Great Sands Online (VRMMO RP - Log Horizon style)

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    A brief summary of this RP would be something like this: "The story of a group of players who get sucked into their video game and are forced to play it for real." The situation is something like Log Horizon - Players will respawn if they die (although NPCs will not), and their consciousness is literally placed into their game avatar, rather than being trapped online like SAO.

    Please note: The rules described below, such as General Skill Construction, apply only as a setting - in the actual RP, I'm not going to assign skill components or anything - just let you do as you please (within reason, of course!)

    So, without further ado.. the setting!

    Great Sands Online
    An unusual game, as online games go. Rather than a class system, your class is decided by the weapon you equip (and there is a near infinite variety of these), as well as how you build your skills. That's right - custom skills; no character is quite the same as the next. Combined with the state-of-the-art character creator, this gained Great Sands Online the reputation of 'Most Immersive Characters Of All Time'. There are two kinds of skills in Great Sands Online - Personal Skills and General Skills. Each player, upon reaching level 10, is contacted by one of the game's Moderators, who works with them to create a unique but balanced personal skill which is known by them alone and cannot be changed. The way General Skills work is as follows - Throughout the world, and through leveling up, players will receive Skill Components. These can be combined in any way to create any General Skill. Components can be extracted from a skill and used again, although there is a cost for this and a chance the component will be destroyed (to prevent players completely changing their role in the middle of a battle). A few examples:

    Example One.

    I reach Level 15, and gain 5 skill components - "Primary Weapon", "Secondary Weapon", "Fire Element", "Stun" and "Charge Level". I could combine these in various ways. The type of attack depends on the weapon equipped - for example, a Primary Weapon skill using an equipped Tome would act like a long range magic spell, while the same skill used while a sword is equipped would act as a close range melee attack.

    - I could combine PW, FE and CL, which would give me a skill that used my primary weapon to cast, inflicted Fire Damage and could be 'overcast' - I could hold the skill on charge instead of firing it the moment it finishes preparing, which would deal boosted damage.

    - I could combine SW, CL and Stun that used my offhand weapon (assuming I have one - I'm not using a two-handed weapon) to inflict a stun on the target. It would have a charge option to deal a longer stun.

    - I could combine all 5 components, making a skill that uses both weapons, inflicts fire damage, stuns and has a charged form with increased damage and longer stun (though this would cost more Mana to cast).

    Example Two.

    I kill a boss mob, and gain 3 copies of the "Lightning Damage" component, and two of the "Delayed Charge", as well as two "Area of Effect damage". I already have 3 "Primary Weapon" components which I had an Enchanter craft for me (see below, somewhere)

    - I could combine one LD and one DC with one PW, which would make a lightning attack. The Delayed Charge would mean that it would take a second or two for the skill to activate after being cast, but in exchange, it would deal more damage. I would be able to move while it was charging itself, and use further attacks. Note, I could not make this skill 3 times - I can only possess one identical combination of components.

    - I could combine them all with a PW to make a triple Lightning Damage attack with a double sized AOE and a double Delay that would probably be so powerful it would one-hit-KO most things of the same level. Unfortunately, the MP cost for this would be really really high - much higher than my mana pool would ever allow, at any level.

    Feel free to make up components too, I'm not going to impose a list on you.

    The Game Itself
    There are other reasons this game stands out. It is the first MMO to have no storyline; no main quests. NPCs can give side quests to help you get started, and these are run on a random generator. The bulk of quests come from the Bulletin Boards spread around town. At one of these, any player may create a quest for other players to complete. They may specify a time limit and the objectives as well as how many people may take the quest before it disappears, plus the reward, and an advanced AI will calculate the difficulty, recommended level and gear quality. Monetary rewards are given automatically from the player's inventory, and the game system provides the XP reward. Any items the quest requires are handed in will be mailed to the player.

    The game centers on three towns - Terien, Aroze and Incerra. There is a rumoured fourth town, though no one has found it yet. The three towns are arranged in a triangular fashion at the compass points - Terien in the South, Aroze in the North and Incerra in the West. The rumour of the fourth town is based on there being no known Eastern town. The environment there is particularly harsh, so no one has managed to push further than a few kilometers into it. Around these towns is a series of progressively more difficult and high level areas, each with its own share of dungeons. They expand radially, so the further from town you go, the stronger the monsters you'll face. The environment itself is primarily a desert, but is interspersed with occasional oasises and magical biodomes. Many of the latter act as World Boss Areas - environmental hazards that any number of people may team up to defeat, instead of being limited to the usual 6 person party limit or 42 person Raid limit. This particular RP will start around Terien, the largest of the towns - it has a player population of around 3,000.

    The game is very player driven. Every building can be purchased by a (very rich) player, as can plots of land in which personal or guild residencies can be constructed. Shops and market stalls can be purchased or rented too. New players are given one free (small) room within the 'Slums' - a shanty town outside the city's walls that was annoyingly far from any of the facilities and was prone to attacks from monsters, but it did come with a private storage and a stamina-restoring bed, which is always nice. Fortunately, the game was quite aimed at the RP-ing type, so a lot didn't mind this. Additionally, most Guilds can afford a guild hall, which a lot of newer members stay in to be closer to the city center.

    Players of Great Sands are encouraged to role-play as much as possible, and OOC talk found in the close range channels may be penalised if noticed. This is to aid the immersion that the game thrives on.

    Getting Sucked In
    Normally, you know when you get sucked into a game, don't you? In these RPs, I mean. Well, in this one - you don't really know when it happened. You were playing and you got so absorbed in your adventures that hours passed without you noticing. You check the clock on your UI (which has remained after the consciousness transfer), and notice it's well into the evening. You curse, and wonder why you weren't very hungry, but you press Log Out anyway. Or rather, you try - but it doesn't work. Is there some lag? You make the motion that's supposed to force the shut down of your VRMMO headgear, but the game doesn't close. In fact, you notice that your ability to sense the game would has increased quite a lot, and your movements are many times more fluid... as if it was actually real life! But of course, that's ridiculous. That kind of thing only happens in light novels written decades before!

    At this point in time, around 30% of the original player base has been sucked in. The other 70% have been... having difficulties logging in recently. 3 days have passed since you were sucked in, and you've come to accept your situation at least, even if you don't like it. You're currently attending a meeting in a local tavern between some people you partied with a couple of times in lower levels, about what you plan to do from here on out.[/COLOR]

    Races / Weapons (roles)
    Player Characters in Great Sands Online may choose from a range of races at character creation. At later stages in the game, they will also unlock various other races through achievements, which can be used when a new character is made on that account, or through visiting a Polymorphic NPC character, who can be used to change your character appearance without losing levels or items, for a hefty price. Your race won't make a combat difference, and is mostly for aesthetics. If you have any other race ideas, describe them to me and I'll see if they can be fit into the setting.
    Starting races are as follows:

    Allyrian - Can be considered your basic 'human' race. The NPCs that inhabit the three cities are primarily Allyrians. There's really not much special about them. They're the most populous species, spread across the entire continent to some extent, and have had several empires in the past, the traces of which can still be seen today.

    Uruni - Thought to have evolved from Allyrians, Uruni hail from small, tropical islands off the North coast of the continent. They are thinner and more delicate in features than the Allyrians, and can be considered this world's variant of 'elves', to a certain extent. Culturally, they favour the use of bows and stealth, although they're by no means limited to these. Uruni are relatively reclusive, and the majority you see on the mainland are PCs.

    Kemono - Think 'cat girl', and you're on the right lines. Kemono are primarily found on islands to the East of the continent, although few players have been able to venture there so this information is little more than rumour based on the speech of NPCs. Kemono typically look like Allyrians, but come with a varying amount of animal traits. Some may possess only the ears of an animal, while some may essentially be werewolves. Kemono can be quite rare on the mainland because they're a difficult race to play as - there is a lot of discrimination against Kemono by NPCs and by many PCs while in in-character channels. For immersion, Kemono earn less money and XP from NPC-given quests. This is because Kemono have often been slaves to the Allyrian empires, and the prejudice continues now.

    Orog - A peculiar species that come from underground citadels. These places are infested with hostiles, and are very high level dungeons, so have not been explored yet. The Orog that are seen around the surface world are usually half-breeds. Orogs have thick, leathery skin which is usually tinged a shade of green or brown. Red ones exist, but are rare. They remind people of ogres or orcs. Despite their general aggressiveness and appearance, Orogs face surprisingly little discrimination or prejudice due to long standing good relations with the Allyrians - Orogs are often the life of the party and you know you're in for fun when one walks into the tavern.

    Achievement-given Races:
    These races add on to your character's current race, making them all halfbreeds. Currently, no player is known to have achieved purebreed status for any race. Full forms of all the races have the ability to fly, while half-breeds can hover to move more quickly. Neither can be used while in combat. Since these are rare, please plan your character in a way that will allow them to still exist properly without being a halfbreed; I intend to limit quantities.


    Tenjin - A species until recently thought only to exist in myth. Full Tenjin boast glorious angelic wings and supreme divine power. A full tenjin is unique in that it can gain any number of Heavenly Thunder skill components, however, a Half-Tenjin will be capped at 2. These components deal irreducible damage, and extra damage to anything 'unholy' such as undead. Half-Tenjin are limited to one pair of wings, while Full Tenjin may have up to 3, depending on their accomplishments.

    Narajin - The demon to the Tenjin's angel. Narajin wing distribution works in the same way as a Tenjin; halfbreeds have 2 wings, while fullbreeds may have up to 6 individual wings. Narajin and Half-narajin can gain Hellfire components, in the same way as Tenjin. Hellfire components deal 'withering' damage - armour strength is reduced after taking Hellfire damage, and a poison effect is applied that slowly saps health and mana.

    Ryujin - The draconic variant of the 'divine trio'. All Ryujin possess only 2 wings, and half-ryujin instead have smaller wings and less colourful scales, rather than fewer wings. Ryujin gain Dragon's Anima components, which deal all 4 normal magic elements of damage - 25% of the attack strength being of each element. They also have a high chance to inflict various status effects - the fire part may inflict a burn, or the earth part may inhibit movement speed.

    Weapon variety in Great Sands is near endless, and theoretically any weapon could be used for any role, but typically it's best to assume certain positions with certain weapons. Equip a tome, and you're likely going to be a Magic DPS since tomes give the highest Magic Attack stat, and have long range. Equip a sword and shield and you're probably looking at being a tank, since you can block attacks. Any weapon you choose to use is cool with me, as long as you can explain what role it would have for something more obscure (Rope-darts, for example)
    Your skill functions will automatically suit the weapon you equip; the Primary Weapon component will know to adapt to melee range when you decide to equip a warhammer instead of the bow you were using just now. Changing weapons can be done at any time, except when actively engaged in combat.

    Any armour may be equipped in any role, but heavier armour will impact movement speed, so think carefully before making your Healer character wear plate mail. As with weapons, armour style is near infinite - yes, including armoured bikinis - but such armour offers very little in way of Armour value, so it's best to consider something else for practical use.

    Great Sands' economy depends highly on the Profession system. Each character chooses their profession at level 10, and may choose from one of a huge variety of things. Your profession will make up the bulk of your income, so pick wisely! Your profession may be changed later, but it will require purchasing a Training Manual for the new profession, which can be very expensive because they're rare monster drops. Changing profession will cause you to lose 50% of your progress in your original profession.


    I don't really have any rules for this RP besides:

    0. Feel free to contribute to the setting! I have a few things that can't be changed but the rest is quite lax, so go ahead and propose race ideas etc!

    1. Please be courteous. Don't control the characters of others without permission, try to be polite even if you get into a disagreement, and don't bring IC arguments to the OOC. If you're not going to be able to meet posting quotas for a while, as long as you tell me, I won't write your character out or anything.

    2. I will always encourage everyone to post. Even if you've got writers block, just post something short - as long as you don't hold up the plot, we should be OK. I'm going to request you make at least 2 posts a week, and also that you wait for 3 other people to have made a post IC before you then make another one, to prevent swarm-posting and people getting left behind.

    3. At some times, I may set a deadline for when the plot will be moved along. I'll give you at least 1 week's notice. At the deadline, the next major event will happen (or earlier, if everyone wraps up their conversations before then)


    Advanced Race Characters: (As I stated earlier, I'm limiting these because they're very rare. You may reserve an Advanced Race position for your character, but make the character not dependent upon that advanced race state so if there aren't enough people to let you use an advanced race, you're not cut out completely.)

    Yukimi - Tenjin/Kemono (fox) - Female - Lv 47 - Magic - Enchanter - @Karakui

    Other Characters:

    Thirrin Pawtre - Kemono (dog) - Female - Lv 32 - Magic / Sling - No Profession - @Rauzi

    Joan de Claremonte - Uruni - Female - Lv 32 - Rapier - Seamstress - @Reanimator Bob

    Kumi - Kemono (fox) - Female - Lv 24 - Crossbow - Alchemist - @Luma

    Niishiki - Allyrian - Female - Lv 20 - Spear - Politician - @Piero

    Leiko - Allyrian - Female - Lv 13 - War Fan - Baker - @Aria Valle

    Darius - Allyrian - Male - Lv 11 - Polearm - Blacksmith - @ERode

    Kento Yanagi - Allyrian - Male - Lv 10 - Finger Blades - Hunter - @Crysodic

    Character Sheet:
    • please say separately if you wish to reserve an Advanced Race position, rather than putting it in with the Race
    • If you want to create a new race, give me the details separately to the CS so that it's easier to read it when seeing how to make it fit.
    • I'm going to leave the 'real world' parts for people to reveal themselves, cos that'll be more fun.
    • For now, I'm going to say maximum 2 characters per person.
    • Assume that, unless stated otherwise, every section applies to the Game avatar, and not the character's Real World self)

    (Image here - anime only please)

    Name: .
    Age: .
    Race: .
    Gender: .
    Appearance: (anything not shown in the picture - height, scars perhaps? Also, any differences to the picture)
    Personality: (whether or not this character stays 'in character' 100% of the time while playing Great Sands is up to you)

    Level: (For comparison. I'm going to limit this to any level below 50 for now)
    Weapon(s): (which they use most often, as well as their secondary set, if they have one).
    Armour Type: (which armour they equip - Is it cloth, leather, metal? Feel free to add an image too, if you feel it necessary, but for neatness, please put it in a [ spoili] tag. )
    Personal Skill: (Name and description - please be prepared to compromise if I feel it's unbalanced or too similar to another character)
    Profession: .
    Backstory: (A brief description of what they have been doing in the game up until the start of the IC. The IC starts 3 days after they get sucked in, so you may include those 3 days as well, if you want.)
    #1 Karakui, Jan 20, 2016
    Last edited: Jan 21, 2016

    ...Dude, I'm too underleveled for this. ;~; What about post length and quality?
  3. Posts should be a minimum of 650 words each, in Times New Roman font at 12pt, with margins adhering to MLA style. Double-spaced too, so it's easier to shit talk the lack of quality when Karakui marks it.
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  4. This is one of the smallest OOCs I've ever made for a serious, properly built setting... I wanted to keep it short so it's not offputting XD

    For post length and quality; as long as I can see you've put effort into it, and it's not just a dismissive one-liner, I'm fine with anything. I'd rather you not write 10 paragraphs though because I just don't have the time to read that much.
  5. For the race part, I assume everyone is human and that part is just for the 'in game' kind of race?
  6. Well, they've been sucked into the game and their human consciousness has been placed inside their game avatar, and for all intents and purposes, the game world is now 'Real life' for them, and their avatar is now them. So yes, everyone was human originally, but now, they're the race of their character.
  7. How's pain in the game? Is it also realistic, or what? And the player base is still made out of hilariously hardcore people, right? Feels like a player population of 3000 under normal circumstances is rather big for an underground indie game...
  8. Ah lol, like I said, things got changed around a bit :D I've actually changed the setting COMPLETELY. Like, the only thing that's still the same is the Skill Component part. I'm thinking for pain, we'll probably go with half of what you'd feel if it were for real (because, yknow, IRL a stray hit from a game mob would be enough to cripple most people).

    As for player population - only around 30% of the players got sucked in - the rest are having connection issues, so the current server population is now ~900, that's 300 per town, which I think is a good population. Enough for 2 large guilds and a couple dozen small ones in each area.

    This particular one, in which they just kind of find themselves in the game for real at some point (no announcement or anything like SAO), it's based on the idea of getting "sucked into" something (my parents say that to me a lot when I get a new game and I'm constantly playing it :D) so those who get sucked in will naturally be the ones who are hardcore - who play for hours on end.
  9. Alright, and in regards to combat, is there any actual effect if you were, say, to slice through the hand of someone else while they were swinging their own weapon at you? Or would it just phase through and deal numerical damage?
  10. Such actions will have the same effect as if they were to occur in the real world. Numerical damage will still occur too, but that is only because the HP meter is basically a visual representation of the character's life force. Wounds are rarely permanent because the player characters are entities known as "Reincarnates", who are capable of rebuilding their bodies either upon death or rest.
  11. Then, as an extension of this, is it possible to straight up murk bosses by cutting their tendons and poking out their eyeballs and all that?

    Does it also mean that states such as super armor and invincibility frames are not a thing at all?
  12. Well.. you can try I guess. Certain skill components would have such effects, but a normal attack, even if aimed at the tendon, would just do damage and not disable the limb. In order to do so, the damage inflicted by the attack (assuming it doesn't apply a crippled status separately) would need to be a certain proportion of the boss / player's overall HP. Thus, a level 20 hitting the carotid artery of a level 60 monster is only going to leave a 23 point damage scratch on its hide. A level 60 hitting the carotid artery of a level 20 monster would slice cleanly through and probably cause the entire monster to explode, actually.
    I'd rather not explain why yet because that's going to be revealed as a plot point, but if you really want to know I guess I could tell you in PM.

    Super Armour and iFrames are totally a thing. You could get a Teleport skill component, for example, which would include an iFrame time to compensate for lag, as many online games do. Even though there's no lag anymore, it'd be an unnecessary pain to remove this feature, so it's still there.
  13. So slicing at someone's arm while they're going to chop your head off is only going to stop their murderstroke if you do a certain percentage of their HP in that one attack? Works with me, I suppose.
  14. Don't worry! You can just blame the healer. Plus, they'll only succeed in decapitating you if they manage to do a certain percentage of damage and decapitation is a pretty powerful cripple, so I'ma make the percentage necessary 97.5% in one hit.
  15. Also, in general, how many components can one person get in, say, a day's worth of gameplay?

    More specifically, how many General Skills do people have on average?
  16. Does it really matter? Or are you planning on actually making this game!? No one's going to keep track of your skills but yourself, with the exception of personal skills and particularly useful ones. If I feel you're being OP, I'll just ask you to tone it down a bit. How many components you're getting really depends on your level. To begin with, you're going to be getting a lot very quickly because you're going to be changing around your skills to find ones that suit you and your play style. In the late game, it'll slow down because while you may be finding components, they'll be ones you already have an excess of. At that point though, your objectives with skills will be more to obtain the rarer, more useful components. An average level 30 may have 15 - 40 general skills, while a max level could have in excess of 100, but due to cooldowns, mana costs and the like they'd find themselves using the same ones primarily anyway. A lot of those 100 will be weaker, non-upgraded skills from lower levels, or really powerful attacks that have 40 minute cooldowns so can't be used that often anyway.
  17. I'm just curious about the numbers that we're dealing with, really. With 100 skills, you can definitely have everyone be capable of doing everything in endgame, which may or may not be really sketchy.
  18. Well, like I said, how the skill actually manifests differs between weapons. A magic barrier skill is going to be a lot more effective cast with a shield than cast with a dagger. Plus, the endgame is ridiculous boss fights that take hours to complete, and in which one false move means loss. Sure, everyone might theoretically be able to do everything, but those magical barriers being usable by every player would be a necessity in an endgame boss anyway, because the one Support per 6 players is nowhere near enough to keep up barriers for all 42 of them. Even if everyone could do everything, it's still many times more effective to have a dedicated healer, a few DPS and your tank than it is to have everyone trying to do everything.
  19. Character in the works.. So much questions, but questions are good.
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