Naruto: Shinobi Civil War

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We pay a price for peace. And we pay it in blood.

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It took us four years to learn this lesson. Three that encompassed the globe, and one that nearly annihilated it. We've lost friends, family, and even rivals to our bloodthirst. But at last, the Shinobi have formed bonds forged in fire that will last for eternity. But so soon after war, already we face threats from within...

As the sun sets on Akatsuki, so does Yugure rise. The dusk of the Shinobi, this mysterious organization has set its sights on returning the world to its original form: Pure chakra; an utter maelstrom of chaos, which Yugure believes to be the only true existence. The very nature of life is an aberration, and can only be cured with annihilation. They pervade every aspect of society, and some rumors have even been spread that at least one of the Kage, our Shinobi leaders, is one of them. So far, they've limited themselves to minor anarchy, such as arson and small raids on insignificant countries. But already they've shown signs of greater aspiration, with an assassination attempt having been made on the Water Daimyo. Even without any great successes, Yugure has shown that they are a force to be reckoned with. Konoha faces a great threat, and has assigned a good deal of Anbu manpower to rooting out Yugure members.

But as anarchy rises on one side of the political arena, another has been formed to oppose it. Branch, originally a Konoha Root splinter cell, has spread to all of the Hidden Villages save for Sunagakure. The Branch cells believe that, for their villages' participation in the Fourth Shinobi World War, they deserve a reward of some kind. Konohagakure demands land from Suna, Kumogakure demands land from Kirigakure, and so on. For this reason, they have come to deeply oppose Yugure, which has made them allies in the eyes of many political figures in the Hidden Villages. However, they hold allegiance to none save for their cell leaders. The most prominent figure of them all is Mito Hyuga, who runs the Konoha cell, and is a major opposing force to the Hokage Naruto Uzumaki.

In the middle of these two factions are the loyal Shinobi of Konoha, from Anbu elite to Genin novices, whose only goal is to maintain the peace that their families suffered to make.

Do you have the heart to uphold the Will of Fire?


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  • All characters are in Konoha, but can come from different villages.
  • No Kage-level characters.
  • All characters must be either Genin, Chunin, or Jonin.
  • Jutsu are limited - Jonin can have 15-20 to start with; Chunin can have 10-15; and Genin can have 5-10.
  • My word is law.
  • Any co-GMs I appoint also dictate the law.
  • I can reject a CS at any time based on quality issues.
  • Relating back to the previous one, Intermediate-Adept writing skill.
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CS

[spoiler | Background Information|]
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Name
:
Age:
DOB (Date of Birth) & Age:
Sexuality:
Clan:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Hobbies:

Parents: [optional]
Grandparents: [optional]
Siblings: [optional]

|Shinobi|
Birthplace
:
Village Allegiance:
Ninja Rank: [Academy, Genin, Chunin, Jounin, Kage, Legendary]

History
:

[/spoiler]

[Spoiler | Arsenal |]

Weapons

Name of Weapon:

Appearance:

Description:

Combat

Strengths:

Weaknesses:

Notable Skills: [Optional]

Power Balance

Ninjutsu: [1-5]
Taijutsu: [1-5]
Genjutsu: [1-5]
Intelligence: [1-5]
Strength: [1-5]
Speed: [1-5]
Stamina : [1-5]
Hand Seals: [1-5]
Other:[explain] [1-5]
Total:



Jutsu

{Link all your Jutsu here!}


Kekkei Genkai
{OPTIONAL}

Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Clan:
Description:
(If a Dojutsu) Appearance:

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[spoiler | Summons |]
(OPTIONAL)

Broad classification
Species:
Size: [How big are they normally? Small, medium, large, between? Both of two?]
Jutsu:
History w/ Humans:

Specific Animal
Age:
Size:
Jutsu:
History w/ summoner:

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Cast
  1. Katsuro Uchiha (Jonin, Team Katsuro) - @The Philosoraptor
  2. Tadashi Shiro (Genin, Team Onryō) - @LibratheScales
  3. Fudo Saizo (Chunin, Team Onryō) - Spectre Spectre
  4. Kai Hyuga (Chunin, Independent) - @Maximus
  5. Onryō Buraku (Jonin, Team Onryō) - Mr. Briggs Inc. Mr. Briggs Inc.
  6. Hiraku Hyuga (Genin, Team Katsuro) - timv999 timv999
  7. Satsuki Himura (Chunin, Team Onryō) - @Cybermoon
  8. Koryuu Hisaki (Chunin, Team Katsuro) - @Kuroshi
  9. Kazuki Uzumaki (Chunin, Team Katsuro) - @Ginutusu
 
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Name
: Tadashi Shiro
DOB (Date of Birth) & Age: 13 (12/24)
Sexuality: Heretosexual
Clan: Shiro
Likes: Reading, comminucation, animals, sweets
Dislikes: Having no voice, losing his cards, his cards getting disorganized, people thinking his silence is out of spite.
Hobbies: Reading, Mouthing words

Parents: Haru & Eiko Shiro

|Shinobi|
Birthplace
: Konohagakure
Village Allegiance: Konohagakure
Ninja Rank: Genin

History:
Tadashi was born to a nice family in Konohagakure. He was born an albino, though none of his immediate line of ancestry pointed to bearing the trait, oddly enough. He was born with a strange dysfunction in his voice box, the symptoms having some resemblance to Aphonia. He was unable to cry, laugh, make noises, or even practice speech as a baby, so his parents had to closely watch him. Even though he knew the words, he couldn't speak them as much as he wanted to, so he started reading novels at a young age. His parents wondered if he was deaf, so he was taken to be checked multiple times until his vocal cords were confirmed to have developed in a way they could not vibrate. He had to rely mostly on hand writing and sign language to communicate with people, even having a pack of note cards for simple communication, just so people wouldn't mistake him for being rude. He entered the academy, and actually did well without his voice. He had a rather high amount of intellegence in place of his silence. He read often in class, seeming not to be very interested in the classes, but he heard every word. He graduated recently with flying colors, no sooner because he wished to have the full several years of experience rather than graduate younger. His uncle, who is specialized in the Summoning Technique and has a few animal contracts on him, had let him choose one animal to have. Out of all nine, he chose the Tanooki, which felt to be a good choice to him.

Weapons

Name of Weapon: Generic Shinobi Tools

Appearance: (We all know what they look like)

Description: What every shinobi uses

Combat

Strengths: Good tactical and analyzational skills, Able to summon an animal, can silently signal team mates.

Weaknesses: Can't shout out for help, rather weak, can't warn team mates who do not have him in their range of sight.

Notable Skills: High Intelligence (Not super genius high, but he can think of more in detail than the average person; His IQ is at least 182) [Optional]

Power Balance

Ninjutsu
: [1-5] 3
Taijutsu: [1-5] 1
Genjutsu: [1-5] 1
Intelligence: [1-5] 5
Strength: [1-5] 2
Speed: [1-5] 2
Stamina : [1-5] 2
Hand Seals: [1-5] 2
Total: 17


Jutsu

Standard Academy-learned Jutsu

Summoning Jutsu

Broad classification
Species: Raccon Dog/ Tanooki
Size: Range from Small to Medium (The largest about the size of a fully grown stallion)
Jutsu:

Earth Release: Rock Shelter
Earth Release: Earth-Style Wall
Earth Release: Mud Spore
Earth Release: Mudslide
Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm
Earth Release: Earth and Stone Bamboo Shoot

Other techniques under Earth Release could be learned, but nothing too drastic.

History w/ Humans: The Tanooki and humans have some rough edges. Some humans hunt and skin them for their coats, others sign the scroll and become their friends. They are very rarely found without summoning, for they like to hide.

Specific Animal
Age: 2 Years old
Size: Medium (The size of a young buck)
Jutsu:
Earth Release: Earth-Style Wall
Earth Release: Mudslide
Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm
History w/ summoner: The Tanooki, shortly nicknamed Tannie, was summoned by Tadashi only three times. They established a mutual relationship of sorts, and are willing to work together than be a hindrance.
 
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General
Name
: Kai Yamada
Age: 21
Village Allegiance: Konohagakure
Ninja Rank (or relative Skill Level): Chunin
Ninja Job:
Chakra Type/s: Fire

Databook Ability statistic info:
This is just for a general idea of the ninja's skill. Each can be in a rank of 1-5. 1 being lowest skill level, 5 showing mastery. Genin get about 15 points stretched over all if they are good, chunin about 20, jounin about 25-30, and kage would maybe get like 30-35? Again, this is all speculative. Some people spend more time as a Chuunin than others, so some may have more. It's all speculation, and not 'set in stone'.

Ninjutsu: [1-5] 3
Taijutsu: [1-5] 1
Genjutsu: [1-5] 1
Intelligence: [1-5] 5
Strength: [1-5] 3
Speed: [1-5] 3
Stamina : [1-5]3
Hand Seals: [1-5] 1
Other:[explain] [1-5]
Total:20

Ninjutsu Known:

Fire Release, Fire Release: Fireball technique,Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Missile, Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique
Unique Technique: Fire Release: Fire barrage( can shoot a short barrage of fire)


Character Biography: Born and raised in Konohagure village, he was a average guy. Like most people in his village he had a affinity for fire. Born with long hair, his classmates often teased him and called him a girl. Wanting to take revenge on them, he trains hard and works on new techniques. On the day of his exam, he passed easily with flying colors due to his training. One of the youngest ninjas to pass, he would always battle people just to gain knowledge about their techniques and chakra's. He currently wonders around the village doing missions and such but does occasionally help Junin and academy ninjas.
Max, you gotta use the new Bio template.
Look under the cast list.
 

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Name: Fudo Saizo
Age: 14
Likes: Rain, salty foods, competition, training, 'brown-nosers' and people who don't think for themselves
Dislikes: Humid Heat, deadlines, refusing to defy authority to preform acts of good
Hobbies: Free-running, martial training, exploring, daydreaming

Parents: Fudo Shina and Fudo Jiro
Grandparents: [optional]
Siblings: [optional]

Birthplace: Mizu no Kuni- Kirigakure
Village Allegiance: Konohagakure
Ninja Rank: Chuunin

History:
Saizo is a bit of a rarity in his family. His family lineage consists of a strong background in fire nature chakra types. Even a strange thing in the nation of Water users, as not all shinobi are locked to the preferences of their nation. This implies that his family were likely immigrants years ago.

This means Wind chakra in itself is a rarity- but especially so in this case. His current parents are his adoptive parents from the land of fire, his Father working with the intelligence department, and his mother an academy instructor. His birth mother was killed in the last war, and he isn't sure who his father was. He was born at the end of a terrible time, and feels most at home when training. Post-war shinobi villages are still tense times.

Officially born in Kirigakure, Saizo was relocated. After his mother was killed, a konoha ninja who was close with his mother during joint war operations, was asked to take care of him. He was still an infant, had no forseeable blood relations in kirigakure- so there were no security risks in the adoption.

He graduated the academy at age 12. His mother being a teacher helped his progress. Saizo felt very comfortable learning ninjutsu, but preferred the physical feats, in an attempt to solidify his independence from the others who were practicing their jutsu at home. He took the examinations, and almost didn't pass- he won't tell people why with a straight answer. Barely passing, admittedly- he became a genin two years ago, and attended the most recent Chuunin examinations this year. Successful in completing their team mission, and winning the tiered match-up [the only one of his current ninja team]- he was promoted.

He is good friends with his genin team, but the rumor is that some things will be changing soon. Saizo is a fairly open person, so he isn't hard to get along with- but his fickle nature and daydreaming can turn some people off. He hopes to be either assigned a new team, or go active with other shinobi since rumors of tension are escalating.

His main goal is to become a part of the ANBU. He was to be part of ROOT, since he had no real alliegence to Konoha, no one would know he would have been a part of this. Though the quick adoption process of the Fudo family fizzled this out. Ultimately, he wants to make his own way, and try to unlock the secrets to his misty past. He never really got to know his birth mother, and while he isn't overcome with emotion when thinking about it- he has a nagging curiosity. His adoptive parents are supportive of the idea, but begin pressing the issue of more domestic-based goals to keep him focused. Becoming ANBU gives him access to security clearance, power, and some freedoms he doesn't have now. This is what he sees as a key to knowledge.

Though in reality- he's a bit too whimsical at this young age. His skills are certainly in the right place- but his mind is in the clouds. His next and more immediate goal is to start learning other chakra natures if he can. He will work hard, but he tends to be a bit more chaotic than lawful. Staying focused can be a problem for him. He tends to have an 'on the fence' commitment to the idea of talking to Naruto about it- mostly because he sees the anbu force as 'yes' men and women, but since its an outside opinion- its likely a skewed one. No one really knows how AnBu work other than AnBu, and the Hokage.

Being a young teenager he is still figuring things out along the way. Mostly, his mind is set in the 'here and now', and doesn't often worry about his family ties. He's still young, and has that nagging curiosity in the back of his mind- but it doesn't consume him. Not one to be tied to nostalgia- it's more an afterthought. He is more occupied with finding his own ninja way, and impressing the Jounin and Kage- like most other young shinobi.
Weapons:
2x Kunai on right leg pouch
-These are standard Kunai with handles wrapped with black tape.

2 shuriken pouches on his hips- 6 shuriken each
-Two tan shuriken puches, one on each hip. The shuriken are standard shuriken.

2 tanto horizontally on his lower back- clipped to his belt
-These tanto will be made to conduct chakra once he gets the money to upgrade them. For now, they are standard tanto, with a 10 inch blade. The handguard is small and ovular, not ornate, and is a non reflective charcoal color. The handles are wrapped in off-white tape. The sheath for the blades are twins, and are made out of a black non-reflective material.
Strengths: Physical combat, Speed

Weaknesses: Long range combat, genjutsu knowledge. Staying focused on the big picture- rather than the immediate goals.

Notable Skills: Closing the gap on enemies, using lightning fast strikes, and retreating. He uses his tantos in a switched grip style most the time, or a reverse grip. Not often are both held with the blade upright.

Power Balance
Ninjutsu: 2
Taijutsu: 4
Genjutsu: 1
Intelligence: 2.5
Strength: 3
Speed: 5
Stamina : 3
Hand Seals: 2
Total: 22.5
[upgraded slightly to fit with good chuunin level]
[WIND RELEASE]
--Wind Cutter Technique- can send a barrage, or targeted blades of wind energy toward an opponent

--Gale Palm- Can send a gust of wind outward from the user to knock away incoming projectiles , or opponents

-Academy Jutsu [substitution, shunshin, camouflage, shadow clone]

-Bukijutsu- He studies and trains with weapons- specifically two chakra absorbent tanto.

-Chakra Flow- He can control and flow his chakra through objects (wind element increases slashing and piercing power). This is used in conjunction with his bukijutsu.

Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Clan:
Description:
(If a Dojutsu) Appearance:
Species:
Size: [How big are they normally? Small, medium, large, between? Both of two?]
Jutsu:
Specific Animal
Age:
Size:
Jutsu:
History w/ summoner:
 
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Background Information
|Standard|
Name
: Kai Hyuuga
Age: 19
DOB (Date of Birth) & Age:21(8/7)
Sexuality: Heterosexual


Clan:Hyuuga
Likes:
Dislikes:
Hobbies: Sparring


Parents:
Grandparents: [optional]
Siblings:


|Shinobi|
Birthplace
: Konohagure
Village Allegiance: Konohagure
Ninja Rank: Chunin

History: (WIP)
Born and raised in Konohagure village, he was a average guy. Like most people in his village he had a affinity for fire. Born with long hair, his classmates often teased him and called him a girl. Wanting to take revenge on them, he trains hard and works on new techniques. On the day of his exam, he passed easily with flying colors due to his training. One of the youngest ninjas to pass, he would always battle people just to gain knowledge about their techniques and chakra's. He currently wonders around the village doing missions and such but does occasionally help Junin and academy ninjas.



Arsenal

Weapons

Name of Weapon: Dragon of tempest

Appearance: A katana with a black handle

Description: (2-3 paragraphs)



Combat

Strengths: Strength, and close range combat

Weaknesses: Long-range combat, Speed

Notable Skills: Being able to use jutsu quickly,closing the gap [Optional]

Power Balance

Ninjutsu: [1-5]3
Taijutsu: [1-5]1
Genjutsu: [1-5]1
Intelligence: [1-5]5
Strength: [1-5]3
Speed: [1-5]3
Stamina : [1-5]3
Hand Seals: [1-5]1
Other:[explain] [1-5]
Total:20




Kekkei Genkai

Name of Kekkei Genkai:Byukugan
Clan: Hyuuga
Description: The Byakugan gives the user a near 360º field of vision, except for one blind spot at the back of the neck above the first thoracic vertebra.The range of this vision varies between users and in fact can be improved with training. Its vision can penetrate through most solid objects and obstructions, though certain barriers may distort the Byakugan's perception somewhat.The Byakugan is also able to more effectively follow high-speed movements to better react to them. Arguably, its greatest ability is to see chakra to a greater degree than the Sharingan it can identify chakra by the specific individuals it originates from, determine when genjutsu is being used, and discern certain types of clone from the real thing. The Byakugan's ability to see chakra is so acute that it can actually see the Chakra pathway system and the 361 tenketsu that run along it. The Hyūga have devised a style of combat known as the Gentle fist that specifically takes advantage of this, wherein they strike an opponent's tenketsu to either seal or forcibly open these tenketsu, thus giving the user complete control over their opponent's chakra.


(If a Dojutsu) Appearance:



Summons
Broad classification
Species:
Size: [How big are they normally? Small, medium, large, between? Both of two?]
Jutsu:

Specific Animal
Age:
Size:
Jutsu:
History w/ summoner:
 
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Appearance:


(wearing standard shinobi footwear, shorter flowing sleeves, hair usually strewn over her face, Sound Village headband around left shoulder)

|Standard|
Name
:
Onryō Buraku
Age: 33
DOB (Date of Birth) & Age: April 5th
Sexuality: Heterosexual, although she pays such little mind to pursuits outside duty as to be practically asexual
Clan: Buraku
Likes: Fear, and the inherent respect she feels it carries; Otogakure, specifically due to its lack of focus on tradition; progress; her students; her former sensei; certain comrades.
Dislikes: The notion of honor; sentiment; decorum; bureaucracy; randomness; dalliers; the elderly (excluding her former sensei).
Hobbies: Meditation and horror films.

Parents: Miki Buraku (deceased), unknown father (possibly deceased).
Grandparents: Jagi and Hikiko Buraku (both deceased).
Siblings: None.

|Shinobi|
Birthplace
:
Land of Rice Fields (currently Otogakure)
Village Allegiance: Otogakure
Ninja Rank: Jounin

History:

[BCOLOR=#080808]Onryo was born on a caravan, into an ignoble, decentralized clan of fortune tellers, mediums, funeral workers and other untouchables. Considered pariahs by most of the outside world, they were openly accepted into the Land of Sound, a "haven for outsiders" during Orochimaru's reign. Onryo traversed the young Land of Sound along with her mother, a weathered old patriarch whose face she feared, and a few other clan members, in order to provide services of channeling and exorcism. At a young age, Onryo was groomed to be a medium. Then, on the eve of her sixth year, the party was attacked by bandits. Most of the group was grievously injured, with Onryo's mother bleeding to death while she watched. For a half an hour, she was faced with the most powerful feeling she'd ever felt: a profound sense of despair. Even as her mother's pain seemed to drag on forever, Onryo could do absolutely nothing to aid her as she bled out.[/BCOLOR]

[BCOLOR=#080808]Those who survived the bandit raid knew that Onryo would be dead weight from that point forward, now that she could not finish learning the skills that only her mother was prepared to teach her. They brought her to a nearby orphanage instead. Like many orphans within the Land of Sound, she was transferred to a ninja academy so that she might be of use to Otogakure. In time, she would come to accept this lot in life as her "true calling." After failing to learn medical techniques in a desperate bid to help her mother's soul rest in peace, her Jounin sensei took her aside and used a cruel genjutsu to drive the "wrongheaded" aspiration from her heart. Rather, he encouraged her to channel her fear and hatred into illusion techniques of her own. With this new focus, Onryo flourished, and soon gave up on concepts such as honor and familial piety. She came to believe that terror, filth, and perversion, things her clan was once reviled for, could be seen as honorable, and even ideal for ninja to achieve.[/BCOLOR]

[BCOLOR=#080808]With her newfound beliefs, and her drive to become to "ideal" kunoichi, Onryo overcame her earlier underperformance. She comfortably became a chunin, and rose through the ranks to become one of Otogakure's elite Jounin. She [/BCOLOR][BCOLOR=#080808]came to terms with her past and set about making her future in a uniquely unhealthy way. Rather than pledging to live on in spite of her pain, she came to embrace the mindset that she may as well have died on the same day as her mother. To her, regret and fear are illogical and in a way, unreal. She does not dwell on regrets, simply because she regards every event in her life as “borrowed time.” She became resigned to her inability to save lives, and simply accepted that her mother would haunt and curse her from the day she gave up, albeit still with no small degree of shame on Onryo's part for doing so. In her career as kunoichi, she would blame many unfortunate incidents in her life on what she saw as her the ghost of her mother, and her justified grudge. Yet she does not fear death, because to her, death had already come to her, and it is only by a trick of the universe that she lives. In her "borrowed time," she hopes to help Otogakure become a place that is feared and therefore respected and left alone by enemies, and raise the next generation of "ideal ninja" to enforce its place in the world for years to come.[/BCOLOR]

Upon Orochimaru's defeat at the hands of Sasuke, Otogakure fell into chaos at the hands of his rampant experiments. As a result, most of its mercenary forces fled, leaving its home-grown fighters to attempt to defend the land on their own. While Onryo, as one of the highest-ranking ninja still loyal to the Sound Village helped maintain order as best she could, numerous bandit raids on her home and feuds between hopeful usurpers to Orochimaru's power commenced. Houses were destroyed, crops were taken, and the number of ninja left alive ended up in the low 2,000s. To add to the land's strife, the continuing unrest forced most ninja to stay within Otogakure's borders, preventing much income from coming in.

Now, in an attempt to strike a deal with a larger nation in order to preserve the Land of Rice Fields' place in the world, the Daimyo has loaned Onryo to Konohagakure - a gesture of good will, sending one of their strongest ninja to help with the Yugure crisis, in the hopes of receiving seeds, livestock and building materials in exchange. Not to mention the hopes of an alliance between Leaf and Sound finally being possible; with Orochimaru ostensibly reformed and returned to his homeland, chances of the two villages' past being buried are at an all-time high for the latter's citizens.

Weapons

Name of Weapon:
Kunai, almost exclusively; her own fingernails, in a pinch.

Appearance:



Description:
Onryō, in the pursuit of her own distinct fighting style, neglected the majority of nin-tool training to focus on mastering the use of kunai. While this leaves her with subpar versatility as far as combat with weaponry is concerned, her obsessive practice with the throwing weapons paid off greatly. She can throw several in rapid succession and hit a bullseye roughly 9 times out of 10. Excepting occasions in which the target appears at a difficult or awkward angle, her precision with the tool is in the same league as that of general weapons prodigies. She carries about three times as many kunai as the average ninja.

Onryō's fingernails are long and jagged, and in addition to helping cultivate an imposing appearance, can be used as melee weapons when there's no time or freedom of movement to reach for a knife.

Strengths: Extremely skilled in the area of genjutsu, along with psychological intimidation tactics to enhance them. Proficient in the use of kunai. Formidable ninjutsu user, who has learned to layer illusions on top of physical attacks.

Weaknesses: Physically mediocre. Her intimidating, gruff nature can hinder teamwork, as well as situations requiring diplomacy.

Notable Skills: Respectable killing intent, capable of dropping a housefly from across a small room. Obscures her hand seals in the sleeves of her kimono.

Power Balance

Ninjutsu: 4
Taijutsu: 2
Genjutsu: 5
Intelligence: 4
Strength: 2
Speed: 2
Stamina: 3
Hand Seals: 5
Ningenjutsu - the layering of illusions atop physical techniques: 4
Total: 31

Katon: fire fairies/fire and air salamander technique (D) - User creates small, erratically-moving bullets of fire. Any one of these may be enhanced to a larger stream of fire via usage of a sustained Fuuton technique.

Fuuton: air sylph (D) - User controls a thin stream of wind which can tug at limbs, pull small objects or keep them afloat. It can also be used to enhance flames or Katon techniques.

Hidden technique: hair guardian (D) - Hair, fed on chakra, automatically defends from and entangles a physical attack.

Hiding in shadows technique (C) - User is able to vanish from sight upon coming in contact with a well-shaded area.

Katon: flame branching technique (B) - User creates a thin stream of fire from their mouth, which is able to turn corners, and/or branch off into several more streams of flame at the user's will, allowing it to connect with multiple or elusive targets.

Shadow clone technique (B) - User creates a solid clone through dividing their chakra in two. The clone is able to perform techniques independently, and relay any gathered information once dispelled.

Genjutsu: whispering wind (D, sound-based) - User generates an eerie breeze, which gives the target the auditory illusion of attacks/projectiles from outside his/her field of vision barely whizzing by them, missing by centimeters. As this occurs, the user's conscience taunts them with their own flaws and fears, manifesting itself as the user's voice.

Genjutsu: scent of decay (D, scent-based) - A pungent odor fills the target's nostrils, creating the visual illusion that everyone around him/her is dead and rotting, excluding the user. The victim may also see an illusion of his/her own corpse.

Genjutsu: reverse finger-trap technique (C, touch-based) - A visible and tactile illusion of the user appears to catch any melee attack coming towards them, allowing the real user to escape unseen while the target believes they have been countered. Failing to realize they are fighting an illusion and continuing to struggle to break through the user's defenses will only result in the illusion of a stronger, firmer grip on the target. Retracting the blow will cause the illusion to dispel.

Genjutsu: sleep paralysis technique (C, sight-based) - While in close-range, the victim is shown a horrific distortion of the user which paralyzes them, and is filled with a burgeoning feeling of tiredness, which tempts them to sleep as an escape from their fear.

Genjutsu: iron maiden body (C, sight-based) - The user throws an illusory kunai at the target. If it is dodged, rather than blocked or taken, the illusion of several more kunai will appear in the target's peripheral vision, converging on one of their body parts without fail. Once struck with these illusory kunai, the targeted body part will feel ten times heavier.

Genjutsu: hypochondria (B, sound-based) - User makes all surfaces that the target comes in contact with at a sufficient volume appear to come alive and turn into sightless monsters, creating realistic pain and loss of mobility if the target is caught.

Genjutsu: ashen clone (B, taste-based) - A genjutsu created for escape purposes, this technique takes the form of an illusory clone of the user, which disperses into an acrid, choking black cloud when struck. If and when the actual choking is dispelled, an intense, debilitating feeling of hunger follows, along with the illusion that the target is rapidly becoming emaciated and wasting away from the inside.

Genjutsu: eternal mortician technique (A, touch-based) - After being hit by a melee attack, the target sees and feels phantom attackers materializing around his/her body and repeating the same attack one-by-one until they believe him/herself to be "dead."

Genjutsu: iron maiden shadow (A, sight-based) - The user appears to become a being of pure shade with an incredibly long shadow to the target, able to freely summon implements to torture or bind whichever parts of the target are covered by shade of any kind.

Genjutsu: Banshi (S, sound-based) - User expels a loud, prolonged scream from their mouth, causing all targets within ears' range who hear more than a few seconds of the scream to regard their comrades as despised enemy attackers. This does not apply to those who arrive after the jutsu has been cast, nor to the user. This technique causes temporary amnesia, removes memory-retrieval, and also slightly diminishes higher and critical thinking, so weak-willed victims are overtaken by a sense of panic and tend to attack on their first instinct. Even those who resist will feel immense, crippling fear and paranoia until the illusion is dispelled or all those surrounding them are dead or gone.

Genjutsu: Voodoo corpse technique (S, touch-based) - After the user inflicts a blow on the target that the target accepts as "fatal," the target passes out and is dragged into an illusion of being "dead" inside an illusory coffin. When the victim wakes up, they believe themselves to be totally free from agency and deep thought, with no reason or incentive to believe otherwise, and the belief that the user is possessing their corpse. They carry out any commands from the user, including acting as they did in life.

Ningenjutsu: Gentle breeze cut (B, sight-based) - The user disappears from sight, and blows several simultaneous blades of wind at the target. These gusts appear to the target as afterimages of the user with weapon in hand, slashing at extreme speeds.

Ningenjutsu: Undine's kiss (B, touch-based) - A high-pressure Fuuton technique which spins around the target, holding them in place as they feel the illusion of the air escaping their lungs and the bones in their body breaking.

Ningenjutsu: Will o' wisp (A, sight-based) - The user surrounds the target with several orbs of flame, roughly half of which are real and the other half illusions. But insidiously, some illusory orbs incite in the target the sight, smell and sensation of being lit on fire rather than dispersing on contact, and other real orbs will appear to vanish harmlessly on contact as they actually light the unaware victim aflame.
 
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The Philosoraptor

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Original poster
Appearance: FULLBODYHIROKOPNG-1.png 769449001_1604757.gif

Background

|Standard|
Name
: Katsuro Uchiha

Age: 19

DOB (Date of Birth): May 16

Sexuality: Heterosexual

Clan: Uchiha

Likes:
- Swordsmanship
- Honor
- Bravery
- Glorious combat
- Chivalry
- Despising his extended family


Dislikes:
- Sarada and Sakura
- Treachery

- Cowardice
- Jutsu
- Laziness
- Weakness

Hobbies:
- Developing his jutsu.
- Sharpening, polishing, and admiring his swords.
- Harassing Sarada.

Parents:
- Sasuke Uchiha (biological father)
- Ai Hamasaki (biological mother)
- Mifune (foster father)
- Sakura Haruno (stepmother)

Grandparents:
- Fugaku Uchiha

- Mikoto Uchiha
- Akihito Hamasaki
- Mai Hamasaki


Siblings:
- Sarada Uchiha

|Shinobi|
Birthplace: The Land of Iron
Village Allegiance: Konohagakure
Ninja Rank: Jonin (Anbu)

History: Following the Fourth Shinobi World War, Sasuke Uchiha's attempt at initiating a brutal worldwide revolution was foiled by Naruto Uzumaki, the current Hokage. However, instead of finishing Sasuke, Naruto managed to redeem the misguided Shinobi. However, instead of staying with his friends in Konoha, Sasuke decided to travel the world, primarily in pursuit of enlightenment, and secondly to find what threat was so great that Kaguya Otsutsuki feared it. Years later, he returned to his family to train a new generation of Shinobi, and to properly raise his daughter. But only a few years into his journey, Sasuke almost contemplated never returning. On his journey, he found the Land of Iron. There, he disguised himself as Akio Tsukino, a wandering swordsman, and rested there for a month. Before he left, he met and fell in love with Ai Hamasaki, the young daughter of a samurai general. They never married, but consummated their relationship mere nights before Sasuke left. Some say he felt guilt for betraying the life he had in Konoha, while others thought he was simply unprepared to handle a family at the time. Whatever the reason, Sasuke Uchiha left the Land of Iron, and Ai Hamasaki was left in disgrace, a single mother whose family shunned her. And so their son, Katsuro, grew up without a father. To regain honor for his family, Katsuro abandoned the serf's life and trained to be a samurai, and eventually trained under the great general and swordsman Mifune, who taught him the ways of Iai, the unbeatable style of sword combat, so fast even that it can stop a ninja before they can use hand seals. For years, Katsuro lived in blissful ignorance of his father, having been told he'd died in combat like other samurai. But when he came of age, and his mother died during a riot, Mifune came to Katsuro and told him his father's true identity. The sheer emotion of the combined events led to the awakening of Katsuro's Sharingan.

Enraged at the true circumstances behind his father's disappearance, Katsuro left the Land of Iron with vengeance in his heart. He journeyed across many of the other hidden villages, attempting to trace his father's steps and kill him, awakening the other two tomoe of his Sharingan on the way. It was only when he heard that Sasuke had returned to Konoha that Katsuro finally met his father. And he met him in battle. Although he was outmatched by his father's Rinnegan and Six Paths techniques, Katsuro provided one of the first individual challenges Sasuke had encountered in years. After subduing and calming him, Sasuke brought Katsuro into the Leaf Village, where he was introduced to his half-sister and stepmother, Sarada Uchiha and Sakura Haruno. Though it only made him more enraged, it provided Katsuro with a new outlet for his anger: Determined to grow stronger than his father, Katsuro set his eyes on Sarada's eyes, to augment his Mangekyo when it was awakened. Realizing his mistake in introducing Katsuro to his own family, Sasuke convinced Naruto Uzumaki to assign Katsuro to Anbu, which the Hokage did after seeing Katsuro in action.

Once put on the job, Katsuro had less and less time to plot his revenge against Sasuke, instead being consumed by his desire to prove himself to his paternal homeland. Anbu duties began to take up more and more of his time, as the rising threats of Yugure and Branch began to increasingly threaten the Leaf Village. Furthermore, he's surrounded by extended family trying to keep him from the path of revenge, while at the same time trying to cultivate his innate abilities. His very existence complicates life for the village: Naruto constantly tries to convince Katsuro to spend some time with Konohamaru, and by extension Sarada, with the excuse being that he should train his jutsu; Sakura tries to build a relationship with her stepson, while trying to deal with the fact that Sasuke had another life beyond the Leaf Village; Sarada struggles with the concept of having an older brother, let alone one who hates her; and Sasuke himself struggles with the guilt he feels for leaving Ai alone to raise a son, and tries to compensate by helping Katsuro learn the ways of the Shinobi.

But Katsuro cares little for his family, believing that the only one he ever had or needed is home in the Land of Iron. He believes that his current situation is only temporary, and that he will return to his birthplace when his ultimate mission is done: Kill Sasuke Uchiha, take Sarada's Sharingan, and secure a weapon for the samurai. But until then, he is faced with the grave threats surrounding the Leaf Village, and must pull the strings of fate wisely to avert catastrophe.
Arsenal
|Weapons|

Name of Weapon:
- Chakra-conductive Chokuto

- Kunai
- Fuma Shuriken
- Kote

Appearance:
- Chokut .jpg
- 250px-Conniver's_Kunai.png
- 6606904ba289f7c3d74f8b872a63b00f.jpg
- Kote.png


Description: Having been trained in the Land of Iron for most of his life, Katsuro is most familiar with his sword. Longer than the standard samurai armament, Katsuro's Chokuto is also made of a chakra-conducting material that allows him to more efficiently use his Chakra flow skills. On its own, the sword is fairly standard, and looks somewhat similar to his father's. It's strong enough to withstand edge-on-edge blows from another blade enhanced with chakra, and doesn't suffer negative effects from Katsuro's nature transformation. When dressed for special Anbu missions, Katsuro keeps his sword on his back like the other jonin. When in standard jonin gear, he wears his chokuto at his waist.

His Kunai and Fuma he keeps on a bandolier and on his waist at all times. One is for general CQC, and the other for mid- to long-range combat. While not a master of either, his bladework is of high-enough quality that Katsuro can wield several kunai with ease, and his shurikenjutsu is rapidly developing under the eyes of his masters.

Finally, Katsuro has little practiced skill with hand seals. While his Sharingan allows him to learn rapidly, he still has difficulty with rapidly producing the necessary combinations. To compensate, Katsuro chose the path of the kote, accepting the new scientific weapon into his arsenal. By preparing his stronger jutsu beforehand, he eliminates the need for hand seals in combat, allowing him to focus on his much stronger kenjutsu and Chakra flow skills.
Combat

Strengths:
- Kenjutsu

- Chakra flow
- Nintaijutsu
- Taijutsu

Weaknesses:
- Genjutsu (countered with Sharingan)
- Ninjutsu


|Power Balance|

Ninjutsu: 3
Taijutsu: 5
Genjutsu: 1
Intelligence: 3.5
Strength: 4
Speed: 4
Stamina: 3.5
Hand Seals: 2
Nintaijutsu: 4
Total: 30


|Jutsu|
- Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
- Fire Release Chakra Mode (same principle as Lightning Release Chakra Mode)
- Earth Release: Earth Spear
- Cloud-Style Flame Beheading
- Time Reversal Technique
- Temporary Paralysis Technique
- Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
- Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique
- Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique
- Earth Release: Earth-Style Wall

- Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears
- Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
- Lion Combo
- Body Flicker Technique
- Shadow Clone Technique

|Kekkei Genkai|

Name of Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan
Clan: Uchiha
Description: Gives an number of special abilities to the user; Prominently, these include the ability to see chakra, break through Genjutsu, mimic a variety of movements (enabling the Uchiha to copy and learn Ninjutsu at an alarming pace), read the most minute of movements, and perform the Genjutsu: Sharingan. Furthermore, the Sharingan can evolve once fully matured into the Mangekyo Sharingan, granting even more powerful abilities, as well as potentially some unique ones: Amaterasu, black flames that cannot be quenched by any save for the one who made them; Tsukuyomi, the ultimate Genjutsu that can create impossibly elaborate and deadly illusions; and the Susanoo, a giant avatar of chakra that is the ultimate power of the Mangekyo.
Appearance: original-sharingan.jpg
 
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The Philosoraptor

Guest
Original poster
Appearance: (insert picture)
Name: Fudo Saizo
Age: 14
Likes: Rain, salty foods, competition
Dislikes: Humid Heat, deadlines,
Hobbies: Free-running, martial training, exploring

Parents: Fudo Shina and Fudo Jiro
Grandparents: [optional]
Siblings: [optional]

Birthplace: Mizu no Kuni- Kirigakure
Village Allegiance: Konohagakure
Ninja Rank: Chuunin

History:
Saizo is a bit of a rarity in his family. His family lineage consists of a strong background in fire nature chakra types. Wind chakra in itself is a rarity- but especially so in this case. His parents are his adoptive patents, his Father working with the intelligence department, and his mother a academy instructor. His birth mother was killed in the last war, and he isn't sure who his father was. He was born at the end of a terrible time, and feels most at home when training. Post-war shinobi villages are still tense times.

Officially born in Kirigakure, after his mother was killed, a konoha ninja who was close with his mother was asked to take care of him. He was still an infant, had no forseeable blood relations in kirigakure- so there were no security risks in the adoption.

He graduated the academy at age 12. His mother being a teacher helped his progress. Saizo felt very comfortable learning ninjutsu, but preferred the physical feats, in an attempt to solidify his independence from the others who were practicing their jutsu at home. He took the examinations, and almost didn't pass- he won't tell people why with a straight answer. Barely passing, admittedly- he became a genin two years ago, and attended the most recent Chuunin examinations this year. Successful in completing his mission [the only one of his current ninja team]- he was promoted.

He is good friends with his genin team, but the rumor is that some things will be changing soon. Saizo is a fairly open person, so he isn't hard to get along with- but his fickle nature and daydreaming can turn some people off. He hopes to be either assigned a new team, or go active with other shinobi since rumors of tension are escalating.

His main goal is to become a part of the ANBU. Ultimately, he wants to make his own way, and try to unlock the secrets to his misty past. He never really got to know his birth mother, and while he isn't overcome with emotion when thinking about it- he has a nagging curiosity. His adoptive parents are supportive of the idea, but begin pressing the issue of more domestic based goals. Becoming ANBU gives him access to security clearance, power, and some freedoms he doesn't have now. This is what he sees as a key to knowledge.
Though in reality- he's a bit too whimsical at this young age. His skills are certainly in the right place- but his mind is in the clouds. His next and more immediate goal is to start learning other chakra natures if he can. He will work hard, but he tends to be a bit more chaotic than lawful. Staying focused can be a problem for him. He tends to have an on the fence commitment to the idea of talking to Naruto about it- mostly because he sees the anbu force as 'yes' men and women, but since its an outside opinion, its likely a skewed one. Being a young teenager he is still figuring things out along the way.
Weapons:
2x Kunai on right leg pouch

2 shuriken pouches on his hips- 6 shuriken each

2 tanto horizontally on his lower back- clipped to his belt
Strengths: Physical combat, Speed

Weaknesses: Long range combat, genjutsu knowledge,

Notable Skills: Closing the gap on enemies, using lightning fast strikes, and retreating

Power Balance
Ninjutsu: 2
Taijutsu: 3.5
Genjutsu: 1
Intelligence: 2
Strength: 2
Speed: 4
Stamina : 2.5
Hand Seals: 2
Total: 19
[WIND RELEASE]
--Wind Cutter Technique- can send a barrage, or targeted blades of wind energy toward an opponent

--Gale Palm- Can send a gust of wind outward from the user to knock away incoming projectiles , or opponents

-Academy Jutsu [substitution, shunshin, camouflage, shadow clone]

-Bukijutsu- He studies and trains with weapons- specifically two chakra absorbent tanto.

-Chakra Flow- He can control and flow his chakra through objects (wind element increases slashing and piercing power)

Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Clan:
Description:
(If a Dojutsu) Appearance:
Species:
Size: [How big are they normally? Small, medium, large, between? Both of two?]
Jutsu:
Specific Animal
Age:
Size:
Jutsu:
History w/ summoner:
Well, my only two problems here: A) Fire Release isn't too common in the Land of Water, but that's a simple word change, and B) Just double-check to make sure you have everything from the new copy of the CS.

Appearance: (insert picture)



Background Information
|Standard|
Name
: Kai Yamada
Age: 21
DOB (Date of Birth) & Age:21(8/7)
Sexuality: Heterosexual


Clan:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Hobbies: Sparring


Parents: [optional]
Grandparents: [optional]
Siblings: [optional]


|Shinobi|
Birthplace
: Konohagure
Village Allegiance: Konohagure
Ninja Rank: Chunin

History: (WIP)
Born and raised in Konohagure village, he was a average guy. Like most people in his village he had a affinity for fire. Born with long hair, his classmates often teased him and called him a girl. Wanting to take revenge on them, he trains hard and works on new techniques. On the day of his exam, he passed easily with flying colors due to his training. One of the youngest ninjas to pass, he would always battle people just to gain knowledge about their techniques and chakra's. He currently wonders around the village doing missions and such but does occasionally help Junin and academy ninjas.



Arsenal

Weapons

Name of Weapon: Dragon of tempest

Appearance: A katana with a black handle

Description: (2-3 paragraphs)



Combat

Strengths: Strength, and close range combat

Weaknesses: Long-range combat, Speed

Notable Skills: Being able to use jutsu quickly,closing the gap [Optional]

Power Balance

Ninjutsu: [1-5]3
Taijutsu: [1-5]1
Genjutsu: [1-5]1
Intelligence: [1-5]5
Strength: [1-5]3
Speed: [1-5]3
Stamina : [1-5]3
Hand Seals: [1-5]1
Other:[explain] [1-5]
Total:20




Kekkei Genkai

Kekkei Genkai

Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Clan:
Description:
(If a Dojutsu) Appearance:



Summons
Broad classification
Species:
Size: [How big are they normally? Small, medium, large, between? Both of two?]
Jutsu:

Specific Animal
Age:
Size:
Jutsu:
History w/ summoner:
Keep filling out your CS. My only issue at the moment is that he's a little old for a Chunin.

Appearance:


(wearing standard shinobi footwear, shorter flowing sleeves, hair usually strewn over her face, Sound Village headband around left shoulder)

|Standard|
Name
:
Onryō Buraku
Age: 33
DOB (Date of Birth) & Age: April 5th
Sexuality: Heterosexual, although she pays such little mind to pursuits outside duty as to be practically asexual
Clan: Buraku
Likes: Fear, and the inherent respect she feels it carries; Otogakure, specifically due to its lack of focus on tradition; progress; her students; her former sensei; certain comrades.
Dislikes: The notion of honor; sentiment; decorum; bureaucracy; randomness; dalliers; the elderly (excluding her former sensei).
Hobbies: Meditation and horror films.

Parents: Miki Buraku (deceased), unknown father (possibly deceased).
Grandparents: Jagi and Hikiko Buraku (both deceased).
Siblings: None.

|Shinobi|
Birthplace
:
Land of Rice Fields (currently Otogakure)
Village Allegiance: Otogakure
Ninja Rank: Jounin

History:

[BCOLOR=#080808]Onryo was born on a caravan, into an ignoble, decentralized clan of fortune tellers, mediums, funeral workers and other untouchables. Considered pariahs by most of the outside world, they were openly accepted into the Land of Sound, a "haven for outsiders" during Orochimaru's reign. Onryo traversed the young Land of Sound along with her mother, a weathered old patriarch whose face she feared, and a few other clan members, in order to provide services of channeling and exorcism. At a young age, Onryo was groomed to be a medium. Then, on the eve of her sixth year, the party was attacked by bandits. Most of the group was grievously injured, with Onryo's mother bleeding to death while she watched. For a half an hour, she was faced with the most powerful feeling she'd ever felt: a profound sense of despair. Even as her mother's pain seemed to drag on forever, Onryo could do absolutely nothing to aid her as she bled out.[/BCOLOR]

[BCOLOR=#080808]Those who survived the bandit raid knew that Onryo would be dead weight from that point forward, now that she could not finish learning the skills that only her mother was prepared to teach her. They brought her to a nearby orphanage instead. Like many orphans within the Land of Sound, she was transferred to a ninja academy so that she might be of use to Otogakure. In time, she would come to accept this lot in life as her "true calling." After failing to learn medical techniques in a desperate bid to help her mother's soul rest in peace, her Jounin sensei took her aside and used a cruel genjutsu to drive the "wrongheaded" aspiration from her heart. Rather, he encouraged her to channel her fear and hatred into illusion techniques of her own. With this new focus, Onryo flourished, and soon gave up on concepts such as honor and familial piety. She came to believe that terror, filth, and perversion, things her clan was once reviled for, could be seen as honorable, and even ideal for ninja to achieve.[/BCOLOR]

[BCOLOR=#080808]With her newfound beliefs, and her drive to become to "ideal" kunoichi, Onryo overcame her earlier underperformance. She comfortably became a chunin, and rose through the ranks to become one of Otogakure's elite Jounin. She [/BCOLOR][BCOLOR=#080808]came to terms with her past and set about making her future in a uniquely unhealthy way. Rather than pledging to live on in spite of her pain, she came to embrace the mindset that she may as well have died on the same day as her mother. To her, regret and fear are illogical and in a way, unreal. She does not dwell on regrets, simply because she regards every event in her life as “borrowed time.” She became resigned to her inability to save lives, and simply accepted that her mother would haunt and curse her from the day she gave, albeit still with no small degree of shame on Onryo's part for doing so. In her career as kunoichi, she would blame many unfortunate incidents in her life on what she saw as her the ghost of her mother, and her justified grudge. Yet she does not fear death, because to her, death had already come to her, and it is only by a trick of the universe that she lives. In her "borrowed time," she hopes to help Otogakure become a place that is feared and therefore respected and left alone by enemies, and raise the next generation of "ideal ninja" to enforce its place in the world for years to come.[/BCOLOR]

Upon Orochimaru's defeat at the hands of Sasuke, Otogakure fell into chaos at the hands of his rampant experiments. As a result, most of its mercenary forces fled, leaving its home-grown fighters to attempt to defend the land on their own. While Onryo, as one of the highest-ranking ninja still loyal to the Sound Village helped maintain order as best she could, numerous bandit raids on her home and feuds between hopeful usurpers to Orochimaru's power commenced. Houses were destroyed, crops were taken, and the number of ninja left alive ended up in the low 2,000s. To add to the land's strife, the continuing unrest forced most ninja to stay within Otogakure's borders, preventing much income from coming in.

Now, in an attempt to strike a deal with a larger nation in order to preserve the Land of Rice Fields' place in the world, the Daimyo has loaned Onryo to Konohagakure - a gesture of good will, sending one of their strongest ninja to help with the Yugure crisis, in the hopes of receiving seeds, livestock and building materials in exchange. Not to mention the hopes of an alliance between Leaf and Sound finally being possible; with Orochimaru ostensibly reformed and returned to his homeland, chances of the two villages' past being buried are at an all-time high for the latter's citizens.

Weapons

Name of Weapon:
Kunai, almost exclusively; her own fingernails, in a pinch.

Appearance:

Description:
Onryō, in the pursuit of her own distinct fighting style, neglected the majority of nin-tool training to focus on mastering the use of kunai. While this leaves her with subpar versatility as far as combat with weaponry is concerned, her obsessive practice with the throwing weapons paid off greatly. She can throw several in rapid succession and hit a bullseye roughly 9 times out of 10. Excepting occasions in which the target appears at a difficult or awkward angle, her precision with the tool is in the same league as that of general weapons prodigies. She carries about three times as many kunai as the average ninja.

Onryō's fingernails are long and jagged, and in addition to helping cultivate an imposing appearance, can be used as melee weapons when there's no time or freedom of movement to reach for a knife.

Strengths: Extremely skilled in the area of genjutsu, along with psychological intimidation tactics to enhance them. Proficient in the use of kunai. Formidable ninjutsu user, who has learned to layer illusions on top of physical attacks.

Weaknesses: Physically mediocre. Her intimidating, gruff nature can hinder teamwork, as well as situations requiring diplomacy.

Notable Skills: Respectable killing intent, capable of dropping a housefly from across a small room. Obscures her hand seals in the sleeves of her kimono.

Power Balance

Ninjutsu: 4
Taijutsu: 2
Genjutsu: 5
Intelligence: 4
Strength: 2
Speed: 2
Stamina: 3
Hand Seals: 5
Ningenjutsu - the layering of illusions atop physical techniques: 4
Total: 31

Katon: fire fairies/fire and air salamander technique (D) - User creates small, erratically-moving bullets of fire. Any one of these may be enhanced to a larger stream of fire via usage of a sustained Fuuton technique.

Fuuton: air sylph (D) - User controls a thin stream of wind which can tug at limbs, pull small objects or keep them afloat. It can also be used to enhance flames or Katon techniques.

Hidden technique: hair guardian (D) - Hair, fed on chakra, automatically defends from and entangles a physical attack.

Hiding in shadows technique (C) - User is able to vanish from sight upon coming in contact with a well-shaded area.

Katon: flame branching technique (B) - User creates a thin stream of fire from their mouth, which is able to turn corners, and/or branch off into several more streams of flame at the user's will, allowing it to connect with multiple or elusive targets.

Shadow clone technique (B) - User creates a solid clone through dividing their chakra in two. The clone is able to perform techniques independently, and relay any gathered information once dispelled.

Genjutsu: whispering wind (D, sound-based) - User generates an eerie breeze, which gives the target the auditory illusion of attacks/projectiles from outside his/her field of vision barely whizzing by them, missing by centimeters. As this occurs, the user's conscience taunts them with their own flaws and fears, manifesting itself as the user's voice.

Genjutsu: scent of decay (D, scent-based) - A pungent odor fills the target's nostrils, creating the visual illusion that everyone around him/her is dead and rotting, excluding the user. The victim may also see an illusion of his/her own corpse.

Genjutsu: reverse finger-trap technique (C, touch-based) - A visible and tactile illusion of the user appears to catch any melee attack coming towards them, allowing the real user to escape unseen while the target believes they have been countered. Failing to realize they are fighting an illusion and continuing to struggle to break through the user's defenses will only result in the illusion of a stronger, firmer grip on the target. Retracting the blow will cause the illusion to dispel.

Genjutsu: sleep paralysis technique (C, sight-based) - While in close-range, the victim is shown a horrific distortion of the user which paralyzes them, and is filled with a burgeoning feeling of tiredness, which tempts them to sleep as an escape from their fear.

Genjutsu: iron maiden body (C, sight-based) - The user throws an illusory kunai at the target. If it is dodged, rather than blocked or taken, the illusion of several more kunai will appear in the target's peripheral vision, converging on one of their body parts without fail. Once struck with these illusory kunai, the targeted body part will feel ten times heavier.

Genjutsu: hypochondria (B, sound-based) - User makes all surfaces that the target comes in contact with at a sufficient volume appear to come alive and turn into sightless monsters, creating realistic pain and loss of mobility if the target is caught.

Genjutsu: ashen clone (B, taste-based) - A genjutsu created for escape purposes, this technique takes the form of an illusory clone of the user, which disperses into an acrid, choking black cloud when struck. If and when the actual choking is dispelled, an intense, debilitating feeling of hunger follows, along with the illusion that the target is rapidly becoming emaciated and wasting away from the inside.

Genjutsu: eternal mortician technique (A, touch-based) - After being hit by a melee attack, the target sees and feels phantom attackers materializing around his/her body and repeating the same attack one-by-one until they believe him/herself to be "dead."

Genjutsu: iron maiden shadow (A, sight-based) - The user appears to become a being of pure shade with an incredibly long shadow to the target, able to freely summon implements to torture or bind whichever parts of the target are covered by shade of any kind.

Genjutsu: Banshi (S, sound-based) - User expels a loud, prolonged scream from their mouth, causing all targets within ears' range who hear more than a few seconds of the scream to regard their comrades as despised enemy attackers. This does not apply to those who arrive after the jutsu has been cast, nor to the user. This technique causes temporary amnesia, removes memory-retrieval, and also slightly diminishes higher and critical thinking, so weak-willed victims are overtaken by a sense of panic and tend to attack on their first instinct. Even those who resist will feel immense, crippling fear and paranoia until the illusion is dispelled or all those surrounding them are dead or gone.

Genjutsu: Voodoo corpse technique (S, touch-based) - After the user inflicts a blow on the target that the target accepts as "fatal," the target passes out and is dragged into an illusion of being "dead" inside an illusory coffin. When the victim wakes up, they believe themselves to be totally free from agency and deep thought, with no reason or incentive to believe otherwise, and the belief that the user is possessing their corpse. They carry out any commands from the user, including acting as they did in life.

Ningenjutsu: Gentle breeze cut (B, sight-based) - The user disappears from sight, and blows several simultaneous blades of wind at the target. These gusts appear to the target as afterimages of the user with weapon in hand, slashing at extreme speeds.

Ningenjutsu: Undine's kiss (B, touch-based) - A high-pressure Fuuton technique which spins around the target, holding them in place as they feel the illusion of the air escaping their lung and the bones in their body breaking.

Ningenjutsu: Will o' wisp (A, sight-based) - The user surrounds the target with several orbs of flame, roughly half of which are real and the other half illusions. But insidiously, some illusory orbs incite in the target the sight, smell and sensation of being lit on fire rather than dispersing on contact, and other real orbs will appear to vanish harmlessly on contact as they actually light the unaware victim aflame.
All in all, a pretty damn good CS. The only issue I can find is that you have no appearance for your weapons.
 

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I thought it may have been redundant, since the kunai is such a common image in the series, and her fingernails were described. CS is fixed now :)
 
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I thought it may have been redundant, since the kunai is such a common image in the series, and her fingernails were described. CS is fixed now :)
Damn. Them some short nails for deadly talons.

Still good, though.
 

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[spoiler | Background Information|]
|Standard|
Name
: Hiraku Hyuuga
Age: 12
DOB (Date of Birth) & Age: May, 5. Age 12
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Clan: Hyuuga
Likes: warm weather, his friends, his clan and his village
Dislikes: cold weather, people who attack the people and things he cares for.
Hobbies: training and hanging out with his friends

Parents
: Hisoka Hyuuga (father) Heather Hyuuga (mother)
Grandparents:
Siblings: open, if someone wants to be Hiraku's sibiling just ask me!

|Shinobi|
Birthplace
: Konohagakure
VillageAllegiance: Konohagakure
NinjaRank: [Academy, Genin, Chunin, Jounin, Kage, Legendary]
Genin
History: Hiraku was born into the famous Hyuuga clan, he was also born into the main branch of the family. Since he was young he has been considered a genius in his clan. He started training with his father from a young age and he quicky learned the gentle fist Taijutsu style. He also quickly picked up ninjutsu and how to effectively use his byukugan. He graduated number one in his class at the academy and he has a lot of pressure set on him by his clan, but he takes it all in stride as he tried to become the best shinobi he can become. He was quite popular with the girls in the acadmey class. He knew he had a lot of fan girls and he did kind of like it, but for the time being he was trying to focus on his training and becoming a shinobi. Hiraku cares deeply for his clan and his village. He will protect his friends, his fellow clan members and villagers with his life if he has too. He has been lucky in which he hasn't had a lot of hardships growing up. Sure his traini with his father was intense and some people would consider the training too much for a young child, but Hiraku knew that being born to the main branch of the Hyuuga clan he was next in line to be the leader of the clan. So he trained hard and didn't complain, even when he got hurt and times when he wanted to do other things. He kept trainjng and now that he is out of the academy and finally and actually shinobi he hopes to Quicky move up the ranks. He wants to become someone important to the village. Someone people can count on to do anything for thenvillage.
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[Spoiler | Arsenal |]

Weapons: the typical shinobi weapons.

Name of Weapon: N/A

Appearance: N/A

Description: N/A

Combat

Strengths:
Chakra control
Taijutsu
Ninjutsu
Speed


Weaknesses:
Genjutsu (countered with Bykuagan)
Stamina


Notable Skills: [Optional]

Power Balance

Ninjutsu: [1-5] 3
Taijutsu: [1-5] 4
Genjutsu: [1-5] 1
Intelligence: [1-5] 3
Strength: [1-5] 3
Speed: [1-5] 4
Stamina : [1-5] 2
Hand Seals: [1-5] 4
Other:[explain] [1-5]
Total: 24


jutsu:
Water chakra nature:
Water Release: Bubbles Technique
Water Release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks
Water Release: Gunshot
Water Release: Water Bowl
Water Release: Water Shuriken
Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
Water Prison Technique
Water Release: Wild Water Wave
The basic acadmey jutsu






Kekkei Genkai


Name of Kekkei Genkai: Byukugan
Clan: Hyuuga
Description: The Byakugan gives the user a near 360º field of vision, except for one blind spot at the back of the neck above the first thoracic vertebra.The range of this vision varies between users and in fact can be improved with training. Its vision can penetrate through most solid objects and obstructions, though certain barriers may distort the Byakugan's perception somewhat.The Byakugan is also able to more effectively follow high-speed movements to better react to them. Arguably, its greatest ability is to see chakra to a greater degree than the Sharingan it can identify chakra by the specific individuals it originates from, determine when genjutsu is being used, and discern certain types of clone from the real thing. The Byakugan's ability to see chakra is so acute that it can actually see the Chakra pathway system and the 361 tenketsu that run along it. The Hyūga have devised a style of combat known as the Gentle fist that specifically takes advantage of this, wherein they strike an opponent's tenketsu to either seal or forcibly open these tenketsu, thus giving the user complete control over their opponent's chakra.
(If a Dojutsu) Appearance: image.jpg

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[spoiler | Summons |]
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Broad classification
Species: N/A
Size: N/A
Jutsu: N/A
History w/ Humans: N/A

Specific Animal
Age: N/A
Size: N/A
Jutsu: N/A
History w/ summoner: N/A
 
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Name
: Satsuki Himura

Age: 15

DOB (Date of Birth) & Age: January 29th

Sexuality: Heterosexual

Clan: Himura

Likes: fashion, weapons, reading, learning new jutsu's

Dislikes: lazy people, fans (like fan boys and fan girls), people who do not see the real person under the mask

Hobbies: training, reading and long walks at night

Parents: Kyo and Haruka Himura (Adoptive parents)

|Shinobi|
Birthplace
: Land of fire

Village Allegiance: Konohagakure

Ninja Rank: Chunin

History:

Satsuki was found on the doorstep of Kyo and Haruka Himura, with only a note that asked them to take care of her and raise her as their own. Always wanting a child but never able to conceive, the Himura's took her in and raised her. As she grew, Satsuki was taught in the ways of taijutsu and some genjutsu. Her parents were so proud of her when she graduated at the top of her class in the academy.

During her time as a genin, she had discovered that her real parents had given her up to the Himura family and for a time, she was in a depression; snapping at her teammates, sensei and even the couple that raised her since infancy. It got to the point where she was messing up on missions. After some time and a good therapist, Satsuki got past her troubles in time for the chunin exam. Since then, she has decided to leave the past where it belongs and look towards her future.

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[Spoiler | Arsenal |]

Weapons

Name of Weapon: Standard Shinobi weapons and a tanto.

Appearance:
her tanto
kunais
shuriken

Description:

Being from the leaf village, Satsuki has been issued the standard ninja gear. The tanto is a Himura family heirloom, granted to her by her father.

Combat

Strengths:

Her taijutsu skills and some knowledge of swordplay. She also has a habit of wearing training weights that she adds to when she feels that she is ready. (Learned from Rock Lee. God I love that character.)

Weaknesses:

Her stamina still needs to be worked on, along with her ninjutsu and hand seals.

Notable Skills: [Optional]

Power Balance

Ninjutsu: [1-5] 2
Taijutsu: [1-5] 5
Genjutsu: [1-5] 3
Intelligence: [1-5] 4
Strength: [1-5] 4
Speed: [1-5] 5
Stamina : [1-5] 2
Hand Seals: [1-5] 2
Other:[explain] [1-5]
Total: 27



Jutsu

Taijutsu
Standard Academy jutsu
Fire Release
Lightning Release (only through her fire release)
Phoenix Flower Jutsu
Fireball Jutsu

(Will link them when I get home.)
 
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Can I join?
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Yes, sure you can!
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[spoiler | Background Information|]
|Standard|
Name
: Hiraku Hyuuga
Age: 12
DOB (Date of Birth) & Age: May, 5. Age 12
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Clan: Hyuuga
Likes: warm weather, his friends, his clan and his village
Dislikes: cold weather, people who attack the people and things he cares for.
Hobbies: training and hanging out with his friends

Parents
: Hisoka Hyuuga (father) Heather Hyuuga (mother)
Grandparents:
Siblings: open, if someone wants to be Hiraku's sibiling just ask me!

|Shinobi|
Birthplace
: Konohagakure
VillageAllegiance: Konohagakure
NinjaRank: [Academy, Genin, Chunin, Jounin, Kage, Legendary]
Genin
History: Hiraku was born into the famous Hyuuga clan, he was also born into the main branch of the family. Since he was young he has been considered a genius in his clan. He started training with his father from a young age and he quicky learned the gentle fist Taijutsu style. He also quickly picked up ninjutsu and howmto effectively use his byukugan. He graduated number one in his class at the academy and he has a lot of pressure set on him by his clan, but he takes it all in stride as he tried to become the best shinobi he can become.
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[Spoiler | Arsenal |]

Weapons: the typical shinoni weapons.

Name of Weapon:

Appearance:

Description:

Combat

Strengths:
Chakra control
Taijutsu
Ninjutsu
Speed


Weaknesses:
Genjutsu (countered with Bykuagan)
Stamina


Notable Skills: [Optional]

Power Balance

Ninjutsu: [1-5] 3
Taijutsu: [1-5] 4
Genjutsu: [1-5] 1
Intelligence: [1-5] 3
Strength: [1-5] 3
Speed: [1-5] 4
Stamina : [1-5] 2
Hand Seals: [1-5] 4
Other:[explain] [1-5]
Total: 24


jutsu:
Water chakra nature:
Water Release: Bubbles Technique
Water Release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks
Water Release: Gunshot
Water Release: Water Bowl
Water Release: Water Shuriken
Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
Water Prison Technique
Water Release: Wild Water Wave
The basic acadmey jutsu






Kekkei Genkai


Name of Kekkei Genkai: Byukugan
Clan: Hyuuga
Description: The Byakugan gives the user a near 360º field of vision, except for one blind spot at the back of the neck above the first thoracic vertebra.The range of this vision varies between users and in fact can be improved with training. Its vision can penetrate through most solid objects and obstructions, though certain barriers may distort the Byakugan's perception somewhat.The Byakugan is also able to more effectively follow high-speed movements to better react to them. Arguably, its greatest ability is to see chakra to a greater degree than the Sharingan it can identify chakra by the specific individuals it originates from, determine when genjutsu is being used, and discern certain types of clone from the real thing. The Byakugan's ability to see chakra is so acute that it can actually see the Chakra pathway system and the 361 tenketsu that run along it. The Hyūga have devised a style of combat known as the Gentle fist that specifically takes advantage of this, wherein they strike an opponent's tenketsu to either seal or forcibly open these tenketsu, thus giving the user complete control over their opponent's chakra.
(If a Dojutsu) Appearance: View attachment 89204

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[spoiler | Summons |]
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Broad classification
Species: N/A
Size: N/A
Jutsu: N/A
History w/ Humans: N/A

Specific Animal
Age: N/A
Size: N/A
Jutsu: N/A
History w/ summoner: N/A
Go over this again, make sure to finish it up, and maybe tinker with the tabs. I can't get them to work, but the others seemed to, so maybe ask them.

Major WIP




|Standard|
Name
: Satsuki Himura

Age: 15

DOB (Date of Birth) & Age: January 29th

Sexuality: Heterosexual

Clan: Himura

Likes: fashion, weapons, reading, learning new jutsu's

Dislikes: lazy people, fans (like fan boys and fan girls), people who do not see the real person under the mask

Hobbies: training, reading and long walks at night

Parents
: Kyo and Haruka Himura

|Shinobi|
Birthplace
: Land of fire

Village Allegiance: Konohagakure

Ninja Rank: Chunin

History:

[/spoiler]

[Spoiler | Arsenal |]

Weapons

Name of Weapon:

Appearance:

Description:

Combat

Strengths:

Weaknesses:

Notable Skills: [Optional]

Power Balance

Ninjutsu: [1-5] 2
Taijutsu: [1-5] 5
Genjutsu: [1-5] 3
Intelligence: [1-5] 4
Strength: [1-5] 4
Speed: [1-5] 5
Stamina : [1-5] 2
Hand Seals: [1-5] 2
Other:[explain] [1-5]
Total: 27



Jutsu

{Link all your Jutsu here!}


Kekkei Genkai
{OPTIONAL}

Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Clan:
Description:
(If a Dojutsu) Appearance:

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Broad classification
Species:
Size: [How big are they normally? Small, medium, large, between? Both of two?]
Jutsu:
History w/ Humans:

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Size:
Jutsu:
History w/ summoner:
Keep working at this, and ask for help if you need it.
 

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I will work on my cs when I get home.
 
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Soooo... How's everyone doing today? Excited to go ******************************************* and et cetera?
 

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