C
chaosheart13
Guest
Hau is a precious baby and deserves all the malasadas.Pokemon Sun is my life. I've written so many ship fics between my trainer and Hau it's not even funny. :-|
Hau is a precious baby and deserves all the malasadas.Pokemon Sun is my life. I've written so many ship fics between my trainer and Hau it's not even funny. :-|
Which can get super annoying. It's great for the boss battles but by god why does every fricking metapod call forty goddamn butterfrees for it's aid?also wild pokemon can call on friends to help them!!
I'm glad I'm not the only one. @_@Also, Am I the only one having big trouble on picking pokemon for their team in this game. It's troubling.
I know that feel too. *war flashbacks to whenever I'm trying to get all of my Pokemon to the same level, including the ones in the box*I'm glad I'm not the only one. @_@
There are just... so many Pokemon I want on my team... but then I have a hard time actually leveling up a solid team, because I keep changing my mind and switching them out and then spending time to train up the weakest link and... yeah...
It has an alarming, machine-gun-like cry.
it ties for the highest base stat total of any Pokémon or glitch Pokémon, with 68 more points than Arceus
's 1st type is so long it actually covers the whole left side of its status box and continues off screen.
While the Pokémon is being sent out, the screen will fill up with the character 9 in random locations.
.g is a very unique Pokémon because of the fact that it has two sprites and three different Pokédex entries.
learns a large amount of moves, including more than any non-glitch Pokémon in existence, but it unfortunately also learns the highly volatile Super Glitch move a large number of times.
is an item mutation glitch Pokémon. When the player encounters it in battle, by using the Cable Club escape glitch with a Trainer who owns a, the item in the fourth slot in the player's inventory will be transformed into an entirely different item,
It should be noted that ゥ knows a Super Glitch move as one of its starting moves, and care must be taken that the move's name not be viewed in any way, unless in controlled circumstances.
So... is the banshee scream one of Teen Wolf's own abilities? Or is it some sort of creature companion? Or is it just an ability that Teen Wolf can't control? Your wording's just a bit confusing, here.The most important ability and albeit the most annoying is the banshee scream. It screams whenever there is extreme danger or whenever someone is going to die.
Are we still talking about the banshee?Simiarily, it has the hell hound form in which it wields fire and protects the wounded from the darkness.
Uhhh.He also fandom denies all claims that it killed the original fandom.
I hope you know that I'll be holding you to a very high standard to portray this accurately and tastefully. *sips beverage*He also has ADHD and takes medicine for it.
XD You know, you... you don't have to include a line like this in your CS just to have a reason for your fandoms to meet each other.Other: Teen Wolf wants to meet Scooby Doo ( for some reason)
Yeah, this is why I shouldn't type up posts after 11PM.So... is the banshee scream one of Teen Wolf's own abilities? Or is it some sort of creature companion? Or is it just an ability that Teen Wolf can't control? Your wording's just a bit confusing, here.
I meant Teen Wolf.Are we still talking about the banshee?
If so, I'd like a bit more info on what the banshee actually... is, because I'm having a hard time visualizing it.
Unless by "it" you still mean Teen Wolf, but that's pretty confusing, and it would be better if you just consistently used "he" to refer to him.
Yeah, that was supposed to be " he denies all claims of killing the original fandom"Uhhh.
What?
I will try my best. I can't not include it since it is something that one of the main characters from the start has. I have fully edited the sheet by the way, added more to the quirks.I hope you know that I'll be holding you to a very high standard to portray this accurately and tastefully. *sips beverage*
To which I repeat,Yeah, that was supposed to be " he denies all claims of killing the original fandom"
Well, actually, you don't have to include it in your fandom just because it was featured in the canon. Not everything from the canon needs to be included in a fandom. >.> BUT I can see why you'd want to include it, so... I guess my comfort level with this would depend on how the show itself treats it. ...Which I have no knowledge of.I will try my best. I can't not include it since it is something that one of the main characters from the start has. I have fully edited the sheet by the way, added more to the quirks.
The Movie fandom. Teen Wolf was inspired by a movie with Michael Fox in the 1980s also called Teen Wolf. The joke in fandomstuck is that the new fandom effectively killed the original to exist ( since they share a name and one is known and the other isn't;.)To which I repeat,
What? XD
What original fandom? What alleged murder? XD
The show treats in a weird way. It doesn't actually acknowledge the character has it directly. But they also treat him like a normal human, so I don't know.Well, actually, you don't have to include it in your fandom just because it was featured in the canon. Not everything from the canon needs to be included in a fandom. >.> BUT I can see why you'd want to include it, so... I guess my comfort level with this would depend on how the show itself treats it. ...Which I have no knowledge of.
Just... try not to turn it into a joke, and I think it'll be fine.
Well, I'd say that's... good, probably. Treating him like any other character is better than making an entire character into what is essentially just an offensive caricature of the disorder. >.>The show treats in a weird way. It doesn't actually acknowledge the character has it directly. But they also treat him like a normal human, so I don't know.
I am willing to put in the effort. I also would love the help.Well, I'd say that's... good, probably. Treating him like any other character is better than making an entire character into what is essentially just an offensive caricature of the disorder. >.>
But if the show doesn't go in-depth with it, then it means that, once again, the pressure's on you to do a good job with it if you do actually acknowledge it and work some of that in when writing for your character. Which I guess you would have to do if you want to actually portray an ADHD character (I mean, I'm assuming the show puts at least some effort into trying to portray the character as having ADHD, even if it might be subtle in the eyes of an outside observer, much like in real life). And if you were only planning on mentioning it in the CS but then still playing the character like someone without ADHD... then it might be best to not include it at all.
I mean, if you do really want to work that into the character, then, I might even be able to help you write it accurately and tastefully if you want to go that extra mile. I just don't want it to fall into the trap of either:
Sorry to be a hardass about this, but, as an area of personal significance to me, I just wouldn't be comfortable with this being done unless some care was put into doing it right. And if you want to do it right, then, that's really cool of you, and I'd be happy to help if you want me to. But if you really don't want to put the effort in to do a tasteful portrayal, then... it might be best to just not go there.
- being really over-the-top with it, and therefore making it inaccurate and offensive, OR
- making no attempt to actually portray how the disorder affects him, to the point that it might not even be there
- especially if it's portrayed as if him taking medication makes him completely cured... >.>
Cool! Start a PM convo with me and we'll talk about it more in-depth there. In the meantime, I'll look at the rest of your CS again.I am willing to put in the effort. I also would love the help.
So -- does he have control over this banshee scream, or no? I'm not sure if you're saying that it's "annoying" to the people around him, or annoying because he can't control it. :PThe most important ability and albeit the most annoying is the banshee scream. He screams whenever there is extreme danger or whenever someone is going to die.
An image reference for the hell hound form would be nice if you can manage it. If not, at least tell me -- does this involve him actually transforming into a fiery canine or is that just a title, and he's still mostly humanoid in this form? (Also, you missed another "it", but that's a minor concern at this point.)Simiarily, he has the hell hound form in which it wields fire and protects the wounded from the darkness.
I noticed a few more pronouns that you forgot to change. Also, I just wanted to point out the fact that this mistake happening right after the bit about ADHD makes it sound like his disorder is somehow sentient and likes lacrosse and refuses to transform into chimeras. :P So, while I know what you meant to say... it's still a bit jarring to read, and should probably be fixed for that reason.He also has ADHD and takes Adderall for it. It does not like it if you insult it. It is obessed with lacrosse. It refuses to shift into any genetic chimeras for fear of what it may become.
Edited it with the answer.So -- does he have control over this banshee scream, or no? I'm not sure if you're saying that it's "annoying" to the people around him, or annoying because he can't control it. :P
Or maybe I'm only primed to think he can't control it because of my confusion over the earlier version, and I never would've interpreted it that way if that hadn't happened. Either way, it might be good to clarify this.
Also, what kind of scream are we dealing with, here? A decently human-like scream, or... something else?
Also edited in the answer.An image reference for the hell hound form would be nice if you can manage it. If not, at least tell me -- does this involve him actually transforming into a fiery canine or is that just a title, and he's still mostly humanoid in this form? (Also, you missed another "it", but that's a minor concern at this point.)
Most of your CS looks good now, but you still haven't fixed those last few pronoun mistakes near the end. o3oEdited it with the answer.
Also edited in the answer.
Fix the details of the it.
I thought I got those.... goddamn Iwaku keeps not changing my edits.Most of your CS looks good now, but you still haven't fixed those last few pronoun mistakes near the end. o3o
Ok then -- now your CS looks good. ^^ I'll add you to the accepted list.I thought I got those.... goddamn Iwaku keeps not changing my edits.