Naruto - Rise of the Red Cloud - OOC

Is this any good, @VanceXentan? I didn’t fill in the jutsu section, mostly because I don’t want to google all the applicable ones until the rest of her is all good.

And yes, she is a blatant ripoff.

Character Sheet:
Name: Rei Yamauchi

Nickname/Alias: The Ghost of the Rock, The Bloody Traitor of the Rock

Gender: Female

Age: 24

Birthplace: The Village Hidden in Rocks

Clan/Bloodline: N/A

Rank: (Regarding your rank, if you had one, before you left a village) Jounin

Chakra Natures: Earth

Appearance: Rei is 155 cm (5’1”) and 45 kg (100 lb). She’s slender and lithe, and she typically wears a skin-tight white bodysuit underneath her cloak, the same suit she wore alone as a normal Rock-nin. She has pale blue hair, a paler shade than the sky, and piercing red eyes. She usually wears her hair down to her neck, but no longer, preferring to keep it short and out of the way.

Personality: Rei can best be described as emotionless. Not that she doesn’t feel them - no training can do that - but that they’re as foreign to her as a life without chakra. She doesn’t come across as cold, however; she simply seems withdrawn, like a person whose inner life is far more interesting than most people’s real lives. Indeed, Rei is prone to fits of introspection, and sees equally clearly to the hearts of others.

History: Civilian-born nin are famous for having low chakra levels, but better chakra control. Women are also well know for having lower chakra levels, but higher control. Why, then, did Rei have one of the highest chakra levels at birth in Rock’s (admittedly short) history? Why did a civilian girl even have discernible chakra levels at birth? A lost bloodline, maybe, or a quirk of genetics, or a fallen god’s whispers of destiny. Whatever it was, the Hidden Rock didn’t care. A ninja was a ninja. As such, she was taken under the government’s control - a shocking thing, maybe, to the lowlanders, but it probably saved her from being killed by a crazy missing-nin in the Land of Earth. In the years since the last Great Ninja Wars, Rock had become excellent at forging the perfect nin, one who thought of themselves as a tool and only a tool. Only the Leaf’s Root - the worst kept secret in the Ninja world - was better at it.

As such, Rei’s only memento of her parents was a name, and a sad one at that. “Rei” - “Return.” She never could, even if she’d wanted to; both parents died a few years later to some bloodthirsty nin. Even her surname wasn’t her parents’ - “Yamauchi,” “inside the mountain,” simply reflected that she was taken by the Hidden Rock. It was not a happy upbringing. Immense power meant immense discipline, and for her it was from infancy. Pain was perfectly normal, and - by the time the Rock thought her ready for use, around age 10 - she had lived up to another meaning of her name, “Zero.” Her genin team was unremarkable; a black haired sailor and a Rock clan-nin’s son and a redheaded daughter of a minor clan fled to the Rock from the Land of Lightning. Amazingly, they all managed to survive their exam intact, and became chuunin during an unremarkable exam in the Hidden Mist at age 11. Jounin followed a year after, as it was more a formality than anything; if revealed, the other villages wouldn’t question a Jounin doing the questionable missions Rei was assigned: assassinations, primarily. More than a few small nations to the east of Water collapsed due to Rei slaughtering their entire nobility.

By age 20, though, she had been brought back to the village; in the span since her promotion, she’d trained up to the level a proper Jounin would be at, and even surpassed it. After killing the daimyo of the Land of Rivers, and more importantly his 5 A-rank ninja guard, she was recognized as S-rank by the Hidden Leaf and the Hidden Sand. She was much too valuable a tool to lose to a concentrated hunter-nin strike team, so they had her running domestic missions. Chief among those was weeding out the village’s own weaklings. With full, albeit secret, approval of the Tsuchikage, she cut her forehead-protector and launched into the crowd. Any ninja who couldn’t escape - oh, there was no illusions by the Rock leadership that the vast majority of their nin could hold a fight against Rei - was cut down, and those that survived to fight another day did. The exercise was productive, if the recent jump in mission completion count - the accepted but failed missions by weaker nin bogging down the numbers - was any indication. Anyway, Rei found herself alone, which she didn’t really mind. It was better than being in Rock. Alas, the Rock apparently had little more use for her, if their sending assassins was any indication. At least, presumably they were assassins; why else would the only nin who could have a chance of defeating her and would leave the village, her old teammates, be there? A brief conflict rose in her heart, as she looked at them; was her dying an order they simply were the medium for, or was she still supposed to follow the order from earlier not to be assassinated by those claiming to be Rock nin to get close. The latter seemed more likely. She cut them down with a kunai, and as she looked at the drops of their blood rolling down her knife, she frowned. A negative feeling in her stomach, like an illness. She couldn’t pinpoint the cause, but she resolved to lie down anyway. Liberal application of Earth chakra formed a pleasant room to sleep in, one that only someone with a doujustu could note was artificial. She’d decide what to do come morning; it wasn’t like an Uchiha was around to notice her.
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Weapons/Items: (optional however if you don't have something listed that isn't basic then you can't just magic it up mid fight.)
Kunai, Shuriken, etc.

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Jutsu:

TBD (Basically, all Canon Earth jutsu).

In case it isn’t clear, the “assassins” aren’t. They’re trying to go all Naruto and Sasuke on her, and make things worse.
 
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@Mytzonia You left out any reference on how he gets in with the Akatsuki. Did he flee the village with Shina after the Senju guy's plan failed to defeat the Root? Did you leave before hand? After? Also your picture is literally Indra.
 
@Impudimp like Myt you forgot to include how you got into the Akatsuki. Did Shina/Kaito recruit you? Did you just happen to fall in with them due to coincidence? I'll help if you need/ask for it. Also you'll need to elaborate on the 'Several water-based genjutsu' part that is both vague, and could be anything.
 
@Shiki The character background to me seems fine just please space things out better in the future its a rather big clump of text and I have to copy, and paste to do it properly. Like the others you lack a definitive way you joined the akatsuki I'm assuming Shina brought you in based on the last part, and you're new to the group (not that its been around long it formed not too long ago).
 
@Impudimp like Myt you forgot to include how you got into the Akatsuki. Did Shina/Kaito recruit you? Did you just happen to fall in with them due to coincidence? I'll help if you need/ask for it. Also you'll need to elaborate on the 'Several water-based genjutsu' part that is both vague, and could be anything.
Help would be appreciated. Tori no Kuni is between Wind and Earth. If anyone he'd end up meeting Kaito before he met Shina simply by proximity I think. Hi no Kuni wouldn't be somewhere he would be probably be trekking naturally as he tends to follow water ways... and water always flows toward the ocean. We could always say he's heading more toward Kumo or better yet Yu? The land of hot water would be directly opposite of Kaze no Kuni?

Maybe he tries to get Kaito to escort him there? Since crossing Kaze without someone who knows the desert is more a death wish than anything else. I'd actually prefer not to have him heading toward Kumo... since it's likely too hostile for his tastes, less than Kiri, but still rather militaristic. Plus he might be interesting in learning some steam techniques. I dunno. I'm just rambling.
 
@Impudimp That would just be another job to Kaito who would see him to a close destination to the cloud village before leaving him to his own devices because he is a wanted ninja. The goal is to have everyone already inducted into the akatsuki to avoid the tedious nature of 'why should i join you?' deal especially when the two are a cold blooded murder, and a betrayed uchiha are on the other end of it. Perhaps on his way back from a mission Kaze was attacked by some sort of talented ninja, and Kaito offered him a spot in his plan to form the akatsuki?
 
@Mytzonia You left out any reference on how he gets in with the Akatsuki. Did he flee the village with Shina after the Senju guy's plan failed to defeat the Root? Did you leave before hand? After? Also your picture is literally Indra.
Okay, I added a quick line. I also chose indra because he was basically the blue print for my character, although you don't seem to like that very much, so I changed it.
 
@Mytzonia I'm not sure how I'm going to handle your character being a sleeper in the leaf. The idea was to have us all in the hidden rock (Ishigakure) (not stone that's a different village all together) and then set out to gain the last few members before setting out on our own personal missions. With you in the leaf you're essentially by yourself all the rest of us are wanted rogues, and you're stuck in the hospital for most of the day.

As for the indra picture I wanted a change because there's a difference between inspiration, and literally just looking exactly like the character.
 
Just thought I'd mention I'm still around. I didn't go anywhere. Just waiting for the RP to launch and reading others character sheets.
 
@Mytzonia I'm not sure how I'm going to handle your character being a sleeper in the leaf. The idea was to have us all in the hidden rock (Ishigakure) (not stone that's a different village all together) and then set out to gain the last few members before setting out on our own personal missions. With you in the leaf you're essentially by yourself all the rest of us are wanted rogues, and you're stuck in the hospital for most of the day.

As for the indra picture I wanted a change because there's a difference between inspiration, and literally just looking exactly like the character.


Well at the end, it says he vowed to help his sister, so I think it's entirely possible for us to be in the hidden rock. I don't really see a conflict. As far as the picture, i thought it would be better to take kishimoto's original creation rather than someone else, or not have a picture all together- but it's changed, so I think we can move on unless you have something else.
 
@Mytzonia Alright well as long as he's in the hidden rock I'll let the character through.

@Lewis the Elder appreciate you saying so lewis.
 
@VanceXentan I might be joining you if another roleplay doesn't work out. That cool?
 
We start when the others finish, if they can't in two days I'll start the IC.

@Cush Almighty fine by me cush.
 



Character Sheet:
Name: Seppun, Otome,
Nickname/Alias: God's Wrath, Gavel Of God
Gender: Female
Age: 25
Birthplace: Komogakure, Hidden Cloud Village
Clan/Bloodline: Seppun
Rank: Jonin
Chakra Natures: Lighting, Water,
Appearance:
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Otome is a beautiful young woman with milk chocolate skin with long ash-white and Chartreuse colored eyes. She stands at 5'9 and has a noticeably large chest that she bares openly with little shame. She has an athletic, slender, and curvy body with well-toned muscles. She takes good care of her hair, priding herself on it. She has her left eye covered with her headband. It hides the scared part of her face and her missing eye.' Under her Akatsuki robes, she wears a fitted mesh armor reaching from her neck to her thighs.

Personality:
Otome Seppun is a woman with a big heart. She isn't mean and is usually respectful, even to her enemies, unless they anger her. She is kind but seeing unjustified credulity only brings out her bad side. Otome is soft-spoken, and doesn't sound threatening or intimidating in the slightest. Her title luckily does the intimidation for her, Gaval of God. She offers to help when she can, taking her time to even interfere in situations that aren't her problem. She's chatty, always attempting to lighten the mood and bring a smile to someone's face.

Being recognized as the Gaval Of God, it's no surprise she is judgemental. She hates those who are evil for the sack of being evil, finding such people worth killing. She will not bask in their death but wish them a peaceful rest. She attempts to understand people, to change her perspective and learn something new from them. She hates being manipulated or lied too, but even she can be found guilty of this. Sometimes she'll people what they want to hear, instead of what they need to hear. She is capable of making sacrifices as well, there have been times done some heinous things to complete the goal.

History:
Otome Seppun, adopted daughter of the Seppun clan. She has little memory of her Father and Mother but has been told they weren't the best of people. They were put to death when she was 5 trying to enact a revolt against the Raikage, her adoptive Father. She grew up with many brothers and Sisters, some actual blood of the Raikage and some adopted like her. She questioned why she was picked instead of any other child. Was it that he felt sorry for her? The Raikage was always such a kind man.

Having a large family, someone always had Otome's back. Her kind personality made her an easy target for bullies, people assumed she was some weakling. She let others walk over her, she once let other children use her as their doormat. It was a game they told her, even if she was caused physical pain in the process, she was happy to help people. Though her personality was weak, in the Cloud Village's training Academy she dominated, outperforming most of her classmate's in exams and Tai Jutsu. She remained humble about her proficiencies. Some students hated her for abilities, maybe it was the fact she was always trying to help others, even without asking. A good quality, but some people's pride is easily damaged.

One day, when Otome was out by a river enjoying a picnic, some bitter classmates found her. They started insulting her and her friend, going so far as kicking their picket basic around. Quickly they escalated to Violence, and punched Otome in the face and kicked her in her ribs for good measure. Her friend, Gosha, fought back when Otome wouldn't and became the one being beaten to a pulp. The usual passive Otome snapped, She blacked out and when she finally came too, she had beaten the bullies until they couldn't get back up. One even tried to pull a kunai out on her and she instinctively stabbed it into his rib repeatedly in the same spot. She was left with blood on her hands, and the first thing Otome did was try to stop the bullies bleeding with her picnic blanket.

Shortly after Otome was given a phycological evaluation They found Otome had repressed anger that would manifest itself under extreme stress, usually caused by violence. After this day, Raikage arranged for Otome to have private class until she was able to join a squad of Genin. They taught Otome to use this anger and focus it into her training. To master her Kekkai Genkai and further improve her Taijutsu skills. Eventually, they trusted her to be put on a team of Genin, she was a year older than them but they became fast friends.

Every mission they went on was a success, from easy missions like saving a dog from a tree to dealing with bandits. It was great being an actual ninja, helping people and forming friendships. As expected, Otome quickly rose through the ranks and achieved Jonin at 18 years old. In that time she improved her Gale Kekkai Genkai and achieved use of Black Lighting passed down by the Raikage. She has served as a leader of Jonin missions many times, usually in the destruction of direct threats to the Hidden Cloud Village. They were rarely given information on their target, just that they needed to be eliminated.

As she grew older, she started questioning her Father and found some people she was eliminating were innocent. They weren't criminal, but people who peacefully wanted to change things. She also took notice of all of his adopted children were nothing Kekkai Genkai users. He didn't adopt her out of love, but for her power, to strengthen the Hidden Cloud. This caused Otome to blackout and attack the Raikage in his sleep. She failed to kill him, he was strong, stronger than she ever expected. He ended up taking her left eye in the process of their short fight. She was forced to leave the Cloud Village and become a rogue ninja. She later would meet Shina Uchiha and follow her instead. Otome is powerful, but maybe she lacks the strength to stand on her own two feet?

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Weapons/Items:

Kunai
Shurikens
Giant Shurikens
Explosive Paper Bomb
Smoke Paper Bomb
Flash Paper Bomb
Electrocution Paper Bomb

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Kekkei Genkai:
Name of Kekkei Genkai: Black Lighting Release, Storm Release
Clan: None ( Inherited From Mother )
Description:
Gale Style (Storm release)
Black Lightning Lighting Release

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Jutsu:

Canon:
Azure Palm Dragon
Surfing Strike
Lighting-Water Dragon Jutsu
Water Dragon Jutsu
Lighting Shadow Clone Jutsu
Water Blade
Lightning Spider Web
Lighting Beast Tracking Fang
Thunderclap Arrow
Lighting Fist Slam
Shadow Clones
Water Substitution Jutsu
Black Panther
Double Black Panther
Laser Circus (Advance Version Is Black)

100 Meter Punch
1000 Years Of Death
Heavenly Foot of Pain

Custom Jutsu
Name of Technique:
Type of Jutsu: Nin/Gen/Tai
Rank:
Range: Close/Mid/Long
Nature Type:
Description:
Weaknesses:
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Name of Technique: Grasshopper's Flying Cloud Kick
Type of Jutsu: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Range: Close
Nature Type: None
Description:
Otome backflips and lands on her hands with both legs tuck into her stomach, she pushes upwarps at that angle and kicks her opponent in their chin. A simple technique with a lot of power behind it. It's a quick attack meant to catch someone off guard and knock them out.
Weaknesses:
Blocking it if prepared or quick enough to react to the technique.

Name of Technique: Gale Style: God's Raining Tears
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Long
Nature Type: Gale Style (Water+Lightning)
Description: Shoots multiple beams into the air and then brings her hands down. What follows after are lighting beams in the shape of raindrops to pierce her opponent. One raindrop is easy to avoid, multiple is a different story. This shower decimates her enemy as they are drenched in lightning. To avoid most damage, best stay in one spot of fine cover. Running away from this attack and being caught in it will only cause you more grief.

Weaknesses:
Can be guarded against when the target(s) fine cover. Can be stopped completely if hands are stopped from coming down.

Name of Technique: Dragon Fist Of Dark Lightning
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Rank: S
Range: Mid, Close
Nature Type: (Black) Lighting

Description:
The ultimate combination of focusing her chakra flow and use of her Black lighting. Her entire arm radiates with black electricity and shreds the cloth around her arm into nothing. She can fire this technique from mid and create a lightning dragon that tracks the opponent, bites them, then explodes in furies blast of Black Lightning. When used at point blank range, it carries the opponent into the sky and flies down into the ground and explodes. This technique his harness best when Otome is angry, more exactly, furious. She can slightly control the direction of the attack, but it can't follow an opponent for long.

Weaknesses:
She has to release this attack and had poor control of it. Can be redirected by target so they may avoid being hit by the attack. Otome is lucky if she can use this technique twice.

Name of Technique: Giant Thunder Hawk "Nemuriin"
Type of Jutsu: Summon Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Range: Varies
Nature Type: Lightning, Wind
Description:
Summons a giant bird named Nemuriin that is about 12 feet tall with a 40 feet wingspan. It is capable of creating wind blades with its wings and firing lightning from its mouth. It's a lazy creature, usually sleep when it is summoned and needs Otome to tickle its stomach wake it up.
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Weaknesses:
Food, Alchohol, or playing dead. He is quick to give up on something. He'd rather sleep.



 
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Well she's looking good so far cush.
 
@VanceXentan Hey just read over my history and tell me what I should add or change. I'm trying to make Otome into a spy for the Hidden Cloud if that is cool with you. Her motivations might change as she learns about the Akatsuki and their ultimate goal.
 
I'd prefer to keep spies away especially since we'll be heading to the hidden cloud to prison break the third raikage's brother. The reason is simple. If we have a spy that means you're going to have to keep it secret from an ex-anbu, a ex-uchiha police, and the like. Not exactly easy especially when their rogue status was due to infiltration, and attempted subversion. So either we're all incompetent, or you're doing little actual spying.
 
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She's finished for now. Her history involves the Raikage and that he has adoptive children. Is that cool or will that conflict with your story? Since she is the adoptive daughter of the Raikage, she'll be freeing her uncle. As for the spying thing, I was thinking of having Otome come around you your way of thinking eventually. But I get where you are coming from.
 
@Cush Almighty it depends on which raikage you're talking about. The ones I planned for the rp were 'C' a ninja around the age of Kaito/Shina and the current 4th raikage. I can make him 5th if it suits you. The 3rd raikage was killed when the brother of the second killed him for considering, and then appointing C as his replacement because he viewed the man as irresponsible, C being hot heated, but extremely powerful. That makes the second raikage's brother, the one joining us, as a rather old individual around his seventies at this point. If you want to make him a sort of pseudo great uncle that's fine. He was looked up to in the cloud for being honest, and kind but very hasty. He's supposed to be the cool old man archetype.