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Arnold Solomon
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Hiya!Can you give me some suggestions to further improve myself?Here is a sample of like, an introduction of a character or something.
"The day was being reborn.The sun newly arisen, light barely illuminating the dark, moonlit forest.Wind howled occasionally as a short, average man walked down a worn, rocky path back to his village.Something rustled in the bushes, and startled him.He froze in his spot, taking the palm of his hand to the grip of his old iron dagger, the blade slightly dull from constant use from practicing on the many stumps that resides in these woods.As his eyes scanned frantically all over the bushes, in search of whatever this was, an arrow flew right past his ear, the sharp sides only nicking him..."
"The day was being reborn.The sun newly arisen, light barely illuminating the dark, moonlit forest.Wind howled occasionally as a short, average man walked down a worn, rocky path back to his village.Something rustled in the bushes, and startled him.He froze in his spot, taking the palm of his hand to the grip of his old iron dagger, the blade slightly dull from constant use from practicing on the many stumps that resides in these woods.As his eyes scanned frantically all over the bushes, in search of whatever this was, an arrow flew right past his ear, the sharp sides only nicking him..."