@Angelic Fusion Ah, sorry! I almost forgot about this! Giving the race sheet a more thorough look now...
they have manifested vast ends of technology due to their connection to the Occult and abyssal forces of their plane.
What "abyssal forces"? Are those the same as the "abyssal entity" and "abyssal voice" you mentioned earlier, or something else?
The devices they use are of otherworld design and simply exist through the will of Ira.
You mentioned Ira a lot... can you elaborate on Ira's relationship with these people? Obviously she's the deity that they worship, but is she, like... unquestionably present in their everyday life? If these "devices" that they use are simply created through her will then that must mean that she's very involved in the everyday affairs of the Vande, at least.
their sheer ability to construct materials and infuse them with their planes chaotic entities makes them off putting to those creatures that know of their existence.
What is a "chaotic entity"?
Under powers/abilities, you mentioned "abyssal entities" and "chaotic energy", but not "chaotic entities".
Despite being an Abyssal plane the many areas of this existence are covered in wilderness and are often far more beautiful than one may even imagine. But, despite this temperate zone the cultural capitals stand in contrast with one another yet live in harmony. On the two polar sides of the plane are the Arctic Zone and the Immensely volcanic zone. Both of which hold the capital of the North and South of their society and the intermingling of these two peoples grants the race it's elemental resistance.
Is this supposed to be your description of the realm? If so, I'm still going to need more of a description of what your realm
is in terms of a... cosmic sense, for lack of a better term?
This description would be adequate for any non-earth realm, but all these references to "the abyss" and "planes of existence" give me the feeling that the Maw of Ira is supposed to be a bit more than just another world. The fact that you described it as the "88th circle" of the Abyss just adds to this feeling.
In fact, what is "The Abyss"? I feel like I need to first know that before I can wrap my head around the nature of its 88th circle.
Also, what are the videos supposed to connect to? Standing on their own, I'm really not sure what I'm supposed to get out of them. Maybe it would make more sense to include the videos if you gave each one a brief introduction, such as, "this is an example of [X]" -- or, even better, you could weave the videos into the meat of your race sheet by creating links out of relevant bits of text. Does that make sense?
All of my comments in my previous post still stand.