Extending writing in roleplay?

Discussion in 'THREAD ARCHIVES' started by Demonic Miracles., Jul 10, 2015.

  1. I have the tendency to reply with short phrases like: "She smiled 'Yeah, that sounds great!'" Or "He slept silently."
    Could I get tips on how I could write more in-depth or extended responses?
    Myself replying that short is a huge pet-peeve of mine.. ^^"
     
  2. Maybe providing a few examples of what you are replying TO will make it easier for people to help you with this.

    Also, keep in mind when you are posting you should be giving your partner something to reply to. Just saying "he slept silently" gives your partner (group) nothing to reply to and you'll end up with lots of parallel posts and no plot progression.
     
  3. Try looking at Brovo's very well constructed guide about Posting: Link

    It contains everything you need to make your posts entertaining, 'meaty', and in-depth.