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Discussion in 'THREAD ARCHIVES' started by Tuxedo Mask, Jan 27, 2010.
"Connecting to nature through the wind"
I'm copying Asmupuu's critique style
:) Your stanzas are short, but your feelings are strong.
The poem may not be as emotional or powerful, but I can distinctly see that you've thought it out well and made some nice connections/metaphors to the romance.
I especially like "If the sun becomes the moon's bride, brushed aside." & the "masquerade...checkmate"
A well crafted poem
:D You're a great poet :D