Extending writing in roleplay?

Demonic Miracles.

Page of Blood.
Original poster
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Posting Speed
  1. Speed of Light
  2. Multiple posts per day
  3. 1-3 posts per day
  4. One post per day
  5. 1-3 posts per week
Online Availability
Almost always all day.
Writing Levels
  1. Give-No-Fucks
  2. Intermediate
Preferred Character Gender
  1. Male
  2. No Preferences
Genres
Fantasy, magical, horror, romance (as more of a plot/sub-genre. I tend to be more focused on anything else other than romance. I can go from "kissy-kissy" to "sexy sex"), yaoi/yuri, action-adventure, fandom, steampunk.
I have the tendency to reply with short phrases like: "She smiled 'Yeah, that sounds great!'" Or "He slept silently."
Could I get tips on how I could write more in-depth or extended responses?
Myself replying that short is a huge pet-peeve of mine.. ^^"
 

Adelaide

Lost
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Posting Speed
  1. One post per day
  2. 1-3 posts per week
Writing Levels
  1. Adept
  2. Advanced
  3. Prestige
Preferred Character Gender
  1. Female
  2. Primarily Prefer Female
Genres
Fantasy, Modern Fantasy, Romance, Horror, Mystery.
Maybe providing a few examples of what you are replying TO will make it easier for people to help you with this.

Also, keep in mind when you are posting you should be giving your partner something to reply to. Just saying "he slept silently" gives your partner (group) nothing to reply to and you'll end up with lots of parallel posts and no plot progression.
 

Izurich

Pikaface
Posting Speed
  1. 1-3 posts per week
  2. One post per week
Writing Levels
  1. Intermediate
  2. Adept
  3. Advanced
  4. Adaptable
Preferred Character Gender
  1. No Preferences
Genres
Fantasy, Modern Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Space Fantasy, Magical
Try looking at Brovo's very well constructed guide about Posting: Link

It contains everything you need to make your posts entertaining, 'meaty', and in-depth.