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~This is a story I did way back and was originally in my home language swedish. I've decided to "decipher" this story to english as to both train my capabilities in english but also as a way to just write and let out some creativity. I'll also use my own art, thus this thread will also include an "art" tag! This story is at the moments in different parts and I'll put them out when I have the time.~
To this day I can still remember what the old man had told me. Experiences.. regarding the past. About what he had seen, experienced and gone through... things.. which I can not even imagine happening even in the wildest of dreams. What he and his generation have done and how the planet, a floating rock in an infinite space continuum, had changed the life that they once knew throughout the decades. He would often dream about coming back to this world made of metal containing that he spoke very dearly of. About millions upon millions of people walking through this metal world. About water falling from the sky and green plants everywhere.
In his deathbed, covered with a red and orange-colored fabric over his body, he layed there quietly. I boiled some soup made from the catch of the day and when warm and ready I turned around to give it to him. IThe old man did not even bother to take a look towards me and instead, in his shaking hands, looked at a photo. A photo depicting the world from his beloved dreams. People walking in this metal world, hundreds of them, together with trees embedded around the metal world and in the center of the photo where two people standing, a woman and her child holding hands together and smiling. It was a very different world from this one. Pieces of the metal world were now burried in sand and the heat could make anyone pass out if not careful enough. Plants and trees was scarce and animals loved to hide deep underground.
Those times are now in the past and with the old man dead I had no one but myself to take care to. As usual, starting the day to departure out to the world of endless sand and heat, I made myself ready in order to catch the day's meal. In today's list were the meat from sand rats for dinner. The rats are big as cats and carry enough weight to make into a fine dinner. However, they are very fast and likes to burry themselves deep underground, like dangerous places as the burried buildings from the metal world was their favourite hiding spot.
With the photo in my pocket, I have now other goals to achieve, except of course surviving, to tend to in this exhausting world of mine. The old man told stories of other parts of the world and a hope that there were a metal world still intact and blooming with life. He also told of a machine that could change time. He called it a "time machine". If there are truth to his words, this "time machine" should be somewhere in this world and could have the power to change everything. And with that I mean everything.
At the usual time, I embark through the sand filled emptiness with the help of my trusted bike found by the old man whom decided it was better suited to me. He had said that he had found it by a bandit camp that had been raided. It was believed to not work anymore but the old man still took it. As the bike soars through the sand, it creates a big sand cloud behind me. The scorching heat from the sun shows no mercy but the wind helps through the worst. Then, I see my destination. A part from the metal world burried in sand. I park the bike by a larger rock and start to walk towards the building. One have to be mindful of his surroundings or else they will fall through a sink hole or a window from one of the buildings lurking in the sand. As I walk closer I see one sand rat out in the open, it looks around and seems to have made a catch of sorts, a bug resting in its mouth. But when it sees me, it quickly goes back into a larger hole which is, unfortunately, a hole in the building from the metal world. With a small sigh I take the rope from my arm and start to attach it to one of the metal rods and begin to head deep deep underground. The sounds from the rats climbing and squeaking echoes.
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To this day I can still remember what the old man had told me. Experiences.. regarding the past. About what he had seen, experienced and gone through... things.. which I can not even imagine happening even in the wildest of dreams. What he and his generation have done and how the planet, a floating rock in an infinite space continuum, had changed the life that they once knew throughout the decades. He would often dream about coming back to this world made of metal containing that he spoke very dearly of. About millions upon millions of people walking through this metal world. About water falling from the sky and green plants everywhere.
In his deathbed, covered with a red and orange-colored fabric over his body, he layed there quietly. I boiled some soup made from the catch of the day and when warm and ready I turned around to give it to him. IThe old man did not even bother to take a look towards me and instead, in his shaking hands, looked at a photo. A photo depicting the world from his beloved dreams. People walking in this metal world, hundreds of them, together with trees embedded around the metal world and in the center of the photo where two people standing, a woman and her child holding hands together and smiling. It was a very different world from this one. Pieces of the metal world were now burried in sand and the heat could make anyone pass out if not careful enough. Plants and trees was scarce and animals loved to hide deep underground.
Those times are now in the past and with the old man dead I had no one but myself to take care to. As usual, starting the day to departure out to the world of endless sand and heat, I made myself ready in order to catch the day's meal. In today's list were the meat from sand rats for dinner. The rats are big as cats and carry enough weight to make into a fine dinner. However, they are very fast and likes to burry themselves deep underground, like dangerous places as the burried buildings from the metal world was their favourite hiding spot.
With the photo in my pocket, I have now other goals to achieve, except of course surviving, to tend to in this exhausting world of mine. The old man told stories of other parts of the world and a hope that there were a metal world still intact and blooming with life. He also told of a machine that could change time. He called it a "time machine". If there are truth to his words, this "time machine" should be somewhere in this world and could have the power to change everything. And with that I mean everything.
At the usual time, I embark through the sand filled emptiness with the help of my trusted bike found by the old man whom decided it was better suited to me. He had said that he had found it by a bandit camp that had been raided. It was believed to not work anymore but the old man still took it. As the bike soars through the sand, it creates a big sand cloud behind me. The scorching heat from the sun shows no mercy but the wind helps through the worst. Then, I see my destination. A part from the metal world burried in sand. I park the bike by a larger rock and start to walk towards the building. One have to be mindful of his surroundings or else they will fall through a sink hole or a window from one of the buildings lurking in the sand. As I walk closer I see one sand rat out in the open, it looks around and seems to have made a catch of sorts, a bug resting in its mouth. But when it sees me, it quickly goes back into a larger hole which is, unfortunately, a hole in the building from the metal world. With a small sigh I take the rope from my arm and start to attach it to one of the metal rods and begin to head deep deep underground. The sounds from the rats climbing and squeaking echoes.
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