I have a Yaoi plot: It is set during the Second World War. A man and his sweet heart just got married. After coming back from their honeymoon, the young couple are met with horrible news. The husband was drafted into the army. He left the next day for camp. As the story continues he slowly looks less and less forward to returning home as his feelings grow for another man in his company. Only question now is anyone going to survive in this world? Does this sound like a good idea? Should I change anything?