K
Kattekerma
Guest
Original poster
"So, I'm pretty sure you all know you failed." Ritsuko starts. Hyosuke nodded solemnly. "As a group, you guys did well, but you didn't act like a real team. You tried to, and that's more than what I can say for Kishara's kids." Ritsuko commented, "But anyway, you've got your glaring faults as a team and I'm sure I don't have to say anything more about that." And there it was. Hyosuke knew what they did wrong. He also wasn't at all surprised that they failed.
"Now that we've talked about y'all as a whole, let's move into individuals. Let's start with you, Maiko," Ritsuko crossed her arms, "I know it's embarrassing--for all of you--and you don't want these two to know about your weakness, but you're all on this team indefinitely and these weaknesses won't be weaknesses forever." She looked the girl up and down for a moment. Hyosuke's eyes went over to Maiko, then to Marako. He was the one who hardly had a scratch on him. Was it because he was weak? He'd only done so much. Saved Maiko once, healed Marako and trapped Ritsuko. Despite his prowess at close combat, Hyosuke didn't even get a hit in or on himself. Was she treating him differently because he seemed weaker? The thought made some unknown emotion rise up in the pit of Hyosuke's stomach. Was he even cut out for this?
"So," Ritsuko continued, "Before I get into the bad stuff and make you guys hate me, let's talk about the good things. Maiko, your effort was commendable. You taijutsu would work well against kids around your age, but someone older and more experienced? Not so much. You seemed cold and aloof, but you did show some signs of worry and care for your teammates, so that's good too." She smiled, "Now let's talk about your shortcomings. Your guard was weak, and there were at least four holes in your stance. Four, Maiko." Ritsuko dropped into her one-handed fighting stance, "You have to keep yourself tight yet loose. Keep your guard up at all times, doesn't matter who you're fighting. You were also confident in your ability to put up a fight, but were unable to land a hit on me. The thing about your taijutsu is that it's predictable, so you need to work on that. You've got a gourd full of water for protection. Use it. It's not about being cocky. It won't show that you're weak. Being compared to the Godaime Kazekage just because of similarities isn't enough. You have to be strong too. Sure, he could fight close combat, but his real power lied within distance. His ability to manipulate sand."
Her face softened for a moment, "You can manipulate water, Maiko. Training for close combat is good, and we'll work on that, but I want you to practice using your water. Your moves should be so effortless that it's like an extension of yourself. You should be able to," She thrust out her arm, "Thrust your arm out and water's there, ready to act as an extra length. Don't shun your abilities, use them." Her words were harsh. Hyosuke almost felt bad that he was hearing this, it was obviously so personal and in depth. Hyosuke almost couldn't believe she'd only gotten this from a day and night of watching them. Truly, she was amazing. "You can take my advice or leave it, whatever suits you." She concluded, then turned to Hyosuke.
"You're up next, kiddo." Ritsuko said, "What can I even say? I didn't get to see you fight, so I can't say anything about your fighting stance, but you were quick to heal up Marako and you did a great job on such short notice. Marako, you'll have to get that checked out though. I'm no medical ninja." She cast a glance at the other boy before returning her gaze to Hyosuke. "You doubt yourself. It's in the way you carry yourself. You don't think you're up to par with Maiko and Marako, but that's not true. You held together when Marako got hurt and your quick thinking allowed you to get away by use of that jutsu. However, you reacted quickly. You were too quick to jump to Maiko's aide, even though you knew it might not have been her. If you had come any closer, I could've easily attacked you. Raise your guard more. Be cautious. If it wasn't for Marako, you would've been the injured one and I'm sure it would've turned out to be the same, maybe worse. Who knows?"
Hyosuke nodded as she spoke, "Train your lemur, too. He only helped out a little as opposed to what ninja animals can do." Chiko whined sadly. Hyosuke reached up to pet him, "He did his best, though. And you, you hesitated, Hyosuke. Right when I had my clone attack both you and Marako, you hesitated to throw that kunai until after I was done with Marako. Don't hesitate. You can't wait for someone else to make decisions, Hyosuke. Sometimes, you've got to do them yourself, especially with an injured teammate and a missing one. You're probably used to being the one in the back of the classroom, doing the leftover work and labor, but not on this team. There's no leader--if there was, it'd be me but that's besides the point--so you have no reason to hide your ideas and thoughts. Don't be intimidated by these two. You're all teammates now." Hyosuke looked down. Wow, this lady was brutal.
"Now that we've talked about y'all as a whole, let's move into individuals. Let's start with you, Maiko," Ritsuko crossed her arms, "I know it's embarrassing--for all of you--and you don't want these two to know about your weakness, but you're all on this team indefinitely and these weaknesses won't be weaknesses forever." She looked the girl up and down for a moment. Hyosuke's eyes went over to Maiko, then to Marako. He was the one who hardly had a scratch on him. Was it because he was weak? He'd only done so much. Saved Maiko once, healed Marako and trapped Ritsuko. Despite his prowess at close combat, Hyosuke didn't even get a hit in or on himself. Was she treating him differently because he seemed weaker? The thought made some unknown emotion rise up in the pit of Hyosuke's stomach. Was he even cut out for this?
"So," Ritsuko continued, "Before I get into the bad stuff and make you guys hate me, let's talk about the good things. Maiko, your effort was commendable. You taijutsu would work well against kids around your age, but someone older and more experienced? Not so much. You seemed cold and aloof, but you did show some signs of worry and care for your teammates, so that's good too." She smiled, "Now let's talk about your shortcomings. Your guard was weak, and there were at least four holes in your stance. Four, Maiko." Ritsuko dropped into her one-handed fighting stance, "You have to keep yourself tight yet loose. Keep your guard up at all times, doesn't matter who you're fighting. You were also confident in your ability to put up a fight, but were unable to land a hit on me. The thing about your taijutsu is that it's predictable, so you need to work on that. You've got a gourd full of water for protection. Use it. It's not about being cocky. It won't show that you're weak. Being compared to the Godaime Kazekage just because of similarities isn't enough. You have to be strong too. Sure, he could fight close combat, but his real power lied within distance. His ability to manipulate sand."
Her face softened for a moment, "You can manipulate water, Maiko. Training for close combat is good, and we'll work on that, but I want you to practice using your water. Your moves should be so effortless that it's like an extension of yourself. You should be able to," She thrust out her arm, "Thrust your arm out and water's there, ready to act as an extra length. Don't shun your abilities, use them." Her words were harsh. Hyosuke almost felt bad that he was hearing this, it was obviously so personal and in depth. Hyosuke almost couldn't believe she'd only gotten this from a day and night of watching them. Truly, she was amazing. "You can take my advice or leave it, whatever suits you." She concluded, then turned to Hyosuke.
"You're up next, kiddo." Ritsuko said, "What can I even say? I didn't get to see you fight, so I can't say anything about your fighting stance, but you were quick to heal up Marako and you did a great job on such short notice. Marako, you'll have to get that checked out though. I'm no medical ninja." She cast a glance at the other boy before returning her gaze to Hyosuke. "You doubt yourself. It's in the way you carry yourself. You don't think you're up to par with Maiko and Marako, but that's not true. You held together when Marako got hurt and your quick thinking allowed you to get away by use of that jutsu. However, you reacted quickly. You were too quick to jump to Maiko's aide, even though you knew it might not have been her. If you had come any closer, I could've easily attacked you. Raise your guard more. Be cautious. If it wasn't for Marako, you would've been the injured one and I'm sure it would've turned out to be the same, maybe worse. Who knows?"
Hyosuke nodded as she spoke, "Train your lemur, too. He only helped out a little as opposed to what ninja animals can do." Chiko whined sadly. Hyosuke reached up to pet him, "He did his best, though. And you, you hesitated, Hyosuke. Right when I had my clone attack both you and Marako, you hesitated to throw that kunai until after I was done with Marako. Don't hesitate. You can't wait for someone else to make decisions, Hyosuke. Sometimes, you've got to do them yourself, especially with an injured teammate and a missing one. You're probably used to being the one in the back of the classroom, doing the leftover work and labor, but not on this team. There's no leader--if there was, it'd be me but that's besides the point--so you have no reason to hide your ideas and thoughts. Don't be intimidated by these two. You're all teammates now." Hyosuke looked down. Wow, this lady was brutal.