TWILIGHT featuring vampires that glisten in the sunlight, teenage fangirl candy, and cliche approach to stuff people just LOVE to complain about! So Tell me: How would you have done the TWILIGHT story? Rules: You can't say you're have burn the book. XD Pretend you've been told by your editor that you have to "fix" this book. You must tell us how this plotline could be better. How would the story go? What pieces would you make different? What sort of improvements would you make?