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Oh girl no it's not a glitch.

They're just not there.

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Yes we're certainly still open.

A bid has been put out for Green Arrow, but your other choices are fine
Alright, I am stuck between Catwoman and Static. Could the GM or someone help me decide? I already have pre-made character sheets for them, I just need to use one.

By the way, do you guys happen to know a user named, The Grey Warden, on roleplayerguild? If so, I am that user.
 
Alright, I am stuck between Catwoman and Static. Could the GM or someone help me decide? I already have pre-made character sheets for them, I just need to use one.

By the way, do you guys happen to know a user named, The Grey Warden, on roleplayerguild? If so, I am that user.
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I would suggest Static. We already have one Lame Ass Powerless Loser (Looking at you, Hillan), and it looks like we have another coming in the form of Green Arrow. Bring it Static and let's make sparks fly.

XOXO,
Raja
 
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I would suggest Static. We already have one Lame Ass Powerless Loser (Looking at you, Hillan), and it looks like we have another coming in the form of Green Arrow. Bring it Static and let's make sparks fly.

XOXO,
Raja
Who is this ho trying to take my XO's?

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Though I agree, Static would be a good and interesting choice.

~XoXo

Stein

Right. We call that a career move.
Amen.
 
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  • | NAME |
    Virgil Ovid Hawkins

    | ALIASES |
    Static Shock, Static

    | PLACE OF BIRTH |
    Paris Island, Dakota City

    | SPECIES |
    Human

    | SEX |
    Male

    | AGE |
    Twenty-years-old

    | SEXUALITY |
    Bisexual

  • | ABILITIES |
    Bang Baby - Since the explosion at the docks, Static's physiology was altered to generate raw electromagnetic energy from his entire body. It had only been almost a year since the explosion and he has learned to manipulate his new abilities. As for enhancing them, it will take time and training to discover more of his abilities. Controlling them is another story and difficult from him.

    Super-Conductive Electromagnetism - Static can sense sources of electromagnetic energy or objects above or underground. Things like underground water pipes, portable devices, and many other things can be magnetize and demagnetize, depending on the type of metal.

    Electromagnetic Fields - Electromagnetic Field are physical fields produced by electrically charged objects. It affects the behavior of charged objects in the vicinity of the field. They are like Electric fields or X-rays, but Static can generate barriers and shields that he could use in battle. Static's ability to cast his barriers and shields are done similar to Earth and the Sun. However, Static hasn't enough training to tame that ability.

    Electromagnetic Levitation - The ability to lift anything may seem easy to do, but for Static it is different. He uses his static to grab onto things to throw them or use them for another purpose. Metal items are the easiest for him to levitate, while wooden items are the hardest. This ability is the hardest for him to control, giving him headaches and nosebleeds while he is using the ability.

    Wavelength Tuning -

    Electrokinesis -

    Electromagnetic Force Bolts -


    | SKILLS |
    Science -

    Tactical Analysis -


    | LIMITATIONS |
    Static is just starting to discover more uses of his power.

    | WEAKNESSES |

  • | WEAPONS |


    | TOOLS |


    | ATTIRE |

  • | BACKSTORY (This should be a brief backstory as it relates to either the characters time in between now and the invasion, or their motivation for joining, etc.) |

 
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  • | NAME: |
    Barda Free​

    | ALIAS(ES): |
    Big Barda​

    | PLACE OF BIRTH: |
    Apokolips​

    | SPECIES: |
    New God​


    | SEX: |
    Female​

    | SEXUALITY: |
    Heterosexual​

  • | ABILITIES: |
    Barda, being a New God, retains the privileges of their unique physiology from being in such close proximity to the Source. Her power set includes:
    Immortality: Technically, Barda is over 200 years old, though she hardly looks to be older than 30 as she's stopped physically aging. Unless acted upon by an active outside force, Barda can live for multiple millennia.
    Superhuman Physiology: Barda's body is a powerhouse. Her New God physiology in conjunction with Darkseid's enhancements have made her extra durable. Blunt objects cause little harm to her, unless being wielded by someone with strength equal to hers. However, this doesn't extend to piercing and sharp objects.
    Her reflexes allow her to move at incredible speeds with heightened accuracy. Even with the weight of her armor, Barda can dodge bullets with relative ease.

    -Her stamina is notable due to her physiology and rigorous training. She can hold her own in battle for well over an hour.

    -Her physical strength allows her roughly lift around 100 tons.​

    | SKILLS: |
    -Master Combatant: Barda is a warrior through and through. Her martial arts is on par with notable figures.

    -Alien Knowledge and Tactician: Groomed from early to lead Darkseid's forces, Barda is just as cunning as she is powerful at choice times.​

    | LIMITATIONS: |

    | WEAKNESSES: |
    -Radion: Like all New Gods, Barda is vulnerable to the mysterious substance known as Radion. In sustained explosions or doses it can kill her. Though it isn't a particularly abundant substance, Barda is highly wary of it.

    -Scott Free: He clouds her thoughts. In his recent disappearance it has driven her to rash decisions. Barda has even vocally acknowledged about her concerns on whether she is unable to find her missing husband.​


  • | WEAPONS: |
    Mega Rod: And Apokoliptian weapon, Barda has used this nearly indestructible weapon in a variety of ways. It is roughly as long as a mace and weighs around 150 pounds. The dense piece of weaponry and technology has been used to best many a foe as a blunt weapons, tearing bone, skull and metal alike. It is also capable of producing blasts of concussive force. Barda is even able to channel it for different uses.​

    | TOOLS: |
    Aero-Discs: Small circular pads fitted under the foot for travel, they allow the user to levitate and travel. Barda can activate them at will, though they have a finite amount of energy before needing to be recharged.​

    | ATTIRE: |

    Apokoliptan Armor: Her armor from her days among Darkseid's forces serves her well. Able to absorb the brunt of many energy attacks and of course sharp objects, it carries with it durability and functionality that only armor from Apokolips can provide.​
  • | BACKSTORY:|

    On the day that would go down in history, Barda Free's largest worry had been working in time to return her crock pot in between a sparring session with Dianna and date night with Scott. Waking up that morning, she had no intention of dawning her fearsome mantle and charging head-first into a battle that would change her life the following year.

    She found herself on patrol at the request of Scott, rounding up smalltime rogue villains who had developed some sense of boldness on this day of all days. It wasn't until he contacted her, the usual light and carefree quality to his voice gone, that her stomach began to tighten. A warrior didn't fear battle, but dammit, what would this bring them this time? Their entire stay on this planet had been fraught with trial, testing circumstance and tribulation. What could have come up now that worried her husband so?

    She feared Apokolips troops when he began to fill her in on the "alien" nature of the attack, but they were soon identified otherwise. Along with her husband, Mister Miracle, they were one of the first on the scene along with the Kryptonian and the Amazon. For a moment, Barda became lost in the battle, feeling the ebb of nostalgia coloring her cheeks and flush of justice guiding her blows.

    Until they started becoming overwhelmed.

    The forces grew from nowhere and she was soon separated Scott, who had insisted on providing Superman backup. She held her position with Dianna, while Martian Manhunter and Green Lantern cleared through enemies. And for a second, she began to worry about the fate of their battle.

    That fear grew when Superman fell and for a second—the briefest of instances—Barda's mind was taken completely off of her husband as the Kryptonian fell.

    It had to be in that instance that he disappeared. That something—or someone—took her husband.

    Though the tides of the battle that day eventually turned, Barda felt no pleasure as she couldn't find her husband in the after-battle. J'onn requested her help in focusing his efforts on something larger that would help all of Earth, and Barda agreed on the premise that she continued to search for her husband when their forces were strong once more.

    In the ensuing year, she's been aiding in the construction of the Watchtower and chasing leads on the Green Lantern, the Flash and her husband.

    Even in the midst of her distress, she still has a desire to joing the League, recognizing what was lost when the Kryptonian fell.​
 
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  • | NAME: |
    Dinah Laurel Lance



    | ALIAS(ES): |
    Black Canary



    | PLACE OF BIRTH: |
    Gotham City



    | SPECIES: |
    Metahuman



    | SEX: |
    Female



    | SEXUALITY: |
    Heterosexual



  • | ABILITIES: |
    Canary Cry
    – Dinah possesses a metagene that gives her a potent sonic attack, able to damage and stun foes or objects, to the point of shattering metal. She possesses an incredible degree of control over her vocal cords. This enables her to mimic sounds and generate any sound she desires, even developing several abilities. The Canary Cry has been able to reach 300 decibels, which is enough to make a person's ears start bleeding even if they're not the attack target.

    | SKILLS: |


    | LIMITATIONS: |


    | WEAKNESSES: |

  • | WEAPONS: |


    | TOOLS: |


    | ATTIRE: |

  • | BACKSTORY: |

So far it looks good, I'd say just finish the remaining parts of it. And on the area of abilities, clean up the Canary Cry a bit. I know you can give me more segmented abilities instead of a small generic overview. Don't pull a Wraith and list every power you can think of, go mainly for the applications you see your character regularly. I ask this from you because I know that sonic screeches can either be OP or underplayed. I want to see what you can give me.

Semi W.I.P, probably gonna add more to the backstory as I just glossed over everything. Then again; who likes making Character Sheets?

  • | NAME: |
    Timothy Jackson "Tim" Drake
    Tim Wayne

    | ALIAS(ES): |
    Formerly; Robin, Red Robin.

    Batman

    The Caped Crusader
    The Dark Knight
    The Detective



    | PLACE OF BIRTH: |
    Gotham

    | SPECIES: |
    Homo Sapiens
    Batmannius Superious.



    | SEX: |
    Male.

    | SEXUALITY: |
    Bisexual.

  • | ABILITIES: |

    While to some rather inconceivable; Tim is a man. He's not a superman or a ultrahumanite. He doesn't have super strength nor is he as fast as a speeding bullet. He's a Human who through hard work, natural talent and wise mentorship has become the pinnacle of human potential.


    | SKILLS: |

    Martial Arts Training:
    Tim has been training since he was 4 years old, he started doing acrobatics in kindergarten, and was a fully fledged gymnast at 9. A junior champion in Judo at 11. He started his robin training at 13, and was deemed ready for the streets shortly after he saved Batman from a ambush. He's not only been trained by Bruce, he's also been trained by Ted Grant , the man whom trained most of the modern superheroes in the art of close quarters hand-to-hand combat. He has also gone toe to toe with Lady Shiva, one of the most dangerous assassins in the world and trained under her - and survived to tell the tale. Tim's a master of over a dousing different forms of martial arts, but the most dominant is the Ninjutsu and Bojutsu styles. He's fast and agile, relying on momentum over raw strength.

    Genius Intellect:
    Tim's a Polymath, a expert hacker and a inovative scientist who could be a world leading physicist, engineer or scientist if he chose to. His IQ's measured in the top 1 percent of people, few humans being his equal.
    He earned himself his college degree in advanced physics at 19, two semesters after graduating High School as a underachiever. His skill in science is almost as numerous as his skill in martial arts. His bright intellect makes him a excellent leader, capable of devising plans within plans.

    Detective Skills:
    While his fists and his scientific mind are both beneficial for him and great assets, it's Tim's detective skills that earned him his right to the cowl. He's been admitted by both Bruce and his nemesis, Ra's Al Ghul, to being a detective who has the potential to far surpass the original Batman's skill as a detective. As a teenager he quickly deducted the identity of Batman and Robin where few others could. During his time as a Robin he solved situations quicker, and more elegantly than his counterparts did using his brain instead of his fists, and even during his exile from the crime fighting life he still solved conspiracies with great ease. If he hadn't been the ward of the world's greatest detective, there certainly would've been a man in Hub City who would have liked to call Tim his protogé once upon a time.

    Unlike Bruce, he's still had the experiences of being part of a team from the start, that he isn't alone. Thus making him a far more cooperative dark knight than his surrogate father ever were.


    | LIMITATIONS: |
    For all of his magnificent skills and tools, Tim is still a 21 year old man. A kick in the stomach hurts, a knife in the chest sends him to the hospital, and a bullet in the head lands him in the morgue. He's used to having someone far greater than himself watching over him. He's still not used to the cowl, he always knew that it was his destiny, yet he never could imagine it was this heavy. He's limited by his human body, he needs rest, sustenance and air, something his mentor never seemed to have time for.

    | WEAKNESSES: |

    He's a pseudo ordinary man who lives in a world where he goes toe to toe with monsters who posses godlike powers on a regular basis. His skin bleeds and his bones break and they don't heal in a couple of minutes. Every move he takes is a carefully calculated risk, throwing a punch at the wrong time can lead to his demise.
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  • | WEAPONS: |

    The Batarangs:
    The trademark weapon of the Batfamily. The throwing shuriken shaped like bats. Batman deploys many varieties, from those armed with explosives to electricity.


    Bo Staff:
    Timothy's weapon of choice, he's been called the greatest user of the bo-staff alive, having beaten a multitude of high profile foes using the weapon. The staff he carries is made out of darkened titanium and aluminum blend, allowing it to be as durable and strong as diamond, and as dexterous and light as bamboo. It can be taken apart into two shorter weapons, such as Eskrima Sticks or Batons - weapons which Tim is drastically less skilled with.

    | TOOLS: |

    Utility Belt:
    The biggest box of toys any one man has. In the belt around his waist Tim keeps listening devices, grappling guns, handheld laser cutters, explosives, a wide variety of batarangs, handcuffs , smoke pellets, joker toxin-antidote and


    | ATTIRE: |

    Tim dons a completely revamped version of the Batman suit. Using lighter fabrics and more mechanized parts than Bruce did before him, aiming to work smarter - not harder than his mentor did. It is armed with joint servomotors under a layer of hardened kevlar and carbon fiber weave, making the suit retardant to both bullets and blades. The servomotors in his elbows, knees and wrists allows him to double his strength, the titanium layered gloves allows him to pack quite the punch. The suit comes with a wide variety of tools, such as the utility belt, holsters for his Bo-Staff and several tools inside of the suit itself. The suit is capable of glide flying by extending the sides of the coat into makeshift wings that hardens into a strong alloy using electric pulses. The helm covers his entire face, protecting his face from bullets, while also providing him with a information HUD, communications and a satellite uplink at any given moment. He powers it all using a kinetic energy generator, thus preventing any need for any form of engine inside of the suit.
    The suit is flame, toxic and water proof and has been extensively stress tested against electricity.

  • | BACKSTORY: |
    Tim had been a genius all of his life, he never had to make an effort in his entire childhood - things were easy for the young Mr.Drake. School was easy, and the future seemed bright and calm for him.
    Till he went to the circus with his parents, to see the Flying Graysons. The same night they were murdered, and the Batman arrived on the scene. Tim spent ever since fascinated with the caped Crusader and his sidekick, and quickly became something of a super-fan, more of a fanatic, really. One night there were live coverage of a fight featuring the Batman and Robin, and when Robin performed a quadruple somersault, a rare maneuver that only a Flying Grayson could do, Tim quickly put the pieces behind Robin's identity together. And so it began, his trail into the life of the bat.

    Four years later, it was him doing the somersaults in the red costume, punching and kicking his way into the history books as the third boy wonder, following the demise of his predecessor. His relationship with Bruce was originally stale, as Wayne didn't want to endanger anyone else again, but shortly he opened up when Tim convinced him that he needed a partner. In his teens he was a Titan, and quickly became their leader, and at 17 he left the boy wonder costume at home to attend college while leading the Titans as Red Robin. During his time as the Robin-Themed hero, he faced many threats, Deathstroke, The Court of Owls, Brainiac, The Main Man Lobo, dating, the cobra cult, and game night with Impulse and Superboy.

    Yet, the biggest challenge he would ever face happened a year ago, when he and his titans were fighting in South parts of France against the white martians, when the world stood still and the greatest hero of them all met his demise. The day Supeman died. His biggest challenge came from seeing Bruce tear himself to pieces looking for ways to prove that Clark hadn't died - he couldn't have, that his guardian, mentor, and friend completely engulfed himself in a different sort of work than he ever had before. Bruce left Gotham behind, searching the earth - possibly beyond - for signs of life from the last son of krypton. With the Batman gone, Tim was left to either continue to lead the Titans as the Red Robin and let Gotham sunder, or he would pick up his mentor's mantle and continue the crusade that was started long ago.

    There was never really a choice.

Don't add more to the backstory. I would actually say take a good chunk of that out because it's stuff we don't need to know. Get to the meat of this particular story (I.E. his involvement which you already touch on and his ensuing actions leading up to the present day.) I honestly stopped reading after the "genius all his life" and immediately skipped to the last paragraph. You're giving me a brief backstory in relation to the current plot, not a resume and list of credentials.

Also, he's taking the mantle of Batman, but remember Brucey is still alive and kicking. So I think Drake might be a smidge respectful and let him keep the titles that he's



  • | NAME: |
    Kimiyo Hoshi

    | ALIAS(ES): |
    Dr. Light

    | PLACE OF BIRTH: |
    Tokyo, Japan

    | SPECIES: |
    Human

    | SEX: |
    Female

    | SEXUALITY: |
    Bisexual

  • | ABILITIES: |
    Exposure to energy from the star Vega granted Doctor Light photokinesis: control over all forms of light sources, without relying on equipment. She can absorb all forms of illumination as energy, as well as absorb the energy of the sun. Aside from blinding her opponents with blinding flashes of light, she can focus photons into "hard light" and project energy, allowing her to shoot destructive laser beams and other blasts of destructive energy and create protective barriers. She can refract lightwaves to create holographic images. She can turn into light, rendering her invisible to the naked eye. Her abilities also allow her to disperse radiation and holographic illusions, scan and "see" the electromagnetic spectrum, track ionized molecules and sense the light around her, which she describes as a "sixth sense" allowing her to know when somebody enters the room. She can ride lightwaves in order to fly, capable of reaching the speed of light, and outrunning the Superman of Earth-1.

    | SKILLS: |
    Outside of her light-based abilities, she is also a brilliant scientific mind; she is a prominent astronomer and considered the world's foremost authority on light technology. She is a medical doctor, allowing her to nurse the sick and wounded using the power of modern medicine. She is caring and motherly with an intrinsic need to protect and defend, making her fierce in combat.

    | LIMITATIONS: |
    Dr. Light's abilities are entirely solar-powered, and she must be in proximity to a light source for her powers to be effective. Whilst her background in research bolsters her knowledge of her powerset, she has very little training in hand-to-hand combat. This makes it even more important that she stay in the light, as she has little means of defending herself without use of her powers.

    | WEAKNESSES: |
    Her primary weakness is that she requires a light source to fuel her powers, and whilst she is able to store energy for such occasions, were she to be locked in a dark room her powers would quickly fade until she was powerless. As a consequence, she is also terribly afraid of the dark; being in darkness gives her severe anxiety and clouds her thinking.
  • | WEAPONS: |
    None.

    | TOOLS: |
    None.

    | ATTIRE: |
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  • | BACKSTORY: |
    Kimiyo Tazu Hoshi is a brilliant, if arrogant, scientist, and was the supervising astronomer at an observatory in Japan, overseeing a group of astronomers charting unnatural celestial activity. Hoshi's fascination with the phenomenon grew into an obsession while the men grew concerned for their safety. Disgusted by their mounting fear, Hoshi arrogantly insulted them and ordered an evacuation, leaving her to study the strange activity of the stars alone through her telescope. It was during this time that the energy of the star Vega collided with the observatory, imbuing Kimiyo with the powers that allowed her to become Dr. Light.

    Kimiyo has largely been a lone agent, still considering herself to be a scientist first and foremost, with her heroism being secondary. She has, however, aided in protecting Japan from various major threats. She didn't involve herself foreign affairs and worked closely with the Japanese Embassy exclusively. Kimiyo never felt compelled to truly protect until the fall of Superman. The defender she had always used as an excuse to avoid participation - "Superman probably has it covered" - was now gone.

    She immediately heeded the call of the Justice League to unite and serve the planet, making heroism her primary occupation but still managing to continue her research on the side.

It's pretty much as manicured as every one of Courtney Act's outfits.

My only critique is give me a little more in the area of the backstory namely a couple more sentences detailing her involvement or wanting to be involved in the JL. I only ask this because it seems like she does so well as a solo artist. You touch on it, but I think you can sell her realization of the consequences of Superman's death a bit more. Other than that, accepted.

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| NAME: | Oliver Queen


| ALIAS(ES): |The Green Arrow


| PLACE OF BIRTH: | Starling City


| SPECIES: | Human



| SEX: | Male


| SEXUALITY: | Straight
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[tab=| POWER SET |]| ABILITIES: Master Archer: Oliver Queen is perhaps the finest archer ever known. He claims to be able to shoot 29 arrows per minute (he stated this himself, in the Sound of Violence story arc, when he corrected Black Canary for saying 26). He has a wide-variety of trick arrows, ranging from bola arrows to time-bomb arrows to his infamous boxing-glove arrow. In recent years he has used these arrows sparingly, preferring the time-tested simple arrow. Green Arrow has shown the ability to shoot an arrow down the barrel of a gun, pierce a drop of water as it leaves a tap, and shoot almost any part of the human body; although he aims only to wound and not kill when he shoots. He once shot two arrows down two different gun barrels while upside down, in mid-flip while somersaulting off a building.

Master Martial Artist: He is proficient in several forms of hand-to-hand combat including Judo, Kickboxing and Karate. Proclaimed as a martial arts master, he has shown the ability to take on seven people at once. He spent several months dedicated to making himself a better fighter and trained with many of the world's finest martial arts teachers and even went through training from Natas, the same person who trainedDeathstroke

Master Swordsman: Ollie is also very proficient with a sword, though it is not his preferred weapon of choice. He has beaten Jason Todd in a sword-fight and has deflected an incoming arrow with the sword he carries.

Acrobatics: He has displayed on many occasions that he is an expert in acrobatics, and often uses this skill while evading enemy fire.|



| SKILLS: | Oliver can fly a plane, drive practically anything, and is pretty handy as a politician or leader of a company.


| LIMITATIONS: | He is human


| WEAKNESSES: | Poison, sharp objects, projectiles, aging, etc.

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[tab=| EQUIPMENT [B]| Oliver carries a number of different gadgets to assist in his fight against crime, like surveilance equipment, handcuffs, zip lines etc.|]| WEAPONS: Oliver carries a high tech bow as well as a number of different arrows from normal, exploding, electified, ones that release gas, as well as the boxing glove arrow.[/B]


| TOOLS: | Oliver has several weapons caches stashed around the city, as well as a fully equipped arrow lair.


| ATTIRE: Green hood as well as a green gloves, boots, pants, shirt, mask. His uniform is special made from starlabs and has been upgraded to be lightweight but durable.|

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[tab=| DETAILS |]| BACKSTORY: Oliver started out being the arrow to fight for his City since no one seemed to care, one day he was out on patrol when Batman invited him to join the justice league. He turned down his invitation stating that the justice league doesn't look out for the minority. Once the invasion started Oliver suited up to assist the justice league but it was to late by the time he fought his way there it was to late. Green Arrow has made up his mind and decided to join the league now and help find everyone who is missing. |

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Don't just copy and paste the abilities you've seen on the wiki, condense them into your own words. The reason I ask this is because your own words paint a better picture of how you will use the character than simply copying them from another source. I also call that just pure plagiarism. The same as what I said previously, write it in your own words with the facets and abilities that you will mainly be using in your version of the Arrow.

That backstory can definitely be put through a little bit of the Effort Machine and not the Cookie Cutter Express Machine. Read the OP and get a sense for it, as that'll help you. This is the first real attempt at a standing Justice League. Heroes have collaborated, but there's been no concrete organizations thus far.

Also give the formatting a once over because there's probably something you left out or accidentally deleted that's affecting it.
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  • | NAME |

  • Virgil Ovid Hawkins

    | ALIASES |
    Static Shock, Static

    | PLACE OF BIRTH |
    Paris Island, Dakota City

    | SPECIES |
    Human

    | SEX |
    Male

    | SEXUALITY |
    Bisexual

Same thing with you as I've said to others, don't just give me a copy and paste of a wiki page. We're better than plagiarism. Give me the powers and abilities as it applies to YOUR version of the character. All of that in the wiki is Static at his absolute best and all the skills he's acquired and used at some point in time.
 
It's pretty much as manicured as every one of Courtney Act's outfits.

My only critique is give me a little more in the area of the backstory namely a couple more sentences detailing her involvement or wanting to be involved in the JL. I only ask this because it seems like she does so well as a solo artist. You touch on it, but I think you can sell her realization of the consequences of Superman's death a bit more. Other than that, accepted.
In honesty, I was kind of banking on you just not reading the backstories. I underestimated your efficiency as GM; I'll put it down to applying to too many Hillan RPs over the years.

One delicious new backstory, coming right up.
 
In honesty, I was kind of banking on you just not reading the backstories. I underestimated your efficiency as GM; I'll put it down to applying to too many Hillan RPs over the years.

One delicious new backstory, coming right up.
That was a read in one breath and a compliment in another. Magnificent.

And like I said, the backstory just needs like a couple sentences tacked on. You glossed over just enough of your characters life to give us the position, intentions and character of the hero.
 
Same thing with you as I've said to others, don't just give me a copy and paste of a wiki page. We're better than plagiarism. Give me the powers and abilities as it applies to YOUR version of the character. All of that in the wiki is Static at his absolute best and all the skills he's acquired and used at some point in time.
Fair enough. I shall change them.
 
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  • | NAME: |
    Adam John Blake​

    | ALIAS(ES): |
    Captain Comet​

    | PLACE OF BIRTH: |
    Smallville, Kansas, United States of America​

    | SPECIES: |
    Mutant Metahuman​

    | SEX: |
    Male​

    | SEXUALITY: |
    Heterosexual​

  • | ABILITIES: |
    Evolved Human:
    Born in 1931 after his mother was infected by radiation from what Adam's parents believed to be a passing comet, Adam was born with his abilities making him one of the first 'naturally' occurring metahumans to walk the Earth. Most notably, Adam possesses increased mental abilities and physiology. As such, even as a child, Adam was extremely gifted both academically and athletically. Adam's physiology grants him near agelessness, slowing his aging to a point that he'll live for thousands of years as he presently appear to be a man in his early twenties despite being the age of eighty four years old. During the White Martian invasion, Adam was captured and experimented on which unlocked even more of his abilities.​

    Telekinesis:
    Matter Alteration
    Flight
    Force Fields: Can protect him from the vacuum of space and surround him in a space of breathable air.
    Psionic Blasts​

    Telepathy:
    Clairvoyance
    Mind Control
    Vibro Sense
    Sense of Strength​

    Teleportation:

    Superhuman Durability:

    Superhuman Strength:

    Genius Level Intellect:
    Eidetic Memory​

    | SKILLS: |
    Hand to hand combat.​

    | LIMITATIONS: |
    While Adam is a true powerhouse, most of what he has is purely raw power. Adam lacks in skill and finesse having next to no field experience due to living most of his life wandering and hiding from the world. In terms of strength, Adam is more than strong enough to have held his own against the former Man of Steel. His naturally durability is fairly impressive allowing him to shrug off even high caliber bullets but larger blasts can only be defended against using his psionic force shields.​

    | WEAKNESSES: |
    Unlike Superman who was vulnerable to several sources of radiation and magic, Adam Blake doesn't suffer from any specific exploitable weaknesses. That said, unlike Superman, Adam is still human and is vulnerable to the vacuum of space, requires oxygen to breathe and needs both food and sleep. Despite being rather gifted in psionic abilities, Adam isn't prepared to defend against psionic attacks from another, likewise energy have the potential to phase through his force fields if the frequencies align. Energy based attacks also bypass his natural durability and as such can inflict both pain and damage upon Adam.​
  • | WEAPONS: |
    ~None~​

    | TOOLS: |
    ~None~​

    | ATTIRE: |
    Adam wears a simple black and red costume that is made using his ability to alter matter. In order to change into costume, he simply uses his ability upon his current attire. As such the costume itself doesn't necessarily do anything but show Adam to be Captain Comet.​
  • | BACKSTORY: (This should be a brief backstory as it relates to either the characters time in between now and the invasion, or their motivation for joining, etc.) |
 
Hate me Stein, hate me! :P


W.I.P.
  • | NAME: |
    Adam John Blake

    | ALIAS(ES): |
    Captain Comet

    | PLACE OF BIRTH: |
    Smallville, Kansas, United States of America

    | SPECIES: |
    Mutant Metahuman

    | SEX: |
    Male

    | SEXUALITY: |
    Heterosexual

  • | ABILITIES: |
    Evolved Human:

    Born in 1931 after his mother was infected by radiation from what Adam's parents believed to be a passing comet, Adam was born with his abilities making him one of the first 'naturally' occurring metahumans to walk the Earth. Most notably, Adam possesses increased mental abilities and physiology. As such, even as a child, Adam was extremely gifted both academically and athletically. Adam's physiology grants him near agelessness, slowing his aging to a point that he'll live for thousands of years as he presently appear to be a man in his early twenties despite being the age of eighty four years old. During the White Martian invasion, Adam was captured and experimented on which unlocked even more of his abilities.
    Telekinesis:

    Matter Alteration
    Flight
    Force Fields: Can protect him from the vacuum of space and surround him in a space of breathable air.
    Psionic Blasts
    Telepathy:

    Clairvoyance
    Mind Control
    Vibro Sense
    Sense of Strength
    Teleportation:

    Superhuman Durability:

    Superhuman Strength:

    Genius Level Intellect:

    Eidetic Memory

    | SKILLS: |
    Hand to hand combat.

    | LIMITATIONS: |
    While Adam is a true powerhouse, most of what he has is purely raw power. Adam lacks in skill and finesse having next to no field experience due to living most of his life wandering and hiding from the world. In terms of strength, Adam is more than strong enough to have held his own against the former Man of Steel. His naturally durability is fairly impressive allowing him to shrug off even high caliber bullets but larger blasts can only be defended against using his psionic force shields.

    | WEAKNESSES: |
    Unlike Superman who was vulnerable to several sources of radiation and magic, Adam Blake doesn't suffer from any specific exploitable weaknesses. That said, unlike Superman, Adam is still human and is vulnerable to the vacuum of space, requires oxygen to breathe and needs both food and sleep. Despite being rather gifted in psionic abilities, Adam isn't prepared to defend against psionic attacks from another, likewise energy have the potential to phase through his force fields if the frequencies align. Energy based attacks also bypass his natural durability and as such can inflict both pain and damage upon Adam.
  • | WEAPONS: |
    ~None~

    | TOOLS: |
    ~None~

    | ATTIRE: |
    Adam wears a simple black and red costume that is made using his ability to alter matter. In order to change into costume, he simply uses his ability upon his current attire. As such the costume itself doesn't necessarily do anything but show Adam to be Captain Comet.
  • | BACKSTORY: (This should be a brief backstory as it relates to either the characters time in between now and the invasion, or their motivation for joining, etc.) |

Oh Wraith hun, I could never truly hate you, no.

But I can do this instead:

Just make sure when you finish that a little later on that you either remove some of those powers or give me a (brief) explanation of how he's likely to use it.
 
Don't worry there will be reasonable explanations for all.
 
  • Thank You
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