Planet Z, Academy X-Y [Mega-Man Like RP]

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OK intro is up hope it's good and I didn't do anything wrong.
 
Bones doesn't notice any problems, the text style hurts Bones' eyes, and he noticed some possible grammatical errors, but it was nice, interesting. Bones does enjoy seeing how each person interprets what happens in a battle, yours was lacking in details, but I don't know if Crimson would care.
 
Body doesn't seem like he would get along with Wep. Wep enjoys rending his opponents limb from limb, he was bred to.
 
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Oh and yeah I know the lack of detail but I'm not the best with detail hopefully that gets better. My grammar I always struggle with that, I need to work on that and thanks for the feed back.
 
No problem, I don't usually give feedback, since I'm not the GM.
 
*Struts in his birthday suit in the foreground*
 
Oh S---! Sorry I haven't got alerts from this thread. Sorry, what did I miss?
 
Not much I guess ^^ Everyone introduced their characters and mine attending math class xD
 
Okay, well I remember mine was going back to class after his fight.
 
Okay. Sorry I was not getting alerts at all.
 
Biollante plants a rose in this thread. Mind the teeth.
 
-puts awesome sauce on nachos-
 
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