If I'm going to be joining this, I have a few suggestions on the rules to alter. Please keep in mind that, even though I am very angry right now, I want to make clear as to why I have become so angry over this, and I want to prevent future confusions to occur.
First, I have a problem with rule eight, and this may affect how people see rule nine. Rule eight says that, to unlock something, we must send a PM to the GM. Rule nine says that you may be busy, and I mention it only because what I am about to say may conflict with it. Rule eight is, for the most part, more work on the players than, well, fun. Especially if the GM reads over and misses some things, and then says something that is practically non-existent. At the time this post is being posted, there are 17 rules, and I have read through all of them by now. The GM should either get a Co-GM, to help with reading posts when she cannot, or find some other means of keeping in check with it herself or making her players keep check of it without having to go through a bunch of more work and trouble to do so.
Second, is rule ten. Now, the rule states how we unlock new areas, but then there's the added bonus of a required word. This should not be just cramped in here in another rule, where it can be easily missed. If the GM can miss this and still deny players the right to enter -because- they have met this requirement, something must be done to make this word more obvious. I won't tell you how to do this, but please, make it so that yourself and others will not skim or forget it's there, and then make up a new word that is non-existent in the rules.
Finally, there's rule eleven. This rule may sound similar to my problems with rule eight. This rule says that we will be getting 'credits' and that they will be stored and saved up over time. Now, are the players expected to keep track of this, or is the GM? Because the players may not have the time necessarily to always keep track, or look back to find how much they have. And since Rule rule nine says you will be busy, it sounds very much like you need a Co-GM for this. Otherwise, I am concerned you may get more problems than solutions from this RP and GMing another by yourself. Don't be afraid to ask for help, or find someone to help you with these RPs.
Well, I'm done ranting here. I will await an answer, and that will determine if I will want to join after all I had to go through or not.