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Crack. Hissss.
The train doors slid open, a number of men and women beginning to leave. An announcement rang, "Current stop: Shuca Pass. Next stop: Yache Point."
From within, there were a few cries of confusion. "What!? Back the way we came!?" "Hey! My ticket says Rindo! What gives!?" "Not even as far as Colbur?"
There was a bustle as a few charged the doors, but they were already coming closed. A few managed to slip through, but a number of limbs got snagged in between the doors, the last few getting unstuck before the train began to move again, having been stopped for no more than a few minutes, its remaining passengers trapped.
Watching the train leave over her shoulder, one girl commented, "Didn't they check the map?" Briefcase held in one hand, she made her way out of the train stop, heels clacking up a staircase to Shuca Pass proper, the man buildings and mines built into the large, natural rock walls, wind funneling through the valley. The sun was only just peeking over the high walls in the late morning.
Heading down, the girl's appearance didn't quite seem fitting for the dirty town that made most of their income off of labor. She wasn't particularly tall, but she wore a pink suit coat and skirt over a white dress shirt. Her legs were clad in stockings and her feet went along in pink shoes with short, raised heels. Her shoulder length, red-tinted brown hair was wavy, and her eyes were a light red.
Briefcase swinging lightly, Recette ran over what she knew about the area in her mind.
She was currently in Shuca Pass, which was nestled between two mountains. South of here was Colbur Town, and west of that was Rindo City, though the Charti Heights were blocking the way. Not that Rindo was easier to reach from the other side or anything, since it was partway into the Occa Desert... And the trains didn't run through any of that! Recette giggled at the mistake of Rindo being listed on the ticket dispensers a few stops back where she'd started.
Reaching the base of the valley pass, Recette could see a few more of the train passengers, each making their way to one of an array of vehicles, many of them advertising passage to Colbur or Rindo. The bus filled rather quickly, while the taxi cabs blitzed off without much meandering. Checking the wallet in her front pocket, Recette let out a sigh, before moving over to a carriage hitched to the back of a dirty coated tractor.
Approaching the elder man with a wide, sun blocking hat, Recette asked, "How much to get to Colbur?"
"Five-wait, only Colbur? 2000 Jenny then."
Recette paid without complaint, before slipping into the carriage. While she couldn't see so well to her back and sides, she had a full view of the front. After a moment, the tractor began to rumble, spewing black exhaust, before beginning to slowly plunge forwards into the bumpy, rocky expanse.
As the vehicle went, sun moving across the sky, the temperature rose a bit. Recette was glad to be in the shaded carriage, but as she envisioned the path ahead, she grimaced at her choice of footwear.
As if in her brain, the tractor driver asked, "What're you all dressed up for?"
Recette lit up, "Oh, there's going to be a Hunter Exam soon in Rindo." Pumping her fist, she nodded, "And when it comes to the interview, I'm gonna nail it!"
"Interview, huh?" the man repeated, as if trying not to laugh.
Not catching it, Recette added, "Yup! They say that only one in a million people who even think about becoming a Hunter fail, so..." Glancing at her feet again, Recette finished, "I need to get another pair of shoes just in case..."
"Don't ya hafta hurry there though? Why my little tractor?"
Freezing up, Recette glanced at her wallet again, not willing to admit the truth. Thinking hard, she began, "Oh, well, that's... Oh! I was reading about a type of cactus that shoots its needles when things move, right? But there's these ones in the Desert that get so big their needles are like stakes, so a slower vehicle would be safer."
As if to challenge that, a pickup truck raced by, its back filled with rough looking men armed with weapons, one of them cheering, "Ha ha! They went that way! It's 'Hunter' season!"
Once their engines were rumbling in the distance, the old man said, "Well, you're not wrong about the cacti, though we're not in the Desert yet..."
Looking around at the rocky stretch of land, Recette began to wonder what the real Desert was like. There were definitely some animals around though, since those guys who rolled by were going on about 'hunting season'.
As Recette tried to relax, the tractor pilot looked around, before saying, "Hold on to something."
Recette blinked, "Eh? Wh-"
Before she could finish, the man pushed a lever on the side of his tractor. With a bellow, it seemed to roar, before the large tires began to spin faster, sending dirt and rock about. Speed shooting up exponentially, the tractor began to move at a strong pace, bumps making the carriage rattle. Eyes widening, Recette slipped her briefcase underneath her before putting her arms out to the sides, legs stretching out, getting a bit rattled, but not sliding around a whole lot. As the tractor reached a small ridge, the man grinned, before reaching for a chain, the links attached to the pin of the tractor trailer coupler. With a swift movement, he gave it a yank, but the carriage remained attached as it went over the short ridge. The tractor bounced, as did the carriage, even more intensely, Recette getting rattled. Once the tractor had settled, the man looked back.
Through pure chance, Recette's heels rested on the top of the coupling pin, keeping it held in place.
Letting out a sigh, the man dropped the chain and pulled the lever back a bit, mumbling under the roaring engine, "Man, last year's guy did something way cooler..."
As the tractor reached a steady pace, though still faster than before, Recette reset her position, pulling her briefcase out from under her as she mumbled, "Huh. Well, we're closer now!"
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Towering out of a round gap in the ground, the wooden construction of Colbur Town rose high from within its confines, buildings being built atop buildings in the walled city. Leaning out of the carriage, Recette was watching the cliffs to the west: Charti Heights, which dwarfed the town despite being a short distance away, seeming to wall a good portion of the desert.
Coming to a stop, the driver of the tractor began, "Well, here we are. Be careful in the Charti Heights though. Not that goin' around is any safer..."
With a smile, Recette waved, "Thank yooooouuuuu!" Heading over a short wooden bridge into the town, light began to fade, obscured by the construct, only allowed by hanging lights, covered lanterns, and the rare gap allowing sunlight in from above. But the deeper down one went...
The train doors slid open, a number of men and women beginning to leave. An announcement rang, "Current stop: Shuca Pass. Next stop: Yache Point."
From within, there were a few cries of confusion. "What!? Back the way we came!?" "Hey! My ticket says Rindo! What gives!?" "Not even as far as Colbur?"
There was a bustle as a few charged the doors, but they were already coming closed. A few managed to slip through, but a number of limbs got snagged in between the doors, the last few getting unstuck before the train began to move again, having been stopped for no more than a few minutes, its remaining passengers trapped.
Watching the train leave over her shoulder, one girl commented, "Didn't they check the map?" Briefcase held in one hand, she made her way out of the train stop, heels clacking up a staircase to Shuca Pass proper, the man buildings and mines built into the large, natural rock walls, wind funneling through the valley. The sun was only just peeking over the high walls in the late morning.
Heading down, the girl's appearance didn't quite seem fitting for the dirty town that made most of their income off of labor. She wasn't particularly tall, but she wore a pink suit coat and skirt over a white dress shirt. Her legs were clad in stockings and her feet went along in pink shoes with short, raised heels. Her shoulder length, red-tinted brown hair was wavy, and her eyes were a light red.
Briefcase swinging lightly, Recette ran over what she knew about the area in her mind.
She was currently in Shuca Pass, which was nestled between two mountains. South of here was Colbur Town, and west of that was Rindo City, though the Charti Heights were blocking the way. Not that Rindo was easier to reach from the other side or anything, since it was partway into the Occa Desert... And the trains didn't run through any of that! Recette giggled at the mistake of Rindo being listed on the ticket dispensers a few stops back where she'd started.
Reaching the base of the valley pass, Recette could see a few more of the train passengers, each making their way to one of an array of vehicles, many of them advertising passage to Colbur or Rindo. The bus filled rather quickly, while the taxi cabs blitzed off without much meandering. Checking the wallet in her front pocket, Recette let out a sigh, before moving over to a carriage hitched to the back of a dirty coated tractor.
Approaching the elder man with a wide, sun blocking hat, Recette asked, "How much to get to Colbur?"
"Five-wait, only Colbur? 2000 Jenny then."
Recette paid without complaint, before slipping into the carriage. While she couldn't see so well to her back and sides, she had a full view of the front. After a moment, the tractor began to rumble, spewing black exhaust, before beginning to slowly plunge forwards into the bumpy, rocky expanse.
As the vehicle went, sun moving across the sky, the temperature rose a bit. Recette was glad to be in the shaded carriage, but as she envisioned the path ahead, she grimaced at her choice of footwear.
As if in her brain, the tractor driver asked, "What're you all dressed up for?"
Recette lit up, "Oh, there's going to be a Hunter Exam soon in Rindo." Pumping her fist, she nodded, "And when it comes to the interview, I'm gonna nail it!"
"Interview, huh?" the man repeated, as if trying not to laugh.
Not catching it, Recette added, "Yup! They say that only one in a million people who even think about becoming a Hunter fail, so..." Glancing at her feet again, Recette finished, "I need to get another pair of shoes just in case..."
"Don't ya hafta hurry there though? Why my little tractor?"
Freezing up, Recette glanced at her wallet again, not willing to admit the truth. Thinking hard, she began, "Oh, well, that's... Oh! I was reading about a type of cactus that shoots its needles when things move, right? But there's these ones in the Desert that get so big their needles are like stakes, so a slower vehicle would be safer."
As if to challenge that, a pickup truck raced by, its back filled with rough looking men armed with weapons, one of them cheering, "Ha ha! They went that way! It's 'Hunter' season!"
Once their engines were rumbling in the distance, the old man said, "Well, you're not wrong about the cacti, though we're not in the Desert yet..."
Looking around at the rocky stretch of land, Recette began to wonder what the real Desert was like. There were definitely some animals around though, since those guys who rolled by were going on about 'hunting season'.
As Recette tried to relax, the tractor pilot looked around, before saying, "Hold on to something."
Recette blinked, "Eh? Wh-"
Before she could finish, the man pushed a lever on the side of his tractor. With a bellow, it seemed to roar, before the large tires began to spin faster, sending dirt and rock about. Speed shooting up exponentially, the tractor began to move at a strong pace, bumps making the carriage rattle. Eyes widening, Recette slipped her briefcase underneath her before putting her arms out to the sides, legs stretching out, getting a bit rattled, but not sliding around a whole lot. As the tractor reached a small ridge, the man grinned, before reaching for a chain, the links attached to the pin of the tractor trailer coupler. With a swift movement, he gave it a yank, but the carriage remained attached as it went over the short ridge. The tractor bounced, as did the carriage, even more intensely, Recette getting rattled. Once the tractor had settled, the man looked back.
Through pure chance, Recette's heels rested on the top of the coupling pin, keeping it held in place.
Letting out a sigh, the man dropped the chain and pulled the lever back a bit, mumbling under the roaring engine, "Man, last year's guy did something way cooler..."
As the tractor reached a steady pace, though still faster than before, Recette reset her position, pulling her briefcase out from under her as she mumbled, "Huh. Well, we're closer now!"
---
Towering out of a round gap in the ground, the wooden construction of Colbur Town rose high from within its confines, buildings being built atop buildings in the walled city. Leaning out of the carriage, Recette was watching the cliffs to the west: Charti Heights, which dwarfed the town despite being a short distance away, seeming to wall a good portion of the desert.
Coming to a stop, the driver of the tractor began, "Well, here we are. Be careful in the Charti Heights though. Not that goin' around is any safer..."
With a smile, Recette waved, "Thank yooooouuuuu!" Heading over a short wooden bridge into the town, light began to fade, obscured by the construct, only allowed by hanging lights, covered lanterns, and the rare gap allowing sunlight in from above. But the deeper down one went...
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