What an old-looking 19 year old. I feel sorry for his mid-life crisis.
He only
looks 19, you said on the age thing grumble grumble enough with the grumble already. I'm expecting life-extension treatments to be at least present, right?
It's probably for granted, but if he's going to be described as smart and stuff, I expect him to MAKE smart decisions. Well, either that, or I want to see him have panic attacks from successive strategic failures.
He's a physicist, not a strategist. If he tries strategy, it'll take him more than a few shots to get it right, especially given that he's never really had to fight anyone before his freelancing.
Also, I'll have to invest in ear plugs to counter his constant arguments. XD
...Yeah. Sensible.
>natural aptitude to race's power
Powers are manifested via exposure to Ley radiation. Through reproduction, kids can get powers without exposure to said radiation, but the powers that are manifested are pretty damn random. So no, their race wouldn't have any sort of 'race-specific' power.
Oh, okay. I figured that there'd be at least some deciding factors in manifestation, but random is fair. I'll fix that.
Can you use plain speech to explain his power? Sounds like a massive hardcounter to a lot of things, really. Like...enemy has impenetrable defenses? Dark matter it~
Transferring dark matter to baryonic matter isn't really as broken as it sounds. Impregnable defences will still be impregnable because the matter is tangible now. Obviously, since there's no signal involved either, you can only really do it with things that conduct bioenergy, such as the metal stick. Think of it as a making-stuff power that you can't use in the same general area much or else it just doesn't work because you just used up all the dark matter and it's just a giant troll like that because you can't see how much you're using.
Seeing how he's Loki, I'm pretty sure you can just find drawn pics of him on the Internet. Feel free to draw him if you're bored though.
He's not Loki, I just found pictures that happened to be Loki! Auric and Loki look different how did you even get Loki from that description
That world was fun to read, and I always liked giant-ass monster-predators. Good job.
*glowing right now*
The missiles...are they like rockets, and you just fire them out? Or are they hypersonic nightmares that actually follow targets around? Six thousand bullets is going to be a pain to keep track of, btw. XD
The missiles do
have a targeting system... It's just on the mech. They take advantage of the fact they're hypersonic to assume they'll get there before a pilot moves (so AI-controlled evasion safety is kind of a bitch to them). That means that the explosive radius of the rockets isn't exactly nuclear on the basis that the user is going to be pretty close when the blow.
As for the machine gun... Arbitrary numbers and a calculator!
Go into detail about the whole time alteration thing, please. More specifically...what can he do with it, and how much energy/stamina/whatever else does it use? Same with his uses for dark matter. Because both time manipulation and dark matter shenanigans sounds stealth-OP to an uneducated pleb like myself.
*wiki mode on*
The first thing to note about time alteration is that it isn't travelling. You can't go back, you can't go forth. You certainly can't rewind it. If it stops, it won't restart. But that's not possible anyway: the entire universe isn't slowed, but instead the local time around the user is distorted and sped up. With combined efforts, it is possible for the users to create combined localised dilation of 800%, but alone, the limit is really 300%, and Auric has a personal limit of about 250% at his maximum concentration (i.e. not having to concentrate on a fight or something) without an adrenal kick up the backside to tell him to go faster.
There is also the minor issue of having to gently slide around the speed rate, because if you let it all go at once, your mind snaps out-of-place (metaphorically speaking) and you get what is basically the nastiest mix of decompression sickness and concussion symptoms you can think of.
TL;DR: All he can do is slow it down, and only by about half of what it's possible for him to do if he's in a fight, unless that isn't enough for him not to get
utterly pummelled.
AMC is basically, as explained earlier, a "making stuff" power. The user can configure the properties as it comes through, but has about 11 nanoseconds to do that, so decide what you're making before you do it.
The limits are that if you get distracted, the results aren't very nice, and that there is a certain amount you can convert. Obviously, you'd be limited by material, but you can also only convert around 10kg in one go (not one moment, mind) and oly about 600kg without resting before you're compelled to walk off, brandishing middle fingers as you go.