Red Thunder

A Warrior in a Garden
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Posting Speed
  1. 1-3 posts per week
  2. One post per week
  3. Slow As Molasses
Writing Levels
  1. Adept
  2. Advanced
  3. Prestige
Preferred Character Gender
  1. Male
  2. Female
  3. Primarily Prefer Male
Genres
Fantasy, SciFi, Modern, Magical
Hell's Bells
Character Sign Ups & OOC
IC | CS | OOC | Lore

Interest Check & Plot Set Up
Character Sheet
First thing's first: the character sheet. Please be detailed and specific where possible. Remember, this is going to be a detailed RP, requiring well considered descriptions and narration, even if not so extravagant. If your CS doesn't meet the standard of description I'm looking for, I'll PM you and request further detail. If your CS is accepted, you're welcome to post it in the CS thread.

You're welcome to code your CS. Just please make it mobile friendly, as I do most of my RP from my phone.

Name:
Sex:
Age: (No younger than 18.)
Height:
Weight:
Written Appearance:
Image: (Realistic art or FC. No anime.)
Personality: (2-3 paragraphs)
Character Strengths/Flaws:
Occupation: (Doesn't have to be a job. This can be simply what occupies your character's time for the most part. Can show the character's place in society.)
Skills: (3+)
History: (3-4 paragraphs)
Details of the Devil's Contract: (Articulate the request your character made of the man at the crossroads. Include the reason. Before the start of the RP, we'll do a collab concerning the meeting for you to reference or include.)

Rules
The same rules are on practically every single RP you've ever applied to. Use common sense, yeah? Follow site rules, don't be a part of drama in the OOC, leave drama to the characters in the IC, GM's word is law, etc etc. And of course, your character won't be killed without arrangement with you the Player.

However, that last has a proviso. This is, apart from the supernatural elements, a representation of the real world circa 1870, don't have your character be doing something stupid and expect nothing to happen. If you start a gun fight with a sheriff and his posse, or try to rob a store, or hell, try to throw down with a freaking archangel, there will be consequences.

Story Elements
This RP will take a lot of inspiration and reference from the Tall Tales of the old west. However, I don't know them all. If there's a particular part of American old west mythology that you want to see included one way or another, please let me know! There's a story that we'll be following, but there's definitely room for the inclusion of other things!
 
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Name: Jericho Talon
Sex: Male
Age: 31
Height: 6'2
Weight: 185 lbs
Written Appearance: Tall with tanned complexion and an athletic build. Short, somewhat curly jet black hair. Hid face and body are adorned with tribal Comanche tattoos. He carries two six shooter revolvers, a Bowie knife and tomahawk. His eyes are deep hazel in color and sports short but thick beard.
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Personality: Jericho is a hard edged and jaded individual. He has seen and done to much to be fooled by the petty hope of ever being "happy". To say he is the consummate pessimist is an understatement as he sees the dark side to almost every situation. He can almost be described as being emotionally void. Compassion seeped out of his soul years ago, replaced by a sense of entitlement and most of all, vengeance. Jeri also suffers from a deep seeded insecurity that was hard wired into him whilst he spent years on a southern plantation. He harbors a deeply suspicious nature and trusts absolutely no one. In his mind, everyone is a potential enemy and it's essentially him against the world. He never lets his guard down for even a second.

But on another side to the coin, he holds a deep respect for nature and is fascinated by the various sciences, especially astronomy. Star gazing is one of the few things that bring him any level of contentment and he has several detailed star charts. His telescope is one of his prized possessions. He has a higher than average intelligence and has a very analytical mind. The wheels in his head are perpetually turning and he prides himself on being an ardent problem solver. Deep down, Jericho longs for a simpler life, one in which he can finally trust again and just stop running.

Character Strengths/Flaws:
Strengths- Strong believer in fair play, he will only attack an opponent face to face and will always give them a chance to defend themselves.
Goal Driven
Passionate...once he sets his mind to something, he will complete the task no matter how long it takes.
Sense Of Responsibility, he will always accept the consequences of his actions.




Weaknesses- Short temper
Mistrustful even when people are telling him the truth
Somewhat arrogant
Asthmatic

Occupation: Hires himself out as a tracker for various law enforcement and/or bounty services
Skills: Proficient Tracker
Natural knack for making makeshift weapons
Photographic Memory


History: Jericho was born as "Eagle's Talon" the son of a Mexican mother and a Comanche chieftain. At the age of only four years old he was abducted by white cavalrymen and systematically sold into southern slavery and eventually ended up on the Hastings plantation owned by Jeremiah Hastings and his family. Hastings proved to be a cold a cruel master, but young Eagle's Talon was taken in and adopted by a kindly black servant named Jacob, who looked after the boy as his own. Unbeknownst to Hastings, Jacob was a learned negro man and, in secret of course, taught the boy to read and write as well as introduce him to the science of star charting. He re named the young Comanche, Jericho after the city in one of his favorite bible stories. Jericho learned a lot from Jacob and came to see the man as true father figure. After spending many years on the plantation, the outbreak of the great American Civil War plunged the south into turmoil. One night, when Jericho was eighteen, he witnessed a drunken Hastings brutally beat Jacob to death. He tried to save his mentor but was restrained by two of Hastings men. In a fit of rage, Jeri managed to break free and fled the plantation. Against all odds he escaped into the dark southern night, but vowed to one day return and seek vengeance on Hastings for murdering his mentor.

Jeri wandered for a time but wound up taking in with a gang of thieves named The Creed Gang, who saw potential in the teen. He spent nearly three years with the gang in which he learned how to use a gun and handle himself in a brawl. He was also taught the useful skill of improvising weaponry by the gang's leader Billy Creed, who had been a gun smith before he founded The Creed Gang. After a time, Jeri decided he needed to get back to his roots and left the gang to seek out his native Comanche tribe. He indeed found them and was reunited with his biological father. Jericho spent another two years with the Comanche, in which time he trained as a Comanche Brave, and learning the ways of a warrior amongst his people. A short time later, his now elderly father, at the point of death granted his son one last gift...to bind his spirit with a Totem essence of the wolf. It was at this time that Jericho finally felt ready to journey back to the Hastings plantation to seek his vengeance. However upon returning, he found the estate in ruins and Hastings nowhere to be found. Now he wanders across the western frontier, forever searching for the man that killed his surrogate father.

Details of the Devil's Contract:
In his wanderings, Jericho strolled into the frontier town of Golden City. Expecting to spend no more than a few nights here questioning the townsfolk on whether or not anyone had seen Hastings. On his first night, he came upon an odd stranger who seemed to know all about the young warriors plight. He said he knew how to find Hastings and would grant him a series of clues in which to follow that would ultimately lead to the former plantation owner. Burning with revenge and with the hope of finally finding his quarry, Jeri agreed to the peddler's terms...
 
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Name: Eli Ward
Sex: Male
Age: 51
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 172lb

Written Appearance: Eli is an older man, with the lines to prove it, and a few scars too. He's never been a great looker, but it's fair to say that he's grown into his face as he's gotten older and might now be considered somewhat attractive for his age, whilst others that were better looking in their youth haven't aged so well. He has a moustache that he keeps maintained and has his hair (which is holding up quite well so far, even if it is mostly grey) slicked back. He dresses smartly and makes an effort with his appearance, which helps him to keep a professional image on the surface, at least.

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Personality: On the surface, Eli seems like a friendly character, with a drink and a tale for anyone that happens upon his little saloon. He comes across as affable, charming, perhaps a bit of a dandy and maybe a bit of a flirt with the right muse, and to most people they never see any other side of Eli as no-one really probes any deeper than the surface when talking to the saloon owner. He's a part of the furniture, having lived in the town for close to two decades, being notable only for rumours that he's cheated death on more than one occasion. People talk of his luck and he's been known to prove it by absurd trick shots that most allege a mortal man could never pull off successfully, yet Eli carries them off with plenty of aplomb. He's a showman at heart, and does love basking in the attention of an audience.

Those that know Eli better are few and far between, but if you look deeper, he's not nearly as cheerful and friendly as he appears. In his own dealings, he's a ruthless businessman and whilst his saloon is the only real asset he owns, Eli has plenty of money and valuables held in storage beneath the saloon. He's acquired them through various means, but mostly through blackmail. He knows most people in the town, their histories, their families, their stories... their secrets. He's ruined people that have crossed him and made their life a living hell, but he's never done it in the public eye, preferring to extort others through hired enforcers, so as not to ruin the persona he has created.

At his core, Eli knows his time is running out. He made a deal with the Devil, and he knows that he'll have to pay his due one day and that day isn't far off. As he grows older and steps closer to the grave, he's become meaner and his cheerful facade slips on occasion when his frustrations get the better of him. His urge to acquire material possessions was simply a distraction that he recognises now, he's never truly found the happiness he sought and now realises that a deal with the Devil only ever benefits the Devil himself. He knows that God never held him in any regard and all he can do is wonder what Old Scratch has in store for him when his time's up. These thoughts keep him up at night and haunt his days, they've made him somewhat twitchy, looking over his shoulder to see if that same dark man is lurking and beckoning him closer to make good on his promise.

Character Strengths:
  • Phenomenal luck - Eli wins card games with ease, despite the odds, he can pull off trick shots and bullseyes and has surprisingly deadly aim with a firearm
  • Fearlessness - As a result of his supernatural luck, Eli is confident he can handle anything that comes his way, so he knows no fear
  • Jack of most trades - Eli's had a lot of jobs in his life, working as a brewer, a rancher, a builder, a miner and even a brief stint as a doctor's assistant, and each one has given him useful skills and a well-rounded knowledge, even if it lacks depth

Character Flaws:
  • Womaniser - Eli's got an eye for the ladies and has been accused of having more that wanders than just his eyes
  • Older age - Eli's not getting any younger, so he's not as fit or as strong as he once was and he knows it - he reaches for his gun at the first sign of trouble because his fists just don't pack the punch they used to
  • Alcoholism - Alcoholism is by no means uncommon around these parts, but Eli still struggles to get through the day without several drinks

Occupation: Professional gambler, saloon owner

Skills:
  • Proficient with revolvers and their maintenance (Eli's favourite is a Smith & Wesson Model 3)
  • Knowledge of herbal remedies, poisons and basic medicine
  • Basic carpentry, wagon repair etc.
  • Basic animal handling
  • Charismatic
  • Reasonable piano player

History: Not a whole lot is known about Eli's history. He looks and sounds local enough, but there's never been anyone that remembers Eli as a kid, or even a young man. No-one knows his family, and if asked, he says he has none, and all he's let out is that he's "been around" and that he's gotten his hands dirtier than most trying to make his fortune. It's known that he's worked a lot of odd jobs prior to arriving in town, but since he strolled in, he's only ever been the saloon owner, though he still remembers plenty from the work he did in his formative years. A man with no past in the old west isn't anything unusual, but it breeds rumours and people have always spoken of Eli in hushed tones, something that he's all too aware of, and the rumours are usually bad, suggesting he works for the Devil himself, or that he's killed men to take their fortunes, but worse than that, some of them are actually true.

The truth is that Eli's early days aren't anything all that interesting. He was an average man, of average height, with average looks, average strength and average intelligence. What set him apart was his ferociously bad luck. If ever a man could find a puddle to step in, it was Eli, and when he found a puddle, it was always the biggest and deepest, and he'd stroll right in. He was sacked from every job he ever had, but never for being bad at it, just for being in the wrong place at the wrong time. As time went on, he became a patsy at first, with others quickly riding on his poor luck to blame him for their mistakes and in turn, that led to Eli being called a cursed man. People were afraid to spend too much time around him for fear of it rubbing off on them, so he did what all unlucky, lonely men did - he turned to drink.

By his late twenties, Eli was little more than hopeless drunk, working awful jobs for awful pay, just to get enough cheap liquor to get through the day. Any friends he had ever known now pretended not to know him and women crossed the road if they saw him on their side. Eli had next to nothing, but was too much of a coward to do anything about it, and too much of a drunk to get smart enough to fix it. On one day, when Eli was already very hard up, he was working for the local rancher, cleaning out the livestock and doing all the other menial jobs that most people wouldn't take. A series of deeply unfortunate events led to him releasing an entire herd of cattle, that not only fled into the wilderness, but tore up the town along the way. The stampede destroyed carts, damaged buildings, killing some and injuring many more people. This was the last straw and caused the townsfolk to exile Eli, driving him out of the city and into the desert, giving him a revolver with which to do the "right thing" when he was sober enough. With nothing to live for, Eli roamed the dusty wild, waiting for death and cursing his luck, himself and God. It was then that he met a certain well-dressed individual at a crossroads, who talked the good talk and appealed to Eli. All he had to do was shake the stranger's hand and his luck would be reversed. Well, when a man has nothing to lose, why not take the deal? Even if nothing good ever came of it, Eli couldn't possibly be worse off than he was before.

If Eli's past is a secret known only to the man himself, then what came next is the stuff of legend in the old west. Eli strolled into Golden City one morning, his lips parched and his skin dried out, with nothing more than the clothes on his back. He entered the saloon, an establishment run by Wild Bill Thomas, where his appearance and stench offended all present. Bill asked him to leave and Eli said he wanted in on a game of poker taking place in the saloon. The only thing of value Eli had was the revolved, it was standard issue and not worth a whole lot, but it bought him in for the round. There were three other men at the table, all experienced, successful gamblers, but when Eli took the pot with four aces, they insisted on another round, not to be outdone by a case of "beginner's luck". Of course, for Eli, this was only the beginning and in the cause of the afternoon, he doubled up and doubled up again, until he'd driven every other man from the table and amassed quite a fortune. He immediately rented a room, visited the barber, bought new clothes and set out to make himself a new man. He bought the saloon from Wild Bill, paying more than it was worth to make it his own and has run it ever since. None of the locals are foolish enough to challenge Eli to a game of chance, but the odd visitor comes by and refuses to believe the stories until they see first-hand just how lucky he is. Whatever they have, Eli always has something just slightly better...

Details of the Devil's Contract: Eli traded his soul for the devil's own luck, to make up for the bad luck he continued to endure. At his lowest point, with no girl, no money and nothing to lose, Eli met a strange feller who was talking a lot of a sense. After all, if God couldn't see fit to give Eli a hand here or there, then Old Scratch was willing to cut him a deal and he'd be a fool not to take it.
 
@Kate Accepted! Soon as we get a good cast in this little story of ours, we'll get this show on the road. And speaking of...

Still accepting!
 
Are these the only two that are posted so far? I have to go out for a bit, but I would like to be the school teacher, if no one else has claimed it. I'll post a CS later, when I get home.
 
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Lincoln Hunsucker
'The South Carolina Kid'
Sex: Male
Age: 29
Height: 6'0
Weight: 180lbs
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Written Appearance: Lincoln Hunsucker stands tall with a broad chest and devilish smile. He has eyes that could be confused for grey if you didnt look closely at the green. He is a muscled man with a dangerous edge to his walk if any should get in his way. A tattoo on is chest of the initials 'M-G'. His hair is typically worn long and sometimes tied back. His facial hair differs as he so likes but often he's clean shaven. His clothing is often a simple combination of trousers, a hubbard shirt, boots and a duster. On his hips he carries two Remington Model 1858s and on his belt a short dagger like knife.
Personality: Lincoln is not a complicated man but he is not easily read. He is a kind man but has a hard time expressing it in anything except the occasional kind act. However his kindness runs deep, he would do anything for the people he cares about. Lincoln is easily drawn in by women and spends his nights with them as often as possible. With the years he spent earning his name coupled with the years he spent in the war he developed a certain mindset. He finds ways to rationalize his actions so he is not often morally troubled.
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Character Strengths/Flaws: Lincoln is a loyal man and will work tirelessly to complete his task whatever it may be. He is often compassionate to others and has a general empathy for the plight of man. He does have a tendency to maintain an off putting demeanor to distract from his business. After having grown up around a number of people in chains he chooses not to discriminate.

Occupation: Professional Gunslinger and Bounty Hunter
Skills: Talented Marksman, quick and talented with his hands, decent poker player, speaks Spanish.
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History: Born in 1841 on a small tobacco farm in what was to become Maning, South Carolina. Lincoln's was a family of chaos. During his birth his mother passed from complications, hours after he was born his eldest brother was shot and killed. His father, Victor Hunsucker, was a man with a big reputation. He was known in the town of Manning as the most dangerous and biggest man around. He'd once killed 10 men in a bar starting with nothing but his bare hands. His misspent youth gained him some wealth which he saw put into future endeavors. Victor owned a small tobacco farm and a small boating company in Charleston, South Carolina. He operated both in part with some few slaves. With no mother to influence him Lincoln grew up tough and idolized his father with some restraint. He understood his father's complexities, while he wasnt a good man he wasnt a bad one either. Lincoln grew up with two brothers from the same mother and two half brothers in Charleston, South Carolina. Victor traveled between the two cities occasionally to check on his different families.The boys also inherited bits of their fathers looks, all turning out quite attractive. Morris being the biggest of them all followed by Allen the middle one and most attractive. Lincoln was the runt for some time, being younger than his two brothers by three and five years. The boys all grew up with their father's teaching engrained in their heads, embedding in them with work ethic and the edge required for ending a life. The boys' father wanted them to stay away from the life he had once led and urged them to find better ways to spend their time than causing trouble. However the boys found trouble with keeping his rules, Lincoln in particular. The young man had grown up hearing of his father's youth and tales of gunslingers in the west. He grew up practicing with rifles and his father's pistol whenever he could.

When the Civil War came and called upon the Hunsuckers to fight Lincoln went and did what he was required to do. He didnt think anything of it other than defending his home and brothers.He and his brother Allen were moved into the 2nd Palmetto Regiment, when he was 20 years old. A year into the war the brothers fought at the Seven Days Battle in Richmond, Virginia. The battle began when Major General McClellan moved his artillery inland and incited General Lee to attack, provoking a bloody chase. Allen was wounded early into the fighting and in the fray Lincoln grabbed his brothers sidearm while drawing his own. Lincoln earned his nickname of 'The South Carolina Kid' that day from his quick trigger and chasing the enemy down. Rumor spread that he had killed over 50 men in the few hours they'd spent fighting before nightfall. The next day the brothers fought again and under General Lee the Confederate forces saw no capture towards their enemy. He survived the two invasions of the north while Allen sat at home healing from shrapnel wounds received during the second. During their winter retreat from Gettysburg after the second invasion his chain of command removed of 3 men and the troops that remained were entrenched where they could hold themselves off. Many lay dead and Lincoln collected the rounds that he could. He even stuffed an extra pair of pistols into his boots. The Yankees came and his regiment repulsed them after brutal fighting, then they came and the 2nd repulsed them once more. Eventually before a final wave could come the 1st South Carolina regiment arrived to flank the bluebacks. After the end of the war he found his way to Puerto Rico where he met a woman. Her name was Maria Guerera and she brought out the criminal in him better than any women he'd encountered before. She was a fiery woman with a dangerous inclination to violence.He learned Spanish while spending evenings by her side with tequila and the spoils of their crime. But after a time he robbed the wrong people, a tavern in ties with a gang of booze runners. The gang took none to kindly and Lincoln was chased from the city eventually returning to the United States.

During his time in the US he travelled West to make manifest his destiny. He wandered till he found Golden City, a frontier town with plenty to offer a young man adding to his fame. On the first night of his second month in Golden City Lincoln mouthed off in a bar about how talented he was with his pistols and a fellow duelist overheard.. The man came to his home in the night wearing black robes and a bandana. The man looked was a different hue of tan than any in these parts and spoke with an accent Lincoln had never heard before. He introduced himself as Monsieur Mephis T. O'Fellis, a gunfighter in search of legends to defeat. The duel was to take place at noon the following day. Lincoln spent the night with a smile on his face but as he approached the city square the next day he felt dread creeping in him. He wore his pistols on his hips and stood waiting for Monsieur O'Fellis to show up in the center of town. From his left he heard spurs clang and when he turned his head there the strangely tanned man was. His bandana down and a broad smile of golden clad dentures on his face. The man walked some paces down the road and put his hand over his pistol before he spun on his heel to face Lincoln. As noon struck it was Lincoln who grasped his pistol first but O'Fellis cleared leather ahead of him. A crack then a bullet ripped through Lincoln's right hand while it was still on the grip of his pistol. His forefinger was severed and left hanging in the trigger while his middle finger fell to the ground. The other two fingers were marred by the metal from the pistol hammer that lodged itself in between the two. Lincoln fell to the ground in agony, clutching the remnants of his right hand. Monsieur O'Fellis left without a word in assurance that Lincoln would spread his name. Lincoln did, for many weeks he searched for the man but never found trace of him anywhere in the towns around Golden City. So Lincoln returned and began grieving for the life he once knew. He purchased what booze he could and strode the streets until eventually he found himself outside the limits of town. Lincoln looked around at the crossroads under the moonlit sky. He looked in all directions and saw no sign of life. He laughed as he fell to sit on the ground. It was not a laugh of joy but of intoxicated defeat. Lincoln felt the blackness of his situation creeping in and let his mind turn to dark thoughts. That night a man came to Lincoln. The man offered Lincoln what seemed like the world and he gladly accepted for what seemed like no price at all. The next day Lincoln showed up in town with his hand in tact and a purpose in his eyes again, seemingly a newborn man.
Details of the Devil's Contract: Lincoln's hand suffered a grievous wound and he knew he would never be the duelist he once was. He sought out the devil at the cross roads when he found himself at a crossroads. He grew up believing in the superstitions. When the man appeared Lincoln was a shell of himself with one hand wrapped in rags and the other clutching a bottle. Lincoln was smart enough not to make any mistakes in his wording, he asked the devil for one thing.

"I wanna be the greatest gunslinger there ever was, I ask that my hands have the power to defeat any man who comes between a pair of pistols and me."
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Are these the only two that are posted so far? I have to go out for a bit, but I would like to be the school teacher, if no one else has claimed it. I'll post a CS later, when I get home.
No one has yet, but even if they had, you'd be welcome to write one! I look forward to your CS; the RP won't start for at least a week yet.
 
@Chris_Reaper Jericho is accepted! Feel free to post the CS in the CS thread.
 
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No one has yet, but even if they had, you'd be welcome to write one! I look forward to your CS; the RP won't start for at least a week yet.

Oh awesome! I was gone a lot longer than planned, so I may not get the CS done tonight.
 
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Ahhh, the great James Coburn...terrific actor, although sadly I've never seen the original Magnificent Seven.
It's pretty great, from what I remember of it.
 
~~UPDATE~~
Alright, people. We're garnering interest and have at least one more individual interested in making a character. Possibly more. So!

Tentative start date: Saturday the 15th of July. This is mostly concrete, but as Life happens at the most inopportune times, I ask you be flexible should we need to be.

The Contract Flashback: As I stated in the interest check, I want to do a collab with each player to establish a) what the deal they made was, and b) their interactions with the Man at the Crossroads. This will be for our mutual reference, and you are welcome to use it within the IC however you please, whether it be in flashback, offhand reference, or whatnot, provided that the facts of the thing aren't changed. As characters are accepted, I'll send out a collab start. Those who've already been accepted, expect something from me in the next day or two.

I'm really excited for this, guys. There's some interesting characters in this little group, and there should be a pretty interesting dynamic to accompany it.

If you're interested but haven't submitted a CS here yet, please feel free! And as always, if you have questions, ask away!

@Chris_Reaper @Kate @HellHoundWoof @PoetLore @CloudyBlueDay @rissa @Elle Joyner @Effervescent
 
Blerg... I'm the worst XD I don't think I'm gonna be able to join. I just started NN and WOTC and I've got another project coming soon annnnnd no computer >_< *Ded*
 
Blerg... I'm the worst XD I don't think I'm gonna be able to join. I just started NN and WOTC and I've got another project coming soon annnnnd no computer >_< *Ded*
That's ok! Don't wanna spread yourself too thin. ... *awkward cough*
 
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