Lonely

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  1. Here's one of my poems from the vault of my creations. When I wrote this, I had the song "Porcelain" by Red Hot Chili Peppers. If I were to sing the poem using the melody from the song, it would come out nicely. That's probably why my teacher thought I plagiarized lmao!

    Lonely
    Am I only the remaining dove?
    Can I find someone to share my love?
    Searching and hoping until I am dead

    Lonely
    I think I drank too much wine last night
    And now I am deprived of my might
    Twisting and tossing on top of my bed
    All alone, hold me, all alone

    Lonely
    I sit in my chair writing a poem
    My heart burning and filling with loam
    I thrust my head toward the tabletop

    Lonely
    Limping as I head for that dark door
    On the way I fell down on the floor
    Struggling and hurting and crying for help
    All alone, hold me, all alone
    All alone, love me, all alone
     
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