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Salsacookies
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Midian
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lostfaith
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I was enjoying it until the tension chord.
The only sound the first part needed to be eerie was the "click, clack" of the light going on and off, but nope. They had to go and ruin it.
I turned the sound off after that so I don't know if they did it again, though. I bet they did at the end.
The second part wasn't very creepy, honestly. And giving the monster a face for a cheap jumpscare ruined the whole thing; it took away the fear of the unknown. Also, suddenly it can be seen in light when it couldn't be before? It was right in the lamp light. Can it choose what conditions it can be seen in?
The only sound the first part needed to be eerie was the "click, clack" of the light going on and off, but nope. They had to go and ruin it.
I turned the sound off after that so I don't know if they did it again, though. I bet they did at the end.
The second part wasn't very creepy, honestly. And giving the monster a face for a cheap jumpscare ruined the whole thing; it took away the fear of the unknown. Also, suddenly it can be seen in light when it couldn't be before? It was right in the lamp light. Can it choose what conditions it can be seen in?
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