Poetry Challenge # 32 --Naani

[Lovie the OG]

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For this week's challenge, I ask that you write a Naani! (click on link for information and examples!)

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one of Indian's most popular Telugu poems. Naani means an expression of one and all.
This week's challenge also has a certain theme to it!
I want you to write about a sunset!

Here are some ideas to get you started:

Bright
Orange
Horizon
Blinding
Beach
Love
Beautiful

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Have fun, and try using bbcodes to make your Naani look pretty!:)

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[Acquariana]

I'm playing around with my made-up language and thought it would be fun to do a Naani in it. x]

Astra'na Superarú
Amor meu,
Astra'na superarú
P'ra te todocheri.
Speratte'm.

Translation:
My love
I'll surpass the stars
To reach you.
Wait for me.

An English One:

Unmapped
This expansive cosmos
Remains uncharted,
Let's map it together,
Wandering forever

 

[Sarah]

A day ends in beauty,
In spite of its events.
To give hope,
For a bright tomorrow.

 

[Astaroth]

I look at you
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That small shy smile with a wealth of feeling
Love

 

[Kitti]

In Music

Sound shimmers
Echoing opalescent
A melody unparalleled
Striking chords of the soul​

 

[FJ22]

I wouldn't call you crimson,
Nor glory,
Nor bright
I would happily call you the beginning of the night.

 

[Wizard Secretary Doxa]

The light of day
Fades within the night
That last ray
Its the last memorized

 

[Fluffy]

As the sun is swallowed
the sky bleeds red
A colorful sacrifice
which brings starry nights

 

[Brother Gabriel]

Beautiful is the skies
Lovely Looking at you . with no doubt in mind
Understanding with no hate for you
Elegant is the skies

Beautiful
Lovely
Understanding
Elegant

BLUE

 

[Ashi]

Sunset

Black horizon trimmed in red
Rays of golden light
Shine on technicolor clouds
Sunset yields to night.

 

[noodle]

The End

As the sun goes down,
I reflect on what has come to pass.
Love, and now life,
Gone, with her.​

 

[PoetLore]

Hand in hand
On the old weathered bench
Two sit as oft they chose
Together through another day's close