the glass til it breaks.
    Hopelessly, endlessly falling
    My life is like fluff, its a fake.

    Give me the dark mist of morning
    Give me the Dawn, painted blue
    Give me the fluff that I'm living
    This life is a painted black hue.
     
  8. Do Not Eat

    I have some blue fluff,

    It is fluffy and swirly,

    Not cotton candy.
     
    #8 AkikoYukito, Aug 16, 2014
    Last edited: Nov 8, 2014