Ok, so I have a new comic I"m making. D: It's called Lost Souls, and I just want your opinion on how I"m doing so far. I'm already on page 4 four so far. ;3; okay, here it goes. (Sorry if the pics don't show up. ;3; ) (Gonna Add more to this page) Yeah, I said I made four pages, but the fourth page isn't done yet. ;3; This is my first comic, so I need ideaz!!! Pweez!!! Dx By the way, I've already planned what the girl (Who was weeping) was going to say.